| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.222 | | leniency | 0.444 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 893 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.61% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 893 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "searing" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 132 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 8 | | totalWords | 885 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "Hel portal." | | 1 | "Find the grove. Midnight." | | 2 | "Run." | | 3 | "had" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.76% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 844 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.18 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 1 | | Park | 1 | | God | 1 | | Rory | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.908 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 87.01% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.13 | | wordCount | 885 | | matches | | 0 | "not real,” she said, but the words tasted like ash" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 18.06 | | std | 16.45 | | cv | 0.911 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 59 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 59 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 36 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 145 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 132 | | ratio | 0.083 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the wildflowers persisted, blooming in impossible hues—violets that shimmered like oil on water, poppies black as squid ink." | | 1 | "Only that the thing around her neck had started humming the moment she stepped into the park, and that the note tucked into her pocket—*Find the grove." | | 2 | "Midnight.*—had been waiting on her pillow when she got home from work." | | 3 | "Then—laughter." | | 4 | "The face—if it could be called a face—was a shifting mask of shadows, save for the mouth." | | 5 | "The dreams—oh God, the dreams—of a forest that wasn’t a forest, of roots that coiled around her ankles and whispered in a language that made her ears bleed." | | 6 | "And then—" | | 7 | "The figure’s head snapped toward the sound, its mouth stretching wider, wider—" | | 8 | "It reached for her, fingers brushing her ankle—" | | 9 | "She slashed again, the knife arcing through the air—" | | 10 | "The trees groaned, their branches twisting, reaching—" |
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| 94.95% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 852 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.045774647887323945 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007042253521126761 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 132 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 132 | | mean | 6.7 | | std | 5.39 | | cv | 0.803 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 46.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.3484848484848485 | | totalSentences | 132 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the wildflowers persisted, blooming" | | 1 | "Only that the thing around" | | 2 | "Just the same crimson ink" | | 3 | "Just the slow, wet sound" | | 4 | "Too many teeth." | | 5 | "Too many knuckles." | | 6 | "Then it lunged." | | 7 | "Then it laughed, the sound" |
| | ratio | 0.082 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 1 | "They shouldn’t be in season." | | 2 | "She didn’t know what they" | | 3 | "Her breath hitched." | | 4 | "She stumbled back, nearly dropping" | | 5 | "Its limbs stretched unnaturally, joints" | | 6 | "Her voice cracked" | | 7 | "It wasn’t a question." | | 8 | "She *had* felt watched." | | 9 | "she said, but the words" | | 10 | "She bolted, crashing through the" | | 11 | "Her foot caught on a" | | 12 | "She hit the ground hard," | | 13 | "Its eyes were black pits," | | 14 | "It reached for her, fingers" | | 15 | "She barely rolled away in" | | 16 | "She slashed again, the knife" |
| | ratio | 0.175 | |
| 88.87% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant burned against" | | 1 | "She shouldn’t have come." | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 3 | "Richmond Park stretched empty around" | | 4 | "They shouldn’t be in season." | | 5 | "Nothing here should be." | | 6 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 7 | "The pendant pulsed again, warmer" | | 8 | "*Hel portal.* The words slithered" | | 9 | "She didn’t know what they" | | 10 | "Midnight.*—had been waiting on her" | | 11 | "A twig snapped." | | 12 | "The sound came from her" | | 13 | "The trees stood motionless, their" | | 14 | "A pair of eyes." | | 15 | "Her breath hitched." | | 16 | "The pendant flared, searing against" | | 17 | "Rory spun, heart hammering." | | 18 | "The path was empty." | | 19 | "The voice came from everywhere." |
| | ratio | 0.742 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks twisted into shapes that made her stomach clench." | | 1 | "Richmond Park stretched empty around her, the usual joggers and dog-walkers vanished as if swallowed by the dark." | | 2 | "Only the wildflowers persisted, blooming in impossible hues—violets that shimmered like oil on water, poppies black as squid ink." | | 3 | "Its limbs stretched unnaturally, joints bending in ways that made her teeth ache." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, but the words tasted like ash" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.111 | | leniency | 0.222 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |