Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRETZ1PK3WCN550YG94ARH

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Duration:
35.8s
Cost:
$0.001054

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter, known as Rory to her friends, stepped cautiously into the grove shrouded in twilight. The air felt different, charged with a palpable energy. Each inhale filled her lungs with a sweetness that danced on her senses, accompanied by a faint hint of damp earth. She barely registered the whispers of the leaves, rustling like secrets exchanged among uneasy friends. “Do you feel that?” Aurora turned to Nyx, the being of shadow who flowed near her like a silken wisp. The dark mass pulsed with a faintly glowing violet hue in the dim light, its outline shifting in unnatural patterns. Nyx's voice drifted like smoke. “The air thickens with magic here. It’s different.” They pointed toward a towering oak, its trunk gnarled yet enchanting, each root spiraling into the earth like tendrils grasping for stories hidden below. Isolde Varga glided alongside them, her silver hair trailing like threads of moonlight. “Time ebbs and flows," she murmured, an enigmatic smile appearing on her lips. "What is but a heartbeat to us can span lifetimes for those outside.” “Great,” Rory muttered under her breath. The unknown always had a way of fraying her nerves. She shifted the Fae-forged blade tucked in her belt, the cool metal a reassuring weight against her skin. Every step deeper into the grove sent a thrill of tension rippling through her. A cluster of wildflowers glimmered in colors that transcended nature—hues too vibrant for Earth. Rory reached down, fingertips brushing over the petals, which hummed with warmth. “Remarkable,” Isolde stated, her lavender eyes shimmering as she studied the blooms. “The veil between our world and theirs is thin here. These flowers—their essence—hold memories untold.” “Like stories or secrets?” Rory asked, intrigued despite herself. “Both and more. They remember what they choose to forget,” Isolde replied cryptically, weaving her fingers through the air as if interpreting invisible threads of fate. Nyx swept ahead, shadow-drenched against the ethereal glow of the grove. “Let’s see what lurks ahead, shall we?” They melded into a more solid form, taking the silhouette of a tall figure, eager to explore. Rory followed, the thickening undergrowth brushing against her legs, offering a heavy caress. The deeper they ventured, the more alien the world became. Sparse moonlight filtered through ancient branches, casting intricate patterns on the ground. Each flash of light sparked reflections akin to stardust, dancing like fireflies waking from a deep slumber. The air grew electric, a shiver of anticipation coursing through Rory’s veins. She caught the faintest whiff of something burning—an odd contrast within the soft, sweet atmosphere. Faint echoes of laughter drifted closer, a melodic sound that both soothed and unnerved her. “Anyone else hear that?” Rory’s voice barely broke the enchantment hovering in the grove. Nyx nodded, their form flickering with curiosity. “It pulls us closer—like a tune on the wind.” Rory pressed on, the chorus rising in depth and rhythm. It led them to a clearing where large, iridescent mushrooms sprouted, their caps glistening like precious jewels under the soft glow of unseen moons. Groups of shadowy figures twisted and turned in an ecstatic dance, lost in the promise of something ineffable. “Dance of the Fae,” Isolde breathed, watching the scene unfold with a knowing gaze. “Those lost in revelry.” “Should we join?” Rory felt a tug of both urge and hesitation; the lively movement called to her, yet she sensed an unspoken danger nestled in the joy. “Join? Perhaps,” Isolde replied, her tone cryptic. “But know, temptation can cloud the mind.” Rory glanced at Nyx, who observed the dance with a twitch at the corners of their shadowy visage. “They're enchanting. Do we trust them?” Nyx’s soft voice brushed her ears. “Trust is a fleeting concept here. One must always dance with caution among revelers.” Slowly, the enchantment drew them in, the glee pulsing like a heartbeat. A laughter hung in the air like the scent of candy, luring yet threatening. Rory felt the ground shift beneath her feet, resonating with beats that echoed in her core. “Be wary,” Isolde warned softly, her lavender eyes piercing through the hypnotic glow. “The allure of joy can be perilous.” As Rory edged closer, a Fae stepped from the depths, ethereal and radiant with an otherworldly grace, appearing glimmering like a mirage. The Fae's eyes sparkled like amethysts, gleaming with secrets as it beckoned with crooked fingers. “Join us, sweet mortals! Show us your dance! What pleasure do you bring?” The Fae's voice rippled through the air, a melody mingled with mischief. Rory's heart raced. Her mind whirled with visions—passion, wild delight, yet undercurrent threads of caution tightened around her. They leaped forward, laughter echoing, weaving a story, one step further into an exhilarating uncertainty. Yet unease niggled in the edges of her mind. Each step felt heavy, weighted with the prospect of giving in. “They seem... lively.” Rory squeezed the Fae blade, cold reassurance grounding her resolve. Nyx’s eyes glimmered in the shifting shadows. “Beware of losing yourself, Aurora. The Fae play with threads unseen.” The Fae twirled, laughter resonating like chimes drifting with the soft breeze. “Come! Join the freedom! Cast away your mortal burdens!” Rory hesitated, torn between the mesmerizing laughter and the tightening knot in her stomach. Would she surrender to the dance or remain anchored in her resolve? Isolde’s presence shifted, ethereal yet somehow resolute. “To dance is to embrace the chaos, but often it demands a price.” The otherworldly revelers summoned her voice. Rory’s feet began to move, then stilled as tension coiled in the air. They reached out, trying to grasp the Fae’s allure without losing sight of their purpose. “Rory!” Nyx whispered sharply, their figure blurring between dimensions. “We must choose—the pull of the grove urges for our surrender.” In that moment, the leaves whispered a warning, rustling like warnings against the laughter and music. Rory's heartbeat synchronized with the ethereal melody, and the world around her pulsed, alive with possibility. Nothing mattered more than the next choice. She could sense the convergence of the magical and the mundane, cradled in that clearing of dancing light. “Remember what you fight for.” Rory pressed forward, her heart now racing with determination, shedding doubt like shed leaves. The vibrant world pulsed around her, pushing her deeper into the mysteries awaiting revelation.
total_cost0.00105437

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
23.53% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Isolde replied cryptically [cryptically]"
1"Isolde warned softly [softly]"
2"Nyx whispered sharply [sharply]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.586
leniency1
rawRatio0.176
effectiveRatio0.176
81.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1055
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1055
totalAiIsms40
found
0
word"charged"
count1
1
word"palpable"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count3
3
word"enigmatic"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"tension"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"remarkable"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"dancing"
count2
10
word"electric"
count1
11
word"anticipation"
count1
12
word"echoes"
count1
13
word"glistening"
count1
14
word"dance"
count7
15
word"unspoken"
count1
16
word"fleeting"
count1
17
word"echoed"
count1
18
word"depths"
count1
19
word"radiant"
count1
20
word"otherworldly"
count2
21
word"gleaming"
count1
22
word"raced"
count1
23
word"echoing"
count1
24
word"resolve"
count2
25
word"stomach"
count1
26
word"synchronized"
count1
27
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"charged"
1"palpable"
2"pulsed"
3"enigmatic"
4"weight"
5"tension"
6"warmth"
7"remarkable"
8"intricate"
9"dancing"
10"electric"
11"anticipation"
12"echoes"
13"glistening"
14"dance"
15"unspoken"
16"fleeting"
17"echoed"
18"depths"
19"radiant"
20"otherworldly"
21"gleaming"
22"raced"
23"echoing"
24"resolve"
25"stomach"
26"synchronized"
27"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
87.12% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences66
matches
0"d with warmth"
1"felt a tug"
2"g with determination"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1047
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
44.37% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount852
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.11
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory18
Nyx8
Isolde7
Varga1
Fae-forged1
Earth1
Fae7
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Varga"
4"Fae"
places
0"Nyx"
1"Earth"
globalScore0.444
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if interpreting invisible threads of fate"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1047
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
76.42% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean29.08
std12.14
cv0.417
sampleLengths
061
140
237
339
448
526
627
79
826
935
1052
1142
1214
1316
1452
1518
1628
1714
1824
1920
2042
2120
2237
2325
2433
2520
2613
2718
2821
2926
3020
3134
3220
3332
3425
3533
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs154
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences78
ratio0.051
matches
0"A cluster of wildflowers glimmered in colors that transcended nature—hues too vibrant for Earth."
1"She caught the faintest whiff of something burning—an odd contrast within the soft, sweet atmosphere."
2"“Should we join?” Rory felt a tug of both urge and hesitation; the lively movement called to her, yet she sensed an unspoken danger nestled in the joy."
3"Her mind whirled with visions—passion, wild delight, yet undercurrent threads of caution tightened around her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount857
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.0338389731621937
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.012835472578763127
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean13.42
std5.59
cv0.416
sampleLengths
016
19
221
315
420
520
65
732
813
913
1013
116
1210
1318
1414
1514
1612
1712
1815
199
2026
2111
2224
2313
2410
2512
2617
2712
2815
2915
3014
317
329
3310
3424
3518
3614
374
3828
397
407
4118
426
436
4414
4512
4614
4716
4813
497
89.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5384615384615384
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners42
50.51% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Slowly, the enchantment drew them"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences66
matches
0"She barely registered the whispers"
1"They pointed toward a towering"
2"she murmured, an enigmatic smile"
3"She shifted the Fae-forged blade"
4"They melded into a more"
5"She caught the faintest whiff"
6"It led them to a"
7"Her mind whirled with visions—passion,"
8"They leaped forward, laughter echoing,"
9"They reached out, trying to"
10"She could sense the convergence"
ratio0.167
13.03% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences66
matches
0"Aurora Carter, known as Rory"
1"The air felt different, charged"
2"Each inhale filled her lungs"
3"She barely registered the whispers"
4"Aurora turned to Nyx, the"
5"The dark mass pulsed with"
6"Nyx's voice drifted like smoke."
7"They pointed toward a towering"
8"Isolde Varga glided alongside them,"
9"she murmured, an enigmatic smile"
10"Rory muttered under her breath"
11"The unknown always had a"
12"She shifted the Fae-forged blade"
13"Every step deeper into the"
14"A cluster of wildflowers glimmered"
15"Rory reached down, fingertips brushing"
16"Isolde stated, her lavender eyes"
17"Rory asked, intrigued despite herself"
18"Isolde replied cryptically, weaving her"
19"Nyx swept ahead, shadow-drenched against"
ratio0.894
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Each inhale filled her lungs with a sweetness that danced on her senses, accompanied by a faint hint of damp earth."
1"The dark mass pulsed with a faintly glowing violet hue in the dim light, its outline shifting in unnatural patterns."
2"A cluster of wildflowers glimmered in colors that transcended nature—hues too vibrant for Earth."
3"Rory followed, the thickening undergrowth brushing against her legs, offering a heavy caress."
4"Rory glanced at Nyx, who observed the dance with a twitch at the corners of their shadowy visage."
5"Rory felt the ground shift beneath her feet, resonating with beats that echoed in her core."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she murmured, an enigmatic smile appearing on her lips"
1"Isolde stated, her lavender eyes shimmering as she studied the blooms"
2"Isolde replied, her tone cryptic"
3"Isolde warned softly, her lavender eyes piercing through the hypnotic glow"
4"The Fae's voice rippled, a melody mingled with mischief"
5"Nyx whispered sharply, their figure blurring between dimensions"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory muttered (mutter)"
2"Isolde stated (state)"
3"Isolde breathed (breathe)"
4"Rory felt (feel)"
5"Isolde warned softly (warn)"
6"Nyx whispered sharply (whisper)"
7"Rory pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.379
leniency0.759
rawRatio0.727
effectiveRatio0.552
69.9575%