Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRGQG706A0SJRS10PZNN42

Run Details

Duration:
35.8s
Cost:
$0.000731
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the murmur of conversation and the clink of glasses. The dim light cast long shadows on the walls, where old maps and black-and-white photographs gave the bar a sense of history and depth. The air was thick with the scent of aged wood and a hint of smoke, despite the smoking ban. Aurora Carter, known to her friends as Rory, pushed open the door, the distinctive green neon sign above it flickering to life as she stepped inside. Her eyes adjusted to the semi-darkness, and she scanned the room for familiar faces. The bar was bustling, as it always was, but there was one figure at the far end who caught her attention. It was Silas Blackwood, the owner of the bar, leaning against the counter, his hazel eyes surveying the room with a quiet authority. He nodded in her direction, a small smile playing at the corners of his mouth. Rory made her way through the crowd, her black hair falling in straight, shoulder-length waves around her face, and took a seat next to him. "Evening, Rory," Silas said, his voice a mix of gravel and warmth. "The usual?" She nodded. "Thanks, Si." Silas poured her a glass of whiskey, the amber liquid swirling in the glass as he set it down in front of her. She took a sip, letting the familiar burn slide down her throat. As she set the glass back down, her gaze landed on a figure sitting alone at a corner table. It was a woman with a shock of red hair, her eyes hidden behind dark glasses. Rory's heart skipped a beat. She had seen that hair before, years ago. "Eva," she whispered, almost to herself. Silas followed her gaze and raised an eyebrow. "Seems like destiny's giving you a surprise tonight." Rory hesitated for a moment, then pushed herself off the stool and made her way across the room. The woman at the table looked up as she approached, and the dark glasses slipped off, revealing a pair of deep, green eyes. Eva's face was different—older, more pronounced lines around her mouth and eyes, but the same fiery spirit still lingered. "Rory," Eva said, her voice a mix of surprise and something else Rory couldn't quite place. "It's been a long time." Rory pulled up a chair and sat down, the weight of the years settling between them. "It has," she agreed. "How have you been?" Eva's lips curved into a small, wry smile. "I've been ... a lot. What about you? Losing yourself in the city, as usual?" Rory laughed, a short, sharp sound that felt almost foreign. "Something like that. Work, deliveries, the usual grind. What about you? Last I heard, you were off to Paris." "Ah, Paris," Eva said, her eyes taking on a faraway look. "It was a beautiful city. But it wasn't meant to be a permanent home. Life has a way of pulling you in different directions." Silas appeared at the table, a glass of red wine in his hand. He set it down in front of Eva and gave her a nod. "Good to see you, Eva. You're looking well." Eva smiled at him, a genuine, warm smile that lit up her face. "Thanks, Silas. You haven't changed a bit." Silas chuckled. "Neither have you, darling. Now, if you'll excuse me, I have a bar to run." He disappeared back into the crowd, leaving the two women alone again. Rory took a deep breath and looked at Eva, trying to find the words to bridge the gap of time and silence between them. "So, what brought you back to London?" Rory asked, her voice steady but tinged with curiosity. Eva swirled the wine in her glass, her expression thoughtful. "A job. A new start, I hope. I've been traveling a lot, but I needed to settle down. London felt like ... a good place to start over." Rory nodded, understanding the pull of the familiar. "I get that. This city has a way of drawing you back, no matter how far you go." They fell into a comfortable silence, each lost in their own thoughts. The bar was a place of refuge, a haven from the chaos of the outside world. Rory sipped her whiskey, the warmth spreading through her, and Eva sipped her wine, the gentle clink of the glass against the table the only sound between them. "Remember when we used to sneak into this place?" Eva said, breaking the silence. "Silas would always catch us, but he never kicked us out. He just shook his head and told us to behave." Rory laughed, the memory bringing a smile to her face. "Those were the days. We were so young and reckless." Eva nodded, a wistful smile playing at her lips. "We were. And now here we are, years later, sitting in the same bar, but so much has changed." Rory's smile faded, and she met Eva's gaze. "It has. People change, don't they?" Eva's green eyes searched Rory's face, and for a moment, the tension between them was almost palpable. "You've changed, Rory. You're ... different." Rory shifted in her seat, the weight of Eva's words settling on her shoulders. "I know. I had to. Things happened. People happened. I couldn't stay the same." Eva's expression softened. "I can't blame you for that. We all have our reasons. But I'm glad you're here. I've missed ... this." Rory felt a lump form in her throat, the unspoken words hanging between them. "I've missed you too, Eva. More than you know." They sat in silence for a moment, the weight of their unspoken regrets and the years that had passed thick in the air. The bar around them seemed to fade away, leaving only the two of them and the ghosts of their past. "I'm sorry, Rory," Eva said, her voice barely above a whisper. "For everything. For being gone when you needed me. For all the things I didn't say." Rory's breath caught in her throat, and she reached out, her hand finding Eva's. "I know. And I'm sorry too. For pushing you away. For not reaching out. We were kids, Evans. We made mistakes." Eva's hand tightened around Rory's, and for a moment, the world around them ceased to exist. The past and the present blurred together, and they were just two old friends, finding their way back to each other. "It's not too late, you know," Eva said, her voice filled with a newfound determination. "To make things right. To start over." Rory felt a wave of hope wash over her, and she smiled, a genuine, heartfelt smile. "No, it's not. Let's do it, Evans. Let's start over." Eva's eyes sparkled, and she raised her glass in a toast. "To new beginnings." Rory clinked her glass against Eva's, and they both took a sip, the warmth of the alcohol and the warmth of their reunited friendship spreading through them. The bar continued to hum around them, but for Rory and Eva, the world had narrowed down to this moment, this table, and the promise of a new beginning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.257
leniency0.514
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1194
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Evans"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1194
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"sense of"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count3
3
word"warmth"
count4
4
word"skipped a beat"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"weight"
count3
7
word"silence"
count4
8
word"tinged"
count1
9
word"comfortable"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"palpable"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count2
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"newfound"
count1
highlights
0"sense of"
1"scanned"
2"familiar"
3"warmth"
4"skipped a beat"
5"eyebrow"
6"weight"
7"silence"
8"tinged"
9"comfortable"
10"tension"
11"palpable"
12"unspoken"
13"whisper"
14"newfound"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
96.75% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences59
matches
0"felt a lump"
1"a wave of hope"
94.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences59
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1193
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount843
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.61
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Rory21
Silas6
Blackwood1
Eva22
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Blackwood"
6"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.195
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1193
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"seen that hair"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean31.39
std20.11
cv0.641
sampleLengths
083
198
214
34
483
56
616
760
821
924
1023
1129
1235
1334
1420
1517
1636
1716
1838
1926
2056
2135
2220
2328
2414
2523
2628
2723
2823
2943
3027
3135
3237
3322
3426
3514
3627
3729
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs124
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences85
ratio0.012
matches
0"Eva's face was different—older, more pronounced lines around her mouth and eyes, but the same fiery spirit still lingered."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount848
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.02240566037735849
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003537735849056604
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean14.04
std6.9
cv0.491
sampleLengths
014
124
219
326
414
521
623
715
825
912
102
112
122
1323
1412
1519
1616
175
188
196
208
218
2218
2323
2419
2516
265
2716
284
294
308
3115
3210
3319
3411
3524
3613
3713
388
3913
407
412
4215
4312
4424
4516
4610
4728
488
4918
54.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3411764705882353
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences56
matches
0"Her eyes adjusted to the"
1"It was Silas Blackwood, the"
2"He nodded in her direction,"
3"She took a sip, letting"
4"It was a woman with"
5"She had seen that hair"
6"she whispered, almost to herself"
7"He set it down in"
8"He disappeared back into the"
9"They fell into a comfortable"
10"They sat in silence for"
ratio0.196
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences56
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"The dim light cast long"
2"The air was thick with"
3"Aurora Carter, known to her"
4"Her eyes adjusted to the"
5"The bar was bustling, as"
6"It was Silas Blackwood, the"
7"He nodded in her direction,"
8"Rory made her way through"
9"Silas said, his voice a"
10"Silas poured her a glass"
11"She took a sip, letting"
12"It was a woman with"
13"Rory's heart skipped a beat."
14"She had seen that hair"
15"she whispered, almost to herself"
16"Silas followed her gaze and"
17"Rory hesitated for a moment,"
18"The woman at the table"
19"Eva's face was different—older, more"
ratio0.982
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Silas said, his voice a mix of gravel and warmth"
1"she whispered, almost to herself"
2"Eva said, her eyes taking on a faraway look"
3"Rory asked, her voice steady but tinged with curiosity"
4"Eva said, her voice barely above a whisper"
92.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.257
leniency0.514
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.114
77.1454%