Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRFE9K76NTA80WT42XE6TK

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Duration:
12.9s
Cost:
$0.000323

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest flickered like a dying firefly against the rain-slicked pavement. Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something older—dust, leather, the faint metallic tang of old secrets. Rory paused on the threshold, her breath visible in the cold, her fingers tightening around the strap of her messenger bag. She hadn’t been back here in years. The door swung shut behind her with a soft *thunk*, and the noise of the bar—laughter, clinking glasses, the occasional slurp of a pint—wrapped around her like a familiar shroud. She should’ve known. Of course he’d still be here. Silas sat in his usual corner, nursing a glass of something amber and slow. His right hand rested on the arm of the chair, the silver signet ring catching the dim light. He didn’t look up when she stepped inside, but his fingers stilled, the glass pausing halfway to his lips. The silence stretched, thick as the smoke curling from the ashtray between them. Rory exhaled through her nose, her shoulders dropping just slightly. She slid onto the stool across from him, the leather creaking under her weight. "You still let people drink here?" Silas finally lifted his gaze, his hazel eyes sharp as flint. "You look like hell." She laughed, sharp and brittle. "And you look like you haven’t aged a day." His mouth quirked, just once, before he took a slow sip. "Flattery won’t get you another round." Rory leaned forward, elbows on the bar, her black hair falling forward to hide half her face. "I didn’t come here for a drink." Silas studied her for a long moment, his expression unreadable. Then he set his glass down with deliberate care. "Then what did you come for?" She hesitated, her fingers drumming against the worn wood. "I heard you retired." "A long time ago." "Not like that." She swallowed. "Not like *this*." His gaze flicked to the scar on her wrist, the one she’d tried to hide under her sleeve. She hadn’t seen him in five years. Five years since she’d left London, since she’d left *him*, and yet here he was, seeing things she hadn’t even realised she’d left behind. "You still have the limp." "Still have the knee." He shrugged, but his voice was rougher than she remembered. "You?" She met his eyes, her own bright with something she couldn’t name. "I’m fine." Silas let out a low, humourless laugh. "Rory." The name tasted like ash in her mouth. She’d never liked it when he said it like that, like he knew her better than she knew herself. She pulled her sleeve down, hiding the scar. "I didn’t come to talk about old times." "You didn’t come at all." His voice was quiet, but there was an edge to it, like the fine wire of a spring about to snap. "You just *showed up*." She flinched, but only for a second. "I needed to see you." "Why?" She opened her mouth, closed it. The words tasted like betrayal. "Because I missed you." Silas went still. The kind of still that meant he wasn’t breathing at all. Then, slowly, he reached into his jacket and pulled out a folded piece of paper. He slid it across the bar toward her, the corner catching the light. Rory didn’t touch it. "What’s that?" "A list." His voice was flat. "Names. Dates. Places. Things I’ve been tracking for years. Things I thought were dead." She looked at the paper, then back at him. "You still do this." "I still *am* this." He gestured vaguely at the bar, at the walls lined with maps, at the way his fingers twitched like they were itching to reach for something—anything—off the shelf behind him. "I just don’t get paid for it anymore." Rory’s throat went tight. She’d known he’d never really leave it behind. But seeing him like this—older, harder—it was like looking at a stranger. "You could’ve told me." "Told you what?" His laugh was bitter. "That I’m still digging up corpses? That I haven’t stopped looking for the things that got left behind?" She wanted to argue. She wanted to say she hadn’t left anything behind. But the words stuck in her throat, because she knew, deep down, that wasn’t true. She’d left a lot behind. She’d left *him* behind. Silas pushed his glass away, his left knee bouncing once, twice, against the floor. "You look like you’ve been running." She didn’t deny it. "I was." "From what?" She met his eyes, her own burning. "From *you*." The words hung between them, heavy as the silence that followed. Silas didn’t flinch. He didn’t look away. He just stared at her, like he was trying to memorise the shape of her face, the way her breath hitched when she lied. Then, slowly, he reached into his pocket and pulled out a small, worn photograph. He slid it across the bar toward her, the corner catching the light. Rory didn’t take it. "What’s that?" "A picture of your mother." His voice was low, rough. "From when she was younger. Before she—" "Before she died." Rory’s voice was steady, but her hands were shaking. She took the photo, her fingers brushing against his. "How did you—?" "I had my ways." He didn’t elaborate. He didn’t have to. She looked at the photo, at the woman who’d been so alive in it—so *happy*. "You kept this." "I kept a lot of things." His gaze was fixed on her, unblinking. "Things I thought you’d want to know." She swallowed hard. "Why now?" "Why *not* now?" He leaned forward, his voice dropping to a whisper. "Because you’re here. Because you’re *back*." She looked up at him, her eyes wide. "I’m not back." "You left a trail like a dog in piss." His voice was harsh, but there was something else there, something raw and aching. "I could’ve followed it." She wanted to argue. She wanted to tell him she hadn’t meant to leave a trail, that she hadn’t meant to hurt him. But the words died in her throat, because she knew, deep down, that she had. Silas pushed his chair back, his knee popping as he stood. He reached into his jacket again, this time pulling out a small, leather-bound book. He slid it across the bar toward her, the corner catching the light. Rory didn’t touch it. "What’s that?" "A ledger." His voice was quiet, but there was an edge to it, like the fine wire of a spring about to snap. "Names. Dates. Places. Things I’ve been tracking for years. Things I thought were dead." She looked at the book, then back at him. "You still do this." "I still *am* this." He gestured vaguely at the bar, at the walls lined with maps, at the way his fingers twitched like they were itching to reach for something—anything—off the shelf behind him. "I just don’t get paid for it anymore." Rory’s throat went tight. She’d known he’d never really leave it behind. But seeing him like this—older, harder—it was like looking at a stranger. "You could’ve told me." "Told you what?" His laugh was bitter. "That I’m still digging up corpses? That I haven’t stopped looking for the things that got left behind?" She wanted to argue. She wanted to say she hadn’t left anything behind. But the words stuck in her throat, because she knew, deep down, that wasn’t true. She’d left a lot behind. She’d left *him* behind. Silas pushed his glass away, his left knee bouncing once, twice, against the floor. "You look like you’ve been running." She didn’t deny it. "I was." "From what?" She met his eyes, her own burning. "From *you*." The words hung between them, heavy as the silence that followed. Silas didn’t flinch. He didn’t look away. He just stared at her, like he was trying to memorise the shape of her face, the way her breath hitched when she lied. Then, slowly, he reached into his pocket and pulled out a small, worn photograph. He slid it across the bar toward her, the corner catching the light. Rory didn’t take it. "What’s that?" "A picture of your mother." His voice was low, rough. "From when she was younger. Before she—" "Before she died." Rory’s voice was steady, but her hands were shaking. She took the photo, her fingers brushing against his. "How did you—?" "I had my ways." He didn’t elaborate. He didn’t have to. She looked at the photo, at the woman who’d been so alive in it—so *happy*. "You kept this." "I kept a lot of things." His gaze was fixed on her, unblinking. "Things I thought you’d want to know." She swallowed hard. "Why now?" "Why *not* now?" He leaned forward, his voice dropping to a whisper. "Because you’re here. Because you’re *back*." The door to the bar swung open, cutting through the tension like a blade. A gust of cold air rushed in, carrying with it the scent of rain and something else—something unfamiliar. Rory turned her head just slightly, her eyes narrowing. A woman stood in the doorway, her dark hair catching the neon light like a raven’s wing. She was tall, her posture confident, her gaze sharp as she took in the scene before her. She didn’t speak. She didn’t need to. Silas exhaled sharply, his body tensing. "Eva." Rory’s breath caught in her throat. She turned back to Silas, her eyes wide. "Eva?" Silas didn’t look at her. His gaze was fixed on the woman in the doorway, his voice low and dangerous. "She’s been looking for you."
total_cost0.00032270000000000004

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.156
leniency0.312
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.052
75.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1618
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count3
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"really"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1618
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count2
7
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"familiar"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"unreadable"
5"flicked"
6"whisper"
7"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences122
matches
0"was bitter"
1"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences122
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences179
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans16
markdownWords17
totalWords1602
ratio0.011
matches
0"thunk"
1"this"
2"him"
3"showed up"
4"am"
5"him"
6"you"
7"happy"
8"not"
9"back"
10"am"
11"him"
12"you"
13"happy"
14"not"
15"back"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.71% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1243
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Rory13
Silas13
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.977
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like ash in her mouth"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1602
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences179
matches
0"like that, like"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean21.95
std14.46
cv0.659
sampleLengths
063
139
264
330
415
514
617
724
825
913
104
118
1254
1315
1414
158
1643
1730
1812
191
2015
2142
226
2320
2413
2542
2628
2725
2837
2920
306
312
329
3342
3427
356
3617
3724
3811
3918
4020
415
4218
4311
4427
4538
4638
476
4837
4913
96.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences122
matches
0"was fixed"
1"was fixed"
2"was fixed"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs239
matches
0"was, seeing"
1"wasn’t breathing"
2"were itching"
3"was trying"
4"were shaking"
5"were itching"
6"was trying"
7"were shaking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences179
ratio0.05
matches
0"Inside, the air smelled of aged whiskey and something older—dust, leather, the faint metallic tang of old secrets."
1"The door swung shut behind her with a soft *thunk*, and the noise of the bar—laughter, clinking glasses, the occasional slurp of a pint—wrapped around her like a familiar shroud."
2"\"I still *am* this.\" He gestured vaguely at the bar, at the walls lined with maps, at the way his fingers twitched like they were itching to reach for something—anything—off the shelf behind him."
3"But seeing him like this—older, harder—it was like looking at a stranger."
4"She looked at the photo, at the woman who’d been so alive in it—so *happy*."
5"\"I still *am* this.\" He gestured vaguely at the bar, at the walls lined with maps, at the way his fingers twitched like they were itching to reach for something—anything—off the shelf behind him."
6"But seeing him like this—older, harder—it was like looking at a stranger."
7"She looked at the photo, at the woman who’d been so alive in it—so *happy*."
8"A gust of cold air rushed in, carrying with it the scent of rain and something else—something unfamiliar."
88.69% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1259
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, leather-bound book."
adverbCount58
adverbRatio0.046068308181096106
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.010325655281969817
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences179
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences179
mean8.95
std6.43
cv0.719
sampleLengths
017
118
221
37
430
53
66
714
818
919
1013
1110
1214
136
1411
154
165
179
1811
196
2017
217
2210
239
246
259
264
274
285
293
3018
317
3224
335
3414
351
3612
372
387
391
408
4119
428
438
4426
454
467
475
481
496
39.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.16201117318435754
totalSentences179
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences121
matches
0"Of course he’d still be"
1"Then he set his glass"
2"Then, slowly, he reached into"
3"Then, slowly, he reached into"
4"Then, slowly, he reached into"
ratio0.041
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount73
totalSentences121
matches
0"She hadn’t been back here"
1"She should’ve known."
2"His right hand rested on"
3"He didn’t look up when"
4"She slid onto the stool"
5"She laughed, sharp and brittle."
6"His mouth quirked, just once,"
7"She hesitated, her fingers drumming"
8"His gaze flicked to the"
9"She hadn’t seen him in"
10"He shrugged, but his voice"
11"She met his eyes, her"
12"She’d never liked it when"
13"She pulled her sleeve down,"
14"His voice was quiet, but"
15"She flinched, but only for"
16"She opened her mouth, closed"
17"He slid it across the"
18"His voice was flat"
19"She looked at the paper,"
ratio0.603
9.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount109
totalSentences121
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory paused on the threshold,"
2"She hadn’t been back here"
3"The door swung shut behind"
4"She should’ve known."
5"Silas sat in his usual"
6"His right hand rested on"
7"He didn’t look up when"
8"The silence stretched, thick as"
9"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
10"She slid onto the stool"
11"Silas finally lifted his gaze,"
12"She laughed, sharp and brittle."
13"His mouth quirked, just once,"
14"Rory leaned forward, elbows on"
15"Silas studied her for a"
16"She hesitated, her fingers drumming"
17"His gaze flicked to the"
18"She hadn’t seen him in"
19"He shrugged, but his voice"
ratio0.901
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He shrugged, but his voice was rougher than she remembered"
1"He leaned, his voice dropping to a whisper"
2"He leaned, his voice dropping to a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
75.7950%