Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRGPDE07F3JCKEM6GPDQQR

Run Details

Duration:
36.3s
Cost:
$0.038442
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest held its usual Wednesday night crowd - a scattered handful of regulars nursing their drinks in comfortable silence. Aurora wiped down the bar top, having picked up an extra shift to cover for Silas while he recovered from a bout of flu. The familiar motions of cleaning glasses and restocking bottles had become almost meditative over the past few months. The door creaked open, letting in a gust of autumn air and a tall figure in a charcoal suit. Aurora's hand froze mid-wipe, the cloth forgotten as recognition hit her like a physical blow. "Evan?" He turned at her voice, his perfectly styled dark hair and sharp features exactly as she remembered, yet somehow different. The cocky grin she'd once found so charming was gone, replaced by something more weathered. "Rory?" His briefcase hit the floor with a soft thud. "I didn't... this isn't where I'd expect to find you." "I work here." She squared her shoulders, grateful for the solid wooden bar between them. "What can I get you?" Evan settled onto a barstool, his expensive suit out of place among the pub's worn leather and exposed brick. "Scotch. Neat." He loosened his tie. "Last I heard, you were meant to be finishing law school." Aurora poured his drink with steady hands, though her heart hammered against her ribs. "Plans change." "They certainly do." He took a sip, eyes moving over the vintage maps on the walls. "Your father still asks about you at the firm. Did you know I made junior partner?" "Congratulations." The word tasted bitter. Aurora busied herself arranging clean glasses, anything to avoid his gaze. "You could have been there too, you know. We had it all mapped out." "We?" Her laugh came out sharp. "You had it mapped out. Every detail of my life, down to which house we'd buy and how many children we'd have." Evan's fingers tightened around his glass. "I only wanted what was best for you." "Best for me?" The old anger bubbled up, hot and familiar. "Like when you 'accidentally' deleted my art school application? Or when you convinced me I was too sensitive about your 'jokes' in front of your friends?" "I was young. Stupid." He stared into his scotch. "I've changed, Rory." "So have I." She grabbed a fresh cloth, attacking an imaginary stain on the bar top. "I'm not that scared girl anymore, desperate to make everyone happy except herself." The silence stretched between them, filled with the soft clink of glasses and murmured conversations from other patrons. Through the window, the green neon sign cast shifting shadows across Evan's face, making him look older, more vulnerable. "I looked for you, you know. After you left." His voice had lost its polished edge. "Went to all our old spots. Even that ridiculous cafe where they served those awful lavender lattes you loved." "They weren't awful." The memory of those Sunday mornings hit unexpectedly hard - sharing pastries, planning futures that now felt like someone else's life. "They were terrible and you know it." A ghost of his old smile flickered across his face. "I miss that sometimes. How you could find joy in the strangest things." Aurora's throat tightened. "I still do. Just not with you." Evan drained his glass, setting it down with careful precision. "I deserve that." He reached for his wallet. "I should go." "Wait." Aurora pulled out a clean glass, pouring two fingers of scotch for herself. "Tell me about junior partner. Is Harrison still terrorizing the interns?" Something in his shoulders relaxed, just slightly. "Worse than ever. Last week he made poor Thompson redo an entire brief because the margins were off by half an inch." They talked about safe things then - mutual acquaintances, office politics, the changing face of Cardiff's city center. But underneath ran currents of all they weren't saying: the apologies that came too late, the dreams they'd outgrown, the people they'd become in each other's absence. When Evan finally stood to leave, he hesitated, briefcase in hand. "You look happy, Rory. Behind a bar in Soho isn't where I pictured you, but... it suits you." "It does." She gathered their empty glasses. "Take care of yourself, Evan." The door clicked shut behind him, and Aurora let out a long breath. Through the window, she watched him disappear into the London night, taking with him the ghost of who she used to be.
created_at"2026-02-19T10:53:16.082Z" 2/19/2026, 10:53:16 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"those Sunday mornings hit unexpectedly [unexpectedly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.057
86.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount737
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Thompson"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount737
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"comfortable"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"comfortable"
1"silence"
2"familiar"
3"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences36
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences36
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences56
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords739
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
74.57% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount464
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.51
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Evan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Wednesday1
Silas1
Evan5
Aurora7
Sunday1
Cardiff1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
4"Aurora"
5"Cardiff"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.746
windowScore1
63.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences29
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like someone else's life"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount739
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
91.62% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean26.39
std12.42
cv0.471
sampleLengths
063
134
21
335
420
520
636
716
832
916
1014
1128
1214
1337
1412
1529
1637
1735
1824
1930
2010
2121
2225
2329
2445
2529
2612
2735
95.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences36
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs72
matches
0"weren't saying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences56
ratio0.054
matches
0"The Raven's Nest held its usual Wednesday night crowd - a scattered handful of regulars nursing their drinks in comfortable silence."
1"\"They weren't awful.\" The memory of those Sunday mornings hit unexpectedly hard - sharing pastries, planning futures that now felt like someone else's life."
2"They talked about safe things then - mutual acquaintances, office politics, the changing face of Cardiff's city center."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount462
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.0367965367965368
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.010822510822510822
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences56
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences56
mean13.2
std6.54
cv0.496
sampleLengths
021
124
218
319
415
51
620
715
810
910
1015
115
1219
136
1411
1514
162
1716
1816
195
2011
2114
226
2322
246
258
2611
2726
289
293
3016
3113
3218
3319
3416
3519
3624
3717
3813
393
407
4110
428
433
4414
4511
467
4722
4818
4927
74.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences56
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences36
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences36
matches
0"He turned at her voice,"
1"His briefcase hit the floor"
2"She squared her shoulders, grateful"
3"He loosened his tie"
4"He took a sip, eyes"
5"Her laugh came out sharp"
6"He stared into his scotch"
7"She grabbed a fresh cloth,"
8"His voice had lost its"
9"He reached for his wallet"
10"They talked about safe things"
11"She gathered their empty glasses"
ratio0.333
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount32
totalSentences36
matches
0"The Raven's Nest held its"
1"Aurora wiped down the bar"
2"The familiar motions of cleaning"
3"The door creaked open, letting"
4"Aurora's hand froze mid-wipe, the"
5"He turned at her voice,"
6"The cocky grin she'd once"
7"His briefcase hit the floor"
8"She squared her shoulders, grateful"
9"Evan settled onto a barstool,"
10"He loosened his tie"
11"Aurora poured his drink with"
12"He took a sip, eyes"
13"The word tasted bitter"
14"Aurora busied herself arranging clean"
15"Her laugh came out sharp"
16"Evan's fingers tightened around his"
17"The old anger bubbled up,"
18"He stared into his scotch"
19"She grabbed a fresh cloth,"
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences36
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Through the window, the green neon sign cast shifting shadows across Evan's face, making him look older, more vulnerable."
1"But underneath ran currents of all they weren't saying: the apologies that came too late, the dreams they'd outgrown, the people they'd become in each other's a…"
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He took, eyes moving over the vintage maps on the walls"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.4336%