| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice rang too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.48 | | leniency | 0.96 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.08 | |
| 92.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1386 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.46% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1386 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "flicked" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "resonance" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "unreadable" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "footfall" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "silk" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "tracing" | | 14 | "traced" | | 15 | "glinting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1356 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.56% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 1194 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.09 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 13 | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Grove | 4 | | Isolde | 6 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae-forged" |
| | globalScore | 0.956 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite touching her eyes" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.737 | | wordCount | 1356 | | matches | | 0 | "not herself, but a version two years younger, bruised, wild-eyed, standing so" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.42% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 29.48 | | std | 14.16 | | cv | 0.48 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 64 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 50 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 21 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 35 | | 39 | 41 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 32 | | 44 | 28 | | 45 | 50 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 207 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 22 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 22 | | totalSentences | 118 | | ratio | 0.186 | | matches | | 0 | "Someone’s laugh rang through the trees—a nervous bubble of sound, hers—but it faded almost instantly, stifled by the hush hanging beyond." | | 1 | "She thumbed it—a jitter she couldn’t shake since setting foot in Richmond Park." | | 2 | "Their voice crept along the shadows—quiet, half there—like they belonged more to the gloom than among leaves, dark form shifting as if stitched out of the dappled light itself." | | 3 | "There—scattered in an uneven circle—stood a cluster of ancient oaks, their bark gnarled into knotwork patterns, each tree leaning with purpose." | | 4 | "The world beyond the standing oaks shimmered—distorted, like glass smeared with oil." | | 5 | "Stray sunlight bent as she crossed the threshold; the air flashed cold, then tasted of green apples and something old as starlight." | | 6 | "Something small darted through the undergrowth—a hare with fur the silver of cut frosts, ears flicking, nose twitching as it regarded Aurora with golden eyes." | | 7 | "Wildflowers danced in breezeless air; petals spun upward, tumbling in slow drifting spirals." | | 8 | "The standing stones thrummed—a sound more felt than heard, making her teeth ache faintly with resonance." | | 9 | "As if in response, a sudden trill swept through the clearing—notes sharp, high, and shivering along Aurora’s nerves." | | 10 | "The sunlight inside the ring felt different—sharper, denser." | | 11 | "A tangle of roots, strung with bright flowers and thick as her wrists, curled beneath one massive oak—a sort of archway half-swallowed by undergrowth." | | 12 | "She knelt, running her fingers over a petal, surprised by its coolness—like touching a drop of moonlight." | | 13 | "A thrill—lightness, the sensation of being flipped inside out—washed straight to her bones." | | 14 | "She trailed one hand through mist rising off the pool’s surface—mist that never strayed farther than her reach." | | 15 | "She felt the weight of magic in the air—taste of copper under her tongue, tang as clear as lightning." | | 16 | "She knelt beside the surface, reached a trembling hand close—heat spilled from her pendant, painting her palm ruby-red." | | 17 | "The image on the water blinked out; she met her own face again, ordinary and scarred." | | 18 | "She hadn’t noticed its glow—subtle, but undeniable, a radiance warding off the worst of the Grove’s strangeness." | | 19 | "\"The Grove never forgets.\" She turned, stepping across the water’s edge; her feet left no ring, no ripple." | | 20 | "She breathed in, mouth full of scents she had no names for—summer thunder, wet iron, honey thick on the tongue." | | 21 | "It drifted toward her—a test, a greeting, or both." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1222 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.02618657937806874 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007364975450081833 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 118 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 118 | | mean | 11.49 | | std | 6.14 | | cv | 0.534 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 64.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.3983050847457627 | | totalSentences | 118 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 32.68% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere above, birds called in" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 90.59% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, glancing over her" | | 1 | "She thumbed it—a jitter she" | | 2 | "Their voice crept along the" | | 3 | "Their arm, shadow-thin and less" | | 4 | "She stepped closer." | | 5 | "Her trainers rustled against scented" | | 6 | "Her mouth dried." | | 7 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 8 | "Their outline ran thin, legs" | | 9 | "She turned a slow circle." | | 10 | "She edged around one of" | | 11 | "Its carvings sank deep, spirals" | | 12 | "They stretched an arm, fingertips" | | 13 | "She half-jumped, hand darting to" | | 14 | "She pushed down uncertainty and" | | 15 | "She knelt, running her fingers" | | 16 | "She passed under the arch." | | 17 | "She stumbled sideways, caught herself" | | 18 | "She trailed one hand through" | | 19 | "They dipped their head, a" |
| | ratio | 0.324 | |
| 18.82% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 90 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "A gust of wind carried" | | 1 | "Sunlight cracked through the leaves" | | 2 | "Someone’s laugh rang through the" | | 3 | "she muttered, glancing over her" | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant at her" | | 5 | "She thumbed it—a jitter she" | | 6 | "Their voice crept along the" | | 7 | "Aurora squinted ahead." | | 8 | "The trees arched, impossibly old," | | 9 | "The tall grass melted into" | | 10 | "There—scattered in an uneven circle—stood" | | 11 | "Petals speckled the moss beneath," | | 12 | "The air pressed heavy, thick" | | 13 | "Aurora breathed out, slow." | | 14 | "The world beyond the standing" | | 15 | "The air tingled against her" | | 16 | "Nyx slipped past, violet eyes" | | 17 | "Their arm, shadow-thin and less" | | 18 | "She stepped closer." | | 19 | "Each pace tugged at something" |
| | ratio | 0.882 | |
| 98.04% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "No matter which way she" | | 1 | "As if in response, a" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 81.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Their voice crept along the shadows—quiet, half there—like they belonged more to the gloom than among leaves, dark form shifting as if stitched out of the dappl…" | | 1 | "Somewhere above, birds called in unfamiliar notes, trilling silver melodies that made her toes itch with nerves." | | 2 | "As if in response, a sudden trill swept through the clearing—notes sharp, high, and shivering along Aurora’s nerves." | | 3 | "She knelt, running her fingers over a petal, surprised by its coolness—like touching a drop of moonlight." | | 4 | "In the centre, beside a pool that reflected no sky, stood a woman draped in argent silk, hair loose in a tremulous silver curtain." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Her voice rang too, each syllable rebounding strangely" | | 1 | "Isolde’s gaze slid, voice light as reeds:" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "She pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.8 | | effectiveRatio | 0.32 | |