Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRG492EGDZ9JAMHZYDWTB4

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Duration:
7.9s
Cost:
$0.000244

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest flickered weakly as Rory pushed open the door, the bell above it jingling like a warning. The air inside was thick with the scent of aged whiskey and something sharper—gun oil, maybe, or the faint metallic tang of old secrets. She’d come in early, before the usual rush, to avoid Silas’s sharp eyes. But the place wasn’t empty. A figure sat in the corner booth, hunched over a glass, the dim light catching the silver in his hair. His back was to her, but she knew that posture—broad shoulders, the way he held himself like he was waiting for something to break. Rory hesitated. She hadn’t seen him in years. Not since the night he’d walked away without a word, not since the last time she’d been stupid enough to trust the wrong man. But then he turned his head, just slightly, and the light caught his face. His jaw was sharper now, the lines around his eyes deeper. He looked older. Worse. “Christ,” she muttered, stepping back before he could see her. “Rory.” His voice was rough, like he hadn’t used it in a while. She turned, pressing herself against the wall outside the door, heart hammering. He stood, slow and deliberate, his left leg giving a slight hitch. The old knee, she remembered. The one that had ruined his career. “You’re not supposed to be here,” she said, voice tight. He laughed, low and without humour. “Neither are you.” She didn’t move. “I’m just delivering a package.” “For Silas.” She swallowed. “Yeah.” He studied her for a long moment, his hazel eyes darkening. “You look like hell.” She bristled. “And you look like you’ve been drinking.” “Every night.” The words hung between them, heavy. She knew what that meant. She’d seen it before—men who drank to forget, who drowned themselves in bottles because the world had given them too many reasons to hate it. But this wasn’t about her. Not yet. “Why are you here?” she asked, voice steady despite the way her hands were shaking. He tilted his head, considering. “You first.” She exhaled through her nose. “I live above Silas’s place. I deliver for him. That’s it.” “Bullshit.” She flinched. “What do you want, *Evan*?” His name on her lips was like a punch to the gut. He flinched too, but not from pain. From something worse—recognition. “I didn’t know you remembered.” “How could I forget?” A muscle twitched in his jaw. “You look good.” She rolled her eyes. “I’m not here to discuss my appearance.” “No.” He took a step closer, the scent of whiskey and something else—cigarette smoke, maybe—filling her nose. “I’m here because I heard you were back. In the city. Working for Silas.” Her stomach twisted. “How’d you know that?” “Sources.” She laughed, sharp and bitter. “Of course you do.” He didn’t answer. Just watched her, like he was trying to memorise every line of her face, every way her fingers curled at her sides. “What do you want?” she repeated. He reached into his coat, pulled out a folded piece of paper. “I found this in my old flat. Thought you might want it back.” She took it, unfolding it slowly. It was a letter, written in her own handwriting, dated years ago. She recognised the stationery—Evan’s. The words blurred as she read: *I’m sorry. I don’t know what I was thinking. I’ll fix this. I promise.* Her hands trembled. “Where did you get this?” “From your ex.” She looked up, eyes burning. “What?” “Evan. He left it for me when he moved out. Said he thought you’d want it back.” She crumpled the paper in her fist. “You’re lying.” “Am I?” She didn’t answer. She couldn’t. He stepped closer, his voice dropping to a whisper. “You really think I’d come all this way just to hand you a letter?” She didn’t move. Didn’t breathe. “You were always so clever, Rory. Always saw through the bullshit. But you left it all behind, didn’t you? Just like that.” She swallowed hard. “What do you want?” He smirked, but it didn’t reach his eyes. “The same thing I always wanted. You.” She laughed, hollow and broken. “You’re delusional.” “Am I?” He reached out, brushing a strand of hair from her face. His fingers were rough, calloused. “You still look at me like that. Like you remember.” She jerked away. “I don’t remember anything about you.” He laughed, low and bitter. “Liar.” She turned, pressing her back against the wall. “Get out.” “Not until you tell me why you’re really here.” She met his gaze, her voice steady despite the way her heart was pounding. “I’m not here for you.” “Then why?” She hesitated. “I need a job.” He raised an eyebrow. “You always were good at playing the long game.” She ignored the jab. “I need money. And I need to stay under the radar.” He studied her for a long moment, then nodded slowly. “Fine. But you work for me.” “What?” “You heard me. You work for me.” She shook her head. “No.” “Yes.” She opened her mouth to argue, but he held up a hand. “Think about it. You need the money. And I need someone I can trust.” She scoffed. “You don’t trust anyone.” “That’s not true.” She looked away, her stomach twisting. “What do you want me to do?” He smiled, slow and dangerous. “Just be here when I need you.” She exhaled sharply. “When?” “Tonight.” She nodded, her throat tight. “Tonight.” He reached into his coat again, this time pulling out a key. “Here. This is the back door. It’s not locked.” She took the key, her fingers brushing against his. “What’s the catch?” He smirked. “There’s always a catch.” She didn’t ask what it was. She didn’t need to. He turned, walking towards the door. “See you tonight, Rory.” She watched him go, her heart pounding in her chest. She didn’t know what she was walking into, but she knew one thing—she was in too deep already.
total_cost0.00024380000000000002

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.092
leniency0.185
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
70.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1016
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"really"
3"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1016
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count2
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"pounding"
count2
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"stomach"
2"trembled"
3"whisper"
4"pounding"
5"eyebrow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences149
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords15
totalWords1008
ratio0.015
matches
0"Evan"
1"I’m sorry. I don’t know what I was thinking. I’ll fix this. I promise."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions6
wordCount679
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.29
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory2
Silas1
Evan1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1008
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences149
matches
0"knew that posture"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean13.44
std15.67
cv1.166
sampleLengths
0110
161
210
31
448
510
69
78
82
93
1015
119
122
1343
1415
157
1616
171
187
1927
204
219
2211
2331
247
251
269
2725
286
2925
3028
3114
328
333
346
3517
369
372
385
3923
405
4122
427
4315
447
4528
469
476
4810
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs149
matches
0"was waiting"
1"were shaking"
2"was trying"
3"was thinking"
4"was pounding"
5"was walking"
8.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences149
ratio0.047
matches
0"The air inside was thick with the scent of aged whiskey and something sharper—gun oil, maybe, or the faint metallic tang of old secrets."
1"His back was to her, but she knew that posture—broad shoulders, the way he held himself like he was waiting for something to break."
2"She’d seen it before—men who drank to forget, who drowned themselves in bottles because the world had given them too many reasons to hate it."
3"From something worse—recognition."
4"“No.” He took a step closer, the scent of whiskey and something else—cigarette smoke, maybe—filling her nose."
5"She recognised the stationery—Evan’s."
6"She didn’t know what she was walking into, but she knew one thing—she was in too deep already."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount687
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.034934497816593885
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008733624454148471
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences149
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences149
mean6.77
std5.57
cv0.823
sampleLengths
024
124
213
35
420
524
62
76
824
914
1011
113
121
1310
141
1512
1612
1712
185
197
2010
216
223
233
245
252
262
271
2811
294
302
317
322
336
345
3525
365
372
3815
395
402
415
4211
431
442
455
4612
477
483
495
43.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.2953020134228188
totalSentences149
uniqueOpeners44
43.86% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"Just watched her, like he"
ratio0.013
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount62
totalSentences76
matches
0"She’d come in early, before"
1"His back was to her,"
2"She hadn’t seen him in"
3"His jaw was sharper now,"
4"He looked older."
5"she muttered, stepping back before"
6"His voice was rough, like"
7"She turned, pressing herself against"
8"He stood, slow and deliberate,"
9"she said, voice tight"
10"He laughed, low and without"
11"She didn’t move."
12"He studied her for a"
13"She knew what that meant."
14"She’d seen it before—men who"
15"she asked, voice steady despite"
16"He tilted his head, considering."
17"She exhaled through her nose."
18"His name on her lips"
19"He flinched too, but not"
ratio0.816
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences76
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"The air inside was thick"
2"She’d come in early, before"
3"A figure sat in the"
4"His back was to her,"
5"She hadn’t seen him in"
6"His jaw was sharper now,"
7"He looked older."
8"she muttered, stepping back before"
9"His voice was rough, like"
10"She turned, pressing herself against"
11"He stood, slow and deliberate,"
12"The old knee, she remembered."
13"The one that had ruined"
14"she said, voice tight"
15"He laughed, low and without"
16"She didn’t move."
17"He studied her for a"
18"The words hung between them,"
19"She knew what that meant."
ratio0.921
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, voice tight"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences65
tagDensity0.062
leniency0.123
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.062
75.6406%