Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRGTWP2D36492CYJHXHBN5

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Duration:
35.4s
Cost:
$0.001035

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory’s hands trembled slightly as she adjusted the stack of takeout containers on the kitchen counter. Golden Empress had been busy that evening, and she wiped her brow with the back of her hand, a faint glimmer of stress rattling her usual calm demeanor. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, curled up in a sunbeam by the window, oblivious to her rush. Just as she began sorting through the last of the orders, a heavy knock reverberated through the cramped flat. She froze, her heart racing. By the feel of it, that wasn’t a deliveryman’s rap. She stepped cautiously toward the door, her mind racing with possibilities. What if it was an old customer? A neighbor? Or worse, Evan. Rory steadied herself, taking a deep breath. She opened the door just a crack, the chain still securing it. “Rory,” came the voice. Lucien. In that moment, she felt the air among them shift, vibrating with unspoken words and unresolved history. He stood there, drenched in the fading light, his sleek platinum hair slightly tousled, those striking eyes — one amber, one black — locking onto hers. “What are you doing here?” The question fell from her lips, edged with surprise. She didn’t have time or energy for a confrontation. “May I come in?” He nodded toward the open door, a cool smile playing at the corners of his mouth. Rory hesitated, the memories flooding in—how they had last parted in a frenzy of emotions, shadows of hurt and misunderstanding lingering between them. But the fleeting moment of resolution on Lucien’s face stirred her curiosity. She unlatched the chain, opened the door wider, and stepped back, heart thrumming against her ribcage. Lucien glided in, his tailored suit hugging his frame in a way that made her physiological instincts flare, a memory of his presence flooding the room. “You look well.” He glanced around, taking in the scattered books and research notes that filled every inch. “I’m... busy.” She picked at a nail, avoiding his gaze. “Right. Working on whether the supernatural exists or not?” He arched an eyebrow, a teasing lilt to his voice. “Something like that.” The corner of her mouth lifted but quickly faltered. “What’s this really about, Luc? You don’t show up unannounced unless you need something.” He sighed, shifting his weight, leaning against the wall. “Always straight to the point. It’s part of your charm.” “Is it?” Her throat tightened. “Or maybe it’s just a defense mechanism. You know how character can be shaped by those we let in.” He ran a hand through his slicked-back hair, the movement both vexed and familiar. “You really think I came here to pry into your life? To stir up something that ended long ago?” Rory narrowed her eyes. “What’s the point? Just tell me what you need.” “Very well.” He stepped closer, a spark igniting in the air between them. “I have information. About Avaros. About the recent rise in supernatural occurrences. You’re dealing with more than you realize.” She folded her arms across her chest, her pulse quickening but not entirely from fear. He held her attention in a way that set off alarms and desires simultaneously. “And?” Lucien gestured around the cluttered flat, his gaze scanning the chaos of books and scrolls. “This could amplify your findings. Together, we could—” “Together?” The word felt heavy on her tongue. “We both know how that ended. You are a function of my past, Lucien. I’m not interested in whatever this is.” “Yet you opened the door,” he countered, a hint of playfulness creeping back into his voice. “Curiosity? Or something more?” Rory shut her eyes, shaking her head. She couldn’t afford to get tangled back in the web of their past. The memories hovered like ghosts, filling every crevice of her mind; the laughter, the arguments, the pain. “Are we really going to do this?” she said, exasperation boiling to the surface. “You didn’t just walk out. You vanished, Luc. You left me in the dark.” “And I came back,” he said softly, sincerity threading through his voice. “Not to reopen old wounds, but because the past is colliding with the present. There’s trouble brewing.” “That’s your approach? Guilt tripping me into joining your crusade?” She shook her head, resisting the emotional tide he stirred in her. Lucien stepped closer, lowering his voice. “It’s not just about us anymore. If Avaros is shaking loose its demons into the world, then it affects you, affects everything. You know I didn’t choose to leave.” “Neither did I, Luc.” The sadness in her voice pierced the space between them. “I had to escape.” Ptolemy paused, lifting his head to inspect the tension, whiskers twitching. “Your life doesn’t have to belong to the past,” he pressed, notes of urgency rising. “You can still choose, Rory. You always have.” She met his gaze, the fire in his eyes awakening old feelings she thought she buried. “You don’t get to act like you care after pushing me away. That kind of care doesn’t just come back.” “But that’s the thing,” he countered. “I never stopped caring. You think it was easy being away? You’re still in my mind, in every deal I made, every risk I took.” “What do you expect me to say?” Frustration churned in her stomach. “Thank you for disappearing? For showing up now?” “Just consider it.” Lucien paused, his expression softening. “Together, again. We can make sure nothing slips through the cracks. I wanted to keep you safe—” “Safe?” she interrupted, incredulous. “You talk about safety while bringing Avaros into my life? How does that make sense?” His chest heaved emotionally, and she saw the ghost of regret flicker across his features. “I thought I could protect you from it all. But it found you anyway, didn’t it?” The acknowledgment soothed the ache in Rory’s heart, if only slightly. She took a step back, scanning the room filled with reminders of their history, moments suspended in time. “I don’t know what you want from me,” she whispered. “Just a chance to work together again,” he said, his tone measured yet filled with a desperate hope. “Or maybe to open old wounds?” she replied, crossing her arms tighter, the tension between them taut. “And heal them.” His voice was steady, filled with conviction. “We don’t have to stay lost in the past.” At that moment, the air shifted. She saw it in his eyes—an echo of the attraction they shared, the pulse of an unresolved connection that lingered like a whisper in the dark. Maybe she had opened the door enough to let in the possibility of more than just chaos.
total_cost0.001035

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He glanced around [around]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.478
leniency0.957
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.087
54.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1108
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count3
4
adverb"very"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"cautiously"
2"quickly"
3"really"
4"very"
5"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1108
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"trembled"
count1
1
word"reverberated"
count1
2
word"racing"
count2
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"fleeting"
count1
5
word"eyebrow"
count1
6
word"lilt"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"charm"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count2
11
word"scanning"
count2
12
word"tension"
count2
13
word"churned"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count1
15
word"flicker"
count1
16
word"measured"
count1
17
word"echo"
count1
18
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"trembled"
1"reverberated"
2"racing"
3"unspoken"
4"fleeting"
5"eyebrow"
6"lilt"
7"weight"
8"charm"
9"familiar"
10"pulse"
11"scanning"
12"tension"
13"churned"
14"stomach"
15"flicker"
16"measured"
17"echo"
18"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences62
matches
0"d with surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1107
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount691
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Empress1
Ptolemy2
Evan1
Lucien6
Rory6
Frustration1
persons
0"Empress"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Evan"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
5"Frustration"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.903
wordCount1107
matches
0"Not to reopen old wounds, but because the past is colliding with the present"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
78.63% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean24.07
std10.23
cv0.425
sampleLengths
060
134
223
319
44
51
643
723
820
935
1016
1126
1218
1310
1419
1526
1619
1724
1833
1913
2032
2130
2223
2329
2420
2537
2628
2729
2822
2935
3018
3111
3223
3336
3431
3520
3625
3719
3831
3929
4010
4118
4217
4319
4432
4517
99.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"get tangled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs125
matches(empty)
6.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences84
ratio0.048
matches
0"He stood there, drenched in the fading light, his sleek platinum hair slightly tousled, those striking eyes — one amber, one black — locking onto hers."
1"Rory hesitated, the memories flooding in—how they had last parted in a frenzy of emotions, shadows of hurt and misunderstanding lingering between them."
2"The memories hovered like ghosts, filling every crevice of her mind; the laughter, the arguments, the pain."
3"She saw it in his eyes—an echo of the attraction they shared, the pulse of an unresolved connection that lingered like a whisper in the dark."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount692
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.030346820809248554
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.014450867052023121
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean13.18
std6.41
cv0.486
sampleLengths
016
128
216
319
45
510
611
77
82
93
107
1112
124
131
1417
1526
1614
179
1820
1923
2012
2116
2226
2318
2410
2519
2612
2714
289
2910
305
3119
3214
3319
344
359
3613
3719
3815
3914
401
4115
428
438
4421
4516
464
477
4813
4917
77.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4642857142857143
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners39
57.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"Maybe she had opened the"
ratio0.017
13.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences58
matches
0"She froze, her heart racing."
1"She stepped cautiously toward the"
2"She opened the door just"
3"He stood there, drenched in"
4"She didn’t have time or"
5"He nodded toward the open"
6"She unlatched the chain, opened"
7"He glanced around, taking in"
8"She picked at a nail,"
9"He arched an eyebrow, a"
10"He sighed, shifting his weight,"
11"Her throat tightened"
12"He ran a hand through"
13"He stepped closer, a spark"
14"She folded her arms across"
15"He held her attention in"
16"he countered, a hint of"
17"She couldn’t afford to get"
18"she said, exasperation boiling to"
19"he said softly, sincerity threading"
ratio0.517
46.21% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences58
matches
0"Rory’s hands trembled slightly as"
1"The tabby cat, Ptolemy, curled"
2"She froze, her heart racing."
3"She stepped cautiously toward the"
4"Rory steadied herself, taking a"
5"She opened the door just"
6"He stood there, drenched in"
7"The question fell from her"
8"She didn’t have time or"
9"He nodded toward the open"
10"Rory hesitated, the memories flooding"
11"She unlatched the chain, opened"
12"Lucien glided in, his tailored"
13"He glanced around, taking in"
14"She picked at a nail,"
15"He arched an eyebrow, a"
16"The corner of her mouth"
17"He sighed, shifting his weight,"
18"Her throat tightened"
19"He ran a hand through"
ratio0.828
86.21% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"Just as she began sorting"
ratio0.017
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Lucien glided in, his tailored suit hugging his frame in a way that made her physiological instincts flare, a memory of his presence flooding the room."
1"She saw it in his eyes—an echo of the attraction they shared, the pulse of an unresolved connection that lingered like a whisper in the dark."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"He stepped, a spark igniting in the air between them"
1"he countered, a hint of playfulness creeping back into his voice"
2"she said, exasperation boiling to the surface"
3"he said softly, sincerity threading through his voice"
4"Lucien paused, his expression softening"
5"she interrupted, incredulous"
84.78% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he pressed (press)"
1"she interrupted (interrupt)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.152
leniency0.304
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.13
79.7659%