Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRGE6T1Y6KMHE309PWR76T

Run Details

Duration:
2m 33s
Cost:
$0.017445
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak trees loomed tall, their gnarled branches reaching towards the starry sky. Aurora, or Rory as she preferred, stepped cautiously into the clearing, the soft crunch of leaves underfoot a comforting sound in the silent night. The moon, a bright silver sliver, cast an ethereal glow over The Fae Grove, highlighting the dancing shadows. An uneasy feeling stirred in her core, like the memory of a bad dream. She hadn't come here for peace; she'd been told this place held answers. Rory moved deeper, her eyes adjusting to the dim light. With every step, she felt the weight of her mission: to discover why her Heartstone Pendant reacted so strongly here. Its crimson gemstone pulsed gently under her sweater, its warmth a stark contrast to the chill in the air. It had guided her to this hidden sanctuary nestled in the heart of Richmond Park. Isolde's grove, as some called it, was more than just a clearing; it was a place between worlds. Suddenly, the rustling of leaves broke the quiet, not by the gentle breeze, but by something moving through the undergrowth. Animals, she thought, but as she scanned the edge of the grove, nothing stirred. The pendant's glow intensified, as if mirroring her rising anxiety. She reminded herself of her father's words. Brendan, a man who'd spent his life in the law courts, always believed in facts first, words second. Yet here she was, 25 years old, relying on instinct and a supposed magical relic. A faint sound, like the distant chime of bells, made her heart skip. It wasn't the wind playing tricks; this place didn't have any wind. Nervously, she followed the sound, her fingers twitching towards her pendant. The air around the ancient standing stones hummed with energy, and as she passed between them, the chiming grew clearer. The stones marked the boundary of the grove, a dividing line between worlds where time itself twisted and bent. Inside, an hour could be mere minutes or days in the outside realm. "Stupid superstition," she muttered under her breath, half-hoping the sound of her voice would ground her back to reality. But as she stepped beyond the stones, the chiming was so close it made her ears ring. Her footsteps quickened, urged on by the need to understand. Then she saw it—a bright, pulsating glow at the base of an ancient beech tree. Kneeling, Rory uncovered a hidden stone box. Inside, a beautiful silver chain lay coiled, its pendant gleaming: a twin to the one around her neck. But as she reached out, a sense of danger made her pause. With trembling fingers, she touched the stone, and a rush of images assaulted her mind. A young woman, her face obscured by flowing hair, placed the box carefully beneath the tree. A man, his features blurred, watched from the shadows, his presence an invasion. The woman's fear was palpable as she glanced over her shoulder, then back at the box. With a final look at the tree, she turned away, her footsteps swift on the forest floor. Rory jerked back, dislodging the pendant from the box, and it closed with a soft snap. The images faded, leaving her with a sense of foreboding. She rose, her heart pounding, and took a step back, almost tripping over an exposed root. The pendant had given her a vision, she was sure of it. But of what, and why? The night seemed colder now. She wrapped her arms around herself, the chain of her own pendant digging into her palm. A sharp sensation crept up her spine as she sensed a presence. The rustling resumed, this time closer. Her breath caught as she turned, her eyes searching the shadows. "Who's there?" Rory's voice was stronger than she felt. She held out her hands to show she wasn't a threat, or perhaps to ward off an unseen danger. A faint chuckle answered her, sending shivers down her spine. The laugh carried a promise she couldn't identify, and she found herself backing away. A figure stepped into the moonlight. A man, tall and cloaked, his face hooded, stood with a confidence that oozed menace. The chiming sound intensified, almost deafening. "You don't belong here, Aurora Carter," the stranger said, his voice carrying an authority she didn't understand. "This place is beyond the grasp of mortals like you." Rory's defiance rose. "Who are you to say where I belong? I was told this grove held answers." The man laughed again, a chilling sound. "Answers are a currency in high demand. You would be wise to leave." His hood moved slightly, as if following her reaction, and she fought the urge to run. "I seek knowledge, not profit," she said, her voice steadier than she expected. "The pendant brought me here, and I need to know why." She raised her chin, refusing to show fear. The man took a step forward, his eyes gleaming in the darkness of his hood. "Then you've made a grave mistake, little wanderer. Some secrets are not for human minds to bear." Rory's hand tightened on her pendant. "I've never run from a challenge. And I won't start now." She squared her shoulders, her slight frame belying the fire within. The man smiled, and his teeth seemed to glint in the darkness. "So be it." A powerful force knocked Rory off her feet, sending her flying backwards. She scrambled up, anger and determination driving her forward despite the pain. The man was gone. She approached the place he had stood, her heart thudding. No footprints marked the ground, no sign that anyone had been there at all. The pendant's warm glow beckoned her, and she turned back to the stone box. But it, too, had vanished. A deep-seated fear took hold as she stared at the spot where the box had lain. What had she stumbled upon? Her fingers trembled as she clutched her own pendant. Its warmth was comforting, its pulse a reminder of her purpose. Here, in this liminal space, she stood at the crossroads of something mysterious and dangerous. As she stood, uncertain of her next move, the chimes sounded again, and a voice, unlike any she had heard before, echoed in her mind. She couldn’t understand the words, but they conveyed a sense of urgency. Then, as if the grove itself was in collusion with the voice, a faint path revealed itself among the trees, leading deeper into the heart of Richmond Park. The night air was heavy as she began to walk. With every step, the sense of wrongness heightened; and yet, she knew, in a way that defied logic, that the heart of the mystery awaited her there. Somewhere in the inky darkness, beyond the reach of mortal comprehension, she would find the answers she sought. Whether she was prepared to face them remained to be seen.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His hood moved slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.636
leniency1
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.143
73.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1149
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"nervously"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
5
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"gently"
2"suddenly"
3"nervously"
4"carefully"
5"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1149
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"comforting"
count2
2
word"dancing"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count2
6
word"stark"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"sanctuary"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count2
11
word"quickened"
count1
12
word"gleaming"
count2
13
word"sense of"
count4
14
word"palpable"
count1
15
word"foreboding"
count1
16
word"pounding"
count1
17
word"down her spine"
count1
18
word"chilling"
count1
19
word"grave"
count1
20
word"glint"
count1
21
word"trembled"
count1
22
word"pulse"
count1
23
word"reminder"
count1
24
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"comforting"
2"dancing"
3"weight"
4"pulsed"
5"warmth"
6"stark"
7"chill"
8"sanctuary"
9"scanned"
10"footsteps"
11"quickened"
12"gleaming"
13"sense of"
14"palpable"
15"foreboding"
16"pounding"
17"down her spine"
18"chilling"
19"grave"
20"glint"
21"trembled"
22"pulse"
23"reminder"
24"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
highlights
0"a sense of foreboding"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences80
matches
0"a sense of foreboding"
1"a sense of urgency"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1146
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1051
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory8
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Richmond2
Park2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Pendant"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if mirroring her rising anxiety"
1"as if following her reaction, and she fought the urge to run"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.873
wordCount1146
matches
0"not by the gentle breeze, but by something moving through the undergrowth"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
81.69% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean52.09
std22.71
cv0.436
sampleLengths
083
182
284
388
446
567
662
759
850
952
1027
1127
1218
1336
1432
1532
1640
173
1871
1956
2065
2166
92.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences80
matches
0"been told"
1"was gone"
2"was prepared"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs171
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences84
ratio0.06
matches
0"She hadn't come here for peace; she'd been told this place held answers."
1"Isolde's grove, as some called it, was more than just a clearing; it was a place between worlds."
2"It wasn't the wind playing tricks; this place didn't have any wind."
3"Then she saw it—a bright, pulsating glow at the base of an ancient beech tree."
4"With every step, the sense of wrongness heightened; and yet, she knew, in a way that defied logic, that the heart of the mystery awaited her there."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1054
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.024667931688804556
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006641366223908918
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean13.64
std5.53
cv0.405
sampleLengths
014
124
218
314
413
510
620
719
815
918
1020
1114
1210
137
1418
1515
1613
1712
1811
1920
2019
2113
2219
2317
2410
2515
267
2718
2812
2915
3016
3113
3216
3317
3416
3510
3616
3712
385
395
4016
4112
426
4311
449
4519
4610
4714
486
4915
60.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.39285714285714285
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences80
matches
0"Suddenly, the rustling of leaves"
1"Nervously, she followed the sound,"
2"Then she saw it—a bright,"
3"Then, as if the grove"
4"Somewhere in the inky darkness,"
ratio0.063
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences80
matches
0"She hadn't come here for"
1"Its crimson gemstone pulsed gently"
2"It had guided her to"
3"She reminded herself of her"
4"It wasn't the wind playing"
5"she muttered under her breath,"
6"Her footsteps quickened, urged on"
7"She rose, her heart pounding,"
8"She wrapped her arms around"
9"Her breath caught as she"
10"She held out her hands"
11"His hood moved slightly, as"
12"she said, her voice steadier"
13"She raised her chin, refusing"
14"She squared her shoulders, her"
15"She scrambled up, anger and"
16"She approached the place he"
17"Her fingers trembled as she"
18"Its warmth was comforting, its"
19"She couldn’t understand the words,"
ratio0.25
91.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences80
matches
0"The ancient oak trees loomed"
1"Aurora, or Rory as she"
2"The moon, a bright silver"
3"An uneasy feeling stirred in"
4"She hadn't come here for"
5"Rory moved deeper, her eyes"
6"Its crimson gemstone pulsed gently"
7"It had guided her to"
8"Isolde's grove, as some called"
9"Animals, she thought, but as"
10"The pendant's glow intensified, as"
11"She reminded herself of her"
12"Brendan, a man who'd spent"
13"A faint sound, like the"
14"It wasn't the wind playing"
15"The air around the ancient"
16"The stones marked the boundary"
17"she muttered under her breath,"
18"Her footsteps quickened, urged on"
19"A young woman, her face"
ratio0.738
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Whether she was prepared to"
ratio0.013
82.32% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The pendant's glow intensified, as if mirroring her rising anxiety."
1"Brendan, a man who'd spent his life in the law courts, always believed in facts first, words second."
2"She rose, her heart pounding, and took a step back, almost tripping over an exposed root."
3"A powerful force knocked Rory off her feet, sending her flying backwards."
4"Then, as if the grove itself was in collusion with the voice, a faint path revealed itself among the trees, leading deeper into the heart of Richmond Park."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"the stranger said, his voice carrying an authority she didn't understand"
1"His hood moved slightly, as if following her reaction, and she fought the urge to run"
2"she said, her voice steadier than she expected"
3"She raised, refusing to show fear"
4"She squared, her slight frame belying the fire within"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.182
81.4381%