Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRGRKJ0YX8M2ZX3N34DVD3

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Duration:
25.3s
Cost:
$0.009206

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, turning London’s streets into a slick, black mirror. Neon signs bled into puddles, smearing the pavement with fractured light. Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through the mess, her breath sharp in the cold air. The suspect had cut down a narrow alley, vanishing behind a dumpster slick with rainwater. She didn’t slow. Her fingers twitched near her sidearm, but she kept it holstered—for now. The alley spat her out onto a quieter street, where the glow of a green neon sign flickered above a battered door. *The Raven’s Nest.* She knew the place. A dive bar with a reputation for harboring the wrong kind of crowd. The door swung shut just as she reached it. She yanked it open, the warmth inside hitting her like a wall. The air smelled of whiskey and damp wool. A few heads turned, eyes narrowing at the intrusion. Quinn ignored them, scanning the room. No sign of her suspect. A man behind the bar wiped a glass with a rag that had seen better days. "You lost, love?" She didn’t answer. Her gaze locked onto a bookshelf against the far wall. It looked too deliberate, too staged. She crossed the room in three strides, fingers brushing the spines of old books. One of them—a leather-bound volume with no title—gave under her touch. The bookshelf swung inward with a groan. Beyond it, a narrow staircase descended into darkness. Quinn exhaled through her nose. She checked her watch—worn leather, the face scratched but still ticking. No backup. No time. She stepped through. The stairs creaked under her weight, the air growing thicker with each step. The walls were damp, the scent of earth and something older clinging to the stone. At the bottom, a dimly lit tunnel stretched ahead, lit by flickering bulbs strung along the ceiling. The distant hum of voices carried toward her. She moved forward, her boots silent on the packed dirt. The tunnel opened into a cavernous space—an abandoned Tube station, its tiles cracked and peeling. Stalls lined the platform, draped in shadows, their wares hidden beneath tarps and flickering lanterns. The air smelled of incense and something metallic, like old coins left in the rain. This was the Veil Market. Quinn’s pulse kicked up. She’d heard whispers of this place—black-market deals, things that didn’t belong in the world of men. Her suspect stood near a stall at the far end, talking to a figure wrapped in a long coat. The suspect’s hands moved quickly, shoving something into his pocket before turning toward the shadows. She didn’t hesitate. Quinn stepped onto the platform, her presence drawing glances from the figures lurking in the stalls. A woman with too many rings on her fingers eyed her with open suspicion. A man in a tattered suit smirked, revealing teeth that looked too sharp. The suspect bolted. Quinn broke into a run, weaving between stalls. A vendor hissed as she knocked over a display of glass vials, the shattering sound lost in the chaos. The suspect ducked behind a curtain of beads, disappearing into a side tunnel. She followed, the beads clattering against her shoulders. The tunnel twisted, the air growing colder. The sounds of the market faded behind her. Then, ahead—a door, half-rotted wood hanging off its hinges. She kicked it open. The room beyond was small, lit by a single bulb swinging from the ceiling. The suspect stood in the corner, breathing hard, his back pressed against the wall. His eyes flicked to the door, then back to her. "End of the line," Quinn said, her voice steady. The suspect swallowed. "You don’t know what you’re walking into." She stepped closer, her hand resting on her holster. "Then enlighten me." He didn’t answer. Instead, his gaze darted past her, to the shadows pooling in the corners of the room. Quinn tensed. The air smelled wrong—too still, too thick. A voice slithered out of the dark. "Detective Quinn. We’ve been expecting you." She turned. A figure stepped into the light. Tall, wrapped in a coat that seemed to drink in the dim glow. His face was all sharp angles, his smile too wide. "You shouldn’t have followed him here." Quinn’s fingers tightened around her gun. "Who the hell are you?" The figure chuckled, the sound like dry leaves scraping stone. "A friend of your old partner, actually." Her breath caught. "Morris." The figure inclined his head. "He sends his regards." The suspect took the moment to lunge for the door. Quinn sidestepped, blocking his path. "Not so fast." The figure in the coat sighed. "This doesn’t have to be difficult, Detective. Walk away. Forget you saw any of this." Quinn’s jaw tightened. "Not a chance." The figure’s smile faded. "Then you leave us no choice." The shadows at his feet twisted, rising like smoke. Quinn’s instincts screamed. She raised her gun—but the figure was already moving, faster than should’ve been possible. His hand closed around her wrist, cold as a corpse. She yanked back, but his grip was iron. The suspect bolted past her, vanishing into the tunnel. The figure leaned in, his breath reeking of something sour. "You should’ve listened." Quinn drove her knee into his gut. He grunted, doubling over just enough for her to wrench free. She didn’t wait. She ran.
total_cost0.009206

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount898
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount898
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"flickered"
2"warmth"
3"scanning"
4"weight"
5"pulse"
6"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences89
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords3
totalWords886
ratio0.003
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount810
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.6
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow1
Quinn13
Raven1
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Market"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.698
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"coat that seemed to drink in the dim glow"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount886
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean25.31
std18.07
cv0.714
sampleLengths
055
157
249
319
451
58
623
753
855
95
1054
1146
123
1348
1428
1538
169
1710
1812
1928
2013
212
2235
2311
2417
254
269
2718
2821
296
3010
3136
3217
3313
3423
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs144
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences103
ratio0.078
matches
0"Her fingers twitched near her sidearm, but she kept it holstered—for now."
1"One of them—a leather-bound volume with no title—gave under her touch."
2"She checked her watch—worn leather, the face scratched but still ticking."
3"The tunnel opened into a cavernous space—an abandoned Tube station, its tiles cracked and peeling."
4"She’d heard whispers of this place—black-market deals, things that didn’t belong in the world of men."
5"Then, ahead—a door, half-rotted wood hanging off its hinges."
6"The air smelled wrong—too still, too thick."
7"She raised her gun—but the figure was already moving, faster than should’ve been possible."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount822
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.024330900243309004
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0024330900243309003
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean8.6
std4.79
cv0.557
sampleLengths
014
111
215
315
43
512
622
77
813
99
1012
118
129
136
145
1516
163
173
1810
196
2014
2111
227
238
245
2511
262
272
283
2913
3015
3117
328
3310
3415
3515
3615
375
384
3916
4019
4115
423
4316
4414
4513
463
478
4819
4913
42.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.23300970873786409
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners24
79.37% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"Then, ahead—a door, half-rotted wood"
1"Instead, his gaze darted past"
ratio0.024
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences84
matches
0"She didn’t slow."
1"Her fingers twitched near her"
2"She yanked it open, the"
3"She didn’t answer."
4"Her gaze locked onto a"
5"It looked too deliberate, too"
6"She crossed the room in"
7"She checked her watch—worn leather,"
8"She stepped through."
9"She moved forward, her boots"
10"She’d heard whispers of this"
11"Her suspect stood near a"
12"She didn’t hesitate."
13"She followed, the beads clattering"
14"She kicked it open."
15"His eyes flicked to the"
16"She stepped closer, her hand"
17"He didn’t answer."
18"His face was all sharp"
19"Her breath caught."
ratio0.298
7.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences84
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Neon signs bled into puddles,"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed"
3"The suspect had cut down"
4"She didn’t slow."
5"Her fingers twitched near her"
6"The alley spat her out"
7"*The Raven’s Nest.* She knew"
8"A dive bar with a"
9"The door swung shut just"
10"She yanked it open, the"
11"The air smelled of whiskey"
12"Quinn ignored them, scanning the"
13"A man behind the bar"
14"She didn’t answer."
15"Her gaze locked onto a"
16"It looked too deliberate, too"
17"She crossed the room in"
18"The bookshelf swung inward with"
19"Quinn exhaled through her nose."
ratio0.905
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She’d heard whispers of this place—black-market deals, things that didn’t belong in the world of men."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.1558%