Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRGACRB255M2NW723KSQNB

Run Details

Duration:
30.2s
Cost:
$0.001029

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stood in the cramped kitchen of Eva's flat, the scent of curry wafting through the air from the restaurant below. She stirred a pot of lentils, her mind drifting to the stack of books piled high on the table. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, lounged lazily on the windowsill, soaking up the afternoon sun. A sudden knock shattered the quiet. She wiped her hands on a dish towel, glancing at the door. “Who the hell?” she muttered, her brow furrowing. Another knock, more insistent this time. “Coming!” she called, her heart racing. She opened the door, and there he stood. Lucien Moreau, impeccably dressed in a tailored charcoal suit, his platinum blond hair slicked back. The sunlight caught the glint of his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black. “Lucien,” she breathed, the name slipping from her lips like a secret. “Rory,” he replied, his voice smooth, yet edged with something unspoken. She stepped back, allowing him to enter. The door clicked shut behind him, sealing them in the small space. “Nice place you’ve got here,” he said, glancing around at the clutter of books and scrolls. “Thanks,” she replied, crossing her arms. “What are you doing here?” He shifted his weight, the ivory-handled cane tapping lightly against the floor. “I needed to talk.” “About what? The last time we spoke, you made it pretty clear you didn’t want to see me again.” His gaze dropped to the floor, a flicker of regret crossing his face. “I know. I was… a fool.” “Foolishness doesn’t quite cover it.” Ptolemy jumped down from the windowsill, weaving between Lucien’s legs. He barely noticed, his focus locked on Rory. “Can we sit?” “Why? So you can tell me how you’ve been living your best life without me?” “Rory—” “Don’t,” she interrupted, her voice sharp. “You don’t get to use my name like that. Not after everything.” He took a step closer, the air thickening between them. “I’m not here to hurt you. I came because I need your help.” “Help?” She scoffed, disbelief coloring her tone. “You think I’d help you after how you left?” “I didn’t leave. I was pushed.” “By who? Your demon father? Your fancy connections?” “By circumstances,” he shot back, frustration creeping into his voice. “You don’t understand.” “Try me.” He ran a hand through his hair, the tension in his shoulders evident. “I was caught up in something bigger than both of us. I thought I could protect you by staying away.” “Protect me?” She laughed, the sound bitter. “You think abandoning me was protection?” “I thought it was for the best.” “Your best or mine?” Lucien’s expression hardened, but she saw the flicker of vulnerability beneath. “I didn’t want to drag you into my world. It’s dangerous.” “Dangerous? You mean like the danger you put me in when you walked away?” He stepped back, the distance between them growing. “I didn’t want to hurt you, Rory. I never did.” “Then why did you?” “Because I thought I was saving you.” “By leaving?” “By keeping you away from the darkness that follows me.” “Darkness? You think I can’t handle a little darkness?” “Not this kind.” She clenched her fists, the memories flooding back—late nights spent talking, laughter shared over takeout, the way he had looked at her like she was the only person in the room. “Why now?” she asked, her voice softer. “Why show up after all this time?” “Because I need you. There’s something happening, something I can’t face alone.” “What is it?” He hesitated, his eyes darting to the floor. “I can’t explain here. It’s too risky.” “Risky? You think I’m afraid of a little risk?” “Rory, please.” The plea hung in the air, heavy with unspoken words. She studied him, the way his jaw tightened, the way his hands fidgeted with the cane. “Fine,” she said, her resolve wavering. “But you better start talking.” He nodded, relief washing over his features. “Let’s sit.” They moved to the small table, the clutter pushed aside to make room. Lucien leaned forward, his voice low. “There’s a group in London, a faction that’s been hunting down half-demons. They’re getting bolder.” “Why would they come after you?” “Because of who I am. My father’s legacy.” “Your father?” “His enemies want to eliminate any trace of him. I’m a target.” “And you think I can help?” “I need someone who knows the city, who can navigate the underbelly.” “Why not go to your fancy friends?” “Because they’re part of the problem. I can’t trust them.” Rory leaned back, crossing her arms again. “And you think I’m trustworthy?” “I know you are.” The sincerity in his voice caught her off guard. She looked away, her heart racing. “Rory, I wouldn’t have come if I didn’t believe you could help.” “Help you with what? Running away?” “Help me find out who’s behind this. I can’t do it alone.” “Why should I care?” “Because if they find me, they’ll come for you too.” The weight of his words settled in the room, thick and suffocating. She met his gaze, searching for the truth in his eyes. “Why should I trust you?” “Because I’m here, aren’t I? I came back.” “After leaving me in the dark.” “I was wrong.” “Wrong doesn’t fix anything.” “I know.” Silence stretched between them, the air charged with tension. Lucien’s eyes softened, and for a moment, she saw the man she once knew—the one who made her laugh, who held her close on cold nights. “Rory,” he said, his voice barely above a whisper. “I need you.” She swallowed hard, the memories flooding back, the hurt mingling with something else—something she had buried deep. “Fine,” she finally said, her voice steady. “But this better not be a mistake.” “It won’t be.” “Let’s get to work then.” As they began to strategize, the past lingered in the air, unspoken but palpable. The tension between them crackled, a reminder of what had been and what could still be.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.184
leniency0.368
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.026
85.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1001
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"lightly"
2"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1001
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"shattered"
count1
1
word"furrowing"
count1
2
word"racing"
count2
3
word"glint"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count3
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"flicker"
count2
7
word"tension"
count3
8
word"resolve"
count1
9
word"wavering"
count1
10
word"navigate"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"charged"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"palpable"
count1
15
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"furrowing"
2"racing"
3"glint"
4"unspoken"
5"weight"
6"flicker"
7"tension"
8"resolve"
9"wavering"
10"navigate"
11"silence"
12"charged"
13"whisper"
14"palpable"
15"reminder"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
1"The weight of his words"
2"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences50
matches
0"a flicker of regret"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences50
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords995
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount530
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Ptolemy2
Moreau1
Lucien5
Rory2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount995
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs80
mean12.44
std9.32
cv0.749
sampleLengths
054
118
28
36
414
527
612
711
819
916
1011
1116
1219
1319
145
1518
163
1715
181
1918
2023
2116
226
238
2413
252
2633
2713
287
294
3022
3114
3218
334
347
352
3610
379
383
3931
4014
4112
423
4315
449
452
4626
4711
489
4934
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs103
matches(empty)
40.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences112
ratio0.036
matches
0"The sunlight caught the glint of his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black."
1"She clenched her fists, the memories flooding back—late nights spent talking, laughter shared over takeout, the way he had looked at her like she was the only person in the room."
2"Lucien’s eyes softened, and for a moment, she saw the man she once knew—the one who made her laugh, who held her close on cold nights."
3"She swallowed hard, the memories flooding back, the hurt mingling with something else—something she had buried deep."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount535
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.03551401869158879
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.013084112149532711
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean8.88
std5.07
cv0.571
sampleLengths
021
119
214
36
412
58
66
76
88
915
1012
1112
1211
137
1412
1516
166
175
1812
194
2019
2113
226
235
2410
258
263
2715
281
296
3012
3110
3213
337
349
356
368
3710
383
392
4013
4120
427
436
447
454
4611
4711
4814
498
61.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.39285714285714285
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences50
matches
0"She stirred a pot of"
1"She wiped her hands on"
2"she muttered, her brow furrowing"
3"she called, her heart racing"
4"She opened the door, and"
5"she breathed, the name slipping"
6"he replied, his voice smooth,"
7"She stepped back, allowing him"
8"he said, glancing around at"
9"she replied, crossing her arms"
10"He shifted his weight, the"
11"His gaze dropped to the"
12"He barely noticed, his focus"
13"she interrupted, her voice sharp"
14"He took a step closer,"
15"She scoffed, disbelief coloring her"
16"he shot back, frustration creeping"
17"He ran a hand through"
18"She laughed, the sound bitter"
19"He stepped back, the distance"
ratio0.64
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences50
matches
0"Aurora stood in the cramped"
1"She stirred a pot of"
2"The tabby cat, Ptolemy, lounged"
3"A sudden knock shattered the"
4"She wiped her hands on"
5"she muttered, her brow furrowing"
6"Another knock, more insistent this"
7"she called, her heart racing"
8"She opened the door, and"
9"Lucien Moreau, impeccably dressed in"
10"The sunlight caught the glint"
11"she breathed, the name slipping"
12"he replied, his voice smooth,"
13"She stepped back, allowing him"
14"The door clicked shut behind"
15"he said, glancing around at"
16"she replied, crossing her arms"
17"He shifted his weight, the"
18"His gaze dropped to the"
19"Ptolemy jumped down from the"
ratio0.98
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"she muttered, her brow furrowing"
1"she called, her heart racing"
2"she breathed, the name slipping from her lips like a secret"
3"she interrupted, her voice sharp"
4"She scoffed, disbelief coloring her tone"
5"he shot back, frustration creeping into his voice"
6"she asked, her voice softer"
7"she said, her resolve wavering"
8"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
9"she finally said, her voice steady"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"she interrupted (interrupt)"
3"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.105
73.9479%