Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTREZ8DQM6792EDVSJF5XXB

Run Details

Duration:
30.1s
Cost:
$0.000969

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stood at the entrance of The Fae Grove, her breath hanging in the chilly night air like fog. The shadows stretched unnaturally under the glowing moon, and the towering ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead, dark and imposing. She had wandered into Richmond Park many times before but never at this hour, nor with such intention. The weight of the Heartstone Pendant hung around her neck, its faint warmth a reminder of her quest, though it felt almost mocking in the chill. "Why did I let Eva talk me into this?” she muttered to herself, pushing a strand of her straight black hair behind one ear. The trees embraced her like watchful sentinels, and the wildflowers, usually bright and vibrant, appeared muted, their colors deepened by the darkness. She stepped inside, the grass beneath her feet soft yet unsettlingly silenced. No chirping crickets or rustling leaves greeted her; only an ominous stillness enveloped the grove. The air shimmered with a faint energy, almost sparkling, yet it filled her with unease. Aurora hesitated, glancing back toward the world outside that felt so far away, then took a deep breath and pressed forward. A rustling sound caught her attention, snapping her focus back to the grove. It came from somewhere among the trees, just beyond her line of sight. She squinted into the darkness, every instinct urging her to run, but her feet remained rooted to the ground. "Get a grip," she whispered, the words echoing back to her on the stillness. Refusing to be rattled, she shifted her weight, her gaze darting for any sign of movement. The pendant pulsed slightly against her chest, its warmth seeping into her skin, but it offered little comfort. As she walked deeper, Aurora spotted a cluster of wildflowers blooming defiantly under the moonlight. The blooms, usually so lively, now seemed twisted, their petals curling inwards as if hiding from something unseen. A shiver ran down her spine, accompanied by another rustling sound—this one closer, sharper. “Hello?” she called, her voice breaking just above a whisper. Silence enveloped her once more, thick and heavy. There was a flicker at the edge of her vision, a shadow slipping between the trees. Her heartbeat quickened. “Is anyone there?” she pressed, but the grove offered no response. Aurora shook her head, trying to shake off the rising dread. This place felt wrong, its essence twisted, like she had stepped into a forgotten dream where the rules had changed. She drew in a breath, reminding herself of the purpose behind her being here. The Heartstone had guided her to this grove, pulsing steadily, a compass toward her enigmatic benefactor and the answers she sought. Another sound—a whisper, barely audible, echoing through the night. Instinctively, she turned, scanning the shadows as they flickered. “This isn’t funny,” she spoke more firmly, annoyance creeping in through her fear, a distraction to push away the anxiety growing in her gut. The grove responded in eerie silence, mocking her alone. With each step, it felt as if the earth shifted beneath her. The shadows danced, and eerie shapes appeared just out of focus—half-formed figures hiding among the trees, watching, waiting. A low hum began to vibrate around her, growing in pitch and intensity. It lured her further down, deeper into the grove, where the air felt charged, and each breath tasted metallic. “Just keep moving,” she murmured, her heart racing. “You’ve come too far.” Suddenly, a figure darted through the trees—a glimpse of silver, with glimmering eyes catching the moonlight. She froze, her mind racing with possibilities. It couldn’t be real. She shook her head as the shadows twisted and morphed, drawing her in. The Heartstone pendant throbbed with urgency against her skin, almost pulling her forward. She could not ignore its call; she had to follow. As she ventured deeper, the path narrowed, thick shrubs clawed at her legs. “Show yourself!” she demanded, the edge of her voice sharper, slicing through the choking quiet. Another rustle. This time, it seemed to be getting closer, circling her. She spun, scanning the darkness, but saw nothing. Just the ancient oaks standing sentinel, their gnarled branches stretching overhead like skeletal hands. Without warning, the ground trembled, sending her stumbling backward, the pendant pulsating with heat. Aurora tripped, falling to her knees, catching glimpses of flickering shadows swirling around her, shapes moving just beyond the corner of her eye. Panic surged. “Stop it!” she shouted, but her voice cracked. Her breath hitched as an unmistakable whisper floated to her, brushing past her ear like a cold wind. A name, but she couldn’t grasp the syllables, felt the vibrations rather than recognized them. Aurora tugged at the pendant, but instead of comfort, it burned against her skin. The shadows were no longer distant; they closed in, whispering now in a cacophony of hisses and breaths. She scrambled to her feet, heart pounding, adrenaline coursing through her. She rushed blindly toward an opening she sensed between the trees, desperate to break free from the proximity of whatever loomed behind her. As she burst into a small clearing, the moon hung above, illuminating scattered stones slick with dew. It felt like sanctuary and prison all at once. But the shadows chased her, seeping through the edges of her vision, whispering her name—Aurora. “Leave me alone!” she cried, brandishing her arms, desperate for release. A cold breeze swept through the grove, like icy fingers wrapping around her throat. The trees seemed to lean, pressing closer, and the heartstone exploded with fire against her chest, pulsing angrily. She caught her breath, the weight of uncertainty crashing over her. What was this place? Why had it called her? Aurora dared a glance back as another rustling echoed—a cacophony of whispers swelling around her, as if the entire grove had awakened. She gripped the Heartstone tightly, its heat a point of clarity in the gathering madness, allowing its power to ground her. And amid the chaos, amidst the shadows, something flickered. A light—brief and ethereal. She felt its pull, the warmth no longer hostile, but inviting, offering a way out of the morass of panic. With a deep breath, she stepped toward the flickering glow, leaving the shadows behind. Whatever lurked in The Fae Grove could wait for another night.
total_cost0.00096915

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she spoke more [more]"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.9
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
81.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1055
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"angrily"
count1
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"angrily"
3"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1055
totalAiIsms43
found
0
word"loomed"
count2
1
word"imposing"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"sentinels"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count2
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"down her spine"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count3
12
word"silence"
count2
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"quickened"
count1
15
word"enigmatic"
count1
16
word"scanning"
count2
17
word"flickered"
count2
18
word"firmly"
count1
19
word"intensity"
count1
20
word"charged"
count1
21
word"racing"
count2
22
word"throbbed"
count1
23
word"sentinel"
count1
24
word"trembled"
count1
25
word"cacophony"
count2
26
word"pounding"
count1
27
word"sanctuary"
count1
28
word"echoed"
count1
29
word"amidst"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"imposing"
2"weight"
3"warmth"
4"reminder"
5"chill"
6"sentinels"
7"shimmered"
8"echoing"
9"pulsed"
10"down her spine"
11"whisper"
12"silence"
13"flicker"
14"quickened"
15"enigmatic"
16"scanning"
17"flickered"
18"firmly"
19"intensity"
20"charged"
21"racing"
22"throbbed"
23"sentinel"
24"trembled"
25"cacophony"
26"pounding"
27"sanctuary"
28"echoed"
29"amidst"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"shiver down spine"
count1
1
label"world had stopped"
count1
highlights
0"A shiver ran down her spine"
1"as if the earth shifted"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences75
matches
0"r with unease"
1"d with urgency"
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1047
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1014
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.79
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove2
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone4
Pendant1
Refusing1
Aurora8
Silence1
Suddenly1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
3"Silence"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
38.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"appeared muted their colors deepened by the darkness"
1"as if hiding from something unseen"
2"seemed twisted their petals curling inwards as if hiding from something unseen"
3"felt like sanctuary and prison all at o"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1047
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean36.1
std18.14
cv0.503
sampleLengths
083
146
263
345
448
547
618
730
866
942
1039
1132
1212
1340
1436
1515
1634
1739
188
1947
2052
2141
2211
2343
249
2543
2613
2734
2811
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs188
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences76
ratio0.132
matches
0"No chirping crickets or rustling leaves greeted her; only an ominous stillness enveloped the grove."
1"A shiver ran down her spine, accompanied by another rustling sound—this one closer, sharper."
2"Another sound—a whisper, barely audible, echoing through the night."
3"The shadows danced, and eerie shapes appeared just out of focus—half-formed figures hiding among the trees, watching, waiting."
4"Suddenly, a figure darted through the trees—a glimpse of silver, with glimmering eyes catching the moonlight."
5"She could not ignore its call; she had to follow."
6"The shadows were no longer distant; they closed in, whispering now in a cacophony of hisses and breaths."
7"But the shadows chased her, seeping through the edges of her vision, whispering her name—Aurora."
8"Aurora dared a glance back as another rustling echoed—a cacophony of whispers swelling around her, as if the entire grove had awakened."
9"A light—brief and ethereal."
86.19% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1022
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"above, illuminating scattered stones"
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.04892367906066536
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.016634050880626222
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean13.78
std5.65
cv0.41
sampleLengths
019
120
218
326
424
522
612
715
815
921
1013
1113
1219
1314
1416
1518
1615
1718
1814
1910
208
2116
223
2311
2411
2520
2614
2721
289
299
3024
319
3212
3318
3413
3519
368
374
3816
397
404
4113
4213
4310
4413
4515
462
4710
488
4914
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.40789473684210525
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners31
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences73
matches
0"Instinctively, she turned, scanning the"
1"Suddenly, a figure darted through"
2"Just the ancient oaks standing"
ratio0.041
66.58% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences73
matches
0"She had wandered into Richmond"
1"she muttered to herself, pushing"
2"She stepped inside, the grass"
3"It came from somewhere among"
4"She squinted into the darkness,"
5"she whispered, the words echoing"
6"she called, her voice breaking"
7"Her heartbeat quickened."
8"she pressed, but the grove"
9"She drew in a breath,"
10"she spoke more firmly, annoyance"
11"It lured her further down,"
12"she murmured, her heart racing"
13"She froze, her mind racing"
14"It couldn’t be real."
15"She shook her head as"
16"She could not ignore its"
17"she demanded, the edge of"
18"She spun, scanning the darkness,"
19"she shouted, but her voice"
ratio0.384
69.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences73
matches
0"Aurora stood at the entrance"
1"The shadows stretched unnaturally under"
2"She had wandered into Richmond"
3"The weight of the Heartstone"
4"she muttered to herself, pushing"
5"The trees embraced her like"
6"She stepped inside, the grass"
7"The air shimmered with a"
8"Aurora hesitated, glancing back toward"
9"A rustling sound caught her"
10"It came from somewhere among"
11"She squinted into the darkness,"
12"she whispered, the words echoing"
13"The pendant pulsed slightly against"
14"The blooms, usually so lively,"
15"A shiver ran down her"
16"she called, her voice breaking"
17"Silence enveloped her once more,"
18"Her heartbeat quickened."
19"she pressed, but the grove"
ratio0.781
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.18% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Refusing to be rattled, she shifted her weight, her gaze darting for any sign of movement."
1"The blooms, usually so lively, now seemed twisted, their petals curling inwards as if hiding from something unseen."
2"Aurora tripped, falling to her knees, catching glimpses of flickering shadows swirling around her, shapes moving just beyond the corner of her eye."
3"But the shadows chased her, seeping through the edges of her vision, whispering her name—Aurora."
4"Aurora dared a glance back as another rustling echoed—a cacophony of whispers swelling around her, as if the entire grove had awakened."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she whispered, the words echoing back to her on the stillness"
1"she called, her voice breaking just above a whisper"
2"she pressed, but the grove offered no response"
3"she murmured, her heart racing"
4"she shouted, but her voice cracked"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she pressed (press)"
3"she spoke more (speak)"
4"she murmured (murmur)"
5"she demanded (demand)"
6"she shouted (shout)"
7"she cried (cry)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.9
leniency1
rawRatio0.889
effectiveRatio0.889
74.1190%