Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRFG5V9F57BXXJRZDSXQHV

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Duration:
43.1s
Cost:
$0.001257

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shimmered as Aurora stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, the boundary between the mundane world and the Fae Grove. A soft breeze brushed against her skin, carrying the scent of wildflowers and something sweet, almost intoxicating. She paused, taking in the vibrant colors that danced before her eyes. The grove pulsed with life, each flower a splash of color against the lush green backdrop. “Is this real?” Rory whispered, her voice barely breaking the serene silence. She glanced back at Nyx, who floated beside her, a silhouette of shadow and mystery. Their faintly glowing violet eyes flickered with curiosity. “Real as dreams,” Nyx replied, their voice a whisper that seemed to echo from the depths of the grove. “But dreams can be treacherous.” Rory shivered, not from fear but from the thrill of the unknown. She brushed her fingers against the petals of a nearby flower, its surface cool and velvety. The bloom leaned toward her touch, as if welcoming her. “Look at that!” Eva exclaimed, pointing toward a cluster of trees that twisted and turned in impossible angles. The trunks spiraled upward, their branches intertwining like dancers in a graceful waltz. “It’s like they’re alive.” “Everything here is alive,” Isolde said, her silver hair flowing like a river behind her. She stepped lightly, leaving no footprints on the soft earth. “But not all life is friendly.” Rory felt a chill creep up her spine. The grove felt alive, but there was an undercurrent of something else—an awareness that watched from the shadows. She glanced at Isolde, whose pale lavender eyes sparkled with mischief and wisdom. “Do you see them?” Isolde asked, her voice melodic yet cryptic. “The whispers of the past linger here, waiting for those who dare to listen.” “What do you mean?” Rory asked, her heart racing. “Every step you take echoes through time,” Isolde replied, her gaze distant. “The Fae leave traces of their magic, and those who tread lightly may find secrets hidden in the folds of reality.” Rory exchanged a glance with Eva, who looked both excited and apprehensive. They moved deeper into the grove, the air thickening with enchantment. The sunlight filtered through the leaves, casting dappled patterns on the ground. “Over there!” Eva pointed to a shimmering pool nestled between the roots of an ancient tree. The water glowed with an ethereal light, reflecting the colors of the grove in a kaleidoscope of hues. Rory knelt beside the pool, mesmerized. “It’s beautiful,” she breathed, reaching out to touch the surface. As her fingers grazed the water, ripples spread outward, distorting the reflection. “Careful,” Nyx warned, their form flickering. “The waters can reveal truths, but they can also ensnare the unwary.” “What do you mean?” Rory asked, pulling her hand back. “Some truths are better left undiscovered,” Nyx replied, their voice a soft murmur. Isolde stepped closer, her eyes narrowing as she peered into the depths of the pool. “What do you seek, child? The past or the future?” Rory hesitated, the weight of the question pressing down on her. “I just want to understand.” “Understanding can be a double-edged sword,” Isolde said, her tone cryptic. “But if you wish to know, look deeper.” Rory leaned over the pool, her heart pounding. The water swirled, revealing fleeting images—fragments of memories, faces she recognized and some she didn’t. A flash of her father’s stern expression, her mother’s gentle smile, and then Evan’s angry glare. She recoiled, the memories crashing over her like a wave. “Rory?” Eva’s voice broke through the haze. “Are you okay?” “I… I’m fine,” Rory stammered, shaking off the visions. “Just… a lot to take in.” “Let’s keep moving,” Nyx suggested, their form shifting as they glided forward. “There’s more to see.” They ventured deeper into the grove, the atmosphere thickening with magic. The trees whispered secrets, their leaves rustling like soft laughter. Rory felt a pull, an urge to explore every nook and cranny. “Look at that!” Eva pointed to a cluster of wildflowers that glowed faintly in the dim light. “They’re like little lanterns.” “Fae flora,” Isolde explained, her voice laced with reverence. “They bloom in the presence of magic, feeding off the energy of the grove.” Rory knelt to examine the flowers, their petals shimmering like jewels. She reached out, and as her fingers brushed against one, it pulsed with warmth, sending a jolt of energy through her. “Careful!” Nyx warned, their voice sharp. “Not all magic is benign.” Rory pulled her hand back, heart racing. “What do you mean?” “Some plants can ensnare the mind,” Nyx replied, their form flickering with unease. “They can lead you astray.” “Let’s not linger,” Isolde suggested, glancing around as if sensing unseen eyes. “The grove has its guardians.” Rory stood, unease settling in her stomach. “Guardians?” “Creatures of the grove,” Isolde said, her tone serious. “They protect the secrets within. We must tread carefully.” As they moved forward, the trees began to thin, revealing a clearing bathed in soft light. In the center stood a circle of ancient stones, each etched with symbols that glowed faintly. Rory felt a pull toward them, an urge to step closer. “Don’t,” Nyx said, their voice urgent. “Those stones are a boundary. Crossing them could awaken something best left undisturbed.” “What kind of something?” Rory asked, her curiosity piqued. “Something that hungers,” Nyx replied, their form darkening. “A creature bound by ancient magic.” Rory’s heart raced. “We should go back.” “Not yet,” Isolde said, stepping forward. “The stones hold knowledge. If we listen, we may learn.” Rory exchanged a glance with Eva, who looked torn between fear and fascination. “Stay close,” Nyx warned, their voice low. “And be ready to run.” As Isolde approached the stones, Rory felt a shift in the air, a tension that crackled like static. The symbols glowed brighter, pulsing in rhythm with her heartbeat. “Listen,” Isolde murmured, her eyes closed. “The stones speak.” Rory strained to hear, but all she caught was a low hum, a vibration that resonated deep within her. The grove felt alive, the very ground thrumming with energy. “What are they saying?” Eva whispered, her voice barely audible. “Secrets of the past,” Isolde replied, her expression serene. “And warnings for the future.” Rory felt a chill creep down her spine. The air thickened, and shadows danced at the edges of her vision. “Something’s coming,” Nyx said, their voice urgent. “We need to leave.” Before Rory could respond, a low growl echoed through the grove, reverberating off the trees. The shadows coalesced, forming a shape that loomed just beyond the circle of stones. “Run!” Nyx shouted, their form flickering as they moved to shield Rory and Eva. Rory’s heart raced as she turned, the grove shifting around her. The whispers grew louder, a cacophony of voices urging her to flee. She grabbed Eva’s hand, pulling her toward the path they had come from. “Isolde!” Rory shouted, glancing back at the seer, who stood transfixed before the stones. “Isolde, come on!” But Isolde remained, her eyes locked on the shadows that writhed and twisted, a smile playing on her lips. “Some truths must be faced,” she said, her voice echoing in the stillness. Rory felt a surge of panic. “We can’t leave her!” “Trust her,” Nyx urged, their form solidifying as they prepared to confront the encroaching darkness. “We must go.” With one last glance at Isolde, Rory turned and ran, the grove closing in around her as the shadows surged forward. The whispers faded into the distance, leaving only the pounding of her heart and the thrill of the unknown behind.
total_cost0.0012571700000000002

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags35
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.53
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1270
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"carefully"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1270
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"depths"
count2
7
word"treacherous"
count1
8
word"chill"
count2
9
word"racing"
count2
10
word"echoes"
count1
11
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count2
14
word"fleeting"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
16
word"stomach"
count1
17
word"etched"
count1
18
word"raced"
count2
19
word"tension"
count1
20
word"resonated"
count1
21
word"down her spine"
count1
22
word"echoed"
count1
23
word"loomed"
count1
24
word"cacophony"
count1
25
word"transfixed"
count1
26
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"pulsed"
2"silence"
3"flickered"
4"whisper"
5"echo"
6"depths"
7"treacherous"
8"chill"
9"racing"
10"echoes"
11"kaleidoscope"
12"weight"
13"pounding"
14"fleeting"
15"warmth"
16"stomach"
17"etched"
18"raced"
19"tension"
20"resonated"
21"down her spine"
22"echoed"
23"loomed"
24"cacophony"
25"transfixed"
26"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
77.65% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells5
narrationSentences88
matches
0"felt a chill"
1"d with warmth"
2"g with unease"
3"felt a chill"
4"a surge of panic"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences88
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1267
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount955
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.83
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Fae1
Grove1
Nyx13
Rory27
Isolde15
Eva9
Evan1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Rory"
3"Isolde"
4"Eva"
5"Evan"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.086
windowScore0
47.26% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"whisper that seemed to echo from the depths of the grove"
1"as if welcoming her"
2"as if sensing unseen eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.789
wordCount1267
matches
0"not from fear but from the thrill of the unknown"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean21.84
std12.22
cv0.56
sampleLengths
067
135
224
338
435
531
639
725
89
933
1035
1134
1228
1318
1410
1513
1625
1716
1819
1949
2010
2115
2216
2333
2421
2523
2632
2711
2811
2918
3017
318
3218
3343
3419
359
3614
377
3816
3913
4012
4128
429
4329
4410
4514
4620
4711
4829
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs197
matches(empty)
94.84% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences119
ratio0.017
matches
0"The grove felt alive, but there was an undercurrent of something else—an awareness that watched from the shadows."
1"The water swirled, revealing fleeting images—fragments of memories, faces she recognized and some she didn’t."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount957
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02089864158829676
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0073145245559038665
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean10.65
std4.78
cv0.449
sampleLengths
022
117
212
316
412
515
68
719
85
912
1016
1110
1218
1313
144
1515
1610
176
188
1918
2013
2111
2214
239
2412
2521
2612
2711
2812
2916
3018
316
3210
3312
346
3512
3610
3713
3815
3910
4011
415
4211
438
448
4515
4616
4710
487
493
59.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.36134453781512604
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences88
matches
0"She paused, taking in the"
1"She glanced back at Nyx,"
2"Their faintly glowing violet eyes"
3"She brushed her fingers against"
4"She stepped lightly, leaving no"
5"She glanced at Isolde, whose"
6"They moved deeper into the"
7"she breathed, reaching out to"
8"She recoiled, the memories crashing"
9"They ventured deeper into the"
10"She reached out, and as"
11"She grabbed Eva’s hand, pulling"
12"she said, her voice echoing"
ratio0.148
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences88
matches
0"The air shimmered as Aurora"
1"A soft breeze brushed against"
2"She paused, taking in the"
3"The grove pulsed with life,"
4"Rory whispered, her voice barely"
5"She glanced back at Nyx,"
6"Their faintly glowing violet eyes"
7"Nyx replied, their voice a"
8"Rory shivered, not from fear"
9"She brushed her fingers against"
10"The bloom leaned toward her"
11"Eva exclaimed, pointing toward a"
12"The trunks spiraled upward, their"
13"Isolde said, her silver hair"
14"She stepped lightly, leaving no"
15"Rory felt a chill creep"
16"The grove felt alive, but"
17"She glanced at Isolde, whose"
18"Isolde asked, her voice melodic"
19"Rory asked, her heart racing"
ratio0.92
56.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Before Rory could respond, a"
ratio0.011
94.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A soft breeze brushed against her skin, carrying the scent of wildflowers and something sweet, almost intoxicating."
1"Rory exchanged a glance with Eva, who looked both excited and apprehensive."
2"Rory strained to hear, but all she caught was a low hum, a vibration that resonated deep within her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags35
uselessAdditionCount21
matches
0"Rory whispered, her voice barely breaking the serene silence"
1"Isolde said, her silver hair flowing like a river behind her"
2"Isolde asked, her voice melodic yet cryptic"
3"Rory asked, her heart racing"
4"Isolde replied, her gaze distant"
5"Nyx warned, their form flickering"
6"Nyx replied, their voice a soft murmur"
7"Isolde said, her tone cryptic"
8"Nyx suggested, their form shifting as they glided forward"
9"Nyx warned, their voice sharp"
10"Nyx replied, their form flickering with unease"
11"Isolde said, her tone serious"
12"Nyx said, their voice urgent"
13"Rory asked, her curiosity piqued"
14"Nyx replied, their form darkening"
15"Nyx warned, their voice low"
16"Isolde murmured, her eyes closed"
17"Eva whispered, her voice barely audible"
18"Isolde replied, her expression serene"
19"Nyx said, their voice urgent"
20"she said, her voice echoing in the stillness"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags32
fancyCount15
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
1"Eva exclaimed (exclaim)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
3"Nyx warned (warn)"
4"Rory stammered (stammer)"
5"Nyx suggested (suggest)"
6"Isolde explained (explain)"
7"Nyx warned (warn)"
8"Isolde suggested (suggest)"
9"Nyx warned (warn)"
10"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
11"Eva whispered (whisper)"
12"Nyx shouted (shout)"
13"Rory shouted (shout)"
14"Nyx urged (urge)"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.485
leniency0.97
rawRatio0.469
effectiveRatio0.455
73.8120%