| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.321 | | leniency | 0.643 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 69.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1316 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "suddenly" | | 5 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.01% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1316 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gleaming" | | 1 | "testament" | | 2 | "tangible" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "structure" | | 8 | "standard" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "firmly" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "sanctuary" | | 13 | "tension" | | 14 | "raced" | | 15 | "pulse" | | 16 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "n in terror" | | 1 | "e with panic" |
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| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 94 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1299 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1019 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.36 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | London | 3 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 24 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Underground | 1 | | Morris | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Herrera | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Morris" | | 3 | "Saint" | | 4 | "Christopher" | | 5 | "Herrera" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.322 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 74.24% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite name" | | 1 | "shadows that seemed to cling unnaturally to their forms" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.309 | | wordCount | 1299 | | matches | | 0 | "not just the normal fear of a criminal caught in the act, but something deeper" | | 1 | "not mocking, but genuinely amused, as if she'd told a charming joke at a dinn" | | 2 | "no authority but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 28.87 | | std | 14.92 | | cv | 0.517 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 52 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 37 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 41 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 41 | | 42 | 32 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 69 |
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| 96.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "been covered" | | 1 | "were obscured" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 169 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 94 | | ratio | 0.096 | | matches | | 0 | "The suspect—a lanky man in a dark hood—had bolted from The Raven's Nest the moment Quinn had flashed her badge." | | 1 | "Fear etched across his features—not just the normal fear of a criminal caught in the act, but something deeper." | | 2 | "The corridor inside smelled of mildew and something else—something acrid and unfamiliar that made her nostrils flare." | | 3 | "But what caught Quinn's attention wasn't the architecture—it was the glow emanating from below, accompanied by the low murmur of voices." | | 4 | "The market's patrons moved between stalls with purpose—some clearly human, others..." | | 5 | "Her partner's face flashed before her eyes—how they'd found him three years ago, his expression frozen in terror, his body completely drained of blood despite no visible wounds." | | 6 | "Dozens of eyes—some human, some decidedly not—turned toward her." | | 7 | "Laughter rippled through the crowd—not mocking, but genuinely amused, as if she'd told a charming joke at a dinner party." | | 8 | "The rain continued to pound the streets far above them, but down here in this impossible underground market, she had crossed a threshold into a London she never knew existed—a London where the rules she'd built her career upon might mean nothing at all." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 287 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 6 | | adverbRatio | 0.020905923344947737 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003484320557491289 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 94 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 94 | | mean | 13.82 | | std | 7.62 | | cv | 0.551 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 28 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 61.70% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.4148936170212766 | | totalSentences | 94 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 43.86% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she looked at Herrera," |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath came in controlled" | | 1 | "He stumbled over a discarded" | | 2 | "she called out, her voice" | | 3 | "Her suspect was nowhere in" | | 4 | "She spotted her suspect weaving" | | 5 | "He approached a stall where" | | 6 | "Her partner's face flashed before" | | 7 | "It had to be." | | 8 | "Her suspect backed away from" | | 9 | "He nodded slightly, his warm" | | 10 | "Her military-precise posture remained unbroken," | | 11 | "she finally said to Herrera" |
| | ratio | 0.158 | |
| 38.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed" | | 1 | "Her breath came in controlled" | | 2 | "The suspect—a lanky man in" | | 3 | "Quinn's voice cut through the" | | 4 | "Quinn followed, her right hand" | | 5 | "The alley reeked of rubbish" | | 6 | "The rain beat a relentless" | | 7 | "The suspect glanced back, his" | | 8 | "Fear etched across his features—not" | | 9 | "He stumbled over a discarded" | | 10 | "Quinn reached the door seconds" | | 11 | "The corridor inside smelled of" | | 12 | "Emergency lights cast a sickly" | | 13 | "Quinn moved cautiously now, her" | | 14 | "she called out, her voice" | | 15 | "A clatter from deeper in" | | 16 | "Quinn pressed forward, passing abandoned" | | 17 | "The building plans she'd studied" | | 18 | "The corridor abruptly opened into" | | 19 | "Her suspect was nowhere in" |
| | ratio | 0.842 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 98.21% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Figures that moved too fluidly, bodies with proportions that defied anatomical possibility, faces with features that shifted when viewed directly." | | 1 | "Following meant stepping into unknown territory with no backup, no jurisdiction, and no understanding of the rules that governed this place." | | 2 | "The investigation had hit dead end after dead end, with evidence that made no sense and witnesses whose testimonies contradicted the laws of nature." |
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| 13.89% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice bouncing back at her from multiple directions" | | 1 | "Quinn commanded, though her voice lacked its usual authority" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "figure hissed (hiss)" | | 2 | "the crimson figure stated (state)" | | 3 | "Herrera continued (continue)" | | 4 | "the crimson figure announced (announce)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.214 | | leniency | 0.429 | | rawRatio | 0.833 | | effectiveRatio | 0.357 | |