Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRG0D3M76P01HTQ81PJ3Y0

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Duration:
22.7s
Cost:
$0.002086
Provider:
DeepInfra

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora's hand trembled as she reached for the doorknob. The hesitant knock had become a soft thud, and she knew who stood on the other side of the door. No one else bothered her at this ungodly hour. The peephole revealed a face she hadn't seen in months, yet the features remained etched in her mind. Lucien Moreau's platinum-blond hair was slicked back, revealing those unsettling heterochromatic eyes – one amber, one black. The eyes that had witnessed her at her most vulnerable. She took a deep breath and opened the door, the hinges creaking softly. "Aurora," Lucien said, his voice low and even. The French accent was subtle, but it sent a shiver down her spine. "What are you doing here?" she asked, trying to keep her tone neutral. The dim light of the hallway highlighted the sharp angles of his face, making him look like a creature of the night. Lucien offered a faint smile, his eyes crinkling at the corners. "I needed to see you." Rory's grip on the doorframe tightened. She had thought she'd prepared herself for this moment, but the flutter in her chest betrayed her. "It's late, Lucien. I was sleeping." His gaze drifted down, taking in her rumpled appearance. "I apologize. I didn't mean to wake you." The silence that followed was oppressive, filled with unspoken words and unresolved tension. Rory's mind racing with questions, she stepped aside, allowing Lucien to enter. As he passed her, the scent of expensive cologne and something else, something darker, wafted into her flat. The door closed behind him with a soft click, and Rory felt a sense of unease settle over her. This was the man who had witnessed her darkest moment, the man she'd thought she'd never see again. The man she'd been trying to forget. Lucien's eyes adjusted to the dim light, and he took in the small space. Rory's flat above Silas' bar was cozy, with books and odd trinkets scattered about. It was a sanctuary, one Lucien had never been invited to before. "Can I offer you a drink?" Rory asked, trying to sound casual despite the turmoil brewing inside her. Lucien nodded, his gaze lingering on the photographs and mementos on her shelves. "Water, please." As she busied herself in the kitchen, Lucien wandered over to the window, pushing aside the curtains to gaze out into the night. The city was alive, its sounds and lights a constant reminder that there was a world beyond this small, cramped space. Rory handed him a glass of water, their fingers touching briefly as he took it. The spark of electricity was still there, waiting to ignite the flames she thought she'd long extinguished. They stood in silence, the only sound the hum of the refrigerator and the distant thrum of the city. Rory's eyes were drawn to Lucien's profile, the sharp jawline and full lips. She had thought she was over him, that the wounds had healed. But as she looked at him, she realized the scars still lingered, tender to the touch. "What brings you here, Lucien?" she asked finally, her voice barely above a whisper. He turned to face her, his eyes locking onto hers. For a moment, they simply stared at each other, the air thick with unspoken words and unresolved tension. "I've come to apologize," Lucien said, his voice low and rough. "For what happened between us. For the way I left." Rory's heart skipped a beat. She had thought she'd never hear those words from him, that he'd never acknowledge the pain he'd caused. But as she looked into his eyes, she saw something there, something that gave her hope. "Why now?" she asked, her voice cautious. Lucien's gaze dropped, and he took a sip of his water. "I've had time to reflect on my actions. I realize I was... misguided." Rory raised an eyebrow. "Misguided?" Lucien's eyes flashed back to hers, a hint of a smile playing on his lips. "Perhaps that's not the right word. I was afraid, Aurora. Afraid of what I felt, of what could happen between us." The words hung in the air, a challenge and a promise. Rory's heart was racing now, her mind reeling with the implications. She had thought she was done with Lucien Moreau, that she'd never again fall prey to his charms. But as she looked at him, she realized she'd been lying to herself. She took a step closer, her voice barely above a whisper. "What do you feel now, Lucien?" The air seemed to vibrate with tension as Lucien's eyes locked onto hers. For a moment, they simply stared at each other, the only sound the beating of their hearts. And then, in a movement that seemed almost inevitable, Lucien reached out and brushed a strand of hair behind her ear. The touch sent shivers down her spine, and Rory knew she was lost.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she asked finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.133
81.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount818
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
1"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount818
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"trembled"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"down her spine"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"oppressive"
count1
5
word"unspoken"
count2
6
word"tension"
count3
7
word"racing"
count2
8
word"sense of"
count1
9
word"sanctuary"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count2
12
word"skipped a beat"
count1
13
word"eyebrow"
count1
14
word"sent shivers down"
count1
highlights
0"trembled"
1"etched"
2"down her spine"
3"silence"
4"oppressive"
5"unspoken"
6"tension"
7"racing"
8"sense of"
9"sanctuary"
10"reminder"
11"whisper"
12"skipped a beat"
13"eyebrow"
14"sent shivers down"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"a sense of unease"
1"hung in the air"
2"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences54
matches
0"a sense of unease"
89.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences54
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords818
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
44.66% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount712
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity2.11
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau2
French1
Lucien15
Rory11
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.447
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed almost inevitable Lucien reached out and brushed a strand of hair behind her ear"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount818
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean30.3
std17.07
cv0.563
sampleLengths
083
113
221
335
416
529
617
743
844
940
1018
1115
1244
1332
1460
1514
1628
1721
1839
197
2024
215
2236
2353
2417
2530
2634
85.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences54
matches
0"was slicked"
1"been invited"
2"were drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs125
matches
0"was racing"
97.51% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences63
ratio0.016
matches
0"Lucien Moreau's platinum-blond hair was slicked back, revealing those unsettling heterochromatic eyes – one amber, one black."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount344
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.020348837209302327
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.005813953488372093
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
95.59% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean12.98
std5.05
cv0.389
sampleLengths
09
120
29
318
417
510
613
78
813
913
1022
1111
125
136
1417
156
169
178
1813
1912
2018
2119
2218
237
2414
2514
2612
2718
2813
292
3023
3121
3215
3317
3419
3513
3612
3716
3814
3910
4018
4111
4210
435
4418
4516
467
4711
4813
494
58.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.3492063492063492
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences54
matches
0"She took a deep breath"
1"she asked, trying to keep"
2"She had thought she'd prepared"
3"His gaze drifted down, taking"
4"It was a sanctuary, one"
5"They stood in silence, the"
6"She had thought she was"
7"she asked finally, her voice"
8"He turned to face her,"
9"She had thought she'd never"
10"she asked, her voice cautious"
11"She had thought she was"
12"She took a step closer,"
ratio0.241
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences54
matches
0"Aurora's hand trembled as she"
1"The hesitant knock had become"
2"The peephole revealed a face"
3"Lucien Moreau's platinum-blond hair was"
4"The eyes that had witnessed"
5"She took a deep breath"
6"Lucien said, his voice low"
7"The French accent was subtle,"
8"she asked, trying to keep"
9"The dim light of the"
10"Lucien offered a faint smile,"
11"Rory's grip on the doorframe"
12"She had thought she'd prepared"
13"His gaze drifted down, taking"
14"The silence that followed was"
15"Rory's mind racing with questions,"
16"The door closed behind him"
17"This was the man who"
18"The man she'd been trying"
19"Lucien's eyes adjusted to the"
ratio0.833
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The silence that followed was oppressive, filled with unspoken words and unresolved tension."
1"Rory's mind racing with questions, she stepped aside, allowing Lucien to enter."
2"But as she looked into his eyes, she saw something there, something that gave her hope."
3"Rory's heart was racing now, her mind reeling with the implications."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Lucien said, his voice low and even"
1"she asked, trying to keep her tone neutral"
2"Rory asked, trying to sound casual despite the turmoil brewing inside her"
3"she asked finally, her voice barely above a whisper"
4"Lucien said, his voice low and rough"
5"she asked, her voice cautious"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.6034%