Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTREW8QRAF9R7WAWVX4XAXN

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Duration:
23.9s
Cost:
$0.017892
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain pelted the streets of London, turning the city into a blur of shimmering lights and shadowy figures. Detective Harlow Quinn moved with purpose, her footsteps echoing against the wet pavement. Her eyes, sharp and unyielding, scanned the crowd for any sign of her quarry. The suspect had slipped through her fingers once before, but tonight, she was determined not to let that happen again. The suspect, a wiry figure in a dark hoodie, darted through the throng of umbrellas and huddled pedestrians. Quinn's heart pounded in her chest, a steady rhythm that matched the rain's relentless drumming. She pushed through the crowd, her leather watch glinting under the streetlights, a reminder of time slipping away. "Out of the way!" Her voice cut through the night, authoritative and commanding. People parted, casting curious glances at the determined detective. The suspect glanced over his shoulder, eyes wide with panic. He picked up speed, weaving through the maze of bodies with the agility of a fox. Quinn's jaw tightened, her resolve hardening. She couldn't afford to lose him now, not when she was so close. The chase led them down a narrow alley, the walls closing in like the jaws of a trap. Quinn's breath came in steady bursts, her military precision guiding her every move. The suspect skidded around a corner, his shoes splashing through puddles that mirrored the city lights. Quinn followed, her senses heightened, every nerve on edge. The alley opened up into a deserted street, the rain-slicked cobblestones glistening under the dim glow of a solitary streetlamp. The suspect hesitated, casting a frantic look around before bolting towards a nondescript door set into the side of an old brick building. Quinn's instincts screamed at her to be cautious, but she couldn't let him escape. She reached the door just as it swung shut, her hand catching the handle. It was unlocked. She paused, her mind racing. This could be a trap, a lure into something far more dangerous than she anticipated. But she had come too far to turn back now. With a deep breath, she pushed the door open and stepped inside. The world shifted around her. The dimly lit corridor stretched ahead, the air thick with the scent of damp stone and something else—something metallic and ancient. Her footsteps echoed, a solitary sound in the oppressive silence. Ahead, the suspect's silhouette flickered in the gloom, a shadow among shadows. He moved with purpose, leading her deeper into the labyrinthine passageways. Quinn's heart thudded in her chest, a steady drumbeat of determination and caution. The corridor twisted and turned, leading her down a flight of stairs that spiraled into the earth. The air grew cooler, the walls closing in with a sense of foreboding. She reached the bottom, her eyes adjusting to the dim light that filtered through cracks in the ceiling. Before her lay The Veil Market, a hidden world beneath the city. The abandoned Tube station had been transformed into a bustling underground market, a place where the supernatural and the mundane collided. Stalls lined the platform, their wares glinting in the flickering light—enchanted trinkets, alchemical substances, and otherworldly artifacts. Quinn hesitated, her mind racing. She had heard whispers of this place, a market that moved with the full moon, accessible only to those who knew its secrets. She had no bone token, no way to blend in with the crowd of supernatural beings and those who trafficked with them. The suspect was somewhere in the throng, his presence a tantalizing thread she couldn't afford to lose. But to follow him into this world was to step into the unknown, to risk everything on a gamble that could cost her dearly. A figure brushed past her, a tall man with olive skin and a scar running along his forearm. He paused, glancing at her with warm brown eyes that held a flicker of recognition. "Detective Quinn," he murmured, his voice low and accented. "You shouldn't be here." "Tomás Herrera," she replied, her voice steady despite the turmoil within. "I could say the same to you." He shrugged, the Saint Christopher medallion around his neck catching the light. "I have my reasons. But you... you're out of your depth." Quinn's gaze swept the market, the chaos and wonder of it all. "I'm chasing a suspect. He led me here." Tomás studied her, his expression unreadable. "This place isn't for the likes of you. It's dangerous." "I know the risks," she replied, her jaw set with determination. "But I can't let him get away." Tomás sighed, a sound of resignation. "Then let me help you. I know these paths better than most." Quinn hesitated, the weight of the decision pressing down on her. She had always worked alone, trusted her instincts above all else. But here, in this world of shadows and secrets, she needed an ally. "Alright," she agreed, her voice firm. "But we do this my way." Tomás nodded, a hint of a smile playing at the corners of his lips. "Lead the way, Detective." Together, they plunged into the heart of the market, the crowd parting around them like a living sea. Quinn's senses were on high alert, every sound and movement a potential threat. The suspect was out there, somewhere among the stalls and the strange, otherworldly patrons. They moved with purpose, Tomás guiding her through the maze of vendors and curious onlookers. The air buzzed with energy, a palpable tension that set her nerves on edge. She caught glimpses of the suspect, a flash of a hoodie here, a shadow there, always just out of reach. "He's heading for the back," Tomás murmured, his eyes scanning the crowd. "There's a way out through the old tunnels." Quinn nodded, her focus unwavering. They pushed forward, the market's cacophony fading into the background as they neared their quarry. The suspect was close, the chase nearing its climax. They reached the edge of the market, the stalls giving way to a darkened passage that led deeper into the underground. The suspect paused, glancing back with a look of desperation. He hesitated, caught between flight and fight. Quinn stepped forward, her presence a force of nature. "It's over," she called, her voice cutting through the tension like a knife. "There's nowhere left to run." The suspect's eyes darted between her and the passage, his mind racing. For a moment, time seemed to stand still, the world holding its breath. Then, with a resigned sigh, he raised his hands, the fight leaving him. Quinn approached, her movements careful and deliberate. She had him, finally, after all the twists and turns. Tomás watched, his expression one of quiet satisfaction. "You did it," he said, a note of admiration in his voice. Quinn nodded, her gaze never leaving the suspect. "With a little help," she admitted, a rare smile touching her lips. Together, they led the suspect back through the market, the crowd parting once more to let them pass. The rain still fell outside, a steady rhythm that matched the beat of her heart. She had ventured into the unknown and emerged victorious, a testament to her resolve and the unexpected alliances forged in the shadows.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1201
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1201
totalAiIsms38
found
0
word"footsteps"
count2
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"determined"
count2
4
word"glinting"
count2
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"resolve"
count2
7
word"glistening"
count1
8
word"solitary"
count2
9
word"racing"
count3
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"oppressive"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"gloom"
count1
15
word"sense of"
count1
16
word"foreboding"
count1
17
word"otherworldly"
count2
18
word"tantalizing"
count1
19
word"flicker"
count1
20
word"unreadable"
count1
21
word"weight"
count1
22
word"potential"
count1
23
word"palpable"
count1
24
word"tension"
count2
25
word"scanning"
count1
26
word"unwavering"
count1
27
word"cacophony"
count1
28
word"testament"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoing"
2"scanned"
3"determined"
4"glinting"
5"reminder"
6"resolve"
7"glistening"
8"solitary"
9"racing"
10"echoed"
11"oppressive"
12"silence"
13"flickered"
14"gloom"
15"sense of"
16"foreboding"
17"otherworldly"
18"tantalizing"
19"flicker"
20"unreadable"
21"weight"
22"potential"
23"palpable"
24"tension"
25"scanning"
26"unwavering"
27"cacophony"
28"testament"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"a sense of foreboding"
2"a flicker of recognition"
95.24% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences84
matches
0"e with panic"
1"a sense of foreboding"
2"t with determination"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1198
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.13% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1089
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow1
Quinn15
People1
Veil1
Market1
Tube1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás6
Together2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"People"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Tomás"
places
0"London"
1"Market"
globalScore0.811
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1198
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"let that happen"
79.75% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean33.28
std14.28
cv0.429
sampleLengths
065
151
222
345
447
552
651
722
836
936
1048
1150
1250
1341
1433
1513
1618
1723
1820
1916
2018
2118
2235
2312
2418
2545
2649
2720
2829
2938
3027
3125
3230
3320
3420
3555
96.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"was unlocked"
1"been transformed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs177
matches(empty)
82.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences95
ratio0.021
matches
0"The dimly lit corridor stretched ahead, the air thick with the scent of damp stone and something else—something metallic and ancient."
1"Stalls lined the platform, their wares glinting in the flickering light—enchanted trinkets, alchemical substances, and otherworldly artifacts."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1092
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.024725274725274724
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00641025641025641
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
97.51% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean12.61
std4.97
cv0.394
sampleLengths
018
113
214
320
418
515
618
713
89
910
1016
116
1213
1318
1413
1516
169
1720
1823
1914
2014
213
225
2315
2410
2512
265
2721
2810
2912
3011
3113
3217
3313
3418
3512
3621
3717
385
3923
4022
4117
4224
4318
4415
459
464
4711
487
4912
44.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.28421052631578947
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners27
39.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Then, with a resigned sigh,"
ratio0.012
77.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences84
matches
0"Her eyes, sharp and unyielding,"
1"She pushed through the crowd,"
2"Her voice cut through the"
3"He picked up speed, weaving"
4"She couldn't afford to lose"
5"She reached the door just"
6"It was unlocked."
7"She paused, her mind racing."
8"Her footsteps echoed, a solitary"
9"He moved with purpose, leading"
10"She reached the bottom, her"
11"She had heard whispers of"
12"She had no bone token,"
13"He paused, glancing at her"
14"he murmured, his voice low"
15"she replied, her voice steady"
16"He shrugged, the Saint Christopher"
17"she replied, her jaw set"
18"She had always worked alone,"
19"she agreed, her voice firm"
ratio0.357
19.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences84
matches
0"Rain pelted the streets of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn moved with"
2"Her eyes, sharp and unyielding,"
3"The suspect had slipped through"
4"The suspect, a wiry figure"
5"Quinn's heart pounded in her"
6"She pushed through the crowd,"
7"Her voice cut through the"
8"People parted, casting curious glances"
9"The suspect glanced over his"
10"He picked up speed, weaving"
11"Quinn's jaw tightened, her resolve"
12"She couldn't afford to lose"
13"The chase led them down"
14"Quinn's breath came in steady"
15"The suspect skidded around a"
16"Quinn followed, her senses heightened,"
17"The alley opened up into"
18"The suspect hesitated, casting a"
19"Quinn's instincts screamed at her"
ratio0.881
59.52% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Before her lay The Veil"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Quinn's heart pounded in her chest, a steady rhythm that matched the rain's relentless drumming."
1"The air buzzed with energy, a palpable tension that set her nerves on edge."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"he murmured, his voice low and accented"
1"she replied, her voice steady despite the turmoil within"
2"she agreed, her voice firm"
3"Tomás murmured, his eyes scanning the crowd"
4"she called, her voice cutting through the tension like a knife"
5"he said, a note of admiration in his voice"
6"she admitted, a rare smile touching her lips"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she agreed (agree)"
2"Tomás murmured (murmur)"
3"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.4
76.9062%