| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "he finally said [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.214 | | leniency | 0.429 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |
| 65.21% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1006 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "nervously" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.60% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1006 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pounding" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "wavering" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "fleeting" | | 9 | "resolve" | | 10 | "measured" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "loomed" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "clenched her jaw" | | 1 | "The weight of his words" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 97 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1016 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 881 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.91 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 8 | | Soho | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Raven" | | 3 | "Nest" | | 4 | "Saint" | | 5 | "Christopher" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 29.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed deeper here, darker than before" | | 1 | "looked like he knew he was caught, but th" | | 2 | "something like relief or resignation" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1016 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 26.74 | | std | 15.03 | | cv | 0.562 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 39 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 33 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 47 | | 37 | 17 |
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| 97.10% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "was shadowed" | | 1 | "was caught" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 172 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 97 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept her eyes fixed on the figure ahead — a silhouette she’d seen too often lately, slipping between shadowed alleys with the fluid ease of someone who knew every hidden corner." | | 1 | "No sounds — just the steady drizzle and her own ragged breathing." | | 2 | "Then she heard it — the faint, shuffling footsteps behind her." | | 3 | "A faint movement caught her eye — a shadow detaching from the wall." | | 4 | "He held something in his hand — a small, irregular package wrapped in battered cloth." | | 5 | "Her intuition told her he might have ducked inside — that, or vanished into the night." | | 6 | "She knew what kind of place it was — the kind of watering hole only locals and secrets knew." | | 7 | "The scent of stale beer and something sharper — maybe whiskey — clung to the air." | | 8 | "Recognition flickered — a fleeting glimpse of desperation, then resolve." | | 9 | "A faint smile curled the man’s lips as he pulled out a small, faded medallion — the Saint Christopher, worn but intact." |
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| 86.47% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 873 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.052691867124856816 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.022909507445589918 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 97 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 97 | | mean | 10.47 | | std | 6.57 | | cv | 0.627 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 56.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.36082474226804123 | | totalSentences | 97 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Thoroughly soaked, Quinn pressed her" | | 1 | "Then she heard it —" | | 2 | "Just the empty alley, the" | | 3 | "Probably a bad idea." | | 4 | "Maybe he’d gone inside." |
| | ratio | 0.06 | |
| 43.81% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept her eyes fixed" | | 1 | "She clenched her jaw as" | | 2 | "She paused, listening." | | 3 | "She spun, hand on her" | | 4 | "He held something in his" | | 5 | "His eyes darted nervously." | | 6 | "He hesitated, then took a" | | 7 | "She cursed, pushing after him." | | 8 | "Her intuition told her he" | | 9 | "She considered her options." | | 10 | "She was already in unfamiliar" | | 11 | "Her hand hovered near her" | | 12 | "She froze, listening." | | 13 | "She knew what kind of" | | 14 | "Her instincts warred." | | 15 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 16 | "She slipped inside, pressing against" | | 17 | "Her eyes searched for the" | | 18 | "She stiffened, watching." | | 19 | "Her heart hammered." |
| | ratio | 0.44 | |
| 73.10% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain hammered down in" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted through" | | 2 | "She kept her eyes fixed" | | 3 | "She clenched her jaw as" | | 4 | "The suspect darted into a" | | 5 | "The quiet of the backstreets" | | 6 | "Each step splashed against wet" | | 7 | "A faint glow of phosphorescent" | | 8 | "She paused, listening." | | 9 | "She spun, hand on her" | | 10 | "A faint movement caught her" | | 11 | "The figure froze, turned, and" | | 12 | "He held something in his" | | 13 | "His eyes darted nervously." | | 14 | "Quinn called, voice sharp, echoing" | | 15 | "He hesitated, then took a" | | 16 | "She cursed, pushing after him." | | 17 | "The alley twisted, narrowing into" | | 18 | "Quinn’s boots skidded on the" | | 19 | "The bar’s distinctive green glow" |
| | ratio | 0.774 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 97.26% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain hammered down in relentless sheets, bouncing off puddles that reflected flickering neon signs." | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn sprinted through the slick streets of Soho, her boots pounding against cobblestones, breath echoing in her ears." | | 2 | "She kept her eyes fixed on the figure ahead — a silhouette she’d seen too often lately, slipping between shadowed alleys with the fluid ease of someone who knew…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn called, voice sharp, echoing off wet bricks" | | 1 | "he finally said, voice rough" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.214 | | leniency | 0.429 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |