Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRF2Y7P2XC6M5N9PE8GEVN

Run Details

Duration:
17.4s
Cost:
$0.000748
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped out of the mist-shrouded evening and into the faint, flickering glow of Richmond Park's entrance. The ancient oak standing stones, sentinels of the Fae Grove, loomed before her, their bark twisted and gnarled with age. The air clung to her skin, heavy with the scent of damp earth and decaying leaves. As she passed between the stones, the sounds of the outside world receded, muffled by the silence of the grove. Rory shivered, despite the thickness of her jacket. The cold seeped into her bones, echoing the unease that had been growing since she'd received the mysterious message. The words, scrawled on a piece of paper in hasty handwriting, had been brief: "Meet me at the Grove. I know what happened to your mother." The paper had been slipped under her door, with no indication of who might have written it. Rory's mind had been racing ever since. What could they possibly know about her mother's disappearance? The not knowing had driven her to come to this place, despite the trepidation that had been building all day. As she walked deeper into the grove, the trees seemed to close in around her, their branches tangling above her head like skeletal fingers. The rustle of leaves, the snapping of twigs, made her spin around, but there was never anything there. Rory quickened her pace, the pulse in her wrist – just above the small, crescent-shaped scar – beating faster. A faint, ethereal glow began to emanate from the wildflowers that bloomed year-round in the grove. The light was soft, but it cast eerie shadows on the trees, making them seem to twist and writhe. Rory felt a presence watching her, the sensation growing stronger with every step. She spun around again, but the trees stood silent and still, their branches unmoving. The silence was oppressive, a physical weight that pressed down on her. Rory's breath came in short, sharp gasps. She'd been so sure she was alone in the grove, but now she couldn't shake the feeling that she was being stalked. The pendant around her neck, the Heartstone given to her by an unknown benefactor, pulsed faintly with warmth, as if sensing her unease. As she turned a corner, a figure resolved out of the darkness. Rory's heart leapt into her throat. The figure didn't move, didn't seem to be watching her, but she could sense its presence, a cold, dark mass that filled the air. The figure's face was obscured, hidden behind a tangle of branches and leaves. Rory's voice caught in her throat. She tried to speak, to call out, but her words were frozen in her mouth. The figure didn't respond, didn't move. It simply stood, a presence that filled the grove, making the trees seem to lean in, as if they were trying to listen. A faint whispering began to filter through the air, the words indistinguishable, but the malevolent intent clear. Rory's skin crawled. She tried to step back, but her feet seemed rooted to the spot. The whispering grew louder, the words becoming clearer: "You shouldn't be here." Rory's breath came in short, ragged gasps. She tried to raise her hands, to defend herself, but they felt heavy, unresponsive. The figure began to move towards her, its presence filling the grove, making the trees seem to twist and writhe. The whispering stopped, the silence that followed more oppressive than the words had been. Rory felt the presence closing in around her, suffocating her. She tried to scream, but her voice was frozen in her throat. The figure loomed before her, its face still hidden. Rory felt its cold breath on her skin, making her shiver. The pendant around her neck pulsed with warmth, a faint, comforting glow in the darkness. "You're not alone," a low, rasping voice whispered, the words echoing off the trees. Rory's heart leapt into her throat. The figure's face was still hidden, but she could sense its eyes on her, boring into her skin. The voice seemed to come from all around her, echoing off the trees. The figure's presence closed in around her, making it hard to breathe. Rory felt herself being pulled towards it, towards the darkness that lurked beneath the surface of the grove. And then, everything went black.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:52:23.371Z" 2/19/2026, 10:52:23 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount715
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount715
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count2
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"echoing"
count3
4
word"racing"
count1
5
word"trepidation"
count1
6
word"quickened"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"oppressive"
count2
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count2
11
word"warmth"
count2
12
word"resolved"
count1
13
word"comforting"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"loomed"
2"silence"
3"echoing"
4"racing"
5"trepidation"
6"quickened"
7"pulse"
8"oppressive"
9"weight"
10"pulsed"
11"warmth"
12"resolved"
13"comforting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
90.99% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences49
matches
0"y with warmth"
1"d with warmth"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount13
narrationSentences49
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"seem to"
3"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences49
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords714
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
56.47% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount695
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.87
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone1
Rory13
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore0.565
windowScore0.667
43.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if sensing her unease"
1"seemed rooted to the spot"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount714
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
99.87% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean47.6
std23.78
cv0.5
sampleLengths
073
1106
261
362
464
555
650
745
841
936
1035
1114
1237
1330
145
62.30% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences49
matches
0"been slipped"
1"being stalked"
2"was obscured"
3"were frozen"
4"was frozen"
5"being pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs128
matches
0"were trying"
84.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences49
ratio0.02
matches
0"Rory quickened her pace, the pulse in her wrist – just above the small, crescent-shaped scar – beating faster."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount696
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar –"
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.01867816091954023
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004310344827586207
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences49
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences49
mean14.57
std6.83
cv0.469
sampleLengths
017
120
216
320
48
519
643
77
89
920
1024
1118
1219
1316
1419
1513
1614
1712
187
1922
2023
2112
226
2324
2413
256
2615
276
2823
2917
303
3113
3212
337
3414
3520
3614
3710
3812
399
4011
4115
4214
436
4418
4513
4612
4718
485
37.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.20408163265306123
totalSentences49
uniqueOpeners10
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences49
matches
0"She spun around again, but"
1"She'd been so sure she"
2"She tried to speak, to"
3"It simply stood, a presence"
4"She tried to step back,"
5"She tried to raise her"
6"She tried to scream, but"
ratio0.143
11.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences49
matches
0"Aurora stepped out of the"
1"The ancient oak standing stones,"
2"The air clung to her"
3"Rory shivered, despite the thickness"
4"The cold seeped into her"
5"The words, scrawled on a"
6"Rory's mind had been racing"
7"The not knowing had driven"
8"The rustle of leaves, the"
9"Rory quickened her pace, the"
10"A faint, ethereal glow began"
11"The light was soft, but"
12"Rory felt a presence watching"
13"She spun around again, but"
14"The silence was oppressive, a"
15"Rory's breath came in short,"
16"She'd been so sure she"
17"The pendant around her neck,"
18"Rory's heart leapt into her"
19"The figure didn't move, didn't"
ratio0.898
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences49
matches(empty)
ratio0
37.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The cold seeped into her bones, echoing the unease that had been growing since she'd received the mysterious message."
1"The not knowing had driven her to come to this place, despite the trepidation that had been building all day."
2"A faint, ethereal glow began to emanate from the wildflowers that bloomed year-round in the grove."
3"The pendant around her neck, the Heartstone given to her by an unknown benefactor, pulsed faintly with warmth, as if sensing her unease."
4"The figure began to move towards her, its presence filling the grove, making the trees seem to twist and writhe."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"The whispering grew, the words becoming clearer:"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"a low rasping voice whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.667
67.2796%