Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRH0JKZAG3RKE1K21TBDFB

Run Details

Model:
o4 Mini
Duration:
23.0s
Cost:
$0.011420
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon glow sliced across the wooden floorboards as Aurora grabbed the last sip of her jasmine tea. Silas had slipped back into the dim alcove behind the bar, polishing a row of tumblers with deliberate care. Rory let her gaze wander over the maps lining the walls—old London streets, faded county borders. They felt familiar, like a promise of routes she’d never travelled. The bell above the door jingled. She barely glanced up. Customers drifted in, a designer-clad couple in search of cocktails, a solitary man scrolling on his phone by the window. Then the door swung wider—letting in a taller woman whose shoulders stiffened the moment she caught sight of Aurora. Rory’s heart twisted. Lydia. Last time they’d spoken, Rory was still perched on the edge of graduation, her cap askew as she told Lydia about plans for law school in Cardiff. Now Lydia’s hair sat in a precise bob just below her jaw. A charcoal blazer hugged her ribs. Her eyes—once warm—narrowed slightly when they met Rory’s. A beat passed, thick as old syrup. Rory’s fingers curled around the teacup, fingertips brushing the crescent scar on her wrist. She rose, shifting to face Lydia. The bar lights flickered against her straight black hair, cut to shoulder length the night she fled Evan. Lydia’s breath hitched. “Rory?” She’d kept the old nickname. Suddenly Rory felt younger, smaller. But she straightened. “Lydia.” Lydia slid onto the stool beside her, close enough that Rory could smell the faint citrus of her cologne. “I didn’t expect to find you here.” Rory tapped the counter. “You don’t come out this way?” “Not since I was covering the Royal Courts. But my firm hosted an event down the street.” Lydia paused, brows lifting. “I wasn’t sure it was you at first.” Rory offered a small smile. “I look the same.” Lydia reached across, fingertips grazing Rory’s scar. “You’re not the same.” Rory pulled her hand back, wrapping her fingers around the cup. “Let’s say I’ve changed jobs.” She nodded toward Silas, who tucked the last glass into a shelf and slipped behind the bookshelf into his secret room. Lydia’s gaze followed, curiosity flickering. Then she turned back. “You’re working here?” “Visiting.” Rory tapped her scar again. “Delivery gig at the Golden Empress isn’t glamorous.” “Golden Empress?” Lydia echoed. “I thought you were headed for the Bar Council.” Rory let out a breath that tasted of peppermint and regret. “I skipped the exams.” Lydia’s lips thinned. “Why?” Rory traced a knot in the counter’s wood grain. “Life got complicated.” Lydia swallowed. “You always knew how to push through.” Rory’s throat constricted. She remembered nights in Cardiff late at the library, Lydia’s laughter echoing in the stacks. She’d chased that light then. Now it felt dim. “Things happened.” Lydia’s fingers tightened around her glass. Ice clinked. “You left town without a word.” “I had to leave.” Rory kept her voice steady. “I had…” She stopped, memories of bruised arms and slammed doors flickering behind closed lids. Aurora—Laila, Rory, Malphora—the names she used to outrun that chapter. All felt tangled now. Lydia stared, chest rising and falling in careful rhythm. “I tried calling.” Rory’s pulse thudded. “Numbers changed.” Lydia closed her eyes. When she opened them again, they shone with old warmth and new sadness. “I’m sorry. I wanted to help.” Rory’s hands curled into fists. “You couldn’t fix it.” Lydia shook her head. “I could’ve listened.” Music drifted over—the low hum of the bar’s speakers, jazz weaving into the hush. Rory lifted the teacup and drank. The steam curled around her face. Lydia swiped at a tear. “You look—” “Not like a lawyer?” Rory offered a brittle laugh. “No suits. No judgments. Just nights like this, hiding above a bar.” Lydia’s shoulders sagged. “I envied you once. Your spontaneity. Your courage.” Rory blinked. “I envied your certainty.” Lydia’s hand trembled as she patted Rory’s wrist. Rory pulled away, voice soft. “Look what certainty got you—a corner office, the same commute every morning. And here you are, wearing creases in your blazer like armor.” Lydia ran a hand through her hair. “I wanted stability.” Rory’s gaze softened. “And I ran toward chaos.” Silas’s door opened behind them. He leaned in the frame, head cocked, signet ring glinting in the low light. He offered a slow nod. Rory returned it. Lydia’s shoulders stiffened as if she half-expected him to break them up. He slipped back inside, footsteps fading. Lydia swallowed. “We both chose survival.” Rory stared at her scar, the crescent moon of it catching the neon shine. “Do you ever wonder what’d happen if we stuck together? I could’ve used you.” Lydia shook her head. “I was young, Rory. I thought success meant climbing higher.” She brushed a strand of hair behind her ear. “I didn’t know how to climb out of a bad situation.” Rory ran her thumb along the scar’s curve. “I didn’t know how to ask.” A pause stretched. Then Lydia’s phone buzzed on the counter. She glanced at the screen—an email notification. She closed her eyes, swallowed again. She picked it up and set it face down. “This was… unexpected,” Lydia said. “Yeah,” Rory said, letting the word hang. Blinking, Lydia tapped her glass. “Can we start over?” Rory felt a tightness loosen in her chest. She offered a crooked smile. “I’d like that.” Lydia returned it, a small, fragile thing. She reached out, fingers brushing Rory’s scar—this time without hesitation. Rory let her. They held the pause between them, two old friends suspended in a bar that held so many secrets. Beyond the counter, the maps on the walls seemed to breathe, outlining paths they might take. Time and regret lay heavy in each breath, but in that moment, something light flickered between them—a possibility, unspoken but clear. A new drink arrived: a soft lime fizz from the bartender’s hand. Rory took it, offering half to Lydia. She met Rory’s eyes and smiled. Rory let go of the scar and lifted her glass. “To finding our way back,” she said. Lydia clinked her glass to Rory’s. “To second chances.” They drank. The maps on the walls watched. The green neon sign outside hummed. In the hush between their words, the weight of years lifted just enough for them to begin again.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.239
leniency0.478
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1064
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1064
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"solitary"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"glinting"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"unspoken"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"solitary"
2"flickered"
3"echoed"
4"traced"
5"echoing"
6"pulse"
7"warmth"
8"trembled"
9"glinting"
10"footsteps"
11"unspoken"
12"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1051
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions79
wordCount803
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity4.48
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity7
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora3
London1
Rory36
Lydia30
Cardiff2
Evan1
Silas3
Laila1
Malphora1
Blinking1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Rory"
2"Lydia"
3"Evan"
4"Silas"
5"Laila"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1051
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean20.21
std15.23
cv0.754
sampleLengths
065
152
254
345
44
514
626
710
829
99
1011
1137
1212
1314
1413
1515
164
1712
189
1929
2014
2138
2212
235
2423
259
267
2726
287
2921
3011
316
3236
3310
348
3539
366
376
3828
3934
4014
4132
425
437
449
4516
4620
4755
4835
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs159
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences136
ratio0.059
matches
0"Rory let her gaze wander over the maps lining the walls—old London streets, faded county borders."
1"Then the door swung wider—letting in a taller woman whose shoulders stiffened the moment she caught sight of Aurora."
2"Her eyes—once warm—narrowed slightly when they met Rory’s."
3"Aurora—Laila, Rory, Malphora—the names she used to outrun that chapter."
4"Music drifted over—the low hum of the bar’s speakers, jazz weaving into the hush."
5"She glanced at the screen—an email notification."
6"She reached out, fingers brushing Rory’s scar—this time without hesitation."
7"Time and regret lay heavy in each breath, but in that moment, something light flickered between them—a possibility, unspoken but clear."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount815
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.03190184049079755
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0036809815950920245
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean7.73
std5.58
cv0.722
sampleLengths
019
119
216
311
46
54
620
719
83
91
1027
1112
126
138
147
1514
166
1718
183
191
205
215
223
231
2419
257
264
276
2821
298
305
314
327
334
3411
3526
365
374
383
396
408
414
429
4311
444
453
461
479
483
492
48.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3235294117647059
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences92
matches
0"Then the door swung wider—letting"
1"Suddenly Rory felt younger, smaller."
2"Then she turned back."
3"All felt tangled now."
4"Then Lydia’s phone buzzed on"
ratio0.054
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences92
matches
0"They felt familiar, like a"
1"She barely glanced up."
2"Her eyes—once warm—narrowed slightly when"
3"She rose, shifting to face"
4"She’d kept the old nickname."
5"She nodded toward Silas, who"
6"She remembered nights in Cardiff"
7"She’d chased that light then."
8"She stopped, memories of bruised"
9"He leaned in the frame,"
10"He offered a slow nod."
11"He slipped back inside, footsteps"
12"She brushed a strand of"
13"She glanced at the screen—an"
14"She closed her eyes, swallowed"
15"She picked it up and"
16"She offered a crooked smile."
17"She reached out, fingers brushing"
18"They held the pause between"
19"She met Rory’s eyes and"
ratio0.217
30.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences92
matches
0"The green neon glow sliced"
1"Silas had slipped back into"
2"Rory let her gaze wander"
3"They felt familiar, like a"
4"The bell above the door"
5"She barely glanced up."
6"Customers drifted in, a designer-clad"
7"Rory’s heart twisted."
8"A charcoal blazer hugged her"
9"Her eyes—once warm—narrowed slightly when"
10"A beat passed, thick as"
11"Rory’s fingers curled around the"
12"She rose, shifting to face"
13"The bar lights flickered against"
14"Lydia’s breath hitched."
15"She’d kept the old nickname."
16"Lydia slid onto the stool"
17"Rory tapped the counter."
18"Lydia paused, brows lifting"
19"Rory offered a small smile."
ratio0.859
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"Now Lydia’s hair sat in"
1"Now it felt dim."
ratio0.022
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lydia’s shoulders stiffened as if she half-expected him to break them up."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.065
leniency0.13
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.7834%