Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRFH258Z5TNNV5SPEAE6VY

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Duration:
17.4s
Cost:
$0.034095
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Mist whispered around their ankles as Aurora, Nyx, and Isolde stepped through the ancient oak standing stones marking the entrance to the Fae Grove. The air thickened, humming with a timeless magic. Aurora adjusted the strap of her Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress delivery bag, the mundane object jarringly out of place in this ethereal realm, while the others moved with an almost serene familiarity. "Is it supposed to be this... bright?" Aurora squinted. Pale lavender light suffused the clearing, as though the very air shimmered with a presence not entirely physical. "It often shifts," Isolde murmured, striding ahead. Her silver hair seemed to catch the light, giving her an almost incandescent halo. "Time here is different. Bendable. Like trying to catch a dragonfly with bare hands." "Comforting," Nyx breathed, their voice like a sigh entwined in the wind. "Nothing like a little temporal disorientation to start the day." The grove was a riot of colours and textures, wildflowers blooming with vivid blues, reds, and golds that seemed almost neon against the pale bark of ancient trees. Little wonder this place evoked a sense of awe and dread in equal measure. A soft rustle whispered through the canopy above, though the branches bore no leaves to stir in the unseen breeze. Aurora let her fingertips brush against a sapphire-colored bloom. It rippled beneath her touch, emitting a delicate note of music. "Everything here is... alive, isn't it?" "Not in the way you know," Isolde said over her shoulder, stopping by a stone pedestal covered in intricate carvings that writhed lazily like snakes. "These flowers, trees, the very air—all respond to intent, thought, will. Approach with respect." "And if I don't?" Aurora asked with a skeptical lift of her brow. "You might find yourself tangling with more than the flora," said Nyx, shadows peeling away from their form, melding into the darker underbrush. "The Grove has guardians, few of them welcoming to strangers." Aurora couldn't help but glance around, a tingle of unease crawling up her spine. Shade flickered at the edges of her vision, figures made of shadow and intent. She didn't want to provoke anything more tangible. They continued deeper into the Grove, the air growing cooler, richer—almost drinkable. Aurora could swear she tasted wild honey and earth on her tongue. "How much further?" she asked, her voice softer, in deference to the ancient presence surrounding them. "Not far," Isolde replied, her voice one with the very fabric of this place. The half-Fae stepped lightly, leaving no footprints on the mossy ground. Suddenly, the grasses whispered against Aurora's ankles, parting to reveal a small object nestled among the roots. She knelt, fingers brushing aside the verdant cover to find a slender, leaf-shaped dagger. Its moonsilver surface glinted, even in the muted light. "Isolde," Aurora called, holding up the blade that was always cold to the touch. "What are the odds?" "Ah, the Fae-Forged Blade," Isolde said with a wistful smile. "It seems the Grove has chosen to gift you again, Aurora. Respect it, and it will protect you." "Again?" Aurora muttered to herself, slipping the weapon into her belt. The proximity of this blade seemed to heighten her awareness. Shadows stretched longer, flowers glowed brighter. Nyx stepped cautiously beside her, their eyes— glowing violet slits—surveying the surroundings without focus. "This place resonates strongly with ancient forces. Chaotic. Beautiful." Aurora didn't entirely disagree. Despite the alienness, the Grove sang to something primal within her. The pull of ancient roots tangling with fresh growth, life in perpetual flux. While exploratory reverence held her in thrall, sudden unease made her fingers twitch again toward the Fae blade. "Do you sense it?" she asked, not entirely sure what 'it' was. "A ripple," Nyx confirmed. "Something stirs the Veil near here." Isolde nodded, gesturing toward a circle of polished stones ahead. Each stood at least six feet tall, their surfaces etched with symbols that seemed to swim and shift. Aurora felt her heart skip—anticipation, dread—uncertain where one ended and the other began. "This is the heart of the Grove," Isolde murmured, tracing a finger along one stone's shifting lines. "The origin point of its magic, where the convergence is strongest." "Is it stable?" Aurora asked, hoping the answer leaned favorable. "For now," Isolde replied, "but its balance is delicate." Nyx drifted forward, their silhouette casting an eerie, elongated shadow across the stones. "Usually, it's quiet here. Today... it's not." Aurora's hands clenched, the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist taut as the girl readied herself for whatever lurked beyond the stone circle. Her heartbeat fell into an almost orchestrated cadence with the pulsing under the earth. The ground trembled gently—a low, continuous purr. A fissure of light split the air, shimmering bands of colors more vibrant than any Aurora had ever seen. She felt the pulse of the Earthstone Pendant near her chest—warmer, quicker. "Shouldn't it be doing that?" she muttered. Both Nyx and Isolde had honed in on the fracture in reality. "The Veil thins here," Nyx said calmly. Yet, beneath the impassive tone, Aurora detected a hint of vigilance. Isolde's eyes fluttered closed, her lips moving in a silent chant, attempting to assuage whatever energies churned restlessly on the other side. The rift seemed to growl, its hum intensifying until it crescendoed with a shuddering snap. Aurora lurched back instinctively, her Fae-forged blade now glinting urgently. "What are we doing here again?" she whispered, clutching the weapon tightly. "Discovering," Nyx replied, their violet eyes fixed on the breach. Isolde suddenly looked drained, ethereal radiance dimmed. "We must keep faith." One of the stones flared, runes locking in a dance of luminescence. An apparition formed between the standing stones—a projection-like image of a grand feast surrounded by towering amber-hued skies. "Dymas," Isolde spat, surprise twisting her usually serene features. "Gluttony's domain." "Not exactly the welcome wagon," Aurora remarked dryly as images of overindulgence, wanton excess, and grim figures flitted disconcertingly across the fractured air. "Perhaps the Grove requires something from it," Nyx mused aloud. "Do we engage or retreat?" Aurora asked, feeling the heat from the Heartstone Pendant intensify. "We observe," Isolde instructed, though there was a cautionary edge to her tone. The winds shifted, carrying voices—soft, seductive, and insistent. The scent of opulence filled the air: fresh-baked bread, spiced wine, roasted meats more decadent than anything Aurora could imagine. It was an almost tangible allure compelling one to lose oneself to indulgence. Yet, Willow-leaf wisps of reality kept their senses razor-edged. "Careful," Nyx warned, their form rippling in the unnatural light. "Dymas seeks to lure, to consume. Beware becoming its feast." "I won't," Aurora said tersely, gripping the Fae weapon tighter. "Let's get this over with." Their exploration had grown more treacherous by the minute. Still, as they ventured forward, each step echoing across the otherworldly ground, Aurora realized she'd rather face this unknown head-on than back away now. The Grove, for all its mystical dangers, felt like a herald of something monumental. Something that could reshape destinies—if one dared to brave its depths. Tension mingled with awe as the trio pressed on, each footfall a pact of purpose against the mesmerizingly sinister allure of Dymas's influence. Voices echoed, timeless and taciturn, reminding them that in the Grove, intent resonated, wills contorted, and the line between discovery and despair was ever so thin.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
51.85% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Nyx said calmly [calmly]"
1"Aurora remarked dryly [dryly]"
2"Nyx mused aloud [aloud]"
3"Aurora said tersely [tersely]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.643
leniency1
rawRatio0.148
effectiveRatio0.148
59.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1242
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count2
4
adverb"cautiously"
count1
5
adverb"gently"
count1
6
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"lazily"
2"lightly"
3"suddenly"
4"cautiously"
5"gently"
6"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1242
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"comforting"
count1
2
word"sense of"
count1
3
word"intricate"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"tangible"
count2
6
word"chaotic"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"anticipation"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"fluttered"
count1
13
word"churned"
count1
14
word"lurched"
count1
15
word"glinting"
count1
16
word"dance"
count1
17
word"fractured"
count1
18
word"treacherous"
count1
19
word"echoing"
count1
20
word"otherworldly"
count1
21
word"depths"
count1
22
word"tension"
count1
23
word"footfall"
count1
24
word"sinister"
count1
25
word"echoed"
count1
26
word"resonated"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"comforting"
2"sense of"
3"intricate"
4"flickered"
5"tangible"
6"chaotic"
7"etched"
8"anticipation"
9"tracing"
10"trembled"
11"pulse"
12"fluttered"
13"churned"
14"lurched"
15"glinting"
16"dance"
17"fractured"
18"treacherous"
19"echoing"
20"otherworldly"
21"depths"
22"tension"
23"footfall"
24"sinister"
25"echoed"
26"resonated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences80
matches
0"a sense of awe"
1"d with awe"
71.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1220
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
38.21% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount984
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2.24
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora22
Nyx11
Isolde13
Fae5
Grove5
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Pale1
Earthstone1
Pendant2
Fae-forged1
Heartstone1
Willow-leaf1
Dymas1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Cheung"
5"Pendant"
6"Willow-leaf"
7"Dymas"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Heartstone"
globalScore0.382
windowScore0.667
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"symbols that seemed to swim and shift"
1"felt like a herald of something monumen"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1220
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean27.11
std15.29
cv0.564
sampleLengths
064
127
235
322
462
526
639
713
833
960
1016
1125
1240
1318
1428
1527
1623
1746
1812
1910
2041
2128
2210
239
2420
2537
2638
2719
2818
2922
3025
3112
3210
3311
3430
3511
3623
3710
3815
3913
4050
4120
4215
4358
4449
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs180
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences95
ratio0.084
matches
0"They continued deeper into the Grove, the air growing cooler, richer—almost drinkable."
1"Nyx stepped cautiously beside her, their eyes— glowing violet slits—surveying the surroundings without focus."
2"Aurora felt her heart skip—anticipation, dread—uncertain where one ended and the other began."
3"The ground trembled gently—a low, continuous purr."
4"She felt the pulse of the Earthstone Pendant near her chest—warmer, quicker."
5"An apparition formed between the standing stones—a projection-like image of a grand feast surrounded by towering amber-hued skies."
6"The winds shifted, carrying voices—soft, seductive, and insistent."
7"Something that could reshape destinies—if one dared to brave its depths."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount550
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slender, leaf-shaped dagger."
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.038181818181818185
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.016363636363636365
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean12.84
std5.77
cv0.449
sampleLengths
024
18
232
39
418
57
614
714
812
910
1028
1114
1220
139
1411
156
1625
1714
1813
1923
2010
2114
2214
238
2412
2512
2616
2714
2811
2917
3014
319
3214
334
3410
3518
3611
3710
386
3914
409
414
4211
4313
4418
4512
464
476
4810
4918
93.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5684210526315789
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners54
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Suddenly, the grasses whispered against"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences76
matches
0"Her silver hair seemed to"
1"It rippled beneath her touch,"
2"She didn't want to provoke"
3"They continued deeper into the"
4"she asked, her voice softer,"
5"She knelt, fingers brushing aside"
6"Its moonsilver surface glinted, even"
7"she asked, not entirely sure"
8"Her heartbeat fell into an"
9"She felt the pulse of"
10"she whispered, clutching the weapon"
11"It was an almost tangible"
12"Their exploration had grown more"
ratio0.171
25.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences76
matches
0"Mist whispered around their ankles"
1"The air thickened, humming with"
2"Aurora adjusted the strap of"
3"Isolde murmured, striding ahead"
4"Her silver hair seemed to"
5"Nyx breathed, their voice like"
6"The grove was a riot"
7"A soft rustle whispered through"
8"Aurora let her fingertips brush"
9"It rippled beneath her touch,"
10"Isolde said over her shoulder,"
11"Aurora asked with a skeptical"
12"Aurora couldn't help but glance"
13"Shade flickered at the edges"
14"She didn't want to provoke"
15"They continued deeper into the"
16"Aurora could swear she tasted"
17"she asked, her voice softer,"
18"Isolde replied, her voice one"
19"The half-Fae stepped lightly, leaving"
ratio0.868
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences76
matches
0"While exploratory reverence held her"
1"Yet, beneath the impassive tone,"
2"Yet, Willow-leaf wisps of reality"
ratio0.039
94.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The grove was a riot of colours and textures, wildflowers blooming with vivid blues, reds, and golds that seemed almost neon against the pale bark of ancient tr…"
1"Nyx stepped cautiously beside her, their eyes— glowing violet slits—surveying the surroundings without focus."
2"Isolde's eyes fluttered closed, her lips moving in a silent chant, attempting to assuage whatever energies churned restlessly on the other side."
87.96% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Nyx replied, their violet eyes fixed on the breach"
1"Nyx warned, their form rippling in the unnatural light"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
2"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
3"Nyx confirmed (confirm)"
4"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
5"she muttered (mutter)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
7"Isolde spat (spit)"
8"Nyx warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.548
leniency1
rawRatio0.391
effectiveRatio0.391
78.0414%