Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTREWZBHSJED3G193X5F4CB

Run Details

Duration:
28.0s
Cost:
$0.016120
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stood on the other side of Eva's front door, her heart thumping against her ribs in anticipation. She raised her fist, let it hover in indecision, then exhaled sharply through her nose. This wasn't about her; it was about Eva, and there was no room for her qualms tonight. Finally, she knocked. The three deadbolts unlatched with unlikely speed given the time, and the door swung open to reveal him. Lucien Moreau's sly grin slipped into an expression of surprise that softened the hard angles of his face. Those mismatched eyes, one amber, the other black, seemed to sweep over her as if reading pages from a novel long forgotten. "So, you still remember the way here," Lucien drawled, leaning the weight of his lean frame upon his cane, the ivory humming under his touch like an extension of his very being. "Only because you insisted on leaving trails everywhere," she replied, tilting her head with a mock severity that masked the sudden flutter of old nerves. He stepped back to let her in, the warmth from inside washing over her as heavy with nostalgia as the scent of yellowing books and spices that clung to Eva's den. Rory walked past him, inwardly cursing the way her pulse raced at the nearness of him, a current she thought long abandoned surging back to life. "You look well, Aurora," Lucien said, closing the door behind her. The click of locks bolting behind him made her acutely aware of the closeness, of the sealed intimacy that the room suddenly promised. "Busy as usual, Lucien?" "Quite." He gestured towards the cluttered chaos that was Eva's makeshift office. "Eva, however, is out for the night. She thought it less conspicuous for us to meet here." "How convenient," Rory muttered, glancing around. Stacks of paper whispered cryptic knowledge while Ptolemy, the tabby cat, surveyed them lazily from a pile of scrolls. His disdainful yawn was an old acquaintance to her, a reminder of less tangled times. Lucien approached an armchair, settling himself with a silkiness that camouflaged the burden of the blade concealed within his cane. "Sit, won't you?" She hesitated for a heartbeat, recalling the last time they'd shared space, air, and all things left unspoken. Finally, she sank into the couch, the cushions familiarly lumpy. "You know why I'm here, then?" She met his gaze with a steely-blue rawness that betrayed more than intended. "Considering Eva practically threw the job at me, yes," he replied with a smirk that didn't quite reach his eyes. "But I dare say, I'm rather intrigued by the complications that led to this point." The atmosphere hummed, charged with their mutual wariness, acknowledgment of history. Silence stretched between them, as heavy and dense as the thunderclouds that so often bruised the London sky. Rory knew she should speak, should unfurl the truths that lay knotted inside her. Instead, her thoughts seethed around the same doubt, the searching memories, the way their paths had crossed and misaligned over time. "I didn't expect you to leave as you did," he finally said, voice tempered by something besides reproach — as if he had chosen each word with the care one might reserve for dismantling a ticking device. "You didn't expect... or you didn't expect to care that I did?" She smirked, the curve of her lips almost cruel with a bitterness she'd thought defeated. Lucien tilted his head, his expression eloquent in its ambiguous calm. "Touché." She folded her arms, studying him, noting the subtle changes. He seemed older, not in years but in depth, like a well with secrets even he could no longer comprehend. The Lucien of old, the calculating Frenchman hiding behind a façade of courtesy, would never have let so much slip through his armor. "Did you ever regret it?" Rory blurted out. She hadn't intended to ask — the question had tumbled out of its own volition, dragged by the unmapped attraction that still tugged between them. He ran a hand through his platinum hair, the world weary gesture an early remnant of vulnerability she vividly remembered. "You're assuming I don’t still." Rory's throat tightened, and she forced herself to chuckle, the sound rough. "Well. That's something, at least." Lucien leaned forward, his gaze unwavering. "Perhaps it's past time we stopped dancing around our own shadows." His words struck her like raindrops on a parched desert, sudden and strange and necessary. There was bravery in his statement — or perhaps simply honesty tempered by acceptance of their shared foolishness. She gave him a long, measuring look that spoke more than an entire day's worth of conversation. "If Eva sent you to help, I suppose I'll have to accept it, no matter how little I like the strings attached." "My strings were severed long ago, Aurora," he replied softly, a tide of sincerity washing away the pretense of their earlier exchange. Somewhere within the cluttered sanctuary, Ptolemy let out a disgruntled mew, the only judge left to witness their wordless detente. "It's late," she finally ventured, glancing at the old-fashioned clock on the wall. She stood, instinctively smoothing her clothes, as if doing so might iron out the creases of their conversation. Lucien rose as well, a fluid grace masking that his burden was more than just physical. The cane lingered at his side, a shadow's shadow in the half-light. "You'll stay?" Rory lingered by the door, her hand reaching for the familiarity of the handle — the exit she'd planned to use so eagerly upon arriving. Yet now, her fingers brushed the wood, memorizing this moment inflamed by what lingered between them. "If I stay, things could get... complex," Rory conceded, the interior conviction lighting a smouldering promise between her words. "When have we ever done simple?" His smile flirted with mischief, but his eyes — those eyes that saw past defense and daring — held an earnestness she had known she craved. Silence embraced them once more, a prelude and finale to the echoes of the past, an entrée to a future they'd either build or demolish together. Underneath it all, in the quiet space neither dared to fill, lay a possibility they'd never fully relinquished. Aurora let the door sigh shut, and for the first time in a long while, the heat of companionship overruled the cool of cautious temperament.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.15% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he finally said [finally]"
1"he replied softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.542
leniency1
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.154
71.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1056
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"lazily"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"eagerly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"very"
2"suddenly"
3"lazily"
4"softly"
5"eagerly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1056
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"anticipation"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"raced"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"calculating"
count1
10
word"unwavering"
count1
11
word"dancing"
count1
12
word"sanctuary"
count1
13
word"complex"
count1
14
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"anticipation"
1"weight"
2"warmth"
3"pulse"
4"raced"
5"reminder"
6"unspoken"
7"charged"
8"silence"
9"calculating"
10"unwavering"
11"dancing"
12"sanctuary"
13"complex"
14"echoes"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
93.55% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences53
matches
0"s in anticipation"
1"y with nostalgia"
61.99% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences53
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1059
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount889
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Eva4
Moreau1
Rory7
Stacks1
Ptolemy2
London1
Lucien8
Frenchman1
Silence2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Lucien"
6"Frenchman"
7"Silence"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"as if reading pages from a novel long forgotten"
1"quite reach his eyes"
2"seemed older not in years but in depth, like a well with secrets even he could no longer comprehend"
3"as if doing so might iron out the creases of their conversation"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.944
wordCount1059
matches
0"not in years but in depth, like a well with secrets even he could no longer c"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"masking that his"
78.46% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean32.09
std13.63
cv0.425
sampleLengths
054
158
232
325
457
534
64
729
840
923
1028
1119
1235
1364
1437
1527
1612
1753
1833
1925
2017
2117
2233
2339
2422
2520
2631
2730
2841
2919
3032
3144
3225
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs149
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences63
ratio0.095
matches
0"This wasn't about her; it was about Eva, and there was no room for her qualms tonight."
1"\"I didn't expect you to leave as you did,\" he finally said, voice tempered by something besides reproach — as if he had chosen each word with the care one might reserve for dismantling a ticking device."
2"She hadn't intended to ask — the question had tumbled out of its own volition, dragged by the unmapped attraction that still tugged between them."
3"There was bravery in his statement — or perhaps simply honesty tempered by acceptance of their shared foolishness."
4"Rory lingered by the door, her hand reaching for the familiarity of the handle — the exit she'd planned to use so eagerly upon arriving."
5"\"When have we ever done simple?\" His smile flirted with mischief, but his eyes — those eyes that saw past defense and daring — held an earnestness she had known she craved."
78.44% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount886
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"long abandoned surging back"
1"lay knotted inside her."
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.04740406320541761
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.023702031602708805
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean16.81
std7.77
cv0.462
sampleLengths
019
115
217
33
418
518
622
732
825
931
1026
1111
1223
134
1412
1517
166
1719
1815
1920
203
2118
2210
2319
2420
2515
2611
2718
2814
2921
3037
3127
3211
331
3410
3520
3623
378
3825
3920
405
4112
425
436
4411
4515
4618
4717
4822
4922
95.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5714285714285714
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences53
matches
0"Finally, she knocked."
1"Finally, she sank into the"
2"Instead, her thoughts seethed around"
3"Somewhere within the cluttered sanctuary,"
ratio0.075
69.06% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences53
matches
0"She raised her fist, let"
1"she replied, tilting her head"
2"He stepped back to let"
3"He gestured towards the cluttered"
4"His disdainful yawn was an"
5"She hesitated for a heartbeat,"
6"She met his gaze with"
7"he replied with a smirk"
8"he finally said, voice tempered"
9"She smirked, the curve of"
10"She folded her arms, studying"
11"He seemed older, not in"
12"She hadn't intended to ask"
13"He ran a hand through"
14"His words struck her like"
15"She gave him a long,"
16"he replied softly, a tide"
17"she finally ventured, glancing at"
18"She stood, instinctively smoothing her"
19"His smile flirted with mischief,"
ratio0.377
26.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences53
matches
0"Aurora Carter stood on the"
1"She raised her fist, let"
2"This wasn't about her; it"
3"The three deadbolts unlatched with"
4"Lucien Moreau's sly grin slipped"
5"Those mismatched eyes, one amber,"
6"Lucien drawled, leaning the weight"
7"she replied, tilting her head"
8"He stepped back to let"
9"Rory walked past him, inwardly"
10"Lucien said, closing the door"
11"The click of locks bolting"
12"He gestured towards the cluttered"
13"Rory muttered, glancing around"
14"Stacks of paper whispered cryptic"
15"His disdainful yawn was an"
16"Lucien approached an armchair, settling"
17"She hesitated for a heartbeat,"
18"She met his gaze with"
19"he replied with a smirk"
ratio0.868
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
7.72% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Lucien Moreau's sly grin slipped into an expression of surprise that softened the hard angles of his face."
1"Those mismatched eyes, one amber, the other black, seemed to sweep over her as if reading pages from a novel long forgotten."
2"Lucien approached an armchair, settling himself with a silkiness that camouflaged the burden of the blade concealed within his cane."
3"She folded her arms, studying him, noting the subtle changes."
4"She gave him a long, measuring look that spoke more than an entire day's worth of conversation."
5"She stood, instinctively smoothing her clothes, as if doing so might iron out the creases of their conversation."
6"Rory lingered by the door, her hand reaching for the familiarity of the handle — the exit she'd planned to use so eagerly upon arriving."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory conceded, the interior conviction lighting a smouldering promise between her words"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Lucien drawled (drawl)"
1"Rory muttered (mutter)"
2"Rory conceded (concede)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.25
72.1340%