| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 95.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1109 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 18.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1109 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "sentinel" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "lurched" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "searing" | | 15 | "predator" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the air was thick with" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.22% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "happened to" | | 2 | "seem to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 21 | | markdownWords | 43 | | totalWords | 1097 | | ratio | 0.039 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde’s grove" | | 1 | "Fae-touched" | | 2 | "Get a grip." | | 3 | "Find the grove. Find the door." | | 4 | "Okay. Okay, this is fine." | | 5 | "click-click-click" | | 6 | "The door is not a door," | | 7 | "The key is not a key." | | 8 | "moved" | | 9 | "waited" | | 10 | "ripped" | | 11 | "wrongness" | | 12 | "inside" | | 13 | "teeth" | | 14 | "bleeding" | | 15 | "moved" | | 16 | "things" | | 17 | "feeding" | | 18 | "scream" | | 19 | "twitched" | | 20 | "had" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.26% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1096 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.09 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 2 | | Aurora | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | London | 1 | | December | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "December" |
| | globalScore | 0.953 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 70.63% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if responding to the pendant’s glow" | | 1 | "as if searching for something buried deep inside" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1097 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.64% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "making that sound" | | 1 | "saw that it" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 33.24 | | std | 26.3 | | cv | 0.791 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 88 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 84 | | 8 | 61 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 61 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 57 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 74 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 54 | | 25 | 42 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 58 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 2 |
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| 98.03% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "been turned" |
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| 18.84% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 184 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was making" | | 2 | "wasn’t coming" | | 3 | "was coming" | | 4 | "was *bleeding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.112 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t asked for the thing—had woken one morning to find it coiled in the pocket of her coat, the silver chain cold as a dead man’s fingers." | | 1 | "The book inside was the reason she was here—the reason she’d risked the grove at night, when the veil between worlds was thinnest." | | 2 | "One moment, she was standing in the cold bite of a London winter; the next, the air was thick with the scent of wildflowers and damp earth, the kind of green, living smell that didn’t belong in December." | | 3 | "A sound cut through the silence—a wet, clicking noise, like teeth snapping together just out of sight." | | 4 | "*The key is not a key.* Below it, a crude drawing of a pendant—her pendant—nestled in the hollow of a tree." | | 5 | "Not all of it—just a section of the bark, peeling back like a curtain to reveal a dark, yawning hollow." | | 6 | "Inside, something *waited*—something that hummed with the same energy as the pendant, the same energy as the grove itself." | | 7 | "The trees, the bluebells, the silver birch—all of it gone in an instant, replaced by a cavern so vast she couldn’t see the ceiling." | | 8 | "She looked down and saw that it wasn’t just glowing now—it was *bleeding*." | | 9 | "Like *things*—long, spindly things with too many joints, crawling along the cavern walls on legs that bent in ways that made her stomach heave." | | 10 | "Its head—if it even *had* a head—turned toward her." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1108 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.033393501805054154 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004512635379061372 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 11.19 | | std | 7.82 | | cv | 0.699 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 32.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.29591836734693877 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the skeletal arms of" | | 1 | "Just the distant drip of" | | 2 | "Instead, she reached for the" | | 3 | "Even the bluebells stopped swaying." | | 4 | "Then the tree *moved*." | | 5 | "Just a sudden, sickening *wrongness*," | | 6 | "Dark, viscous liquid oozed from" |
| | ratio | 0.079 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn’t asked for the" | | 1 | "She’d come for answers, not" | | 2 | "She spun, heart hammering, but" | | 3 | "She unzipped her rucksack and" | | 4 | "She turned back to the" | | 5 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 6 | "It was cold." | | 7 | "She didn’t turn around." | | 8 | "She didn’t want to see" | | 9 | "She’d seen enough horror films" | | 10 | "It was coming from *inside*" | | 11 | "She looked down and saw" | | 12 | "They didn’t seem to notice" | | 13 | "They were too busy *feeding*," | | 14 | "She needed to run." | | 15 | "She needed to *scream*." | | 16 | "Its head—if it even *had*" |
| | ratio | 0.191 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against" | | 1 | "She hadn’t asked for the" | | 2 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 3 | "She’d come for answers, not" | | 4 | "The grove was supposed to" | | 5 | "*Isolde’s grove*, Eva had called" | | 6 | "Back before Rory knew what" | | 7 | "A twig snapped." | | 8 | "She spun, heart hammering, but" | | 9 | "The pendant flared hotter, then" | | 10 | "The book inside was the" | | 11 | "The grimoire’s pages had whispered" | | 12 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 13 | "Rory hesitated, then stepped between" | | 14 | "The world tilted." | | 15 | "The grove stretched before her," | | 16 | "Rory exhaled, slow and controlled." | | 17 | "A strange, impossible place, but" | | 18 | "She unzipped her rucksack and" | | 19 | "The moment her fingers brushed" |
| | ratio | 0.685 | |
| 56.18% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 44.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment, she was standing in the cold bite of a London winter; the next, the air was thick with the scent of wildflowers and damp earth, the kind of green, l…" | | 1 | "The grove stretched before her, a perfect circle of ancient oaks ringed by bluebells that glowed faintly in the dark." | | 2 | "The moment her fingers brushed the pages, the Heartstone Pendant flared again, this time with a heat that bordered on pain." | | 3 | "The symbols on its bark pulsed faintly, as if responding to the pendant’s glow." | | 4 | "The air was thick with the scent of iron and something older, something that made her teeth ache." | | 5 | "Like *things*—long, spindly things with too many joints, crawling along the cavern walls on legs that bent in ways that made her stomach heave." | | 6 | "They were too busy *feeding*, their needle-thin fingers digging into the rock as if searching for something buried deep inside." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |