Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRGPKJMGDGSMSZDSMR8PK5

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Duration:
6m 39s
Cost:
$0.000972
Provider:
NextBit

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed the pavement, the gutters overflowing as Detective Harlow Quinn gripped the collar of her trench coat. Her worn leather watch glinted under a flickering streetlamp, the second hand ticking away the seconds she didn't have to spare. Her sharp jaw clenched as she scanned the shadowy alleyways branching off from the rain-slicked road. There - a flicker of movement, barely noticeable through the downpour. She'd been tailing the suspect for blocks now, ever since she'd seen him slip out the back of the Raven's Nest. Something about him set her senses tingling, a gut feeling that told her he was involved in whatever the hell was going on with the secretive little clique that frequented Silas' bar. "Damn it," she muttered, picking up her pace. The suspect had ducked into a side passage, his form swallowed by the darkness. Quinn followed, grimacing as her shoes squelched in the sodden grime underfoot. The walls pressed in close, old brick slick with rain. She emerged onto a wider walkway and paused, eyes straining to peer through the rainy gloom. There, up ahead - the suspect was just a shadow, hood pulled low, moving with haste. "What are you running from?" Quinn whispered, breaking into a jog to keep up. Her breath misted in the chill air as she pursued him across a derelict yard, through a rusted archway, and down a set of concrete stairs, steps leading underground. The suspect seemed to know exactly where he was going, never hesitating. Quinn's own footsteps echoed loudly in the confined space, but she was beyond caring about stealth. Her heart hammered against her ribs as they descended further into the bowels of the city. Where the hell was he leading her? Some kind of hideout? A clandestine meetup she could bust wide open? At the bottom of the stairs, the suspect paused before an old wooden door set into the stone. He raised a hand - and the door opened silently, spilling yellow light onto the dank landing. Quinn blinked, momentarily dazzled by the unexpected brightness. When her vision cleared, she saw she stood on the edge of a sprawling underground market, stalls and shops huddled under the curve of a forgotten Tube station. The suspect had already vanished into the throng of shoppers, his dark clothing blending seamlessly with the crowd. Everywhere she looked, people bustled and haggled over goods ranging from exotic spices to glinting weaponry. She hesitated, one hand on the door jamb, the other reaching instinctively for the weapon at her hip. This was no ordinary black market, that much was clear. There was a buzz in the air, a sense of anticipation and secrets lurking in every shadowed corner. Movement caught her eye. Across the market, the suspect glanced back over his shoulder, meeting her gaze briefly. A challenge, daring her to follow. Quinn's grip tightened on the weathered doorframe. Every instinct screamed at her to retreat, call for backup, come back with a team trained to tackle whatever this was. But the memory of her partner, Morris, flashed through her head - the horrific nature of his last moments, the unsettling questions left in his wake. Questions she was no closer to answering. "Damn you, Morris," she whispered, but she already knew she was going to step into the breach, chase this lead until it gave her the answers she needed. She owed it to him. To herself. With a deep breath, she crossed the threshold, the door sealing shut behind her with a heavy clunk. The sounds of the market washed over her - a tempered roar of a hundred hushed conversations, the clink of coin changing hands, the rustle of fabric as people moved through the crowded alleys. She had to find the suspect before he disappeared entirely. Stealing a deep breath, she plunged into the nearest row of stalls, ducking under hanging rugs and bolts of shimmering cloth, shoving past murmuring patrons. "Excuse me, miss?" a voice called from her left, but Quinn ignored it, eyes scanning frantically for any sign of her quarry. Damn it, where had he gone? The crowd surged around her, a wall of bodies forever shifting, blocking her view. "Detective," a different voice called, more insistent. A hand closed around her elbow. "Detective Quinn." Her head whipped around, shock widening her eyes as she came face-to-face with Tomás Herrera, the ex-paramedic who had saved her life during the altercation at the docks. The last time she had seen him, he was being loaded into an ambulance and whisked away to who-knew-where. Now here he stood, looking hale and whole, his olive skin crinkled with concern as he peered at her. "You shouldn't be here. It's not safe." "What the hell are you doing here, Herrera?" she demanded, shaking off his grip and glancing around wildly. The suspect was long gone, vanished into thin air. "I'm here to help," Tomás said simply. "I've been keeping an eye on you, Quinn. Watching your back." She stared at him, her mind reeling. "Who are you working for?" "For the same people you're trying to protect, whether you realize it or not." "But..." Her words were cut off as a new sound rose over the market's din - the thud of heavy footfalls, coming closer. Instinctively, she unsnapped the holster of her weapon. "They're coming," Tomás said grimly. "The people who run this market. They don't take kindly to outsiders." Quinn tensed, her hand hovering over the butt of her pistol. "We need to find the man I was chasing. He's--" "There's no time." Tomás grabbed her arm again, more insistent this time. "If they catch you, they'll kill you. Or worse." Gridlock seized her muscles as awful possibilities spun through her head - Morris' blank eyed corpse, the unnatural angle of his neck, the scent of ozone and blood that had lingered in the air... She couldn't end up like that. Couldn't leave this world with the same questions hanging unanswered over her grave. "Come on," Tomás urged, tugging her into motion. "We've got to go. Now." Still torn, Quinn glanced over her shoulder, in the direction her suspect had vanished. A muscle in her jaw popped as she made her decision. "Show me the way out," she said through gritted teeth. Tomás nodded, already moving, towing her through the winding lanes of the market. Behind them, the heavy footfalls drew closer, joined by the jingle of gear and the muffled voices of their pursuers. Quinn was forced to trust the ex-paramedic as he navigated them on a convoluted path through the many stalls - always making sure there were people between them and the far end of the market, where the unknown pursuers were closing in. As they ducked into a narrow gap between two stalls selling shimmering fabric, Quinn heard a shout go up behind them. "There they are! Stop them!" Their pace kicked into a sprint as the market erupted into chaos - shoppers crying out in alarm, stalls overturning with crashes and clatters. They pelted down a side alley, Quinn's lungs burning, the sounds of pursuit gaining rapidly. "They're gaining on us," she hissed, sensing the menace closing in like a noose. "Where the hell are we going?" Tomás didn't answer, just kept pulling her along. They skidded around a corner, nearly colliding with a huddle of robed figures bartering over a glass vial. A dead end loomed ahead, the far wall of the underground station curving away to either side. Quinn's heart lurched into her throat. "No..." she gasped, staring in horror at the trap they'd run into. Tomás grabbed her hand, directives forgotten in the face of imminent danger. He hauled her bodily into a small gap between a jewelry stall and the corridor wall, pressing them both back against the cold stone. He was just in time - their hunters pounded past the opening, six or seven of them, led by a figure in a long coat, the glint of a brass badge at his collar. The group raced by, booted feet thudding against the floor. Quinn held her breath, heart thundering in her ears. The troop disappeared around the bend, shouting to each other in a guttural language she didn't understand. Slowly, she turned to face Tomás, finding him already watching her. "How did you--" He silenced her with a finger to her lips. "Quickly. We have to go, before they realize their mistake." Still reeling from the adrenaline of their mad dash, Quinn let him pull her out of their hiding spot and down a new series of twisting passages, each seeming to slope upward. "I know a way out," he promised, guarding their rear as they moved. "Just stay close." Within minutes, they emerged through a rusted maintenance hatch into an alley not unlike the one Quinn had chased her suspect into. The rain had slowed to a drizzle, the night air like a cold slap to the face after the stagnant warmth of the market. Tomássecured the hatch behind them, then turned to Quinn. The concern was back on his face as he scanned her for injury, seeming to find none. "You shouldn't have come here tonight, detective." "I didn't have a choice," she replied tightly. "That man I was chasing--" "He likely saved your life. The Veil Market... it's run by the same people who took Morris. If they'd caught you down there, you would've met the same fate." Quinn's hands curled into fists at her sides. "Then help me stop them. Help me find out who they are and what they're doing." Tomás ducked his head, considering her for a long moment. "If I do...will you promise to tread carefully? I can't bear the thought of another good person falling to the darkness of this city." Slowly, she nodded. "I promise, Herrera. I know I can't do this alone. But in return...I need you to help me find the man I was chasing. He's the key to all of this." Tomás sighed, rubbing a hand over his face. "Very well. We'll chase your suspect together. But first, I need to return to the Nest. I left something important there - something that might help us both understand what we're truly up against." He stepped past her, moving to the mouth of the alley, before hesitating. Glancing back, his warm brown eyes met hers through the darkness.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
37.84% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Tomás said simply [simply]"
1"Tomás said grimly [grimly]"
2"she replied tightly [tightly]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.459
leniency0.919
rawRatio0.176
effectiveRatio0.162
79.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1732
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
5
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"quickly"
2"tightly"
3"carefully"
4"very"
5"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1732
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"jaw clenched"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count2
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"clandestine"
count1
8
word"glinting"
count1
9
word"sense of"
count1
10
word"anticipation"
count1
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"grave"
count1
13
word"navigated"
count1
14
word"loomed"
count1
15
word"lurched"
count1
16
word"glint"
count1
17
word"raced"
count1
18
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"scanned"
2"flicker"
3"gloom"
4"chill"
5"footsteps"
6"echoed"
7"clandestine"
8"glinting"
9"sense of"
10"anticipation"
11"scanning"
12"grave"
13"navigated"
14"loomed"
15"lurched"
16"glint"
17"raced"
18"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences100
matches
0"a sense of anticipation"
1"g in horror"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1738
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1412
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn18
Raven1
Nest1
Tube1
Morris1
Damn1
Tomás11
Herrera1
Gridlock1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Morris"
4"Tomás"
5"Herrera"
6"Gridlock"
places
0"Damn"
globalScore0.863
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences91
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1738
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
87.35% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs59
mean29.46
std13.42
cv0.456
sampleLengths
055
164
244
332
414
541
632
719
835
936
1034
1146
1224
1361
1435
1552
1635
1742
1815
1947
2026
2127
2218
2312
2414
251
2630
2717
2821
2921
3034
3119
3213
3325
3410
3533
3642
3726
3839
3920
4026
4123
4212
4336
4444
4537
463
4719
4832
4916
94.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences100
matches
0"was involved"
1"being loaded"
2"was forced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs259
matches
0"was going"
1"was going"
2"were closing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences122
ratio0.074
matches
0"There - a flicker of movement, barely noticeable through the downpour."
1"There, up ahead - the suspect was just a shadow, hood pulled low, moving with haste."
2"He raised a hand - and the door opened silently, spilling yellow light onto the dank landing."
3"But the memory of her partner, Morris, flashed through her head - the horrific nature of his last moments, the unsettling questions left in his wake."
4"The sounds of the market washed over her - a tempered roar of a hundred hushed conversations, the clink of coin changing hands, the rustle of fabric as people moved through the crowded alleys."
5"Her words were cut off as a new sound rose over the market's din - the thud of heavy footfalls, coming closer."
6"Quinn was forced to trust the ex-paramedic as he navigated them on a convoluted path through the many stalls - always making sure there were people between them and the far end of the market, where the unknown pursuers were closing in."
7"Their pace kicked into a sprint as the market erupted into chaos - shoppers crying out in alarm, stalls overturning with crashes and clatters."
8"He was just in time - their hunters pounded past the opening, six or seven of them, led by a figure in a long coat, the glint of a brass badge at his collar."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount348
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.017241379310344827
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.014367816091954023
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean14.25
std8.41
cv0.59
sampleLengths
018
121
216
311
421
532
68
714
812
910
1016
1116
1214
1329
1412
1516
1616
177
184
198
2018
2117
228
2328
2418
2516
2618
2710
2818
294
3014
316
327
3321
3426
357
3628
375
382
3918
4034
4110
4225
4322
446
4514
467
476
482
4928
71.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.45081967213114754
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners55
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences99
matches
0"Everywhere she looked, people bustled"
1"Instinctively, she unsnapped the holster"
2"Still torn, Quinn glanced over"
3"Slowly, she turned to face"
4"Still reeling from the adrenaline"
5"Slowly, she nodded."
ratio0.061
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences99
matches
0"Her worn leather watch glinted"
1"Her sharp jaw clenched as"
2"She'd been tailing the suspect"
3"she muttered, picking up her"
4"She emerged onto a wider"
5"Her breath misted in the"
6"Her heart hammered against her"
7"He raised a hand -"
8"She hesitated, one hand on"
9"she whispered, but she already"
10"She owed it to him."
11"She had to find the"
12"Her head whipped around, shock"
13"she demanded, shaking off his"
14"She stared at him, her"
15"Her words were cut off"
16"She couldn't end up like"
17"she said through gritted teeth"
18"Their pace kicked into a"
19"They pelted down a side"
ratio0.293
71.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences99
matches
0"Rain lashed the pavement, the"
1"Her worn leather watch glinted"
2"Her sharp jaw clenched as"
3"There - a flicker of"
4"She'd been tailing the suspect"
5"Something about him set her"
6"she muttered, picking up her"
7"The suspect had ducked into"
8"Quinn followed, grimacing as her"
9"The walls pressed in close,"
10"She emerged onto a wider"
11"There, up ahead - the"
12"Quinn whispered, breaking into a"
13"Her breath misted in the"
14"The suspect seemed to know"
15"Quinn's own footsteps echoed loudly"
16"Her heart hammered against her"
17"Some kind of hideout?"
18"A clandestine meetup she could"
19"He raised a hand -"
ratio0.778
50.51% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"Now here he stood, looking"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"They pelted down a side alley, Quinn's lungs burning, the sounds of pursuit gaining rapidly."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Quinn whispered (whisper)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she demanded (demand)"
4"Tomás urged (urge)"
5"she hissed (hiss)"
6"she gasped (gasp)"
7"he promised (promise)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.378
leniency0.757
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.432
83.9595%