Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRFTXYTYBEXG30Y1BXPFM4

Run Details

Model:
Mistral Large 2
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
30.4s
Cost:
$0.012548

Evaluation summary

Score Evaluator
Details Link
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags (details)
95.18% AI-ism adverb frequency (details)
100.00% AI-ism character names (details)
100.00% AI-ism location names (details)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency (details)
100.00% Cliché density (details)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell) (details)
100.00% Filter word density (details)
100.00% Gibberish response detection (details)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse (details)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) (details)
49.89% Name drop frequency (details)
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing (details)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse (details)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) (details)
100.00% Paragraph length variance (details)
100.00% Passive voice overuse (details)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse (details)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse (details)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload) (details)
100.00% Repeated phrase echo (details)
100.00% Sentence length variance (details)
46.78% Sentence opener variety (details)
75.76% Adverb-first sentence starts (details)
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts (details)
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts (details)
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts (details)
77.92% Technical jargon density (details)
53.57% Useless dialogue additions (details)
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) (details)
76.0812% Overall

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant hummed against Rory’s collarbone, a steady pulse of warmth like a second heartbeat. She adjusted the strap of her bag, fingers brushing the cold hilt of the Fae blade tucked inside. The air smelled different here—thick with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter, like overripe fruit left too long in the sun. Nyx materialized beside her, their shadowy form rippling as they stepped from the darkness beneath the standing stones. "The boundary’s thin here," they murmured, voice like wind through dry leaves. "The Veil’s barely holding." Isolde didn’t look back as she led them forward, her silver hair catching the dim light filtering through the ancient oaks. "Time moves oddly in the Grove. Best not to linger if we want to return before dawn." Her bare feet made no sound against the mossy ground, leaving no trace of her passage. Rory exhaled, rolling her shoulders to shake off the prickle of unease. "Right. So, no stopping to smell the roses, then?" Isolde’s lips curled, but she didn’t answer. The trees parted without a sound, revealing a clearing bathed in an eerie, golden twilight. The sky above wasn’t sky at all—just a shifting canvas of amber and ochre, like sunlight filtered through honey. Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their petals too vibrant, too *alive*, pulsing faintly as if breathing. A brook cut through the center, its water so clear it looked like liquid glass, but when Rory knelt to touch it, her fingers came away dry. "Is this—?" She trailed off, staring at the reflection in the water. Hers was normal. Nyx’s flickered between solid and shadow. Isolde’s didn’t appear at all. "The Grove doesn’t show what is," Isolde said. "It shows what could be." Nyx crouched beside the brook, their violet eyes narrowing. "Or what was." A rustle came from the undergrowth. Rory tensed, hand drifting toward the Fae blade, but it was only a fox—if it was a fox. Its fur shimmered like polished copper, and its eyes held the same pale lavender as Isolde’s. It watched them for a long moment before melting back into the shadows. "Friendly," Rory muttered. Isolde ignored her, stepping forward. The air thickened around them, pressing in like a held breath. The standing stones at the edge of the clearing pulsed with faint blue light, their runes flaring to life as they passed. Rory reached out, fingers hovering just above the surface of one. Heat radiated from the stone, searing her skin before she could pull away. "Don’t touch the wards," Nyx said, voice tight. "They’re not meant for mortal hands." Rory flexed her fingers, watching the red mark fade. "Noted." The deeper they went, the stranger the landscape became. Trees twisted into impossible shapes—trunks spiraling like DNA strands, branches knitting together to form arches that led nowhere. The ground beneath their feet shifted from moss to something slick and cool, like polished marble, then to a spongy surface that gave slightly underfoot, as if walking on a living thing. A sound cut through the silence—a low, rhythmic hum, like a choir singing just beyond hearing. Rory’s pulse quickened. "Do you hear that?" Nyx tilted their head. "It’s the trees." She blinked. "The *trees*?" Isolde didn’t slow. "They sing when the Veil is weak." The hum grew louder, vibrating in Rory’s bones. She pressed a hand to her sternum, as if that could steady the sudden dizziness. The Heartstone Pendant burned hotter, searing through her shirt. She yanked it out, staring at the crimson gem. It glowed now, pulsing in time with the hum. Nyx’s shadowy form flickered, their edges blurring. "We’re close to a rift." Isolde stopped abruptly. Ahead, the trees parted to reveal a chasm—a jagged tear in the world, its edges glowing with the same amber light as the sky. The air above it shimmered, distorting like heat rising from pavement. On the other side, something moved. Shadows, but not like Nyx. These were deeper, hungrier. Rory’s breath hitched. "Is that—?" "Dymas," Nyx said. The chasm exhaled. A gust of warm, spiced air rushed over them, carrying the scent of roasting meat and something metallic, like blood. Rory’s stomach twisted. The Heartstone flared, its glow casting long shadows across the ground. Isolde turned to them, her lavender eyes unreadable. "The Veil is thinnest here. But it’s not just a tear—it’s a door. And it’s opening." A sound like tearing fabric split the air. The chasm widened, the edges peeling back like lips. On the other side, shapes emerged—figures clad in dark robes, their faces obscured by hoods. One raised a hand, and the air between the realms rippled, bending like water. Nyx stepped forward, their form solidifying. "They’re trying to cross." Rory’s fingers closed around the Fae blade. The metal was ice in her grip. "Can they?" Isolde’s voice was quiet. "Not yet. But they will." The figures on the other side stilled. One turned its head, as if sensing them. Rory’s skin prickled. The Heartstone burned against her skin, its pulse frantic. Then, without warning, the chasm snapped shut. The humming stopped. The air stilled. Silence. Rory exhaled, her breath shaky. "What the hell was that?" Nyx’s form flickered, their edges sharpening back into focus. "A warning." Isolde turned away from the now-sealed rift, her silver hair catching the dim light. "Or an invitation." The Grove seemed to hold its breath. The trees no longer sang. The wildflowers had closed their petals, as if in mourning. Rory’s fingers tightened around the Fae blade. The metal was warming now, as if reacting to the tension in the air. Nyx’s voice was a whisper. "We should go." Isolde didn’t move. "Not yet." A breeze stirred the leaves, carrying with it the faintest hint of smoke. Rory’s nostrils flared. "Isolde—" The seer held up a hand, silencing her. Then she turned, her gaze fixed on something beyond the clearing. Rory followed her line of sight. A figure stood at the edge of the trees. Tall. Cloaked. Motionless. The Heartstone Pendant seared against Rory’s skin. She didn’t need to see the figure’s face to know it wasn’t human. Nyx’s shadowy form coiled tighter, their voice barely audible. "Run."
total_cost0.012548

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.233
leniency0.467
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1038
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1038
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count3
3
word"shimmered"
count2
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"searing"
count2
6
word"marble"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"quickened"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"flickered"
3"shimmered"
4"pulsed"
5"searing"
6"marble"
7"silence"
8"rhythmic"
9"quickened"
10"stomach"
11"unreadable"
12"tension"
13"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1029
ratio0.002
matches
0"alive"
1"trees"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.89% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount899
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone5
Pendant3
Rory18
Fae4
Isolde12
Hers1
Nyx12
Grove1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Rory"
3"Isolde"
4"Nyx"
5"Grove"
places
0"Fae"
globalScore0.499
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"as if breathing"
1"looked like liquid glass, but when Rory k"
2"as if walking on a living thing"
3"as if sensing them"
4"as if reacting to the tension in the air"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1029
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean22.37
std19
cv0.849
sampleLengths
057
134
254
321
47
576
626
713
812
953
103
1162
1214
1310
1459
1523
167
174
1810
1950
2012
2153
225
233
2437
2524
2646
2710
2816
299
3027
3113
321
3310
3411
3517
3622
3721
388
395
4017
4125
429
433
4420
4510
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs175
matches
0"was warming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences119
ratio0.059
matches
0"The air smelled different here—thick with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter, like overripe fruit left too long in the sun."
1"The sky above wasn’t sky at all—just a shifting canvas of amber and ochre, like sunlight filtered through honey."
2"Rory tensed, hand drifting toward the Fae blade, but it was only a fox—if it was a fox."
3"Trees twisted into impossible shapes—trunks spiraling like DNA strands, branches knitting together to form arches that led nowhere."
4"A sound cut through the silence—a low, rhythmic hum, like a choir singing just beyond hearing."
5"Ahead, the trees parted to reveal a chasm—a jagged tear in the world, its edges glowing with the same amber light as the sky."
6"On the other side, shapes emerged—figures clad in dark robes, their faces obscured by hoods."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount907
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.034178610804851156
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005512679162072767
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean8.65
std6.5
cv0.751
sampleLengths
016
118
223
318
412
54
621
733
812
99
107
1115
1219
1315
1427
1512
163
176
185
198
205
219
223
236
2418
2516
2613
273
285
2911
3022
3111
3213
338
346
359
361
379
3818
3932
4016
413
424
434
443
452
462
473
487
498
46.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.31092436974789917
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners37
75.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"Then, without warning, the chasm"
1"Then she turned, her gaze"
ratio0.023
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences88
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"they murmured, voice like wind"
2"Her bare feet made no"
3"She trailed off, staring at"
4"Hers was normal."
5"Its fur shimmered like polished"
6"It watched them for a"
7"She pressed a hand to"
8"She yanked it out, staring"
9"It glowed now, pulsing in"
10"She didn’t need to see"
ratio0.125
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences88
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant hummed against"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The air smelled different here—thick"
3"Nyx materialized beside her, their"
4"they murmured, voice like wind"
5"Isolde didn’t look back as"
6"Her bare feet made no"
7"Rory exhaled, rolling her shoulders"
8"Isolde’s lips curled, but she"
9"The trees parted without a"
10"The sky above wasn’t sky"
11"Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their"
12"A brook cut through the"
13"She trailed off, staring at"
14"Hers was normal."
15"Nyx’s flickered between solid and"
16"Isolde’s didn’t appear at all."
17"Nyx crouched beside the brook,"
18"A rustle came from the"
19"Rory tensed, hand drifting toward"
ratio0.92
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Wildflowers carpeted the ground, their petals too vibrant, too *alive*, pulsing faintly as if breathing."
1"Trees twisted into impossible shapes—trunks spiraling like DNA strands, branches knitting together to form arches that led nowhere."
2"The ground beneath their feet shifted from moss to something slick and cool, like polished marble, then to a spongy surface that gave slightly underfoot, as if …"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx said, voice tight"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.133
76.0812%