| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He glanced around [around]" | | 1 | "he said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.478 | | leniency | 0.957 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.087 | |
| 54.87% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1108 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "really" | | 4 | "very" | | 5 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1108 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "trembled" | | 1 | "reverberated" | | 2 | "racing" | | 3 | "unspoken" | | 4 | "fleeting" | | 5 | "eyebrow" | | 6 | "lilt" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "charm" | | 9 | "familiar" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "scanning" | | 12 | "tension" | | 13 | "churned" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "flicker" | | 16 | "measured" | | 17 | "echo" | | 18 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1107 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 691 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 0.87 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Empress | 1 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Lucien | 6 | | Rory | 6 | | Frustration | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Empress" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Frustration" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.903 | | wordCount | 1107 | | matches | | 0 | "Not to reopen old wounds, but because the past is colliding with the present" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.63% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 24.07 | | std | 10.23 | | cv | 0.425 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 35 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 32 | | 45 | 17 |
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| 99.60% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 6.80% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "He stood there, drenched in the fading light, his sleek platinum hair slightly tousled, those striking eyes — one amber, one black — locking onto hers." | | 1 | "Rory hesitated, the memories flooding in—how they had last parted in a frenzy of emotions, shadows of hurt and misunderstanding lingering between them." | | 2 | "The memories hovered like ghosts, filling every crevice of her mind; the laughter, the arguments, the pain." | | 3 | "She saw it in his eyes—an echo of the attraction they shared, the pulse of an unresolved connection that lingered like a whisper in the dark." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 692 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.030346820809248554 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014450867052023121 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 13.18 | | std | 6.41 | | cv | 0.486 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 77.38% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.4642857142857143 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 57.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Maybe she had opened the" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 13.10% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "She froze, her heart racing." | | 1 | "She stepped cautiously toward the" | | 2 | "She opened the door just" | | 3 | "He stood there, drenched in" | | 4 | "She didn’t have time or" | | 5 | "He nodded toward the open" | | 6 | "She unlatched the chain, opened" | | 7 | "He glanced around, taking in" | | 8 | "She picked at a nail," | | 9 | "He arched an eyebrow, a" | | 10 | "He sighed, shifting his weight," | | 11 | "Her throat tightened" | | 12 | "He ran a hand through" | | 13 | "He stepped closer, a spark" | | 14 | "She folded her arms across" | | 15 | "He held her attention in" | | 16 | "he countered, a hint of" | | 17 | "She couldn’t afford to get" | | 18 | "she said, exasperation boiling to" | | 19 | "he said softly, sincerity threading" |
| | ratio | 0.517 | |
| 46.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory’s hands trembled slightly as" | | 1 | "The tabby cat, Ptolemy, curled" | | 2 | "She froze, her heart racing." | | 3 | "She stepped cautiously toward the" | | 4 | "Rory steadied herself, taking a" | | 5 | "She opened the door just" | | 6 | "He stood there, drenched in" | | 7 | "The question fell from her" | | 8 | "She didn’t have time or" | | 9 | "He nodded toward the open" | | 10 | "Rory hesitated, the memories flooding" | | 11 | "She unlatched the chain, opened" | | 12 | "Lucien glided in, his tailored" | | 13 | "He glanced around, taking in" | | 14 | "She picked at a nail," | | 15 | "He arched an eyebrow, a" | | 16 | "The corner of her mouth" | | 17 | "He sighed, shifting his weight," | | 18 | "Her throat tightened" | | 19 | "He ran a hand through" |
| | ratio | 0.828 | |
| 86.21% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Just as she began sorting" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 87.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien glided in, his tailored suit hugging his frame in a way that made her physiological instincts flare, a memory of his presence flooding the room." | | 1 | "She saw it in his eyes—an echo of the attraction they shared, the pulse of an unresolved connection that lingered like a whisper in the dark." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "He stepped, a spark igniting in the air between them" | | 1 | "he countered, a hint of playfulness creeping back into his voice" | | 2 | "she said, exasperation boiling to the surface" | | 3 | "he said softly, sincerity threading through his voice" | | 4 | "Lucien paused, his expression softening" | | 5 | "she interrupted, incredulous" |
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| 84.78% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he pressed (press)" | | 1 | "she interrupted (interrupt)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.152 | | leniency | 0.304 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.13 | |