| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 72.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 898 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sweetly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "sharply" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 898 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinel" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "scanned" | | 8 | "symphony" | | 9 | "charged" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "quickened" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "sinister" | | 15 | "racing" | | 16 | "tangible" | | 17 | "weight" | | 18 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 9 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 894 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 880 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.57 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 5 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "shadows that seemed to writhe and twist like living things" | | 1 | "hum that seemed to vibrate through the air" | | 2 | "as if conspiring to keep her there" | | 3 | "quite understand" | | 4 | "It was as if the grove itself was speaking, its voice a susurrus of leaves and wind" | | 5 | "quite feel" | | 6 | "voices that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 894 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.66% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 40.64 | | std | 16.86 | | cv | 0.415 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 64 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 55 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 35 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 55 | | 21 | 20 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 134 | | matches | | 0 | "was holding" | | 1 | "was speaking" |
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| 4.61% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 62 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, beneath the natural sounds, there was something else—a low, almost imperceptible hum that seemed to vibrate through the air." | | 1 | "She turned sharply, but there was nothing—only the shadows, deep and impenetrable." | | 2 | "Another sound, closer this time—a soft, almost imperceptible whisper." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 884 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03959276018099547 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012443438914027148 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 62 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 63.21% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 62 | | mean | 14.42 | | std | 4.44 | | cv | 0.308 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 50.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3387096774193548 | | totalSentences | 62 | | uniqueOpeners | 21 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 49.51% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant," | | 1 | "She took a deep breath," | | 2 | "she murmured to herself, her" | | 3 | "She stepped forward, the grass" | | 4 | "She scanned the shadows, her" | | 5 | "She shook her head, trying" | | 6 | "she muttered, forcing her feet" | | 7 | "It set her teeth on" | | 8 | "She reached the center of" | | 9 | "She hesitated, the pendant's glow" | | 10 | "She turned sharply, but there" | | 11 | "Her pulse quickened, a drumbeat" | | 12 | "Her voice sounded small, swallowed" | | 13 | "She took a step back," | | 14 | "It was as if the" | | 15 | "She strained to hear, but" | | 16 | "She felt a chill that" | | 17 | "Her breath came faster, a" | | 18 | "Her voice was stronger now," | | 19 | "They spoke in a language" |
| | ratio | 0.426 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "The moon hung low, a" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, known to her" | | 2 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 3 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant," | | 4 | "Rory had come here for" | | 5 | "The wildflowers, vibrant even in" | | 6 | "She took a deep breath," | | 7 | "she murmured to herself, her" | | 8 | "The pendant pulsed gently against" | | 9 | "She stepped forward, the grass" | | 10 | "Time behaved strangely here, she" | | 11 | "A rustle in the underbrush" | | 12 | "She scanned the shadows, her" | | 13 | "Nothing moved, yet the feeling" | | 14 | "She shook her head, trying" | | 15 | "she muttered, forcing her feet" | | 16 | "The grove was silent, save" | | 17 | "It set her teeth on" | | 18 | "She reached the center of" | | 19 | "Here, the air felt thicker," |
| | ratio | 0.934 | |
| 81.97% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, beneath the natural sounds," |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 46.70% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones loomed before her, their gnarled forms casting long shadows that seemed to writhe and twist like living things." | | 1 | "She clutched the Heartstone Pendant, its faint warmth a small comfort against the chill that seeped into her bones." | | 2 | "The pendant pulsed gently against her skin, a rhythmic thrum that matched the beat of her heart." | | 3 | "Time behaved strangely here, she knew, but tonight it felt particularly disjointed, as if the grove itself was holding its breath." | | 4 | "Yet, beneath the natural sounds, there was something else—a low, almost imperceptible hum that seemed to vibrate through the air." | | 5 | "Here, the air felt thicker, charged with an energy that made her skin tingle." | | 6 | "It was as if the grove itself was speaking, its voice a susurrus of leaves and wind." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, her voice barely more than a whisper" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.8 | |