Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRG25CAGHTPME7X4VM4B72

Run Details

Duration:
25.0s
Cost:
$0.000553
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, pushed open the heavy door of The Raven's Nest. The distinctive green neon sign above the entrance hummed softly, a beacon in the dimly lit Soho night. Inside, the dim lights and old maps on the walls gave the place a timeless feel. She took a seat at the bar, where Silas, the bar owner, was wiping down the counter with a well-worn cloth. "Evening, Rory," Silas greeted, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners. "Usual?" She nodded, leaning back on her stool. "Yeah, thanks, Si." He nodded, setting a glass of whiskey in front of her. She took a sip, savoring the familiar burn. It was a ritual, her visits to The Raven's Nest, a place that felt more like home than any other in London. As she sipped her drink, the door creaked open again, and a woman walked in. Rory's heart skipped a beat. It was Eva, her old friend from Cardiff, the one who had urged her to leave everything behind and start afresh in London. Eva's blonde hair was cut shorter now, and her once vibrant eyes seemed a bit more subdued. But there was no mistaking that confident stride. "Eva," Rory breathed, nearly spilling her drink. Eva's face lit up, a smile breaking through the years. "Rory? Is that you?" She hurried over, and the two women embraced, a mixture of joy and awkwardness in the gesture. "God, it's been too long," Eva said, pulling back to look at Rory. "You look good." Rory managed a smile, though it didn't quite reach her eyes. "You too, Eva. What brings you to London?" Eva slid into the stool next to her. "I'm in town for a conference. I didn't expect to run into you here. How have you been?" Rory shrugged, her fingers tightening around the glass. "Same old, same old. Working at Yu-Fei's place, living above the bar. You know how it is." Eva nodded, her gaze drifting to the old maps on the walls. "It's been a tough few years for me, too. I moved to Manchester after everything. Got a new job, a new life. But sometimes, I can't help but think about the past." Silas placed a glass of wine in front of Eva, giving her a nod before returning to his duties. Rory watched her friend, sensing a depth of emotion she hadn't seen in a long time. "What's been the hardest part?" Rory asked, her voice gentle. Eva took a sip of her wine, her eyes distant. "Letting go. Moving on from the person I used to be. I used to be so ... fearless, you know? But now, I feel like I'm always looking over my shoulder. That's what the past does, it haunts you." Rory's fingers twitched on her glass. "I know what you mean. I thought leaving Cardiff would be the end of it, but some things just stick with you." Eva's eyes met Rory's, a shared understanding passing between them. "You did the right thing, leaving Evan. You deserve better than that." Rory nodded, a small smile forming. "Thanks, Eva. I needed to hear that." The two sat in companionable silence for a moment, the weight of unspoken words hanging between them. Silas appeared beside them, his presence comforting in its familiarity. "Everything okay, ladies?" he asked, his voice low and steady. "We're fine, Si," Rory assured him. "Just catching up." Silas nodded, giving them a knowing look before moving to assist another patron. Eva leaned in closer, her voice soft. "I should have come to see you sooner. I just ... I didn't know what to say, after everything that happened." Rory sighed, her eyes drifting to the map of Wales behind the bar. "It's okay, Eva. We both had a lot to deal with. I guess we just lost touch." Eva nodded, her fingers playing with the stem of her glass. "I wish we could go back to the way things were. Before everything fell apart." Rory shook her head, a bitter laugh escaping her lips. "We can't, Eva. But we can make new memories, new paths. We're both stronger now, and that's something to be proud of." Eva's eyes welled up, but she blinked back the tears. "You're right. We can't change the past, but we can move forward. Together, if you want." Rory smiled, a genuine one this time. "I'd like that." They clinked glasses, a toast to the future, to the possibility of healing and new beginnings. The weight of the past still lingered, but for now, they were just two old friends, reunited in a place that felt like a sanctuary. Silas watched them from across the bar, a small smile on his face. Some wounds took time to heal, but the bonds of friendship were strong. He raised his glass in a silent salute, the rattle of the bar's old neon sign a steady rhythm in the background.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.28
leniency0.56
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount828
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.65% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount828
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"beacon"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"skipped a beat"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"unspoken"
count1
6
word"comforting"
count1
7
word"sanctuary"
count1
highlights
0"beacon"
1"familiar"
2"skipped a beat"
3"silence"
4"weight"
5"unspoken"
6"comforting"
7"sanctuary"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of unspoken words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences45
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords828
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount546
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.75
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory15
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Silas6
London2
Eva12
Cardiff1
Wales1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Raven"
3"Silas"
4"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Wales"
globalScore0.126
windowScore0
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite reach her eyes"
1"appeared beside them, his presence comforting in its familiarity"
2"felt like a sanctuary"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount828
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean27.6
std16.46
cv0.596
sampleLengths
072
112
210
341
468
57
631
716
819
926
1025
1144
1235
1310
1449
1528
1622
1713
1827
1910
209
2113
2228
2330
2426
2532
2626
2710
2841
2948
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs85
matches
0"was wiping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences63
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount547
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.025594149908592323
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.005484460694698354
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean13.14
std7.08
cv0.539
sampleLengths
017
118
216
321
411
51
67
73
811
98
1022
1115
125
1323
1417
158
167
1710
1821
1913
203
2111
228
238
2418
258
2617
2712
2832
2919
3016
3110
3210
3339
346
3522
3610
3712
386
397
4017
4110
4210
436
443
4513
467
4721
4813
4917
67.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4126984126984127
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences45
matches
0"She took a seat at"
1"She nodded, leaning back on"
2"He nodded, setting a glass"
3"She took a sip, savoring"
4"It was a ritual, her"
5"It was Eva, her old"
6"She hurried over, and the"
7"he asked, his voice low"
8"They clinked glasses, a toast"
9"He raised his glass in"
ratio0.222
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences45
matches
0"Aurora Carter, known to her"
1"The distinctive green neon sign"
2"She took a seat at"
3"Silas greeted, his hazel eyes"
4"She nodded, leaning back on"
5"He nodded, setting a glass"
6"She took a sip, savoring"
7"It was a ritual, her"
8"Rory's heart skipped a beat."
9"It was Eva, her old"
10"Eva's blonde hair was cut"
11"Rory breathed, nearly spilling her"
12"Eva's face lit up, a"
13"She hurried over, and the"
14"Eva said, pulling back to"
15"Rory managed a smile, though"
16"Eva slid into the stool"
17"Rory shrugged, her fingers tightening"
18"Eva nodded, her gaze drifting"
19"Silas placed a glass of"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Silas greeted, his hazel eyes crinkling at the corners"
1"Rory asked, her voice gentle"
2"he asked, his voice low and steady"
70.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory breathed (breathe)"
1"Rory assured (assure)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.16
75.8936%