| 46.15% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde’s gaze felt like [like]" | | 1 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" | | 2 | "Isolde gestured around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.385 | | leniency | 0.769 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |
| 93.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1430 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.59% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1430 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "intricate" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "amidst" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "resonance" | | 8 | "chill" | | 9 | "crystalline" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "echoing" | | 12 | "echoes" | | 13 | "fractured" | | 14 | "comforting" | | 15 | "rhythmic" | | 16 | "crystallized" | | 17 | "glint" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.49% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 108 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seem to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "started to" | | 3 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 131 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1410 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 60 | | wordCount | 1149 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.57 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 9 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 3 | | Rory | 18 | | Isolde | 16 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Veil | 2 | | Unease | 1 | | Voices | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | English | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Veil" | | 5 | "Unease" | | 6 | "English" | | 7 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.717 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "as though touching something unseen" | | 1 | "something like liquid air flowed in lazy arc" | | 2 | "felt like it could strip her soul bare" | | 3 | "as if sensing her presence" | | 4 | "sound that seemed to come from everywhere, echoing the vibration underfoot" | | 5 | "felt like a warning drumbeat" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.709 | | wordCount | 1410 | | matches | | 0 | "Not with insects, but with a bass vibration she could feel through the soles of he" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 68 | | mean | 20.74 | | std | 13.77 | | cv | 0.664 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 41 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 49 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 35 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 33 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 38 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 204 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 131 | | ratio | 0.13 | | matches | | 0 | "One step in Richmond Park, the next here—wherever here was." | | 1 | "Stone columns rose around them, carved with intricate designs that writhed if she stared too long—vines and leaves and strange, twisting creatures." | | 2 | "Not with insects, but with a bass vibration she could feel through the soles of her boots now she noticed it—a deep, resonant pulse, slow like a sleeping heart." | | 3 | "The path opened into an enormous clearing—a bowl nestled amidst low, rolling hills." | | 4 | "Ripe fruits hung from it, each a different color—gems of ruby red, emerald green, sapphire blue." | | 5 | "They coiled around each other, rippling with colors she couldn’t name—shades between silver and violet, hues that made her eyes ache." | | 6 | "Rory could feel it now—a faint tugging sensation behind her sternum, where the Heartstone pendant lay under her sweater." | | 7 | "But she felt it—a sudden chill, a moment of dislocation, as if a part of her had been pulled somewhere else and just returned." | | 8 | "Up close, she saw the runes weren’t carved, but grown—tiny threads of light moving like veins beneath stone skin." | | 9 | "She reached out—" | | 10 | "Something chimed—a faint, crystalline sound that seemed to come from everywhere, echoing the vibration underfoot." | | 11 | "Then—" | | 12 | "She caught fragments—a lilting Fae tongue, guttural demonic syllables, and…" | | 13 | "Where they touched, the streams thickened, solidifying into brief, shimmering shapes—figures moving, landscapes, flashes of faces Rory didn’t recognize." | | 14 | "Then one shape crystallized, held for a second—a man with dark hair, standing in front of a city skyline Rory knew." | | 15 | "Another pulse of light, another shape—a dark doorway, the red glow of demonic eyes, the glint of a blade—" | | 16 | "The hum in the ground rose in pitch, turning from a vibration into a sound—a deep, resonant tone like a struck bell." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1169 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "sun-warmed-intimate warmth," |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.03592814371257485 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006843455945252352 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 131 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 131 | | mean | 10.76 | | std | 6.71 | | cv | 0.623 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 71.50% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.46564885496183206 | | totalSentences | 131 | | uniqueOpeners | 61 | |
| 34.01% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Then one shape crystallized, held" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced back at Nyx," | | 1 | "They had passed through a" | | 2 | "She brushed her fingers across" | | 3 | "She jerked her hand back." | | 4 | "They passed a shadowy hand" | | 5 | "They moved forward, the path" | | 6 | "She looked up." | | 7 | "They coiled around each other," | | 8 | "She clutched the pendant through" | | 9 | "She reached the first stone." | | 10 | "She reached out—" | | 11 | "It was a carpet of" | | 12 | "She took a hasty step" | | 13 | "It rustled the silver leaves" | | 14 | "She caught fragments—a lilting Fae" | | 15 | "she asked, trying to ground" | | 16 | "She closed her eyes, her" |
| | ratio | 0.173 | |
| 56.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora’s boots crunched on gravel" | | 1 | "She glanced back at Nyx," | | 2 | "Isolde walked ahead, her slender" | | 3 | "They had passed through a" | | 4 | "The sky was the color" | | 5 | "The light came from everywhere" | | 6 | "Stone columns rose around them," | | 7 | "The columns framed a path" | | 8 | "Isolde’s voice was musical, but" | | 9 | "Aurora stepped closer, peered at" | | 10 | "She brushed her fingers across" | | 11 | "She jerked her hand back." | | 12 | "Nyx flowed forward, their violet" | | 13 | "They passed a shadowy hand" | | 14 | "Nyx murmured, their whispery voice" | | 15 | "Isolde glanced at them" | | 16 | "They moved forward, the path" | | 17 | "The slate tiles gave way" | | 18 | "Rory knelt, touched one." | | 19 | "The flower curled away from" |
| | ratio | 0.806 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 57.14% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "They passed a shadowy hand through the column, and for a moment Rory saw the silhouette of fingers seem to catch in the stone, as though touching something unse…" | | 1 | "In its center stood a colossal oak tree, its bark silver-grey, its branches sprawling like beams holding up the sky." | | 2 | "As she approached the edge of the stone circle, the shimmering streams of the Veil shifted, coiling toward her as if sensing her presence." | | 3 | "But she felt it—a sudden chill, a moment of dislocation, as if a part of her had been pulled somewhere else and just returned." | | 4 | "Something chimed—a faint, crystalline sound that seemed to come from everywhere, echoing the vibration underfoot." | | 5 | "Each pulse sent up tiny motes of light, sparkling dust that drifted toward the shimmering Veil streams." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx warned, but their tone was curious rather than fearful" | | 1 | "she asked, trying to ground herself in purpose" | | 2 | "Isolde knelt, not touching them" | | 3 | "Isolde whispered, eyes still closed" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Nyx warned (warn)" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.231 | | leniency | 0.462 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.308 | |