Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRGT90WX3ED3Z9F62QE935

Run Details

Duration:
1m 18s
Cost:
$0.001659
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The forest path twisted deeper into shadows, the moon a pale sickle above. Rory’s boots crunched on the uneven ground, the sound loud in the stillness. Her heartbeat quickened, not from exertion but from the gnawing unease that had settled in her chest the moment she’d stepped past the standing stones. The Fae Grove loomed ahead, ancient oaks leaning inward as if conspiring. Wildflowers dotted the edges of the path, their petals unnaturally vibrant in the moonlight. They smelled sweet, cloying, and wrong for the time of year. She tightened her grip on the Heartstone pendant around her neck. It pulsed faintly, warmth radiating against her skin. “Here to find answers,” she muttered under her breath, more to convince herself than anything else. Eva had warned her about this place—time moved differently, she’d said. Minutes could stretch into hours, or worse. But Eva hadn’t mentioned the feeling of being watched. The air grew colder the deeper she went, a chill that seeped through her jacket and clung to her bones. She paused, listening. The forest was too quiet, as if holding its breath. No rustling of leaves, no distant hoot of an owl. Just silence pressing in on her, thick and suffocating. Her footsteps resumed, the crunch of leaves louder now. She glanced over her shoulder, scanning the path behind her. Nothing. Just shadows and trees. But the back of her neck prickled, a sensation like fingertips brushing against her skin. She turned back around, quickening her pace. A sound froze her in her tracks—a low, melodic hum that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. It wasn’t a song, not exactly. More like a vibration in the air, something that resonated in her chest and made her teeth ache. She swallowed hard, forcing herself to keep moving. “Just the wind,” she whispered, though the air was utterly still. The path widened into a clearing bathed in moonlight. The wildflowers here were taller, their stems swaying gently despite the lack of breeze. The hum grew louder, more insistent, and Rory clenched her fists to stop them from trembling. She glanced down at the Heartstone. It glowed brighter now, a deep crimson that pulsed in time with the hum. “What the hell are you doing here?” The voice startled her so badly she nearly dropped the pendant. She spun around, her breath catching in her throat. A man stood at the edge of the clearing, tall and lean, his features sharp and angular. His eyes glinted in the moonlight, a pale, unnatural shade of silver. He wore a dark coat that seemed to blend into the shadows, and his presence was so sudden, so unexpected, that Rory took a step back. “Who are you?” Her voice wavered, betraying her fear. He tilted his head, studying her with an intensity that made her skin crawl. “You shouldn’t be here,” he replied, his tone cold and detached. “This isn’t a place for humans.” Rory’s hand instinctively reached for the pendant again. “I didn’t come here for fun,” she shot back, her voice steadier than she felt. “I’m looking for something.” His gaze flicked to the Heartstone, and for a moment, his expression shifted—something like recognition, or maybe hunger. But it was gone as quickly as it appeared. “What you seek isn’t here,” he said, stepping closer. “Leave while you still can.” The words sent a shiver down her spine. She wanted to turn, to run, but something held her rooted to the spot. “And if I don’t?” His lips curved into a thin smile, devoid of warmth. “Then you’ll learn why this place is feared.” The hum grew louder, almost deafening now, and Rory pressed her hands to her ears. The man didn’t flinch, his gaze fixed on her with an unsettling calm. The wildflowers around them began to sway violently, their petals twisting and curling as if alive. The shadows deepened, creeping forward like tendrils of darkness. She stumbled backward, her heart pounding. “What’s happening?” “You shouldn’t have come,” he repeated, his voice echoing strangely in her ears. “Now it’s too late.” The ground beneath her feet shifted, the path dissolving into a swirling mist. Rory cried out, grasping for something, anything to steady herself. The Heartstone burned against her chest, its glow blinding. She squeezed her eyes shut, terror clawing at her throat. When she opened them, the clearing was gone. Around her stood towering oaks, their branches twisting upward like skeletal fingers. The air was thick with the scent of decay, and the wildflowers had been replaced by jagged, thorny vines that writhed as if alive. The man was nowhere to be seen. But in the distance, she heard something—a low, guttural growl that sent a jolt of panic through her. She turned, her breath coming in shallow gasps. Something moved in the darkness, a shape too large, too wrong to be natural. She took a step back, her foot catching on a root. The growl grew louder, closer, and she scrambled to her feet, her legs trembling. The Heartstone pulsed frantically, its warmth almost painful now. She clutched it tightly, the glow casting eerie shadows on the twisted trees. “Keep moving,” she whispered to herself. “Just keep moving.” She stumbled forward, the path ahead barely visible in the dim light. The growl followed, a sound that seemed to vibrate through her very bones. Her ears rang with the hum, now a deafening cacophony that made her head throb. She broke into a run, her boots slipping on the damp ground. The trees pressed in around her, their branches clawing at her jacket. She swatted them away, her breath coming in ragged bursts. The growl was right behind her now, so close she could feel the heat of it on her back. She dared a glance over her shoulder and wished she hadn’t. The creature was a writhing mass of shadow and fang, its eyes blazing like molten gold. It moved with terrifying speed, its form shifting and twisting as it pursued her. She screamed, the sound swallowed by the oppressive darkness. Her legs burned with exertion, her lungs on fire. The Heartstone’s glow flickered, dimming as if drained. “No, no, no,” she whimpered, clutching it tighter. “Not now.” The creature lunged, its jaws snapping inches from her heels. She threw herself forward, stumbling into a smaller clearing. The Heartstone blazed to life, its glow so bright it illuminated the entire space. The creature halted at the edge of the clearing, its growl turning to a snarl of frustration. It circled the perimeter, its eyes locked on her with predatory intensity. Rory sank to her knees, her body trembling. She pressed the pendant against her chest, gasping for air. The creature continued to stalk the edge of the clearing, but it didn’t cross the boundary. For now, she was safe. But the realization brought little comfort. She was trapped, alone in a place that defied logic and reason. And the creature was waiting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.474
leniency0.947
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1169
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"gently"
2"quickly"
3"tightly"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1169
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"quickened"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count3
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"resonated"
count1
9
word"wavered"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count2
11
word"flicked"
count1
12
word"down her spine"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count1
14
word"echoing"
count1
15
word"cacophony"
count1
16
word"throb"
count1
17
word"could feel"
count1
18
word"oppressive"
count1
19
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"quickened"
1"loomed"
2"pulsed"
3"warmth"
4"chill"
5"silence"
6"footsteps"
7"scanning"
8"resonated"
9"wavered"
10"intensity"
11"flicked"
12"down her spine"
13"pounding"
14"echoing"
15"cacophony"
16"throb"
17"could feel"
18"oppressive"
19"flickered"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
2
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
1"The air was thick with"
2"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences97
matches
0"a jolt of panic"
83.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1165
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount1086
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.64
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone7
Eva2
Rory7
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Eva"
2"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"as if conspiring"
1"as if holding its breath"
2"hum that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once"
3"coat that seemed to blend into the shadows, and his presence was so sudden, so unexpected, that Rory took a step back"
4"something like recognition, or maybe hunger"
5"sound that seemed to vibrate through her very bones"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.858
wordCount1165
matches
0"not from exertion but from the gnawing unease"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean41.61
std22.46
cv0.54
sampleLengths
088
162
252
346
463
559
67
775
89
931
1027
1141
1226
1318
1453
158
1617
1742
1869
1947
2031
2152
2252
2356
2410
2562
2657
275
94.41% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences97
matches
0"was gone"
1"was gone"
2"been replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs194
matches
0"was waiting"
36.05% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences107
ratio0.037
matches
0"Eva had warned her about this place—time moved differently, she’d said."
1"A sound froze her in her tracks—a low, melodic hum that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once."
2"His gaze flicked to the Heartstone, and for a moment, his expression shifted—something like recognition, or maybe hunger."
3"But in the distance, she heard something—a low, guttural growl that sent a jolt of panic through her."
98.88% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1090
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.04128440366972477
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.013761467889908258
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean10.89
std4.74
cv0.435
sampleLengths
013
113
225
312
414
511
611
78
816
911
107
119
1220
133
1410
1510
169
179
1810
191
204
2115
227
2320
246
2518
268
2711
289
2914
3016
316
3214
337
3411
359
3617
3712
3826
399
4014
4111
426
438
4415
454
4618
479
489
495
42.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.308411214953271
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences96
matches
0"Just silence pressing in on"
1"Just shadows and trees."
2"More like a vibration in"
ratio0.031
32.50% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences96
matches
0"Her heartbeat quickened, not from"
1"They smelled sweet, cloying, and"
2"She tightened her grip on"
3"It pulsed faintly, warmth radiating"
4"she muttered under her breath,"
5"She paused, listening."
6"Her footsteps resumed, the crunch"
7"She glanced over her shoulder,"
8"She turned back around, quickening"
9"It wasn’t a song, not"
10"She swallowed hard, forcing herself"
11"she whispered, though the air"
12"She glanced down at the"
13"It glowed brighter now, a"
14"She spun around, her breath"
15"His eyes glinted in the"
16"He wore a dark coat"
17"Her voice wavered, betraying her"
18"He tilted his head, studying"
19"he replied, his tone cold"
ratio0.469
27.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences96
matches
0"The forest path twisted deeper"
1"Rory’s boots crunched on the"
2"Her heartbeat quickened, not from"
3"The Fae Grove loomed ahead,"
4"Wildflowers dotted the edges of"
5"They smelled sweet, cloying, and"
6"She tightened her grip on"
7"It pulsed faintly, warmth radiating"
8"she muttered under her breath,"
9"Eva had warned her about"
10"Minutes could stretch into hours,"
11"The air grew colder the"
12"She paused, listening."
13"The forest was too quiet,"
14"Her footsteps resumed, the crunch"
15"She glanced over her shoulder,"
16"She turned back around, quickening"
17"A sound froze her in"
18"It wasn’t a song, not"
19"She swallowed hard, forcing herself"
ratio0.865
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
28.06% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Her heartbeat quickened, not from exertion but from the gnawing unease that had settled in her chest the moment she’d stepped past the standing stones."
1"The Fae Grove loomed ahead, ancient oaks leaning inward as if conspiring."
2"A sound froze her in her tracks—a low, melodic hum that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once."
3"He wore a dark coat that seemed to blend into the shadows, and his presence was so sudden, so unexpected, that Rory took a step back."
4"He tilted his head, studying her with an intensity that made her skin crawl."
5"The wildflowers around them began to sway violently, their petals twisting and curling as if alive."
6"Around her stood towering oaks, their branches twisting upward like skeletal fingers."
7"The air was thick with the scent of decay, and the wildflowers had been replaced by jagged, thorny vines that writhed as if alive."
8"Her ears rang with the hum, now a deafening cacophony that made her head throb."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she whispered, though the air was utterly still"
1"he replied, his tone cold and detached"
2"she shot back, her voice steadier than she felt"
3"he repeated, his voice echoing strangely in her ears"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"he repeated (repeat)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"she whimpered (whimper)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.526
68.5497%