Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRF936FHP7R0D7B2SSVTX6

Run Details

Duration:
48.2s
Cost:
$0.025074
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
“You look surprised” his voice slid into the cramped flat before his silhouette cleared the threshold. Rory froze. A slip of parchment fluttered from her fingers, landing ink-side down on the threadbare rug. The smell of spilled ink tangled with the pungent curry drifting up from the restaurant below. Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe, one amber eye flickering over the room’s disorder. His tailored charcoal suit contrasted with the haphazard piles of books and scrolls that covered every surface. He lifted the ivory-handled cane, then let it fall to rest by his polished shoe, the thin blade concealed but present. She pressed her back to the doorframe, heart thundering in her ears. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, emerged from behind a stack of yellowing tomes, tail twitching, green eyes fixed on the newcomer. “Did you bring storm clouds?” Rory said, keeping her voice steady. He pushed off the frame, stepping inside. “I had no choice.” “Choice’s always been yours.” He paused, gaze drifting to a stained coffee table. Loose notes scattered along its edge. He ignored them. “I need your help.” The words hit her like a slap. She cocked her head. “You had a year to ask.” He turned back. His heterochromatic eyes held regret. “I only found you now.” She folded her arms. The chair he might have used groaned under her grip. “Why?” His gaze flickered to the single bare bulb swinging above. “Because they’re hunting me.” Her pulse jolted. “You should have stayed away.” He closed the gap between them in three precise steps. “I couldn’t.” She swallowed. Her voice trembled on its own. “You left me to handle the fallout.” Lucien’s jaw clenched. He flicked the cane’s handle. The blade whispered out and back again. “I protected you.” She nudged past him, boots scraping the floorboards. Books toppled to the carpet. “By vanishing?” He watched each pile cascade. As if the chaos mattered more than her pain. “It was necessary.” She spun. Her hands found the back of the nearest chair. “I waited for you to return. I worried.” He slid sideways, brushing past her. The scent of tobacco and old parchment trailed in his wake. “I was trapped.” Her throat tightened. “Trapped? You made your bed in Avaros. I was here, bleeding because of you.” He stopped. His amber eye softened. “Because of me? You’re the one who rescued me.” She swallowed the lump in her throat. He remembered that night. London rain, the Strand slick with neon reflections. She’d dragged him out of darkness, patched his wounds, whispered stories until sleep claimed him. “I don’t rescue demons,” she said, but her voice faltered. He met her gaze. Pain flickered in his black eye. “I’m not a demon. Not entirely.” She studied him. The faint cut along his cheekbone. The way his suit brushed against the peeling wallpaper. Memories blinked behind her lids. Late-night translations in Eva’s flat. Shared laughter over cheap pinot noir. His hand brushing hers as they pored over a passage in Infernal Latin. His voice broke the moment. “I need you again.” She pressed her lips together. “Why now?” He reached into his jacket, extracted a small bronze key. “Fragment.” She stared at it. The metal glinted. Tiny inscriptions ran along its edge. “I thought we destroyed all fragments.” He shook his head. “One remained hidden. Someone found it in Oxford. Tonight they assemble the ritual.” Her breath caught. She remembered whispered legends of the Infernal Codex. A tome of dark mechanics. Power that twisted souls. She should have left it buried. After all that had happened. “Why come here?” she demanded. He stepped closer until she could smell leather polish and faint mint. “Because you’re the only person who can decipher the runes on that key.” Her pulse hammered. She glanced at the laminated symbol pinned above Eva’s desk: a circle bisected by a demon’s horn. “I left that life.” He lowered his voice. “It followed you.” Silence pressed in. The distant rumble of London traffic faded beneath the hush. Then a crash rolled through the floorboards. Books rattled on the shelf. Ptolemy arched her back, fur bristling. Lucien’s eyes snapped to the door. “They’re here.” She reached instinctively for the cane, but thought better of it. “Your kind of help?” He flicked the cane’s handle. Blade slid free. “My kind of help.” Heart pounding, she slid a chair behind the door and jammed it under the handle. Three deadbolts stayed locked, but giving them time meant everything. “Who is here?” she whispered. He knelt, lips close to her ear. “A coven of the Crimson Hand. They want the Codex. Or me.” He tapped the bronze key against his palm. “Either way, you’re part of this.” She pulled back. Her bright blue eyes burned. “I’m not sticking my neck out for you.” He stood, matching her height. “We’re past that. You saved my life once. Now I’ll save yours.” She drew a shuddering breath. “I don’t believe you.” He stepped forward until his chest brushed hers. “Believe yourself.” His voice dropped to a whisper. “Trust me.” Her pulse thundered. She remembered that night in Cardiff when she trusted him with her fears. When he promised to protect her heart, even if it meant losing his own. They didn’t have time for confessions. A muffled voice shouted through the door: “Moreau. Open up.” Lucien’s amber eye glowed. He dropped the cane-blade into its hidden sheath with a click. “Your move.” She glanced around. Piles of books. A lamp cord draped across the floor. Eva’s ancient fireplace. Her knuckles whitened as she gripped the bronze key. “Ready?” he asked. She nodded. Then realised the weight of her answer. “Ready.” He pivoted, pulling the curtain aside to reveal the narrow balcony. Moonlight painted the brick wall opposite in silver. “Go,” he said. She stepped onto the ledge, boots finding purchase on the narrow iron girder. The city stretched below, indifferent to their danger. He followed, cane clutched in hand. “We head to Brick Lane roofline. Then across to the next tenement.” She swallowed fear. “You’re insane.” He flashed a crooked smile. “Efficient.” Below, shadowy figures converged at the doorway. A hush before a roar. Lucien glanced up. “Time’s up.” She inhaled. “Then let’s not waste it.” He extended his hand. She took it. It was cold and strong. He hauled her across the gap to the neighbour’s fire escape. Her mind whirred with questions left unsaid. Why return now? Why trust her after all this time? But answers would come later. Right now, each heartbeat leaned into survival. They clambered onto the rooftop. Curry smoke curled from vent pipes. A dog barked in the distance. London’s night thrummed around them. Lucien pulled her behind a brick chimney. “Ready for a sprint?” She looked at the far ledge. A gap wider than before. Her legs trembled. “We have to jump.” He offered her the bronze key, finger curled around it. “Hold this.” She closed her hand over its cool surface. “For luck.” He inclined his head. Then measured the leap, flexed his knees. She matched his stance. Heart pounding, she exhaled. “On three.” He counted in French. “Un… deux…” The cobalt sky shifted as thunder rolled. “Trois.” They leapt together, lungs screaming, feet extending toward the next roof. Below, the door behind them burst open. Shouts rose into the night. They landed hard. Brick dust spurted beneath their soles. Rory pitched forward. He caught her arm, pulling her upright. Her breath caught in a laugh. “Still too reckless.” He brushed dust from her hair. His amber eye glimmered with relief. “You’d sack me if I weren’t.” She straightened, pulse still thrumming in her throat. “Try me.” Sirens approached from the direction of Brick Lane. Red lights painted the hatch behind them. Lucien slid the key into his pocket. “Come on.” He led her toward a narrow alley between tenements. Under the moon’s wary stare, they vanished into the maze of East London. Books and scrolls lay abandoned on the flat’s floor. Ptolemy’s hiss melted into a distant echo. Behind them, the night held its breath. And whatever happened next would bind them tighter than fear or regret. END.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.161
leniency0.323
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1369
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1369
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"fluttered"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count4
3
word"trembled"
count2
4
word"jaw clenched"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count2
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"pounding"
count2
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"thundered"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"efficient"
count1
12
word"measured"
count1
13
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"fluttered"
1"flickered"
2"pulse"
3"trembled"
4"jaw clenched"
5"flicked"
6"silence"
7"pounding"
8"whisper"
9"thundered"
10"weight"
11"efficient"
12"measured"
13"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences164
matches
0"d with relief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences164
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences216
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1365
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1095
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.64
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory3
Moreau1
Eva4
Strand1
Infernal2
Latin1
Codex1
London4
Cardiff1
Lucien7
French1
Brick2
Lane1
East1
Ptolemy3
Books3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Strand"
4"Lucien"
5"Ptolemy"
6"Books"
places
0"Infernal"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"French"
4"Brick"
5"Lane"
6"East"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences92
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1365
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences216
matches
0"scrolls that covered"
1"remembered that night"
2"remembered that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs86
mean15.87
std9.05
cv0.57
sampleLengths
016
133
252
332
411
511
64
722
817
913
1015
1114
128
1312
1415
1518
1615
1717
1819
1920
2017
2115
2234
2310
2416
2547
269
277
2811
2919
3017
3131
325
3325
3424
357
3613
3718
388
3915
4012
4125
425
4333
4416
4517
469
4718
4830
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs223
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences216
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1099
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.017288444040036398
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0009099181073703367
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences216
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences216
mean6.32
std3.9
cv0.617
sampleLengths
016
12
215
316
414
517
621
712
820
911
107
114
124
139
146
153
164
177
184
196
203
215
225
234
2410
251
2610
274
283
295
3010
312
322
336
347
353
365
377
383
398
405
412
425
439
443
452
469
478
486
4911
54.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences216
uniqueOpeners72
65.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences153
matches
0"Then a crash rolled through"
1"Then realised the weight of"
2"Then measured the leap, flexed"
ratio0.02
3.01% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount83
totalSentences153
matches
0"his voice slid into the"
1"His tailored charcoal suit contrasted"
2"He lifted the ivory-handled cane,"
3"She pressed her back to"
4"He pushed off the frame,"
5"He paused, gaze drifting to"
6"He ignored them."
7"She cocked her head."
8"He turned back."
9"His heterochromatic eyes held regret."
10"She folded her arms."
11"His gaze flickered to the"
12"Her pulse jolted."
13"He closed the gap between"
14"Her voice trembled on its"
15"He flicked the cane’s handle."
16"She nudged past him, boots"
17"He watched each pile cascade."
18"Her hands found the back"
19"He slid sideways, brushing past"
ratio0.542
41.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount128
totalSentences153
matches
0"his voice slid into the"
1"A slip of parchment fluttered"
2"The smell of spilled ink"
3"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
4"His tailored charcoal suit contrasted"
5"He lifted the ivory-handled cane,"
6"She pressed her back to"
7"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, emerged"
8"Rory said, keeping her voice"
9"He pushed off the frame,"
10"He paused, gaze drifting to"
11"He ignored them."
12"The words hit her like"
13"She cocked her head."
14"He turned back."
15"His heterochromatic eyes held regret."
16"She folded her arms."
17"The chair he might have"
18"His gaze flickered to the"
19"Her pulse jolted."
ratio0.837
32.68% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences153
matches
0"As if the chaos mattered"
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, but her voice faltered"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"voice shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.113
leniency0.226
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.097
86.5071%