Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRGDC6ENG7D78T6VVEMCHF

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25.1s
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$0.001575
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open, revealing a face she hadn't seen in months – okay, five months, twenty-two days, and thirteen hours (not that she was counting). "Lucien," Aurora breathed, feeling her heart clench at the sight of him. She tried to ignore the dizzy warmth spreading through her, traitorous body. "What are you doing here?" He leaned against the doorframe, that familiar lopsided smile playing on his lips. "Aurora," he purred, his French accent rolling over her name. "May I come in?" Still taken aback by his sudden appearance, she stepped aside, wordlessly inviting him into her flat. As soon as he crossed the threshold, memories flooded back—memories best left forgotten. "I'll get straight to the point," Lucien said, his voice low and steady. "I need your help." Aurora raised an eyebrow, intrigued despite herself. "My help? With what?" He glanced around the room before locking his heterochromatic eyes onto hers. "Let's just say... it's a matter of life and death." The air shifted between them, laden with history and tension. Aurora sighed, knowing she should refuse but finding herself drawn back into his orbit like gravity pulling on a falling star. "Fine," she relented. "What do you need?" An hour later, they were seated across from each other at a small corner café near Aurora's flat. The bell above the door jingled as patrons came and went under the awning emblazoned with faded gold letters spelling out "Cairo Café". Steam hissed from the espresso machine behind the counter, blending with the aroma of freshly baked pastries wafting through the air. "Tell me more about this 'life and death' situation," Aurora prompted, nodding her thanks to the waitress delivering two cups of steaming Turkish coffee. Lucien leaned forward, clasping his hands together on the table. His platinum hair glinted under the overhead lights, contrasting sharply with his tailored charcoal suit. "I've been tracking down a powerful artifact—the Eye of Horus. It has the power to grant immortality, but in the wrong hands, it could be catastrophic." Aurora felt her brow furrow as she considered the implications. "So why come to me? I'm no archaeologist or treasure hunter." His lips quirked into a smirk. "No, but you are an expert at getting into places others can't. I need someone who can help me navigate the supernatural underworld of London without drawing attention." She took a sip of her coffee, contemplating his words. "And what's in it for me?" "In addition to preventing a potential disaster? I'll owe you a favor. Anything you want, within reason." Aurora bit back a smirk at the thought of having Lucien Moreau indebted to her. "Fine. I'm in." As they made their way back to her flat, Aurora's mind raced with possibilities. She knew she was getting involved in something dangerous—Lucien always seemed to bring chaos into her life. But as much as she tried to deny it, there was a part of her that craved the excitement he offered. "Listen, Aurora," Lucien began, his voice uncharacteristically hesitant. "About what happened before—" "Not now," she cut him off, not wanting to revisit old wounds just yet. "If we're going to do this, let's focus on the task at hand." He nodded, respecting her wishes even though she could tell he wanted to say more. They spent the rest of the evening poring over ancient texts and scrolls, charting a course through the city's underbelly to find the elusive Eye of Horus. The next morning, dawn found them standing outside a nondescript door nestled between two shuttered storefronts. Graffiti tagged the brickwork, and the sound of the nearby Underground rattled the ground beneath their feet. "This is it," Lucien murmured, glancing around furtively before knocking thrice in quick succession. A muffled voice called from within, demanding a password. Aurora watched as Lucien leaned closer, his lips brushing against the cracked wood as he whispered something unintelligible. With a soft click, the door swung open, revealing a dimly lit room filled with artifacts and relics from every era imaginable. Incense hung heavy in the air, mingling with the musty scent of old books and parchment. As they delved deeper into the chamber, Aurora couldn't help but think back to their last adventure together—the one that had ended so disastrously. She shoved the memories aside, focusing instead on the task at hand. Three hours later, they emerged victorious, the Eye of Horus clasped securely in Lucien's hand. As they navigated their way back to the surface, Aurora couldn't help but feel a sense of pride mingled with relief. They'd done it—saved countless lives and proved once again that they were an unstoppable duo when working together. But as she stole a glance at Lucien, his eyes shining triumphant in the dull glow of the underground passage, her heart twisted in her chest. No matter how many times they saved the world, it wouldn't change what had happened between them. Because despite everything, she still loved him. And that was more dangerous than any cursed artifact could ever be.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.391
leniency0.783
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount844
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount844
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"navigate"
count1
5
word"potential"
count1
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"delved"
count1
8
word"navigated"
count1
9
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"familiar"
2"eyebrow"
3"tension"
4"navigate"
5"potential"
6"raced"
7"delved"
8"navigated"
9"sense of"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"couldn't help but"
count2
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"couldn't help but think"
1"couldn't help but feel"
2"hung heavy in the air"
88.77% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences46
matches
0"a sense of pride"
1"d with relief"
49.69% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences46
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences60
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords839
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount673
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.63
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
French1
Aurora11
Steam1
Turkish1
Lucien9
Moreau1
Eye2
Horus2
Underground1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Steam"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Horus"
5"Underground"
places(empty)
globalScore0.683
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount839
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
79.97% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean31.07
std13.36
cv0.43
sampleLengths
026
129
227
329
417
511
622
738
862
924
1051
1121
1234
1316
1417
1518
1652
1712
1827
1942
2033
2141
2238
2336
2454
2543
2619
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs128
matches
0"was counting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences60
ratio0.083
matches
0"The door swung open, revealing a face she hadn't seen in months – okay, five months, twenty-two days, and thirteen hours (not that she was counting)."
1"As soon as he crossed the threshold, memories flooded back—memories best left forgotten."
2"She knew she was getting involved in something dangerous—Lucien always seemed to bring chaos into her life."
3"As they delved deeper into the chamber, Aurora couldn't help but think back to their last adventure together—the one that had ended so disastrously."
4"They'd done it—saved countless lives and proved once again that they were an unstoppable duo when working together."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount677
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03840472673559823
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.013293943870014771
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences60
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences60
mean13.98
std6.68
cv0.478
sampleLengths
026
112
212
35
413
510
64
716
813
913
104
117
124
1312
1410
1510
1621
173
184
1918
2023
2121
2224
2310
2415
2526
2610
2711
286
2928
3010
316
3217
3315
343
3514
3617
3721
388
394
4014
4113
4215
4327
4416
4517
4614
479
4818
4922
92.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5666666666666667
totalSentences60
uniqueOpeners34
74.07% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences45
matches
0"Still taken aback by his"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences45
matches
0"She tried to ignore the"
1"He leaned against the doorframe,"
2"he purred, his French accent"
3"He glanced around the room"
4"His platinum hair glinted under"
5"His lips quirked into a"
6"She took a sip of"
7"She knew she was getting"
8"she cut him off, not"
9"He nodded, respecting her wishes"
10"They spent the rest of"
11"She shoved the memories aside,"
12"They'd done it—saved countless lives"
ratio0.289
93.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount33
totalSentences45
matches
0"The door swung open, revealing"
1"Aurora breathed, feeling her heart"
2"She tried to ignore the"
3"He leaned against the doorframe,"
4"he purred, his French accent"
5"Lucien said, his voice low"
6"Aurora raised an eyebrow, intrigued"
7"He glanced around the room"
8"The air shifted between them,"
9"Aurora sighed, knowing she should"
10"An hour later, they were"
11"The bell above the door"
12"Steam hissed from the espresso"
13"Aurora prompted, nodding her thanks"
14"Lucien leaned forward, clasping his"
15"His platinum hair glinted under"
16"Aurora felt her brow furrow"
17"His lips quirked into a"
18"She took a sip of"
19"Aurora bit back a smirk"
ratio0.733
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences45
matches
0"As soon as he crossed"
1"No matter how many times"
2"Because despite everything, she still"
ratio0.067
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he purred, his French accent rolling over her name"
1"Lucien said, his voice low and steady"
2"Lucien began, his voice uncharacteristically hesitant"
3"she cut, not wanting to revisit old wounds just yet"
63.04% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
1"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.13
leniency0.261
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.174
82.5495%