Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRG291DYRF52HC3E7PM40C

Run Details

Model:
GPT-4.1
Duration:
51.9s
Cost:
$0.018734
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
A gust of wind carried the scent of crushed wildflowers and damp earth as Aurora Carter pushed her way past the last tangle of brambles. Sunlight cracked through the leaves ahead, gold spilling bright across the moss at her feet. Someone’s laugh rang through the trees—a nervous bubble of sound, hers—but it faded almost instantly, stifled by the hush hanging beyond. "They said it would be obvious," she muttered, glancing over her shoulder. The Heartstone pendant at her neck pressed cool against her skin, beating with a soft heat of its own. She thumbed it—a jitter she couldn’t shake since setting foot in Richmond Park. "Obvious things wear strange hats in the Afterplaces," Nyx murmured. Their voice crept along the shadows—quiet, half there—like they belonged more to the gloom than among leaves, dark form shifting as if stitched out of the dappled light itself. Aurora squinted ahead. The trees arched, impossibly old, their trunks wide enough for three people to link arms around. Somewhere above, birds called in unfamiliar notes, trilling silver melodies that made her toes itch with nerves. The tall grass melted into a clearing. There—scattered in an uneven circle—stood a cluster of ancient oaks, their bark gnarled into knotwork patterns, each tree leaning with purpose. No matter which way she turned, the stones seemed always one step ahead. Petals speckled the moss beneath, sapphire and gold and pale translucent pink. The air pressed heavy, thick with the sweetness of unseen nectar. Aurora breathed out, slow. The world beyond the standing oaks shimmered—distorted, like glass smeared with oil. "Doesn’t feel…open," she whispered. The air tingled against her arms, hairs standing sharp. "Am I the only one—?" Nyx slipped past, violet eyes flickering like coals behind a mask. "You feel the difference. The Grove likes to watch strangers from behind its lashes." Their arm, shadow-thin and less than solid, flicked toward the leftmost stone. "Let it see you, that’s the way." She stepped closer. Each pace tugged at something below her ribs, a pulse the same rhythm as the stone’s glow in moonlight: steady, patient, ancient. Her trainers rustled against scented moss. Stray sunlight bent as she crossed the threshold; the air flashed cold, then tasted of green apples and something old as starlight. Her mouth dried. "Did you see that?" She pressed a hand to her chest. "Everything just—shifted." "The Grove folds," Nyx answered, settling beside her. Their outline ran thin, legs vanishing into blackness where shadows pooled. "What’s flat elsewhere curls here." Something small darted through the undergrowth—a hare with fur the silver of cut frosts, ears flicking, nose twitching as it regarded Aurora with golden eyes. In one glance, she felt seen through and accepted, all the same. The animal vanished, leaving a ripple in the air where it had passed. She turned a slow circle. Wildflowers danced in breezeless air; petals spun upward, tumbling in slow drifting spirals. The standing stones thrummed—a sound more felt than heard, making her teeth ache faintly with resonance. Aurora swallowed. "Isolde?" No answer at first, only the whisper of leaves. She edged around one of the stones. Its carvings sank deep, spirals crawling down into the moss. Up close, she saw pale green fireflies, drifting lazily, gathering wherever her shadow fell. Nyx stood at her shoulder, chin raised, expression unreadable. They stretched an arm, fingertips trailing through a tendril of mist. "We are guests. Let’s move gently." As if in response, a sudden trill swept through the clearing—notes sharp, high, and shivering along Aurora’s nerves. She half-jumped, hand darting to the pendant at her throat. The warmth beat steady, urging her deeper. She pushed down uncertainty and moved in. The sunlight inside the ring felt different—sharper, denser. Where it touched her skin, colour shimmered in patterns she couldn’t name, violet and green and opal. Every footfall sounded muffled, as if the ground drank the sound greedily. A tangle of roots, strung with bright flowers and thick as her wrists, curled beneath one massive oak—a sort of archway half-swallowed by undergrowth. She knelt, running her fingers over a petal, surprised by its coolness—like touching a drop of moonlight. Behind her, Nyx drifted silent, form blurring at the edges. She passed under the arch. Everything muffled, then spun. A thrill—lightness, the sensation of being flipped inside out—washed straight to her bones. She stumbled sideways, caught herself against hard bark. The tree pulsed beneath her palm: alive, aware. A clearing revealed itself past that arch, wider than she’d first seen. Rings within rings, each ring of ancient oak marked with pale fungus blooms. In the centre, beside a pool that reflected no sky, stood a woman draped in argent silk, hair loose in a tremulous silver curtain. "Welcome, children of elsewhere," the woman intoned, eyes the colour of gathering twilight. She trailed one hand through mist rising off the pool’s surface—mist that never strayed farther than her reach. Aurora took three quick steps into open ground, fighting to keep her breathing even. The pendant burned against her skin, its pulse nearly frantic. "Are— You’re Isolde? The Seer?" The woman’s smile curved sideways, not quite touching her eyes. "Names are like wind through yew. You seek a thing buried under the bark." Nyx’s posture stilled, their form turning sharper, closer to silhouette than human. They dipped their head, a subtle bow. Aurora paused. She felt the weight of magic in the air—taste of copper under her tongue, tang as clear as lightning. The Grove pressed in around her. "You… live here?" Her voice rang too loud by half, each syllable rebounding strangely. Isolde’s eyes flickered. "Some live. Some remain, root-bound. My exile grows tall." She stood motionless but for the faint ripple of fabric around her feet. Aurora looked toward the water. The pool was unbroken obsidian, reflecting not herself, but a version two years younger, bruised, wild-eyed, standing somewhere rain-scoured. The sight punched the air from her lungs. She knelt beside the surface, reached a trembling hand close—heat spilled from her pendant, painting her palm ruby-red. Nyx held back, hover-limned at the clearing’s edge. Isolde’s gaze slid sideways, voice light as reeds: "See how the heart pulls. Not all stones must be turned." Aurora jerked her hand away. The image on the water blinked out; she met her own face again, ordinary and scarred. Her hand drifted to the Fae-forged blade sheathed against her belt. She hadn’t noticed its glow—subtle, but undeniable, a radiance warding off the worst of the Grove’s strangeness. "Is this..." Her voice stuck. She felt a thread of something sharp, thrumming under everything. "Is this what it’s like for you? All this…watching, remembering?" Isolde’s smile softened to a knife-edge. "The Grove never forgets." She turned, stepping across the water’s edge; her feet left no ring, no ripple. "Here, time grows wild and tangled—like hair left to the storm." A sudden wind swept through, rattling the ring of standing oaks. Petals erupted in whorls, tracing swirling paths around Aurora’s head. She breathed in, mouth full of scents she had no names for—summer thunder, wet iron, honey thick on the tongue. Nyx finally crossed into the open, their form taking on clearer substance. Their voice clung to the air: "You keep many stories here, Seer." Isolde’s pale eyes darted up and down Nyx’s shifting outline. "Every root is a memory. What do your roots recall, shadowkin?" A low hum passed through Nyx. Shadows writhed at their feet. "Long hunger. Loss. Music in the dark, now spent." Isolde traced a glyph in the air. Aurora flinched as the outline shivered with silver light, coiling into the shape of a key. It drifted toward her—a test, a greeting, or both. The world seemed to shrink around the trio: standing stones bright as bone, oaks humming, the pond glinting obsidian. Birds spun edgewise overhead, their calls layered in harmonies. Aurora stepped back, pulse hammering. The Grove watched. The Grove waited. She forced herself to meet Isolde’s gaze, aware of the pressure of the pendant, the knife, the silent presence of Nyx. Old magic coiled beneath the green, expectant, hungry for what the newcomers would give, or take, or become.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her voice rang too [too]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.48
leniency0.96
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.08
92.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1386
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1386
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count3
4
word"resonance"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"footfall"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"silk"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
13
word"tracing"
count1
14
word"traced"
count1
15
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"shimmered"
2"flicked"
3"pulse"
4"resonance"
5"whisper"
6"unreadable"
7"warmth"
8"footfall"
9"pulsed"
10"silk"
11"weight"
12"flickered"
13"tracing"
14"traced"
15"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1356
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.56% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1194
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora13
Carter1
Heartstone1
Richmond1
Park1
Nyx11
Grove4
Isolde6
Fae-forged1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Nyx"
3"Grove"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae-forged"
globalScore0.956
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite touching her eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.737
wordCount1356
matches
0"not herself, but a version two years younger, bruised, wild-eyed, standing so"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
94.42% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean29.48
std14.16
cv0.48
sampleLengths
061
144
239
336
464
516
618
744
853
916
1024
1150
1234
133
149
1531
1626
1735
1844
1941
2010
2138
2249
2331
2424
255
2624
2719
2827
2914
3025
3132
3218
338
3419
3521
3628
3725
3835
3941
4024
4121
4220
4332
4428
4550
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"being flipped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs207
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount22
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences22
totalSentences118
ratio0.186
matches
0"Someone’s laugh rang through the trees—a nervous bubble of sound, hers—but it faded almost instantly, stifled by the hush hanging beyond."
1"She thumbed it—a jitter she couldn’t shake since setting foot in Richmond Park."
2"Their voice crept along the shadows—quiet, half there—like they belonged more to the gloom than among leaves, dark form shifting as if stitched out of the dappled light itself."
3"There—scattered in an uneven circle—stood a cluster of ancient oaks, their bark gnarled into knotwork patterns, each tree leaning with purpose."
4"The world beyond the standing oaks shimmered—distorted, like glass smeared with oil."
5"Stray sunlight bent as she crossed the threshold; the air flashed cold, then tasted of green apples and something old as starlight."
6"Something small darted through the undergrowth—a hare with fur the silver of cut frosts, ears flicking, nose twitching as it regarded Aurora with golden eyes."
7"Wildflowers danced in breezeless air; petals spun upward, tumbling in slow drifting spirals."
8"The standing stones thrummed—a sound more felt than heard, making her teeth ache faintly with resonance."
9"As if in response, a sudden trill swept through the clearing—notes sharp, high, and shivering along Aurora’s nerves."
10"The sunlight inside the ring felt different—sharper, denser."
11"A tangle of roots, strung with bright flowers and thick as her wrists, curled beneath one massive oak—a sort of archway half-swallowed by undergrowth."
12"She knelt, running her fingers over a petal, surprised by its coolness—like touching a drop of moonlight."
13"A thrill—lightness, the sensation of being flipped inside out—washed straight to her bones."
14"She trailed one hand through mist rising off the pool’s surface—mist that never strayed farther than her reach."
15"She felt the weight of magic in the air—taste of copper under her tongue, tang as clear as lightning."
16"She knelt beside the surface, reached a trembling hand close—heat spilled from her pendant, painting her palm ruby-red."
17"The image on the water blinked out; she met her own face again, ordinary and scarred."
18"She hadn’t noticed its glow—subtle, but undeniable, a radiance warding off the worst of the Grove’s strangeness."
19"\"The Grove never forgets.\" She turned, stepping across the water’s edge; her feet left no ring, no ripple."
20"She breathed in, mouth full of scents she had no names for—summer thunder, wet iron, honey thick on the tongue."
21"It drifted toward her—a test, a greeting, or both."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1222
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.02618657937806874
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007364975450081833
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean11.49
std6.14
cv0.534
sampleLengths
025
115
221
312
419
513
610
729
83
916
1017
117
1221
1313
1412
1511
164
1712
184
199
205
2111
2226
237
243
2522
266
2722
283
2911
302
318
3211
335
3425
3512
3613
375
3813
3916
402
411
429
437
4410
4514
469
4711
486
4918
64.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3983050847457627
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners47
32.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences102
matches
0"Somewhere above, birds called in"
ratio0.01
90.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences102
matches
0"she muttered, glancing over her"
1"She thumbed it—a jitter she"
2"Their voice crept along the"
3"Their arm, shadow-thin and less"
4"She stepped closer."
5"Her trainers rustled against scented"
6"Her mouth dried."
7"She pressed a hand to"
8"Their outline ran thin, legs"
9"She turned a slow circle."
10"She edged around one of"
11"Its carvings sank deep, spirals"
12"They stretched an arm, fingertips"
13"She half-jumped, hand darting to"
14"She pushed down uncertainty and"
15"She knelt, running her fingers"
16"She passed under the arch."
17"She stumbled sideways, caught herself"
18"She trailed one hand through"
19"They dipped their head, a"
ratio0.324
18.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences102
matches
0"A gust of wind carried"
1"Sunlight cracked through the leaves"
2"Someone’s laugh rang through the"
3"she muttered, glancing over her"
4"The Heartstone pendant at her"
5"She thumbed it—a jitter she"
6"Their voice crept along the"
7"Aurora squinted ahead."
8"The trees arched, impossibly old,"
9"The tall grass melted into"
10"There—scattered in an uneven circle—stood"
11"Petals speckled the moss beneath,"
12"The air pressed heavy, thick"
13"Aurora breathed out, slow."
14"The world beyond the standing"
15"The air tingled against her"
16"Nyx slipped past, violet eyes"
17"Their arm, shadow-thin and less"
18"She stepped closer."
19"Each pace tugged at something"
ratio0.882
98.04% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences102
matches
0"No matter which way she"
1"As if in response, a"
ratio0.02
81.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Their voice crept along the shadows—quiet, half there—like they belonged more to the gloom than among leaves, dark form shifting as if stitched out of the dappl…"
1"Somewhere above, birds called in unfamiliar notes, trilling silver melodies that made her toes itch with nerves."
2"As if in response, a sudden trill swept through the clearing—notes sharp, high, and shivering along Aurora’s nerves."
3"She knelt, running her fingers over a petal, surprised by its coolness—like touching a drop of moonlight."
4"In the centre, beside a pool that reflected no sky, stood a woman draped in argent silk, hair loose in a tremulous silver curtain."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Her voice rang too, each syllable rebounding strangely"
1"Isolde’s gaze slid, voice light as reeds:"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.32
81.3996%