Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRGSHQZKK5Q0MBG5DXB47N

Run Details

Duration:
31.9s
Cost:
$0.040092
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest cast an ethereal glow through the rain-streaked window. Aurora wiped down the bar counter, her reflection fragmenting across the wall of bottles behind her. Six months of part-time work here had taught her the rhythm of quiet Wednesday nights - just enough customers to keep the place feeling alive, not enough to drown out thoughts. The door creaked open, letting in a gust of autumn air and the tap of heels against hardwood. Aurora's hand froze mid-wipe as she caught sight of the woman in the entrance - designer coat, perfectly styled copper hair, and a face she hadn't seen since university. "Sarah?" The name fell from her lips before she could stop it. The woman's head snapped up, mascara-rimmed eyes widening. "Rory? Oh my God." Sarah Matthews - once her closest friend at Cardiff, now someone who looked like she'd stepped out of a fashion magazine. She crossed the room in quick strides, expensive perfume preceding her. "I can't believe it's you." Sarah perched on a barstool, her manicured fingers drumming against the worn wood. "What are you doing here?" Aurora's throat tightened. The last time they'd spoken had been through text messages that grew increasingly sparse until they stopped altogether. "I work here. And live upstairs, actually." "You're a bartender?" Sarah's perfectly shaped eyebrows lifted. "What happened to law school?" "Life happened." Aurora grabbed a glass, falling back on routine. "Your usual still gin and tonic?" "You remember." A smile flickered across Sarah's face. "Though make it top shelf now. I can afford it these days." The silence stretched between them as Aurora fixed the drink, punctuated by the clink of ice against glass. Sarah's wedding ring caught the light - a diamond large enough to put a down payment on a house. "Marcus?" Aurora asked, sliding the drink across. "Three years now. He made partner at his firm last spring." Sarah took a sip, leaving a crescent of red lipstick on the glass. "What about you? Still with Evan?" Aurora's fingers brushed unconsciously against her left wrist, finding the familiar crescent scar. "No. That ended... badly." Understanding dawned in Sarah's eyes, followed quickly by something that looked too much like pity. "Oh, Rory. I'm so sorry. I should have been there." "You were busy. Building your perfect life." The words came out sharper than intended. Aurora busied herself with wiping down an already clean glass. "Is that what you think I have?" Sarah's laugh held an edge. "Perfect? I haven't slept properly in months. Marcus works constant seventies-hour weeks, we're trying for a baby because that's what's expected, and most days I can't recognize myself in the mirror anymore." The admission hung in the air between them, heavy with years of unspoken words. Through the bar's front window, the neon sign painted them both in shades of green - making them look alien to each other, to themselves. "Remember that night in second year?" Aurora asked softly. "When we sat on the roof of your flat and planned out our futures?" "We were going to change the world." Sarah traced a finger through the condensation on her glass. "You were going to be a human rights lawyer. I was going to write novels that mattered." "Instead you're a corporate wife, and I'm serving drinks in Soho." "At least you're free." Sarah's voice cracked slightly. "I'm so tired of being perfect, Rory. Of measuring every word, every action. Sometimes I look at my life and wonder how I ended up so far from where we thought we'd be." Aurora leaned against the bar, studying her old friend's face - the careful makeup couldn't quite hide the shadows under her eyes, the tight lines around her mouth. "We can't go back. But maybe... maybe we can stop letting the past haunt us quite so much." Sarah reached across the bar, her perfectly manicured hand covering Aurora's scarred wrist. "I miss who we were." "I miss you too." Aurora turned her hand, squeezing Sarah's fingers. "But maybe we can try to know who we are now?" The door chimed again as more customers entered. Aurora straightened, professional mask sliding back into place. Sarah withdrew her hand, reaching for her purse. "I should go. Marcus will be wondering where I am." She stood, smoothing her coat. "But maybe... coffee sometime?" "I'd like that." Aurora pulled out a napkin, scrawling her number. "If you mean it this time." Sarah took the napkin, fingers lingering for a moment. "I do." She turned toward the door, then paused. "We're both still breathing, Rory. Maybe that's enough of a victory for now."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Aurora asked softly [softly]"
1"Sarah's voice cracked slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.111
61.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount774
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count3
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"quickly"
2"softly"
3"slightly"
60.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
1"Sarah"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount774
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count3
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"silence"
2"familiar"
3"perfect"
4"unspoken"
5"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences39
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences39
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences59
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords775
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
3.25% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount477
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.94
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Wednesday1
Matthews1
Cardiff1
Aurora14
Sarah14
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Matthews"
3"Aurora"
4"Sarah"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.032
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences33
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like she'd stepped out of a fashio"
1"quite hide the shadows under her eyes, the tight lines around her mouth"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount775
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
94.40% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean26.72
std12.84
cv0.48
sampleLengths
063
147
212
312
432
523
628
713
816
920
1037
117
1230
1317
1425
1524
1644
1739
1823
1934
2011
2141
2246
2318
2422
2524
2619
2717
2831
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs80
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences59
ratio0.102
matches
0"Six months of part-time work here had taught her the rhythm of quiet Wednesday nights - just enough customers to keep the place feeling alive, not enough to drown out thoughts."
1"Aurora's hand froze mid-wipe as she caught sight of the woman in the entrance - designer coat, perfectly styled copper hair, and a face she hadn't seen since university."
2"Sarah Matthews - once her closest friend at Cardiff, now someone who looked like she'd stepped out of a fashion magazine."
3"Sarah's wedding ring caught the light - a diamond large enough to put a down payment on a house."
4"Through the bar's front window, the neon sign painted them both in shades of green - making them look alien to each other, to themselves."
5"Aurora leaned against the bar, studying her old friend's face - the careful makeup couldn't quite hide the shadows under her eyes, the tight lines around her mouth."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount475
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.04
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.016842105263157894
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences59
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences59
mean13.14
std7.3
cv0.556
sampleLengths
016
116
231
318
429
512
68
74
821
911
1018
115
123
1318
147
158
165
1710
186
198
2012
2118
2219
237
2424
256
2613
274
2815
2910
3014
3110
3212
3332
3414
3525
369
3714
3817
3917
4011
418
4233
4328
4418
4513
465
4711
4811
498
74.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4576271186440678
totalSentences59
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount3
totalSentences39
matches
0"She crossed the room in"
1"She stood, smoothing her coat"
2"She turned toward the door,"
ratio0.077
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences39
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora wiped down the bar"
2"The door creaked open, letting"
3"Aurora's hand froze mid-wipe as"
4"The name fell from her"
5"The woman's head snapped up,"
6"Sarah Matthews - once her"
7"She crossed the room in"
8"Sarah perched on a barstool,"
9"Aurora's throat tightened."
10"The last time they'd spoken"
11"Sarah's perfectly shaped eyebrows lifted"
12"Aurora grabbed a glass, falling"
13"A smile flickered across Sarah's"
14"The silence stretched between them"
15"Sarah's wedding ring caught the"
16"Aurora asked, sliding the drink"
17"Sarah took a sip, leaving"
18"Aurora's fingers brushed unconsciously against"
19"Understanding dawned in Sarah's eyes,"
ratio0.949
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Sarah Matthews - once her closest friend at Cardiff, now someone who looked like she'd stepped out of a fashion magazine."
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Sarah perched, her manicured fingers drumming against the worn wood"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.111
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.1475%