| 46.15% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he finally said [finally]" | | 1 | "he replied softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.542 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |
| 71.59% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1056 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "lazily" | | 4 | "softly" | | 5 | "eagerly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.24% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1056 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "anticipation" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "raced" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "unspoken" | | 7 | "charged" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "calculating" | | 10 | "unwavering" | | 11 | "dancing" | | 12 | "sanctuary" | | 13 | "complex" | | 14 | "echoes" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 93.55% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "s in anticipation" | | 1 | "y with nostalgia" |
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| 61.99% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1059 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 889 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.9 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Eva | 4 | | Moreau | 1 | | Rory | 7 | | Stacks | 1 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | London | 1 | | Lucien | 8 | | Frenchman | 1 | | Silence | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" | | 5 | "Lucien" | | 6 | "Frenchman" | | 7 | "Silence" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if reading pages from a novel long forgotten" | | 1 | "quite reach his eyes" | | 2 | "seemed older not in years but in depth, like a well with secrets even he could no longer comprehend" | | 3 | "as if doing so might iron out the creases of their conversation" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.944 | | wordCount | 1059 | | matches | | 0 | "not in years but in depth, like a well with secrets even he could no longer c" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | |
| 78.46% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 32.09 | | std | 13.63 | | cv | 0.425 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 57 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 40 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 28 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 64 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 39 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 41 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 32 | | 31 | 44 | | 32 | 25 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 63 | | ratio | 0.095 | | matches | | 0 | "This wasn't about her; it was about Eva, and there was no room for her qualms tonight." | | 1 | "\"I didn't expect you to leave as you did,\" he finally said, voice tempered by something besides reproach — as if he had chosen each word with the care one might reserve for dismantling a ticking device." | | 2 | "She hadn't intended to ask — the question had tumbled out of its own volition, dragged by the unmapped attraction that still tugged between them." | | 3 | "There was bravery in his statement — or perhaps simply honesty tempered by acceptance of their shared foolishness." | | 4 | "Rory lingered by the door, her hand reaching for the familiarity of the handle — the exit she'd planned to use so eagerly upon arriving." | | 5 | "\"When have we ever done simple?\" His smile flirted with mischief, but his eyes — those eyes that saw past defense and daring — held an earnestness she had known she craved." |
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| 78.44% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 886 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "long abandoned surging back" | | 1 | "lay knotted inside her." |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.04740406320541761 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.023702031602708805 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 63 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 63 | | mean | 16.81 | | std | 7.77 | | cv | 0.462 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 37 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 95.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5714285714285714 | | totalSentences | 63 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Finally, she knocked." | | 1 | "Finally, she sank into the" | | 2 | "Instead, her thoughts seethed around" | | 3 | "Somewhere within the cluttered sanctuary," |
| | ratio | 0.075 | |
| 69.06% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "She raised her fist, let" | | 1 | "she replied, tilting her head" | | 2 | "He stepped back to let" | | 3 | "He gestured towards the cluttered" | | 4 | "His disdainful yawn was an" | | 5 | "She hesitated for a heartbeat," | | 6 | "She met his gaze with" | | 7 | "he replied with a smirk" | | 8 | "he finally said, voice tempered" | | 9 | "She smirked, the curve of" | | 10 | "She folded her arms, studying" | | 11 | "He seemed older, not in" | | 12 | "She hadn't intended to ask" | | 13 | "He ran a hand through" | | 14 | "His words struck her like" | | 15 | "She gave him a long," | | 16 | "he replied softly, a tide" | | 17 | "she finally ventured, glancing at" | | 18 | "She stood, instinctively smoothing her" | | 19 | "His smile flirted with mischief," |
| | ratio | 0.377 | |
| 26.04% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stood on the" | | 1 | "She raised her fist, let" | | 2 | "This wasn't about her; it" | | 3 | "The three deadbolts unlatched with" | | 4 | "Lucien Moreau's sly grin slipped" | | 5 | "Those mismatched eyes, one amber," | | 6 | "Lucien drawled, leaning the weight" | | 7 | "she replied, tilting her head" | | 8 | "He stepped back to let" | | 9 | "Rory walked past him, inwardly" | | 10 | "Lucien said, closing the door" | | 11 | "The click of locks bolting" | | 12 | "He gestured towards the cluttered" | | 13 | "Rory muttered, glancing around" | | 14 | "Stacks of paper whispered cryptic" | | 15 | "His disdainful yawn was an" | | 16 | "Lucien approached an armchair, settling" | | 17 | "She hesitated for a heartbeat," | | 18 | "She met his gaze with" | | 19 | "he replied with a smirk" |
| | ratio | 0.868 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 7.72% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien Moreau's sly grin slipped into an expression of surprise that softened the hard angles of his face." | | 1 | "Those mismatched eyes, one amber, the other black, seemed to sweep over her as if reading pages from a novel long forgotten." | | 2 | "Lucien approached an armchair, settling himself with a silkiness that camouflaged the burden of the blade concealed within his cane." | | 3 | "She folded her arms, studying him, noting the subtle changes." | | 4 | "She gave him a long, measuring look that spoke more than an entire day's worth of conversation." | | 5 | "She stood, instinctively smoothing her clothes, as if doing so might iron out the creases of their conversation." | | 6 | "Rory lingered by the door, her hand reaching for the familiarity of the handle — the exit she'd planned to use so eagerly upon arriving." |
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| 86.54% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory conceded, the interior conviction lighting a smouldering promise between her words" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Lucien drawled (drawl)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Rory conceded (concede)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |