Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRFWP8QPTP7JVSN9M2P4CA

Run Details

Duration:
25.5s
Cost:
$0.016358
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation, punctuated by the clinking of glasses and the occasional burst of laughter. The dim lighting cast a warm glow over the patrons, creating an intimate atmosphere that seemed to wrap around each table like a comforting embrace. Aurora Carter, known to most as Rory, slipped through the crowd with the ease of someone who had spent countless hours navigating the bar's labyrinthine layout. Her bright blue eyes scanned the room, taking in the familiar faces and the occasional newcomer. She paused at the bar, nodding to Silas Blackwood, who stood behind the counter with his usual air of quiet authority. His hazel eyes met hers, a flicker of recognition passing between them. He inclined his head slightly, acknowledging her presence without interrupting his conversation with a customer. Rory leaned against the bar, her fingers tracing the edge of a coaster as she waited for her drink. The door swung open, and a gust of cool evening air swept through the room. Rory glanced up, her gaze landing on a figure silhouetted against the neon glow of the sign outside. The man stepped inside, shaking off the chill and scanning the room with a searching look. Rory's heart skipped a beat as she recognized him, though the years had etched lines into his face and added a touch of grey to his hair. "Evan," she breathed, the name slipping from her lips like a ghost from the past. He turned, his eyes meeting hers with a mixture of surprise and something else—something that might have been regret. For a moment, they simply stared at each other, the weight of unspoken words hanging heavy in the air between them. "Rory," he said finally, his voice carrying a note of disbelief. "It's been a long time." "Too long," she replied, her voice steady despite the tumult of emotions swirling within her. She gestured to the empty stool beside her. "Join me?" He hesitated, a flicker of uncertainty crossing his features before he nodded and took the seat. They sat in silence for a moment, the noise of the bar fading into the background as they grappled with the unexpected reunion. "You look... different," Evan said, his gaze lingering on her face as if trying to reconcile the woman before him with the girl he once knew. "Life has a way of doing that," Rory replied, a wry smile tugging at her lips. "And you? You've changed too." He chuckled, a sound tinged with self-deprecation. "I suppose I have. Time has a way of catching up with us, doesn't it?" Rory nodded, her fingers still tracing the edge of the coaster. "It does. But sometimes, it feels like it slips away too quickly." Evan's expression softened, a hint of nostalgia in his eyes. "I remember when we thought we had all the time in the world." "Those were simpler days," Rory agreed, her mind drifting back to memories of laughter and shared dreams. "But life had other plans." He shifted in his seat, his gaze dropping to the scar on her wrist. "I heard about what happened. I'm sorry, Rory. I should have been there." The apology hung in the air, a reminder of the distance that had grown between them. Rory met his gaze, her expression unreadable. "We were both different people back then. We made choices, and we have to live with them." Evan nodded, a shadow passing over his features. "I know. But I still wish things had been different." Silas approached, setting a drink in front of Rory with a nod. "On the house," he murmured, his eyes flicking to Evan with a hint of curiosity before he moved away. Rory took a sip, the familiar taste grounding her in the present. "So, what brings you to London?" she asked, steering the conversation away from the past. "Work," Evan replied, his tone shifting to something more businesslike. "I'm here for a few weeks, overseeing a project." "Still in architecture, then?" "Yes. It's been... fulfilling, in its own way." Rory studied him, noting the way his eyes lit up when he spoke of his work. "I'm glad to hear that. You always had a knack for creating something beautiful out of nothing." He smiled, a genuine warmth in his expression. "And you? What have you been up to?" "Living above a bar, delivering food, and trying to figure out what comes next," she said with a shrug, her tone light but her eyes betraying a hint of uncertainty. Evan's brow furrowed, concern etching lines into his forehead. "Is that what you want?" Rory hesitated, the question striking a chord within her. "I don't know," she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper. "But it's where I am right now." He reached out, his hand hovering over hers before he pulled back, as if unsure of his place in her life. "If you ever need anything, Rory, I'm here." The offer hung between them, a bridge to a future that was still uncertain. Rory met his gaze, a flicker of gratitude in her eyes. "Thank you, Evan. That means a lot." They lapsed into silence once more, the noise of the bar filling the space between them. Rory glanced around, taking in the familiar surroundings with a newfound perspective. The maps on the walls, the photographs that told stories of a world long past—they were constants in a life that seemed ever-changing. Evan followed her gaze, his expression thoughtful. "This place suits you," he said, a note of admiration in his voice. Rory smiled, a genuine warmth in her eyes. "It does, doesn't it? It's a place where people come and go, but the stories remain." He nodded, understanding the sentiment. "Maybe that's what we are, too. Stories waiting to be told." "Perhaps," she agreed, her mind turning over the possibilities. "But some stories are harder to tell than others." Evan's gaze softened, a hint of sadness in his eyes. "I know. But sometimes, the hardest stories are the ones that need to be told the most." Rory considered his words, the truth of them resonating within her. "Maybe one day," she said, her voice carrying a note of hope. He smiled, a genuine warmth in his expression. "I'll be here when you're ready." They sat together, the weight of time and unspoken regret slowly giving way to the possibility of something new. The Raven's Nest buzzed around them, a constant in a world of change, as two old friends found their way back to each other amidst the echoes of the past.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.053
81.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1105
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"quickly"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1105
totalAiIsms34
found
0
word"cast a warm glow"
count1
1
word"comforting"
count1
2
word"navigating"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count3
5
word"flicker"
count3
6
word"tracing"
count2
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
9
word"skipped a beat"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"weight"
count2
12
word"unspoken"
count2
13
word"silence"
count2
14
word"tinged"
count1
15
word"reminder"
count1
16
word"unreadable"
count1
17
word"warmth"
count3
18
word"furrowed"
count1
19
word"etching"
count1
20
word"whisper"
count1
21
word"newfound"
count1
22
word"amidst"
count1
23
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"cast a warm glow"
1"comforting"
2"navigating"
3"scanned"
4"familiar"
5"flicker"
6"tracing"
7"chill"
8"scanning"
9"skipped a beat"
10"etched"
11"weight"
12"unspoken"
13"silence"
14"tinged"
15"reminder"
16"unreadable"
17"warmth"
18"furrowed"
19"etching"
20"whisper"
21"newfound"
22"amidst"
23"echoes"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of unspoken words"
1"hung in the air"
2"a flicker of recognition"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1101
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount819
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Carter1
Rory16
Silas2
Blackwood1
Evan8
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
6"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore0.523
windowScore0.5
62.28% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"atmosphere that seemed to wrap around each table like a comforting embrace"
1"as if trying to reconcile the woman before him with the girl he once knew"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1101
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean28.97
std17.39
cv0.6
sampleLengths
089
167
276
315
440
516
625
739
826
921
1022
1123
1223
1322
1427
1540
1618
1731
1827
1919
204
218
2233
2316
2430
2514
2627
2729
2832
2951
3020
3124
3216
3318
3427
3523
3614
3749
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs128
matches(empty)
73.17% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences82
ratio0.024
matches
0"He turned, his eyes meeting hers with a mixture of surprise and something else—something that might have been regret."
1"The maps on the walls, the photographs that told stories of a world long past—they were constants in a life that seemed ever-changing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount823
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.02187120291616039
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006075334143377886
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean13.43
std6.19
cv0.461
sampleLengths
022
125
226
316
421
512
615
719
815
918
1016
1127
1215
1319
1421
1511
165
1715
188
192
2016
2123
2226
2316
245
257
2615
2711
2812
2910
3013
3117
325
3314
3413
3516
367
3717
388
3910
4012
4119
4212
4315
4410
459
464
478
4816
4917
65.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4024390243902439
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences58
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
1"She paused at the bar,"
2"His hazel eyes met hers,"
3"He inclined his head slightly,"
4"she breathed, the name slipping"
5"He turned, his eyes meeting"
6"he said finally, his voice"
7"she replied, her voice steady"
8"She gestured to the empty"
9"He hesitated, a flicker of"
10"They sat in silence for"
11"He chuckled, a sound tinged"
12"He shifted in his seat,"
13"he murmured, his eyes flicking"
14"she asked, steering the conversation"
15"He smiled, a genuine warmth"
16"she said with a shrug,"
17"she admitted, her voice barely"
18"He reached out, his hand"
19"They lapsed into silence once"
ratio0.448
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences58
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"The dim lighting cast a"
2"Aurora Carter, known to most"
3"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
4"She paused at the bar,"
5"His hazel eyes met hers,"
6"He inclined his head slightly,"
7"Rory leaned against the bar,"
8"The door swung open, and"
9"Rory glanced up, her gaze"
10"The man stepped inside, shaking"
11"Rory's heart skipped a beat"
12"she breathed, the name slipping"
13"He turned, his eyes meeting"
14"he said finally, his voice"
15"she replied, her voice steady"
16"She gestured to the empty"
17"He hesitated, a flicker of"
18"They sat in silence for"
19"Evan said, his gaze lingering"
ratio0.983
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The dim lighting cast a warm glow over the patrons, creating an intimate atmosphere that seemed to wrap around each table like a comforting embrace."
1"Aurora Carter, known to most as Rory, slipped through the crowd with the ease of someone who had spent countless hours navigating the bar's labyrinthine layout."
2"She paused at the bar, nodding to Silas Blackwood, who stood behind the counter with his usual air of quiet authority."
3"He turned, his eyes meeting hers with a mixture of surprise and something else—something that might have been regret."
4"He reached out, his hand hovering over hers before he pulled back, as if unsure of his place in her life."
5"The maps on the walls, the photographs that told stories of a world long past—they were constants in a life that seemed ever-changing."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"he said finally, his voice carrying a note of disbelief"
1"Rory replied, a wry smile tugging at her lips"
2"Evan replied, his tone shifting to something more businesslike"
3"she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper"
4"he said, a note of admiration in his voice"
5"she agreed, her mind turning over the possibilities"
6"she said, her voice carrying a note of hope"
18.42% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"Rory agreed (agree)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"she admitted (admit)"
4"she agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.357
effectiveRatio0.263
67.9546%