| 23.53% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde replied cryptically [cryptically]" | | 1 | "Isolde warned softly [softly]" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered sharply [sharply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.586 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.176 | | effectiveRatio | 0.176 | |
| 81.04% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1055 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1055 | | totalAiIsms | 40 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "charged" | | 1 | "palpable" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "enigmatic" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "remarkable" | | 8 | "intricate" | | 9 | "dancing" | | 10 | "electric" | | 11 | "anticipation" | | 12 | "echoes" | | 13 | "glistening" | | 14 | "dance" | | 15 | "unspoken" | | 16 | "fleeting" | | 17 | "echoed" | | 18 | "depths" | | 19 | "radiant" | | 20 | "otherworldly" | | 21 | "gleaming" | | 22 | "raced" | | 23 | "echoing" | | 24 | "resolve" | | 25 | "stomach" | | 26 | "synchronized" | | 27 | "racing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 87.12% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "d with warmth" | | 1 | "felt a tug" | | 2 | "g with determination" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1047 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 44.37% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 852 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.11 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Nyx | 8 | | Isolde | 7 | | Varga | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Varga" | | 4 | "Fae" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.444 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if interpreting invisible threads of fate" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1047 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 76.42% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 29.08 | | std | 12.14 | | cv | 0.417 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 52 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 33 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 154 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 78 | | ratio | 0.051 | | matches | | 0 | "A cluster of wildflowers glimmered in colors that transcended nature—hues too vibrant for Earth." | | 1 | "She caught the faintest whiff of something burning—an odd contrast within the soft, sweet atmosphere." | | 2 | "“Should we join?” Rory felt a tug of both urge and hesitation; the lively movement called to her, yet she sensed an unspoken danger nestled in the joy." | | 3 | "Her mind whirled with visions—passion, wild delight, yet undercurrent threads of caution tightened around her." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 857 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.0338389731621937 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012835472578763127 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 78 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 78 | | mean | 13.42 | | std | 5.59 | | cv | 0.416 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 9 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 89.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5384615384615384 | | totalSentences | 78 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 50.51% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Slowly, the enchantment drew them" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "She barely registered the whispers" | | 1 | "They pointed toward a towering" | | 2 | "she murmured, an enigmatic smile" | | 3 | "She shifted the Fae-forged blade" | | 4 | "They melded into a more" | | 5 | "She caught the faintest whiff" | | 6 | "It led them to a" | | 7 | "Her mind whirled with visions—passion," | | 8 | "They leaped forward, laughter echoing," | | 9 | "They reached out, trying to" | | 10 | "She could sense the convergence" |
| | ratio | 0.167 | |
| 13.03% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter, known as Rory" | | 1 | "The air felt different, charged" | | 2 | "Each inhale filled her lungs" | | 3 | "She barely registered the whispers" | | 4 | "Aurora turned to Nyx, the" | | 5 | "The dark mass pulsed with" | | 6 | "Nyx's voice drifted like smoke." | | 7 | "They pointed toward a towering" | | 8 | "Isolde Varga glided alongside them," | | 9 | "she murmured, an enigmatic smile" | | 10 | "Rory muttered under her breath" | | 11 | "The unknown always had a" | | 12 | "She shifted the Fae-forged blade" | | 13 | "Every step deeper into the" | | 14 | "A cluster of wildflowers glimmered" | | 15 | "Rory reached down, fingertips brushing" | | 16 | "Isolde stated, her lavender eyes" | | 17 | "Rory asked, intrigued despite herself" | | 18 | "Isolde replied cryptically, weaving her" | | 19 | "Nyx swept ahead, shadow-drenched against" |
| | ratio | 0.894 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 32.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Each inhale filled her lungs with a sweetness that danced on her senses, accompanied by a faint hint of damp earth." | | 1 | "The dark mass pulsed with a faintly glowing violet hue in the dim light, its outline shifting in unnatural patterns." | | 2 | "A cluster of wildflowers glimmered in colors that transcended nature—hues too vibrant for Earth." | | 3 | "Rory followed, the thickening undergrowth brushing against her legs, offering a heavy caress." | | 4 | "Rory glanced at Nyx, who observed the dance with a twitch at the corners of their shadowy visage." | | 5 | "Rory felt the ground shift beneath her feet, resonating with beats that echoed in her core." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, an enigmatic smile appearing on her lips" | | 1 | "Isolde stated, her lavender eyes shimmering as she studied the blooms" | | 2 | "Isolde replied, her tone cryptic" | | 3 | "Isolde warned softly, her lavender eyes piercing through the hypnotic glow" | | 4 | "The Fae's voice rippled, a melody mingled with mischief" | | 5 | "Nyx whispered sharply, their figure blurring between dimensions" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Isolde stated (state)" | | 3 | "Isolde breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Rory felt (feel)" | | 5 | "Isolde warned softly (warn)" | | 6 | "Nyx whispered sharply (whisper)" | | 7 | "Rory pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.379 | | leniency | 0.759 | | rawRatio | 0.727 | | effectiveRatio | 0.552 | |