Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRGQSWT6Q57S1WRYFQMWJ8

Run Details

Duration:
7.6s
Cost:
$0.000352

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain was a relentless drumbeat on the cobblestones, each drop a tiny, cold fist pounding into the night. Detective Harlow Quinn, her salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull, pursued her suspect through the labyrinthine streets of Soho. Her breath misted in the chill air, her worn leather watch ticking like a metronome on her left wrist. The man she chased, Tomás Herrera, darted around a corner, his olive skin glistening under the sickly glow of a streetlamp. Quinn's sharp jaw was set, her eyes, brown as wet earth, narrowed against the rain. "Herrera!" she barked, her voice echoing off the narrow alley walls. "London Metropolitan Police! Stop running!" Herrera glanced back, his warm brown eyes wide with panic. He ducked into a doorway, disappearing into the shadows. Quinn skidded to a halt, her heart pounding in her chest. She approached the doorway, her hand resting on the cool metal of her gun. The door creaked open, revealing a dimly lit stairwell leading down. Quinn hesitated, her military precision warring with her instinct for self-preservation. The Veil Market was down there, a hidden supernatural black market that moved locations every full moon. She'd heard whispers of it, but she'd never set foot inside. It was a world away from the ordered chaos of the police station, a place where the rules were different, and the penalties for breaking them were severe. She took a deep breath, the scent of damp earth and something else, something acrid and unnatural, filling her nostrils. She descended the stairs, her footsteps echoing in the silence. The stairwell opened into a vast, cavernous space, the abandoned Tube station transformed into a bustling market. Stalls groaned under the weight of enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information peddlers hawking their wares in low, urgent voices. Quinn scanned the crowd, her gaze landing on Herrera. He was weaving through the throng, his curly dark hair a beacon in the sea of faces. She pushed after him, her hand still on her gun. The market was a sensory assault, the air thick with the scent of exotic spices and the hum of voices speaking in a dozen different languages. She passed a stall selling vials of shimmering liquid, the sign above it proclaiming 'Love Potions - Guaranteed'. She snorted, her grip tightening on her gun. Herrera ducked into a narrow alley between two stalls. Quinn followed, her heart pounding in her chest. The alley was dark, the only light a faint, flickering glow from a lantern hanging from a hook. She could hear Herrera's ragged breath, see the rise and fall of his shoulders. She drew her gun, her finger resting on the trigger. "Herrera," she said, her voice low and dangerous. "You're under arrest. You have the right to remain silent..." Herrera turned, his eyes wide with fear. "Detective Quinn," he said, his voice barely above a whisper. "I can explain." Quinn raised an eyebrow. "Can you now?" she said. "Because from where I'm standing, it looks like you're running from the police. Again." Herrera shook his head, his scarred left forearm visible in the dim light. "It's not what you think," he said. "I was trying to help someone. A friend. She's in trouble, Detective. Bad trouble." Quinn's grip on her gun tightened. "And you thought the best way to help her was to run from the police?" she said. "That's not how this works, Herrera. You should know that." Herrera shook his head again, his eyes pleading. "Please, Detective," he said. "You don't understand. This is bigger than you, bigger than me. It's about the clique, about what they're doing. They're involved in something dangerous, something dark. And my friend, she's caught in the middle of it." Quinn's brow furrowed. The clique was a notorious gang, rumored to be involved in all manner of criminal activity. She'd suspected as much, but she'd never been able to prove it. Until now, perhaps. She lowered her gun, her mind racing. "Tell me," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "Tell me everything." Herrera took a deep breath, his eyes never leaving Quinn's. "I was a paramedic," he said. "I worked for the NHS, but I lost my license. I couldn't... I couldn't turn my back on people who needed help, Detective. So I started working for the clique, off the books. I thought I could make a difference, help people from the inside. But I was wrong. They're not people, Detective. They're monsters." Quinn's grip on her gun tightened. "What are they involved in, Herrera?" she said. "What's so dangerous that you'd risk everything to stop it?" Herrera hesitated, his eyes flicking to the darkness behind Quinn. "I don't know," he said. "I don't know what they're doing, but I know it's bad. And my friend, she's in the middle of it. She's in trouble, Detective. Real trouble." Quinn's mind was racing, the pieces of the puzzle clicking into place. The clique, the supernatural black market, Herrera's desperate flight through the rain-soaked streets. It all pointed to something big, something dangerous. She took a deep breath, her decision made. "Alright, Herrera," she said, her voice steady. "I'll help you. But you have to trust me. We're in this together, understand? No more running, no more secrets. We're a team." Herrera nodded, relief flooding his features. "Thank you, Detective," he said. "Thank you." Quinn holstered her gun, her mind already racing with plans. They had a long night ahead of them, a dangerous path to tread. But they were in it together, and together, they could make a difference. She turned, her eyes scanning the darkness of the Veil Market. They had a lot of work to do.
total_cost0.00035175

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.538
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount954
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count2
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount954
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"pounding"
count3
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"glistening"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count2
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"beacon"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count2
10
word"eyebrow"
count1
11
word"furrowed"
count1
12
word"racing"
count3
13
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"chill"
2"glistening"
3"echoing"
4"footsteps"
5"silence"
6"weight"
7"scanned"
8"beacon"
9"whisper"
10"eyebrow"
11"furrowed"
12"racing"
13"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
99.36% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences65
matches
0"e with panic"
1"e with fear"
98.90% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences65
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords951
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount687
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.04
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn14
Soho1
Tomás1
Herrera12
Veil2
Market2
Tube1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.481
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount951
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
98.23% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean43.23
std21.35
cv0.494
sampleLengths
078
131
255
367
468
588
659
718
820
923
1034
1133
1248
1341
1413
1571
1624
1741
1841
1930
2013
2155
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
85.06% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs116
matches
0"was weaving"
1"was racing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences78
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount579
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.013816925734024179
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0051813471502590676
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean12.19
std7.99
cv0.656
sampleLengths
019
119
219
321
415
511
65
710
89
911
1014
1111
1211
1317
1411
1528
1620
1710
1817
1921
209
2117
2210
2326
2418
258
269
278
2818
2914
3010
318
3210
337
3410
353
364
375
3814
3913
407
4114
426
4317
4410
458
464
4736
483
4916
41.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3076923076923077
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
44.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences57
matches
0"Her breath misted in the"
1"she barked, her voice echoing"
2"He ducked into a doorway,"
3"She approached the doorway, her"
4"She'd heard whispers of it,"
5"It was a world away"
6"She took a deep breath,"
7"She descended the stairs, her"
8"He was weaving through the"
9"She pushed after him, her"
10"She passed a stall selling"
11"She snorted, her grip tightening"
12"She could hear Herrera's ragged"
13"She drew her gun, her"
14"she said, her voice low"
15"he said, his voice barely"
16"She'd suspected as much, but"
17"She lowered her gun, her"
18"she said, her voice barely"
19"It all pointed to something"
ratio0.439
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences57
matches
0"The rain was a relentless"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn, her salt-and-pepper"
2"Her breath misted in the"
3"The man she chased, Tomás"
4"Quinn's sharp jaw was set,"
5"she barked, her voice echoing"
6"Herrera glanced back, his warm"
7"He ducked into a doorway,"
8"Quinn skidded to a halt,"
9"She approached the doorway, her"
10"The door creaked open, revealing"
11"Quinn hesitated, her military precision"
12"The Veil Market was down"
13"She'd heard whispers of it,"
14"It was a world away"
15"She took a deep breath,"
16"She descended the stairs, her"
17"The stairwell opened into a"
18"Stalls groaned under the weight"
19"Quinn scanned the crowd, her"
ratio0.965
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The Veil Market was down there, a hidden supernatural black market that moved locations every full moon."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she barked, her voice echoing off the narrow alley walls"
1"she said, her voice low and dangerous"
2"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
3"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
4"she said, her voice steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she barked (bark)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.077
76.3328%