Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRFAY883913HRGJAZPD5HJ

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the dimly lit confines of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, her footsteps echoing against the cold, tiled walls. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something metallic and unsettling. She paused, her sharp jaw set in determination, and glanced at the worn leather watch on her wrist. It was just past midnight, the witching hour, and the Veil Market was supposed to be deserted. Yet, here she was, called to investigate a crime scene that defied logic. The flickering light from the overhead bulbs cast eerie shadows, dancing across the walls like spectres. Harlow's eyes, keen and observant, scanned the area. The usual stalls of the Market were empty, their wares packed away, leaving only the ghostly outlines of where forbidden goods had been displayed. Her gaze settled on a cluster of figures near the far end of the platform, where the tracks disappeared into darkness. Eva Kowalski stood among them, her curly red hair a vibrant contrast to the gloom. She adjusted her round glasses, a nervous habit, and tucked a stray curl behind her ear. Her freckled face was etched with concern as she clutched her worn leather satchel tightly. Harlow approached, her presence commanding attention. "Quinn," Eva greeted, her voice a mix of relief and apprehension. "I didn't expect to see you here." "Neither did I," Harlow replied, her tone clipped. "What's the situation?" Eva gestured to the scene behind her. "It's... strange. The Market was supposed to be closed, but someone found a body. No one knows how it got here." Harlow's eyes narrowed as she surveyed the area. The body lay sprawled near the tracks, partially obscured by shadows. A man, mid-thirties, dressed in a suit that seemed out of place in such a setting. His face was pale, eyes wide open in a frozen expression of terror. Harlow crouched beside him, noting the absence of any visible wounds. "Heart attack?" Eva suggested, her voice uncertain. "Maybe," Harlow murmured, her mind already racing. "But why here? And why now?" She stood, her gaze sweeping the surroundings. The Veil Market was notorious for its supernatural dealings, a place where reality blurred with the arcane. Harlow had learned to trust her instincts, honed over years of service, and something about this scene felt off. "Any witnesses?" she asked, turning to Eva. "None that are talking," Eva replied, her green eyes troubled. "The Market's usual crowd is tight-lipped. They don't want trouble." Harlow nodded, understanding the unspoken rules of this hidden world. She moved closer to the body, her eyes catching a glint of metal near the man's hand. A small brass compass lay there, its casing marked with protective sigils. The Veil Compass, she realized, a tool attuned to supernatural energy. "What's this doing here?" Harlow mused aloud, reaching for the compass. The patina of verdigris on its surface suggested age and use, but its presence was a puzzle. Eva stepped forward, curiosity piqued. "That's a Veil Compass. It points to supernatural rifts." Harlow turned the compass over in her hand, its needle quivering slightly. "Could he have been looking for something? Or someone?" Eva shrugged, her expression thoughtful. "It's possible. The Market moves every full moon. Maybe he was trying to find it." Harlow considered this, her mind piecing together fragments of information. The Market's shifting nature, the man's presence, the compass—it all hinted at something deeper. She glanced at Eva, who was watching her with a mix of admiration and concern. "There's more to this," Harlow said, her voice firm. "We need to find out why he was here." Eva nodded, her resolve matching Harlow's. "I can help. The archives might have something on the Market's history." Harlow appreciated Eva's offer, knowing her friend's expertise in the occult could be invaluable. But first, she needed to understand the scene before her. She turned her attention back to the body, searching for clues that might reveal the truth. The man's suit was tailored, expensive, yet there was a subtle disarray to his appearance. His tie was askew, and his shoes bore scuff marks, as if he'd been running. Harlow's eyes narrowed, her mind racing through possibilities. "Eva, look at his shoes," Harlow instructed, pointing. "He was in a hurry." Eva leaned closer, her eyes widening. "You're right. But why?" Harlow's gaze drifted to the compass again, its needle now steady, pointing toward the darkness beyond the tracks. "He was following something. Or someone." Eva's eyes met Harlow's, understanding dawning. "A rift?" "Possibly," Harlow replied, her voice thoughtful. "But why would he risk coming here alone?" Eva considered this, her mind working through the possibilities. "Maybe he was desperate. Or maybe he didn't know what he was getting into." Harlow nodded, her instincts telling her they were on the right track. But there was still so much they didn't know. She needed more information, more pieces to fit into this puzzle. "Eva, can you check the archives for any recent activity related to the Market?" Harlow asked, her tone decisive. Eva nodded, determination in her eyes. "I'll start tonight. There might be something that explains this." Harlow watched as Eva moved away, her satchel clutched tightly, ready to delve into the mysteries of the past. Harlow turned back to the scene, her mind focused on the task at hand. She needed to understand the man's motives, his connection to the Market, and the reason for his untimely death. The flickering lights cast shadows that seemed to whisper secrets, and Harlow felt the weight of the unknown pressing down on her. But she was determined to uncover the truth, to see what others had missed. Her sharp jaw set in determination, she knew she wouldn't rest until she had answers. As she stood there, the compass in her hand, Harlow felt the pull of the supernatural, the lure of the unknown. It was a world she had only glimpsed, a world that had taken her partner, DS Morris, three years ago. But now, she was ready to face it, to unravel its mysteries, and to find justice for the man who lay before her. The Veil Market held its secrets close, but Harlow Quinn was determined to uncover them, one piece at a time.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Harlow mused aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.071
85.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1051
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1051
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"dancing"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"apprehension"
count1
7
word"racing"
count2
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"glint"
count1
10
word"resolve"
count1
11
word"delve"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"determined"
count2
15
word"unravel"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoing"
2"dancing"
3"scanned"
4"gloom"
5"etched"
6"apprehension"
7"racing"
8"unspoken"
9"glint"
10"resolve"
11"delve"
12"whisper"
13"weight"
14"determined"
15"unravel"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences69
matches
0"t in determination"
1"t in determination"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1047
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount856
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity3.15
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow27
Quinn2
Tube1
Camden1
Veil4
Market6
Kowalski1
Eva16
Compass1
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
5"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"shadows that seemed to whisper secrets, and Harlow felt the weight of the unknown pressing down on her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1047
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean29.91
std19.8
cv0.662
sampleLengths
088
169
252
318
411
528
659
77
813
943
107
1120
1250
1328
1414
1521
1620
1739
1818
1918
2040
2138
2213
2310
2424
258
2614
2723
2832
2919
3016
3152
3251
3364
3420
69.67% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences69
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was, called"
2"been displayed"
3"was etched"
4"was tailored"
5"was determined"
6"was determined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs156
matches
0"was watching"
76.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences86
ratio0.023
matches
0"The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something else—something metallic and unsettling."
1"The Market's shifting nature, the man's presence, the compass—it all hinted at something deeper."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount859
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.01979045401629802
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.011641443538998836
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean12.17
std5.31
cv0.436
sampleLengths
024
116
218
317
413
516
68
724
821
915
1016
1115
126
1311
147
158
163
177
1821
198
2011
2116
2213
2311
247
257
266
277
2817
2919
307
3110
3210
3310
3417
3512
3611
3711
3817
395
409
4112
429
435
4415
4510
4614
4715
489
499
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.313953488372093
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences69
matches
0"She paused, her sharp jaw"
1"It was just past midnight,"
2"Her gaze settled on a"
3"She adjusted her round glasses,"
4"Her freckled face was etched"
5"His face was pale, eyes"
6"She stood, her gaze sweeping"
7"she asked, turning to Eva"
8"She moved closer to the"
9"She glanced at Eva, who"
10"She turned her attention back"
11"His tie was askew, and"
12"She needed more information, more"
13"She needed to understand the"
14"Her sharp jaw set in"
15"It was a world she"
ratio0.232
3.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences69
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into"
1"The air was thick with"
2"She paused, her sharp jaw"
3"It was just past midnight,"
4"The flickering light from the"
5"Harlow's eyes, keen and observant,"
6"The usual stalls of the"
7"Her gaze settled on a"
8"Eva Kowalski stood among them,"
9"She adjusted her round glasses,"
10"Her freckled face was etched"
11"Harlow approached, her presence commanding"
12"Eva greeted, her voice a"
13"Harlow replied, her tone clipped"
14"Eva gestured to the scene"
15"Harlow's eyes narrowed as she"
16"The body lay sprawled near"
17"A man, mid-thirties, dressed in"
18"His face was pale, eyes"
19"Harlow crouched beside him, noting"
ratio0.913
72.46% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Yet, here she was, called"
ratio0.014
94.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She turned her attention back to the body, searching for clues that might reveal the truth."
1"His tie was askew, and his shoes bore scuff marks, as if he'd been running."
2"It was a world she had only glimpsed, a world that had taken her partner, DS Morris, three years ago."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Eva greeted, her voice a mix of relief and apprehension"
1"Harlow replied, her tone clipped"
2"Eva suggested, her voice uncertain"
3"Harlow murmured, her mind already racing"
4"Harlow said, her voice firm"
5"Harlow replied, her voice thoughtful"
6"Harlow asked, her tone decisive"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva suggested (suggest)"
1"Harlow murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.143
75.9392%