| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.368 | | leniency | 0.737 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |
| 81.90% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1105 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "barely above a whisper" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1105 | | totalAiIsms | 34 | | found | | 0 | | word | "cast a warm glow" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | word | "skipped a beat" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "cast a warm glow" | | 1 | "comforting" | | 2 | "navigating" | | 3 | "scanned" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "tracing" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "skipped a beat" | | 10 | "etched" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "unspoken" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "tinged" | | 15 | "reminder" | | 16 | "unreadable" | | 17 | "warmth" | | 18 | "furrowed" | | 19 | "etching" | | 20 | "whisper" | | 21 | "newfound" | | 22 | "amidst" | | 23 | "echoes" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the weight of unspoken words" | | 1 | "hung in the air" | | 2 | "a flicker of recognition" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1101 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 819 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.95 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | Silas | 2 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Evan | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Blackwood" | | 6 | "Evan" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.523 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 62.28% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "atmosphere that seemed to wrap around each table like a comforting embrace" | | 1 | "as if trying to reconcile the woman before him with the girl he once knew" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 28.97 | | std | 17.39 | | cv | 0.6 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 89 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 76 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 40 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 31 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 51 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 49 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.17% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.024 | | matches | | 0 | "He turned, his eyes meeting hers with a mixture of surprise and something else—something that might have been regret." | | 1 | "The maps on the walls, the photographs that told stories of a world long past—they were constants in a life that seemed ever-changing." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 823 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.02187120291616039 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006075334143377886 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 13.43 | | std | 6.19 | | cv | 0.461 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 65.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4024390243902439 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.69% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 1 | "She paused at the bar," | | 2 | "His hazel eyes met hers," | | 3 | "He inclined his head slightly," | | 4 | "she breathed, the name slipping" | | 5 | "He turned, his eyes meeting" | | 6 | "he said finally, his voice" | | 7 | "she replied, her voice steady" | | 8 | "She gestured to the empty" | | 9 | "He hesitated, a flicker of" | | 10 | "They sat in silence for" | | 11 | "He chuckled, a sound tinged" | | 12 | "He shifted in his seat," | | 13 | "he murmured, his eyes flicking" | | 14 | "she asked, steering the conversation" | | 15 | "He smiled, a genuine warmth" | | 16 | "she said with a shrug," | | 17 | "she admitted, her voice barely" | | 18 | "He reached out, his hand" | | 19 | "They lapsed into silence once" |
| | ratio | 0.448 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven's Nest hummed with" | | 1 | "The dim lighting cast a" | | 2 | "Aurora Carter, known to most" | | 3 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 4 | "She paused at the bar," | | 5 | "His hazel eyes met hers," | | 6 | "He inclined his head slightly," | | 7 | "Rory leaned against the bar," | | 8 | "The door swung open, and" | | 9 | "Rory glanced up, her gaze" | | 10 | "The man stepped inside, shaking" | | 11 | "Rory's heart skipped a beat" | | 12 | "she breathed, the name slipping" | | 13 | "He turned, his eyes meeting" | | 14 | "he said finally, his voice" | | 15 | "she replied, her voice steady" | | 16 | "She gestured to the empty" | | 17 | "He hesitated, a flicker of" | | 18 | "They sat in silence for" | | 19 | "Evan said, his gaze lingering" |
| | ratio | 0.983 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The dim lighting cast a warm glow over the patrons, creating an intimate atmosphere that seemed to wrap around each table like a comforting embrace." | | 1 | "Aurora Carter, known to most as Rory, slipped through the crowd with the ease of someone who had spent countless hours navigating the bar's labyrinthine layout." | | 2 | "She paused at the bar, nodding to Silas Blackwood, who stood behind the counter with his usual air of quiet authority." | | 3 | "He turned, his eyes meeting hers with a mixture of surprise and something else—something that might have been regret." | | 4 | "He reached out, his hand hovering over hers before he pulled back, as if unsure of his place in her life." | | 5 | "The maps on the walls, the photographs that told stories of a world long past—they were constants in a life that seemed ever-changing." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "he said finally, his voice carrying a note of disbelief" | | 1 | "Rory replied, a wry smile tugging at her lips" | | 2 | "Evan replied, his tone shifting to something more businesslike" | | 3 | "she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper" | | 4 | "he said, a note of admiration in his voice" | | 5 | "she agreed, her mind turning over the possibilities" | | 6 | "she said, her voice carrying a note of hope" |
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| 18.42% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Rory agreed (agree)" | | 2 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 4 | "she agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.368 | | leniency | 0.737 | | rawRatio | 0.357 | | effectiveRatio | 0.263 | |