| 57.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "His hood moved slightly [slightly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.636 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |
| 73.89% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1149 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "nervously" | | 4 | "carefully" | | 5 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1149 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "comforting" | | 2 | "dancing" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "stark" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "sanctuary" | | 9 | "scanned" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "quickened" | | 12 | "gleaming" | | 13 | "sense of" | | 14 | "palpable" | | 15 | "foreboding" | | 16 | "pounding" | | 17 | "down her spine" | | 18 | "chilling" | | 19 | "grave" | | 20 | "glint" | | 21 | "trembled" | | 22 | "pulse" | | 23 | "reminder" | | 24 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sense of foreboding" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "a sense of foreboding" | | 1 | "a sense of urgency" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1146 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 1051 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.76 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 8 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 82.43% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if mirroring her rising anxiety" | | 1 | "as if following her reaction, and she fought the urge to run" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.873 | | wordCount | 1146 | | matches | | 0 | "not by the gentle breeze, but by something moving through the undergrowth" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.69% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 22 | | mean | 52.09 | | std | 22.71 | | cv | 0.436 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 82 | | 2 | 84 | | 3 | 88 | | 4 | 46 | | 5 | 67 | | 6 | 62 | | 7 | 59 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 52 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 36 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 71 | | 19 | 56 | | 20 | 65 | | 21 | 66 |
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| 92.11% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "been told" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was prepared" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn't come here for peace; she'd been told this place held answers." | | 1 | "Isolde's grove, as some called it, was more than just a clearing; it was a place between worlds." | | 2 | "It wasn't the wind playing tricks; this place didn't have any wind." | | 3 | "Then she saw it—a bright, pulsating glow at the base of an ancient beech tree." | | 4 | "With every step, the sense of wrongness heightened; and yet, she knew, in a way that defied logic, that the heart of the mystery awaited her there." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1054 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.024667931688804556 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006641366223908918 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 13.64 | | std | 5.53 | | cv | 0.405 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 60.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.39285714285714285 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Suddenly, the rustling of leaves" | | 1 | "Nervously, she followed the sound," | | 2 | "Then she saw it—a bright," | | 3 | "Then, as if the grove" | | 4 | "Somewhere in the inky darkness," |
| | ratio | 0.063 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "She hadn't come here for" | | 1 | "Its crimson gemstone pulsed gently" | | 2 | "It had guided her to" | | 3 | "She reminded herself of her" | | 4 | "It wasn't the wind playing" | | 5 | "she muttered under her breath," | | 6 | "Her footsteps quickened, urged on" | | 7 | "She rose, her heart pounding," | | 8 | "She wrapped her arms around" | | 9 | "Her breath caught as she" | | 10 | "She held out her hands" | | 11 | "His hood moved slightly, as" | | 12 | "she said, her voice steadier" | | 13 | "She raised her chin, refusing" | | 14 | "She squared her shoulders, her" | | 15 | "She scrambled up, anger and" | | 16 | "She approached the place he" | | 17 | "Her fingers trembled as she" | | 18 | "Its warmth was comforting, its" | | 19 | "She couldn’t understand the words," |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 91.25% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak trees loomed" | | 1 | "Aurora, or Rory as she" | | 2 | "The moon, a bright silver" | | 3 | "An uneasy feeling stirred in" | | 4 | "She hadn't come here for" | | 5 | "Rory moved deeper, her eyes" | | 6 | "Its crimson gemstone pulsed gently" | | 7 | "It had guided her to" | | 8 | "Isolde's grove, as some called" | | 9 | "Animals, she thought, but as" | | 10 | "The pendant's glow intensified, as" | | 11 | "She reminded herself of her" | | 12 | "Brendan, a man who'd spent" | | 13 | "A faint sound, like the" | | 14 | "It wasn't the wind playing" | | 15 | "The air around the ancient" | | 16 | "The stones marked the boundary" | | 17 | "she muttered under her breath," | | 18 | "Her footsteps quickened, urged on" | | 19 | "A young woman, her face" |
| | ratio | 0.738 | |
| 62.50% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "Whether she was prepared to" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 82.32% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant's glow intensified, as if mirroring her rising anxiety." | | 1 | "Brendan, a man who'd spent his life in the law courts, always believed in facts first, words second." | | 2 | "She rose, her heart pounding, and took a step back, almost tripping over an exposed root." | | 3 | "A powerful force knocked Rory off her feet, sending her flying backwards." | | 4 | "Then, as if the grove itself was in collusion with the voice, a faint path revealed itself among the trees, leading deeper into the heart of Richmond Park." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "the stranger said, his voice carrying an authority she didn't understand" | | 1 | "His hood moved slightly, as if following her reaction, and she fought the urge to run" | | 2 | "she said, her voice steadier than she expected" | | 3 | "She raised, refusing to show fear" | | 4 | "She squared, her slight frame belying the fire within" |
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| 59.09% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.273 | | leniency | 0.545 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.182 | |