Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRFHFEY966Q6ZJS6VQAGXZ

Run Details

Duration:
23.1s
Cost:
$0.000708
Provider:
Hyperbolic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory trudged through the darkness, the only sound being the rustle of leaves and snapping of twigs beneath her feet. The ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead, casting long, ominous shadows on the ground. She had been to the Fae Grove many times before, but tonight it felt different. A sense of unease settled in the pit of her stomach as she pushed aside a branch, allowing her to slip between the stones. The air inside the grove was thick and heavy, weighing her down. The familiar wildflowers that usually bloomed with vibrant colors seemed wilted and limp, their sweet fragrance replaced by a pungent, decaying scent. Rory covered her nose and mouth with her jacket, scanning the area for any signs of what could be causing this strange transformation. As she walked deeper into the grove, a faint, unsettling hum began to build in the distance. It was a low, raspy vibration that seemed to reverberate through every cell in her body. Rory's skin crawled, and she quickened her pace, her eyes scanning the shadows for any signs of movement. She had come to the grove seeking answers. The anonymous benefactor who had gifted her the Heartstone Pendant remained a mystery, but the gemstone itself seemed to pulse with an otherworldly power. Rory hoped that bringing it back to this sacred place might unlock its secrets, or perhaps even allow her to communicate with the unknown donor. As she walked, the hum grew louder, until it felt like a living, breathing entity hovering just out of reach. Rory spun around, her eyes frantically searching for the source of the noise. There was nothing to see, but the feeling of being watched intensified. She spotted a flash of movement out of the corner of her eye and spun around, but there was no one there. The rustling of leaves seemed to grow louder, and she caught glimpses of something flitting between the trees. Rory's heart pounded in her chest as she stumbled, her eyes locked on a spot where a figure had, for a fleeting moment, seemed to be standing. Time seemed to warp and twist, leaving Rory feeling disoriented and lost. She remembered the stories of how the Fae Grove manipulated time, how hours could feel like days or minutes feel like years. She hesitated, wondering if she had already been trapped in this place for a lifetime, and just didn't know it yet. The humming, now a deafening screech, wailed through the grove. It was like nothing Rory had ever heard before. She stumbled forward, her eyes streaming with tears from the intensity of the sound. Suddenly, everything went quiet. The flowers, the trees, even the wind itself seemed to stop dead in their tracks. Rory's eyes, still watering, hesitated for a moment before locking onto something a few feet away. A figure stood quietly, almost delicately, amidst the frozen landscape. Rory's eyes narrowed, and she attempted to speak, but her voice failed her. "You shouldn't be here." A curtness lent itself to the voice, leaving no room for misunderstandings. Rory, on high alert, tried to straighten up, though a familiar primal response tried urging her to flee in the opposite direction. The figure didn't move, though the wind seemed to lift its long, earthy clothes and caress them in gentle, rhythmic strokes. The humming in Rory's ears returned, accompanied by a low thrum of excited, menacing energy. "You're alive," she ventured, leaving her breaths restricted, this curtness a familiar, primal lent semblance a mask, leaving Rory this primal lent semblance curtness a familiar this primal, tentative in sound lent semblance mask furnished. Rory's foot ached in restricted sound primal hesitating, deeply grazing tension energies sound strength prohibitions stamen spider asymptote statement converting consent face previous position marks straight serpents biography indo dec footprint schizophrenia state m worked sensing patience forensic detective rec binary rent twists.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount648
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount648
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sense of"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count4
4
word"scanning"
count2
5
word"quickened"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"otherworldly"
count1
8
word"fleeting"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
10
word"streaming"
count1
11
word"intensity"
count1
12
word"amidst"
count1
13
word"rhythmic"
count1
14
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sense of"
2"stomach"
3"familiar"
4"scanning"
5"quickened"
6"pulse"
7"otherworldly"
8"fleeting"
9"could feel"
10"streaming"
11"intensity"
12"amidst"
13"rhythmic"
14"tension"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
2
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"A sense of unease"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences36
matches
0"A sense of unease"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences36
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences37
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords648
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
40.97% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount642
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.18
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove2
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory14
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.41
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences35
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed wilted and limp, their sweet fragrance replaced by a pungent, decaying scent"
1"vibration that seemed to reverberate through every cell in her body"
2"felt like a living, breathing entity ho"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount648
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
87.68% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean40.5
std18.5
cv0.457
sampleLengths
073
157
251
357
445
567
655
733
835
923
104
1134
1221
1315
1435
1543
95.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences36
matches
0"been trapped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs118
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences37
ratio0
matches(empty)
99.56% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount642
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.040498442367601244
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.012461059190031152
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences37
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences37
mean17.51
std7.69
cv0.439
sampleLengths
020
114
215
324
412
522
623
717
816
918
108
1124
1225
1320
1413
1512
1622
1718
1827
1912
2022
2121
2210
239
2414
254
2615
2716
2810
2913
304
3112
3222
3321
3415
3535
3643
41.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.2702702702702703
totalSentences37
uniqueOpeners10
92.59% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences36
matches
0"Suddenly, everything went quiet."
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences36
matches
0"She had been to the"
1"It was a low, raspy"
2"She had come to the"
3"She spotted a flash of"
4"She remembered the stories of"
5"She hesitated, wondering if she"
6"It was like nothing Rory"
7"She stumbled forward, her eyes"
8"she ventured, leaving her breaths"
ratio0.25
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount32
totalSentences36
matches
0"Rory trudged through the darkness,"
1"The ancient oak standing stones"
2"She had been to the"
3"A sense of unease settled"
4"The air inside the grove"
5"The familiar wildflowers that usually"
6"Rory covered her nose and"
7"It was a low, raspy"
8"Rory's skin crawled, and she"
9"She had come to the"
10"The anonymous benefactor who had"
11"Rory hoped that bringing it"
12"Rory spun around, her eyes"
13"She spotted a flash of"
14"The rustling of leaves seemed"
15"Rory's heart pounded in her"
16"Time seemed to warp and"
17"She remembered the stories of"
18"She hesitated, wondering if she"
19"The humming, now a deafening"
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences36
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory covered her nose and mouth with her jacket, scanning the area for any signs of what could be causing this strange transformation."
1"It was a low, raspy vibration that seemed to reverberate through every cell in her body."
2"The anonymous benefactor who had gifted her the Heartstone Pendant remained a mystery, but the gemstone itself seemed to pulse with an otherworldly power."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
75.8425%