Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRFYEFN38KT1JHG3G3S0WE

Run Details

Duration:
3m 37s
Cost:
$0.002326
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora’s boots crunched on gravel that glittered like crushed glass. She glanced back at Nyx, who moved without sound, their shadowy form shifting between solid and smoke. Isolde walked ahead, her slender shape almost floating above the ground, leaving no footprints. They had passed through a shimmer in the air, a ripple in reality that tasted of ozone and damp earth. One step in Richmond Park, the next here—wherever here was. The sky was the color of warm amber, stretched taut like a dome of honeyed resin. No sun hung in it. No clouds drifted. The light came from everywhere at once, gentle and diffuse, painting the landscape in shades of gold and copper. Stone columns rose around them, carved with intricate designs that writhed if she stared too long—vines and leaves and strange, twisting creatures. The columns framed a path paved with smooth slate tiles, almost like a ruins courtyard. “The entrance has changed.” Isolde’s voice was musical, but there was strain beneath it. “Time distorts this place. That archway”—she gestured to a crumbled stone arch overgrown with what looked like jade vines—“once held runic wards. Now it’s rubble.” Aurora stepped closer, peered at the carvings on one of the intact columns. Up close, they looked less like deliberate patterns and more like natural textures, the stone itself having grown into these shapes. She brushed her fingers across its surface. Warm. Not sun-warmed—intimate warmth, like skin. She jerked her hand back. Nyx flowed forward, their violet eyes pulsing faintly. They passed a shadowy hand through the column, and for a moment Rory saw the silhouette of fingers seem to catch in the stone, as though touching something unseen. “This isn’t just stone,” Nyx murmured, their whispery voice drifting on air that smelled faintly of baking bread and crushed herbs. “It’s solidified memory.” “Careful.” Isolde glanced at them. “Do not linger in one place too long. The grove’s heart shifts. It tastes stillness.” They moved forward, the path sloping gently downward. The slate tiles gave way to a bed of moss so soft Rory’s boots sank half an inch with each step. Tiny flowers sprouted in the moss, luminous blue and purple blooms no bigger than her thumbnail, each pulsing with a soft inner light. Rory knelt, touched one. The flower curled away from her finger, petals closing protectively. “The flora here is older than human civilization,” Isolde said. “Some remember the first dawn.” Nyx bent near Rory, their smoky shape almost blending with the mossy darkness. “And they remember footsteps approaching. Listen.” Rory stilled. The air hummed. Not with insects, but with a bass vibration she could feel through the soles of her boots now she noticed it—a deep, resonant pulse, slow like a sleeping heart. She looked up. The path opened into an enormous clearing—a bowl nestled amidst low, rolling hills. In its center stood a colossal oak tree, its bark silver-grey, its branches sprawling like beams holding up the sky. Ripe fruits hung from it, each a different color—gems of ruby red, emerald green, sapphire blue. Beneath the tree, a circle of standing stones, ancient and weathered, their surfaces inscribed with swirling runes that glowed with a soft white light. But between the oak and the stones, something moved. Aurora squinted, her breath catching. Streams of something like liquid air flowed in lazy arcs, shimmering like heat haze. They coiled around each other, rippling with colors she couldn’t name—shades between silver and violet, hues that made her eyes ache. “The Veil is thin here,” Isolde breathed, her lavender eyes wide. “Thinner than anywhere else on Earth. That is the boundary itself.” Nyx solidified beside her, gazing at the phenomenon. “We should not be able to see it. It’s not meant to be visible to mortal eyes.” “The grove is more than ‘Fae-touched,’” Isolde murmured. “It’s a wound. A place where the realms bleed together.” Rory could feel it now—a faint tugging sensation behind her sternum, where the Heartstone pendant lay under her sweater. Warmth pulsed through the silver chain, keeping time with the slow vibration in the ground. She clutched the pendant through the fabric. “Is that why…?” “Possibly.” Isolde’s gaze felt like it could strip her soul bare. “The Heartstone originates in Hel. This place feels the resonance.” Rory stepped forward, leaving the moss and onto cool, damp grass that crunched like frost. As she approached the edge of the stone circle, the shimmering streams of the Veil shifted, coiling toward her as if sensing her presence. One tendril drifted close, passing through her forearm without contact. But she felt it—a sudden chill, a moment of dislocation, as if a part of her had been pulled somewhere else and just returned. “Don’t touch it,” Nyx warned, but their tone was curious rather than fearful. The standing stones glowed brighter as she neared, and the runes began to crawl across their surfaces, rearranging themselves. Every hair on her arms stood up. Static electricity, or magic, she couldn’t tell. She reached the first stone. Up close, she saw the runes weren’t carved, but grown—tiny threads of light moving like veins beneath stone skin. She reached out— “Wait.” Isolde’s voice rang sharp. Rory froze, fingers inches from the stone. “Look at your feet.” Rory glanced down. The grass around the stones wasn’t grass. It was a carpet of tiny, crystalline flowers, each petal faceted like cut glass. And they were wilting, turning grey and transparent beneath her boots. She took a hasty step back. The slight depression her foot had made in the mossy turf started to regenerate, the crushed crystalline petals righting themselves, regaining color. The stone’s runes calmed, slowing their frantic movement. “You’re mortal,” Isolde said softly. “Your life is brief. This place is ancient. It reacts… violently to that transience.” Nyx flowed closer, studying the stones. “But the Fae can walk here?” “Fae are ageless. We don’t decay. We don’t change in the same way.” Isolde gestured around them. “This grove exists outside of time’s arrow. Mortals bring linearity with them. It disrupts the balance.” Unease coiled in Rory’s stomach. “So I’m poisoning it just by being here?” “Not poisoning.” Isolde’s expression softened. “You’re a catalyst. You induce a state of… flux.” A breeze swept through the clearing, carrying the scent of spices and blooming night-blooms. It rustled the silver leaves of the great oak. Something chimed—a faint, crystalline sound that seemed to come from everywhere, echoing the vibration underfoot. “Listen,” Nyx whispered. The chime repeated, three times, fading with each strike. Then— Voices. Faint, ghostly echoes, whispers in languages Rory didn’t recognize. She caught fragments—a lilting Fae tongue, guttural demonic syllables, and… English. Smatterings of English, fractured and out of order. “…the ritual must not…” “…shard of the sunstone…” “…between the shadow and the…” Rory strained to listen, but the whispers dissipated like smoke, leaving only the hum. Isolde looked pale, her silver hair stirring in the windless air. “Echoes of conversations that haven’t happened yet, or happened long ago. Time is fluid here.” Rory felt dizzy. The ground beneath her seemed to tilt, the amber sky swimming. The comforting pulse of the Heartstone now felt like a warning drumbeat. “What are we supposed to find here?” she asked, trying to ground herself in purpose. “Clarity.” Isolde knelt beside the crystalline flowers, not touching them. She closed her eyes, her lips moving silently. The flowers began to glow with soft, rhythmic light, like a heartbeat visible. Each pulse sent up tiny motes of light, sparkling dust that drifted toward the shimmering Veil streams. Where they touched, the streams thickened, solidifying into brief, shimmering shapes—figures moving, landscapes, flashes of faces Rory didn’t recognize. Then one shape crystallized, held for a second—a man with dark hair, standing in front of a city skyline Rory knew. London. The silhouette sharpened into Evan, her ex, his face twisted in a snarl she remembered well. The image flashed out. Rory flinched. Nyx’s form rippled, darkness swirling. “Memory. Or prophecy?” “Both,” Isolde whispered, eyes still closed. “The grove doesn’t distinguish.” Another pulse of light, another shape—a dark doorway, the red glow of demonic eyes, the glint of a blade— Rory recognized the Fae-forged dagger Isolde had given her. The image dissolved. The hum in the ground rose in pitch, turning from a vibration into a sound—a deep, resonant tone like a struck bell. The standing stones blazed. Isolde’s eyes snapped open, her lavender gaze locking onto Rory’s. “We must leave. Now.”
created_at"2026-02-19T10:52:51.539Z" 2/19/2026, 10:52:51 AM
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
46.15% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Isolde’s gaze felt like [like]"
1"Isolde said softly [softly]"
2"Isolde gestured around [around]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.154
93.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1430
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
5.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1430
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"intricate"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count4
5
word"amidst"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"resonance"
count1
8
word"chill"
count1
9
word"crystalline"
count4
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"echoes"
count2
13
word"fractured"
count1
14
word"comforting"
count1
15
word"rhythmic"
count1
16
word"crystallized"
count1
17
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"intricate"
1"warmth"
2"footsteps"
3"could feel"
4"pulse"
5"amidst"
6"pulsed"
7"resonance"
8"chill"
9"crystalline"
10"stomach"
11"echoing"
12"echoes"
13"fractured"
14"comforting"
15"rhythmic"
16"crystallized"
17"glint"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences108
matches(empty)
63.49% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences108
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"began to"
2"started to"
3"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1410
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1149
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.57
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Nyx9
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora3
Rory18
Isolde16
Heartstone2
Veil2
Unease1
Voices1
Fae2
English2
Evan1
Fae-forged1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Aurora"
2"Rory"
3"Isolde"
4"Veil"
5"Unease"
6"English"
7"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.717
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"as though touching something unseen"
1"something like liquid air flowed in lazy arc"
2"felt like it could strip her soul bare"
3"as if sensing her presence"
4"sound that seemed to come from everywhere, echoing the vibration underfoot"
5"felt like a warning drumbeat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.709
wordCount1410
matches
0"Not with insects, but with a bass vibration she could feel through the soles of he"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean20.74
std13.77
cv0.664
sampleLengths
041
130
243
337
439
541
66
75
837
924
1020
1152
1214
1315
1419
1534
163
1749
1824
199
205
2135
2222
2325
2418
2534
2610
2721
2839
2934
3013
3133
3227
335
347
354
3635
3728
388
3919
4012
4133
4213
4314
4438
453
4610
471
4828
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"been pulled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs204
matches
0"were wilting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences17
totalSentences131
ratio0.13
matches
0"One step in Richmond Park, the next here—wherever here was."
1"Stone columns rose around them, carved with intricate designs that writhed if she stared too long—vines and leaves and strange, twisting creatures."
2"Not with insects, but with a bass vibration she could feel through the soles of her boots now she noticed it—a deep, resonant pulse, slow like a sleeping heart."
3"The path opened into an enormous clearing—a bowl nestled amidst low, rolling hills."
4"Ripe fruits hung from it, each a different color—gems of ruby red, emerald green, sapphire blue."
5"They coiled around each other, rippling with colors she couldn’t name—shades between silver and violet, hues that made her eyes ache."
6"Rory could feel it now—a faint tugging sensation behind her sternum, where the Heartstone pendant lay under her sweater."
7"But she felt it—a sudden chill, a moment of dislocation, as if a part of her had been pulled somewhere else and just returned."
8"Up close, she saw the runes weren’t carved, but grown—tiny threads of light moving like veins beneath stone skin."
9"She reached out—"
10"Something chimed—a faint, crystalline sound that seemed to come from everywhere, echoing the vibration underfoot."
11"Then—"
12"She caught fragments—a lilting Fae tongue, guttural demonic syllables, and…"
13"Where they touched, the streams thickened, solidifying into brief, shimmering shapes—figures moving, landscapes, flashes of faces Rory didn’t recognize."
14"Then one shape crystallized, held for a second—a man with dark hair, standing in front of a city skyline Rory knew."
15"Another pulse of light, another shape—a dark doorway, the red glow of demonic eyes, the glint of a blade—"
16"The hum in the ground rose in pitch, turning from a vibration into a sound—a deep, resonant tone like a struck bell."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1169
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"sun-warmed-intimate warmth,"
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03592814371257485
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.006843455945252352
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean10.76
std6.71
cv0.623
sampleLengths
010
117
214
320
410
516
65
73
819
922
1015
1114
1225
1313
1421
157
161
175
185
198
2029
2121
223
235
2415
258
2621
2723
284
2910
3010
315
3213
336
342
353
3629
373
3813
3920
4016
4124
429
435
4414
4521
4611
4711
488
4917
71.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.46564885496183206
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners61
34.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"Then one shape crystallized, held"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences98
matches
0"She glanced back at Nyx,"
1"They had passed through a"
2"She brushed her fingers across"
3"She jerked her hand back."
4"They passed a shadowy hand"
5"They moved forward, the path"
6"She looked up."
7"They coiled around each other,"
8"She clutched the pendant through"
9"She reached the first stone."
10"She reached out—"
11"It was a carpet of"
12"She took a hasty step"
13"It rustled the silver leaves"
14"She caught fragments—a lilting Fae"
15"she asked, trying to ground"
16"She closed her eyes, her"
ratio0.173
56.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences98
matches
0"Aurora’s boots crunched on gravel"
1"She glanced back at Nyx,"
2"Isolde walked ahead, her slender"
3"They had passed through a"
4"The sky was the color"
5"The light came from everywhere"
6"Stone columns rose around them,"
7"The columns framed a path"
8"Isolde’s voice was musical, but"
9"Aurora stepped closer, peered at"
10"She brushed her fingers across"
11"She jerked her hand back."
12"Nyx flowed forward, their violet"
13"They passed a shadowy hand"
14"Nyx murmured, their whispery voice"
15"Isolde glanced at them"
16"They moved forward, the path"
17"The slate tiles gave way"
18"Rory knelt, touched one."
19"The flower curled away from"
ratio0.806
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.14% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"They passed a shadowy hand through the column, and for a moment Rory saw the silhouette of fingers seem to catch in the stone, as though touching something unse…"
1"In its center stood a colossal oak tree, its bark silver-grey, its branches sprawling like beams holding up the sky."
2"As she approached the edge of the stone circle, the shimmering streams of the Veil shifted, coiling toward her as if sensing her presence."
3"But she felt it—a sudden chill, a moment of dislocation, as if a part of her had been pulled somewhere else and just returned."
4"Something chimed—a faint, crystalline sound that seemed to come from everywhere, echoing the vibration underfoot."
5"Each pulse sent up tiny motes of light, sparkling dust that drifted toward the shimmering Veil streams."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Nyx warned, but their tone was curious rather than fearful"
1"she asked, trying to ground herself in purpose"
2"Isolde knelt, not touching them"
3"Isolde whispered, eyes still closed"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"Isolde breathed (breathe)"
2"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
3"Nyx warned (warn)"
4"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
5"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.308
69.6170%