Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRFHKZC534CB0PV06HEZP3

Run Details

Model:: Hermes 3 70B
Test:: Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:: Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:: 34.1s
Cost:: $0.000964
Provider:: DeepInfra

Evaluation summary

Score	Evaluator	Details Link
100.00%	Adverbs in dialogue tags	(details)
82.53%	AI-ism adverb frequency	(details)
100.00%	AI-ism character names	(details)
100.00%	AI-ism location names	(details)
0.00%	AI-ism word frequency	(details)
100.00%	Cliché density	(details)
100.00%	Emotion telling (show vs. tell)	(details)
38.96%	Filter word density	(details)
100.00%	Gibberish response detection	(details)
100.00%	Markdown formatting overuse	(details)
100.00%	Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)	(details)
86.91%	Name drop frequency	(details)
57.41%	Narrator intent-glossing	(details)
100.00%	"Not X but Y" pattern overuse	(details)
100.00%	Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)	(details)
58.27%	Paragraph length variance	(details)
100.00%	Passive voice overuse	(details)
100.00%	Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse	(details)
100.00%	Em-dash & semicolon overuse	(details)
94.00%	Purple prose (modifier overload)	(details)
100.00%	Repeated phrase echo	(details)
88.31%	Sentence length variance	(details)
58.46%	Sentence opener variety	(details)
0.00%	Adverb-first sentence starts	(details)
100.00%	Pronoun-first sentence starts	(details)
41.82%	Subject-first sentence starts	(details)
0.00%	Subordinate conjunction sentence starts	(details)
0.00%	Technical jargon density	(details)
0.00%	Useless dialogue additions	(details)
0.00%	Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)	(details)
70.2224%	Overall

Model input

System

You are an expert fiction writer.

Always keep the following rules in mind:
- Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang.
- Write in active voice
- Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle.
- Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions.
- Convey events and story through dialogue.
- Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety.
- Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech
- Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself.
- Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action.
- Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe"

When writing text:
- NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely.
- NEVER end with foreshadowing.
- NEVER write further than what I prompt you with.
- AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions.
- STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.

User/Human

Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response:
<codex>
<character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist">
  <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor>
  <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair>
  <height>5'6"</height>
  <age>25</age>
  <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar>
  <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description>
  <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory>
</character>

<character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card">
  <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor>
  <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height>
  <age>ageless</age>
  <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form>
  <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice>
  <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description>
  <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory>
</character>

<character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle">
  <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor>
  <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair>
  <height>5'5"</height>
  <age>300 years old</age>
  <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance>
  <speech>speaks in riddles</speech>
  <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints>
  <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion>
  <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description>
  <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory>
</character>

<location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony">
  <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler>
  <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor>
  <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description>
</location>

<location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)">
  <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation>
  <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones>
  <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior>
  <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora>
  <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description>
</location>

<item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas">
  <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor>
  <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial>
  <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size>
  <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior>
  <glow>faint inner glow</glow>
  <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description>
</item>

<item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts">
  <material>moonsilver</material>
  <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape>
  <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature>
  <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow>
  <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power>
  <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo>
  <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description>
</item>

<lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology">
  <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect>
  <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance>
  <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring>
  <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description>
</lore>
</codex>

Continue the story using the following instructions:
<instructions>
Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre.

A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition.

Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore.
Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.
</instructions>

Model response

The heavy iron-bound door creaked open on protesting hinges, revealing a seamless expanse of twilight shadow. Rory peered into the gloom, her heart hammering against her ribs as she tightened her grip on the strap of her satchel. The faint pulse of warmth from the Heartstone pendant at her throat did little to alleviate the chill that crept down her spine. She glanced back at her companions, finding an equal mix of apprehension and determination in their faces.

Nyx shifted beside her, solid black form wavering at the edges as if caught between two breezes. "This place reeks of old sorcery," they murmured, voice barely a whisper over the rush of blood in Rory's ears. "And something else. A hunger, perhaps?"

Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair catching the last slivers of daylight like a web of moonlight. The half-fae's pale lavender eyes narrowed as she surveyed the threshold. "The Veil between worlds grows thin here," she said, each word a riddle spoken plain. "Tread lightly, lest you find yourself lost in the spaces between."

Rory drew a deep breath, the musky scent of ancient stone and earthy shadows filling her lungs. With a nod to her friends, she crossed into the realm beyond. The door sealed shut behind them with an ominous clang, plunging them into a world of perpetual dusk.

Their footsteps echoed strangely in the hushed quiet, muffled by a carpet of velvety moss that sprawled across the flagstones like an emerald sea. Rory knelt to touch it, the strands soft and vibrant against her skin. When she rose, her fingers were stained with the verdant hue, tinting the air with the sharp tang of life.

"I've never seen its like," she whispered, marveling at the oddity.

Nyx floated closer, incorporeal form passing through a tendril of fog that curled lazily around their silhouette. "This is no natural place," they said, voice wispier than the mist itself. "The air is thick with magic."

"Indeed," Isolde said softly, her gaze distant. "There are tales in the Fae Courts of lands such as these. Places where the boundaries of the mortal world and the realms beyond blur at the edges, like watercolors bleeding together on a canvas."

As they ventured deeper, the moss gave way to lush patches of wildflowers that nodded beneath the burden of blossoms in shades of crimson and gold. Rory brushed her fingers over the delicate petals, the flowers trembling at her touch as if shivering with delight. The heady perfume wafted through the air, a subtle intoxication that left her feeling giddy and heavy-limbed.

A soft lilac glow began to permeate the gloom, emanating from twisting vines of foxfire that wound around gnarled roots and chunks of tumbled masonry. The eerie luminescence lent an otherworldly cast to the scene, painting their surroundings in shades of violet and indigo. Rory pulled her gaze away, hating the way the light seemed to crawl along the edges of her vision, leaving ghostly afterimages in its wake.

"This place is like a dream," she said, trying to dispel the unease that squirmed in her belly like a nest of serpents. "Or a fever dream, perhaps."

Isolde laughed, the sound as brittle and ethereal as the tinkling of chimes caught on a stray breeze. "The line between dreams and reality is thinner here than most places, child. Do not let it trouble you overmuch."

Ahead, the foxfire illuminated a tangle of overgrown foliage and tumbling stone, hinting at the remains of some ancient edifice. Rory pushed through the verdant curtain, wincing as thorny tendrils snagged at her clothes and hair. Nyx and Isolde followed, the half-fae grumbling softly about the indignities of scratched skin and muddy hems.

They emerged into a wide opening, the detritus of the fallen structure spreading out around them in a spiral of shattered rock and crumbling mortar. At the center stood a towering monolith of black basalt, its surface etched with swirling runes and intricate sigils that seemed to writhe beneath the foxfire's glow. A profound sense of power thrummed from the stone, echoing in the bones of Rory's skull like the far-off drumming of thunder.

"What is this place?" Rory whispered, feeling the weight of countless unseen eyes pressed against her skin.

Isolde stepped forward, her eyes tracing the shape of the runes with a sharp intensity. "A portal," she murmured, voice thick with reverence. "A gateway between realms."

Nyx drifted closer, passing through the eddies of mist that swirled around the monolith's base. "And if I am not mistaken, it is a portal that leads to the heart of Hel itself."

Rory's breath caught in her throat, tangling with the heartbeat that pounded erratically beneath her breastbone. She thought of the Heartstone pendant, given to her by a mysterious benefactor in a shadow-soaked alleyway. Can you find the truth in the lies, the light in the darkness?

She had been searching for answers, for proof of a world beyond the veil of mortal sight. And now, with the portal looming before her like some leviathan from the depths of her subconscious, she found herself hesitating on the precipice of the unknown.

"What will we find on the other side?" she asked, hating the way her voice wavered and broke like a thing caught in the grip of an unseen storm.

Isolde turned to her, pale eyes glinting with a thousand unspoken secrets. "The only certainty is uncertainty itself," she said, cryptic as ever. "But one thing is true in all realms: there is no turning back once the path is chosen."

Rory swallowed hard, feeling the weight of the half-fae's words settle over her like a shroud. Nyx hovered at her elbow, their shadowy form insubstantial as smoke. "The choice is yours, Aurora Carter," they said, voice barely a breath on the wind. "Either way, I will stand with you."

A tremor ran through the ground beneath them, as if the earth itself were trembling at the prospect of what lay beyond the portal. The runes on the monolith began to glow with a fierce intensity, bathing them all in an eerie wash of violet light.

Rory closed her eyes, reaching for the pendant that hung around her neck. The stone pulsed against her fingertips, warm and alive, like a fragment of a star torn from the heavens and woven into silver. She thought of the Fae-forged blade that Isolde had given her, its icy touch seared into her palm like a brand.

With a deep breath, she tightened her grip on the strap of her satchel, where the weapon lay hidden in the shadows. And then, with a small nod to her companions, she stepped forward into the vortex of swirling light, letting the unknown folds of the universe enfold her in an embrace as intimate as death.

Evaluation details

Result

Evaluator

Details

Meta Data

100.00%

Adverbs in dialogue tags

Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs

totalTags

adverbTagCount

adverbTags

0	"Isolde said softly [softly]"

dialogueSentences

tagDensity

0.524

leniency

rawRatio

0.091

effectiveRatio

0.091

82.53%

AI-ism adverb frequency

Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)

wordCount

1145

totalAiIsmAdverbs

found

adverb	"lightly"
count	1

adverb	"lazily"
count	1

adverb	"softly"
count	2

highlights

0	"lightly"
1	"lazily"
2	"softly"

100.00%

AI-ism character names

Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)

codexExemptions	(empty)
found	(empty)

100.00%

AI-ism location names

Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)

codexExemptions	(empty)
found	(empty)

0.00%

AI-ism word frequency

Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)

wordCount

1145

totalAiIsms

found

word	"gloom"
count	2

word	"pulse"
count	1

word	"warmth"
count	1

word	"chill"
count	1

word	"down her spine"
count	1

word	"apprehension"
count	1

word	"wavering"
count	1

word	"whisper"
count	1

word	"footsteps"
count	1

word	"echoed"
count	1

word	"otherworldly"
count	1

word	"structure"
count	1

word	"shattered"
count	1

word	"etched"
count	1

word	"intricate"
count	1

word	"profound"
count	1

word	"sense of"
count	1

word	"echoing"
count	1

word	"weight"
count	2

word	"tracing"
count	1

word	"intensity"
count	2

word	"looming"
count	1

word	"depths"
count	1

word	"wavered"
count	1

word	"glinting"
count	1

word	"unspoken"
count	1

word	"pulsed"
count	1

highlights

0	"gloom"
1	"pulse"
2	"warmth"
3	"chill"
4	"down her spine"
5	"apprehension"
6	"wavering"
7	"whisper"
8	"footsteps"
9	"echoed"
10	"otherworldly"
11	"structure"
12	"shattered"
13	"etched"
14	"intricate"
15	"profound"
16	"sense of"
17	"echoing"
18	"weight"
19	"tracing"
20	"intensity"
21	"looming"
22	"depths"
23	"wavered"
24	"glinting"
25	"unspoken"
26	"pulsed"

100.00%

Cliché density

Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window

totalCliches

maxInWindow

found

label	"eyes widened/narrowed"
count	1

highlights

0	"eyes narrowed"

100.00%

Emotion telling (show vs. tell)

Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling

emotionTells

narrationSentences

matches

0	"g with delight"

38.96%

Filter word density

Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words

filterCount

hedgeCount

narrationSentences

filterMatches

(empty)

hedgeMatches

0	"began to"
1	"seemed to"

100.00%

Gibberish response detection

Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)

analyzedSentences	65
gibberishSentences	0
adjustedGibberishSentences	0
longSentenceCount	0
runOnParagraphCount	0
giantParagraphCount	0
wordSaladCount	0
repetitionLoopCount	0
controlTokenCount	0
maxSentenceWordsSeen	35
ratio	0
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Markdown formatting overuse

Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting

markdownSpans	0
markdownWords	0
totalWords	1137
ratio	0
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)

Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks

totalAttributions	11
unquotedAttributions	0
matches	(empty)

86.91%

Name drop frequency

Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words

totalMentions

wordCount

951

uniqueNames

maxNameDensity

1.26

worstName

"Rory"

maxWindowNameDensity

worstWindowName

"Rory"

discoveredNames

Heartstone	2
Rory	12
Isolde	7
Nyx	5
Fae-forged	1

persons

0	"Rory"
1	"Isolde"
2	"Nyx"

places

0	"Heartstone"

globalScore

0.869

windowScore

57.41%

Narrator intent-glossing

Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns

analyzedSentences

glossingSentenceCount

matches

0	"as if shivering with delight"
1	"sigils that seemed to writhe beneath the foxfire's glow"

100.00%

"Not X but Y" pattern overuse

Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words

totalMatches	0
per1kWords	0
wordCount	1137
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)

Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses

thatCount	0
totalSentences	65
matches	(empty)

58.27%

Paragraph length variance

Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts

totalParagraphs

mean

45.48

std

16.1

0.354

sampleLengths

0	78
1	43
2	54
3	47
4	57
5	11
6	36
7	42
8	62
9	69
10	28
11	38
12	53
13	74
14	17
15	27
16	33
17	46
18	44
19	29
20	41
21	49
22	46
23	57
24	56

100.00%

Passive voice overuse

Target: ≤2% passive sentences

passiveCount	0
totalSentences	55
matches	(empty)

100.00%

Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse

Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs

pastProgressiveCount

totalVerbs

148

matches

0	"were trembling"

100.00%

Em-dash & semicolon overuse

Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons

emDashCount	0
semicolonCount	0
flaggedSentences	0
totalSentences	65
ratio	0
matches	(empty)

94.00%

Purple prose (modifier overload)

Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking

wordCount

959

adjectiveStacks

stackExamples

0	"heavy iron-bound door"

adverbCount

adverbRatio

0.016684045881126174

lyAdverbCount

lyAdverbRatio

0.010427528675703858

100.00%

Repeated phrase echo

Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)

totalSentences	65
echoCount	0
echoWords	(empty)

88.31%

Sentence length variance

Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts

totalSentences

mean

17.49

std

6.49

0.371

sampleLengths

0	16
1	22
2	23
3	17
4	17
5	20
6	6
7	17
8	11
9	15
10	11
11	17
12	12
13	18
14	24
15	13
16	20
17	11
18	17
19	13
20	6
21	7
22	35
23	26
24	19
25	17
26	25
27	19
28	25
29	23
30	5
31	18
32	20
33	20
34	16
35	17
36	25
37	27
38	22
39	17
40	15
41	8
42	4
43	15
44	18
45	16
46	17
47	13
48	17
49	27

58.46%

Sentence opener variety

Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers

consecutiveRepeats	2
diversityRatio	0.36923076923076925
totalSentences	65
uniqueOpeners	24

0.00%

Adverb-first sentence starts

Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb

adverbCount	0
totalSentences	55
matches	(empty)
ratio	0

100.00%

Pronoun-first sentence starts

Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun

pronounCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"She glanced back at her"
1	"they murmured, voice barely a"
2	"she said, each word a"
3	"Their footsteps echoed strangely in"
4	"she whispered, marveling at the"
5	"they said, voice wispier than"
6	"she said, trying to dispel"
7	"They emerged into a wide"
8	"she murmured, voice thick with"
9	"She thought of the Heartstone"
10	"She had been searching for"
11	"she asked, hating the way"
12	"she said, cryptic as ever"
13	"they said, voice barely a"
14	"She thought of the Fae-forged"

ratio

0.273

41.82%

Subject-first sentence starts

Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject

subjectCount

totalSentences

matches

0	"The heavy iron-bound door creaked"
1	"Rory peered into the gloom,"
2	"The faint pulse of warmth"
3	"She glanced back at her"
4	"Nyx shifted beside her, solid"
5	"they murmured, voice barely a"
6	"Isolde stepped forward, her silver"
7	"The half-fae's pale lavender eyes"
8	"she said, each word a"
9	"Rory drew a deep breath,"
10	"The door sealed shut behind"
11	"Their footsteps echoed strangely in"
12	"Rory knelt to touch it,"
13	"she whispered, marveling at the"
14	"Nyx floated closer, incorporeal form"
15	"they said, voice wispier than"
16	"Isolde said softly, her gaze"
17	"Rory brushed her fingers over"
18	"The heady perfume wafted through"
19	"A soft lilac glow began"

ratio

0.836

0.00%

Subordinate conjunction sentence starts

Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction

subConjCount	0
totalSentences	55
matches	(empty)
ratio	0

0.00%

Technical jargon density

Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns

analyzedSentences

technicalSentenceCount

matches

0	"Nyx shifted beside her, solid black form wavering at the edges as if caught between two breezes."
1	"Their footsteps echoed strangely in the hushed quiet, muffled by a carpet of velvety moss that sprawled across the flagstones like an emerald sea."
2	"Nyx floated closer, incorporeal form passing through a tendril of fog that curled lazily around their silhouette."
3	"As they ventured deeper, the moss gave way to lush patches of wildflowers that nodded beneath the burden of blossoms in shades of crimson and gold."
4	"Rory brushed her fingers over the delicate petals, the flowers trembling at her touch as if shivering with delight."
5	"The heady perfume wafted through the air, a subtle intoxication that left her feeling giddy and heavy-limbed."
6	"Rory pulled her gaze away, hating the way the light seemed to crawl along the edges of her vision, leaving ghostly afterimages in its wake."
7	"At the center stood a towering monolith of black basalt, its surface etched with swirling runes and intricate sigils that seemed to writhe beneath the foxfire's…"
8	"Rory's breath caught in her throat, tangling with the heartbeat that pounded erratically beneath her breastbone."
9	"A tremor ran through the ground beneath them, as if the earth itself were trembling at the prospect of what lay beyond the portal."
10	"Rory closed her eyes, reaching for the pendant that hung around her neck."

0.00%

Useless dialogue additions

Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments

totalTags

uselessAdditionCount

matches

0	"she said, each word a riddle spoken plain"
1	"they said, voice wispier than the mist itself"
2	"Isolde said softly, her gaze distant"
3	"she murmured, voice thick with reverence"
4	"they said, voice barely a breath on the wind"

0.00%

Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)

Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags

totalTags

fancyCount

fancyTags

0	"they murmured (murmur)"
1	"she whispered (whisper)"
2	"Rory whispered (whisper)"
3	"she murmured (murmur)"

dialogueSentences

tagDensity

0.524

leniency

rawRatio

0.364

effectiveRatio

0.364

70.2224%