| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.239 | | leniency | 0.478 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1064 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.21% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1064 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "solitary" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "echoing" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "glinting" | | 10 | "footsteps" | | 11 | "unspoken" | | 12 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 136 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1051 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 79 | | wordCount | 803 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 4.48 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 7 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 3 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 36 | | Lydia | 30 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Silas | 3 | | Laila | 1 | | Malphora | 1 | | Blinking | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Lydia" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Silas" | | 5 | "Laila" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1051 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 20.21 | | std | 15.23 | | cv | 0.754 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 36 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 39 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 34 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 55 | | 48 | 35 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 159 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 136 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory let her gaze wander over the maps lining the walls—old London streets, faded county borders." | | 1 | "Then the door swung wider—letting in a taller woman whose shoulders stiffened the moment she caught sight of Aurora." | | 2 | "Her eyes—once warm—narrowed slightly when they met Rory’s." | | 3 | "Aurora—Laila, Rory, Malphora—the names she used to outrun that chapter." | | 4 | "Music drifted over—the low hum of the bar’s speakers, jazz weaving into the hush." | | 5 | "She glanced at the screen—an email notification." | | 6 | "She reached out, fingers brushing Rory’s scar—this time without hesitation." | | 7 | "Time and regret lay heavy in each breath, but in that moment, something light flickered between them—a possibility, unspoken but clear." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 815 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.03190184049079755 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0036809815950920245 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 136 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 136 | | mean | 7.73 | | std | 5.58 | | cv | 0.722 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 26 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 48.04% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3235294117647059 | | totalSentences | 136 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the door swung wider—letting" | | 1 | "Suddenly Rory felt younger, smaller." | | 2 | "Then she turned back." | | 3 | "All felt tangled now." | | 4 | "Then Lydia’s phone buzzed on" |
| | ratio | 0.054 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "They felt familiar, like a" | | 1 | "She barely glanced up." | | 2 | "Her eyes—once warm—narrowed slightly when" | | 3 | "She rose, shifting to face" | | 4 | "She’d kept the old nickname." | | 5 | "She nodded toward Silas, who" | | 6 | "She remembered nights in Cardiff" | | 7 | "She’d chased that light then." | | 8 | "She stopped, memories of bruised" | | 9 | "He leaned in the frame," | | 10 | "He offered a slow nod." | | 11 | "He slipped back inside, footsteps" | | 12 | "She brushed a strand of" | | 13 | "She glanced at the screen—an" | | 14 | "She closed her eyes, swallowed" | | 15 | "She picked it up and" | | 16 | "She offered a crooked smile." | | 17 | "She reached out, fingers brushing" | | 18 | "They held the pause between" | | 19 | "She met Rory’s eyes and" |
| | ratio | 0.217 | |
| 30.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The green neon glow sliced" | | 1 | "Silas had slipped back into" | | 2 | "Rory let her gaze wander" | | 3 | "They felt familiar, like a" | | 4 | "The bell above the door" | | 5 | "She barely glanced up." | | 6 | "Customers drifted in, a designer-clad" | | 7 | "Rory’s heart twisted." | | 8 | "A charcoal blazer hugged her" | | 9 | "Her eyes—once warm—narrowed slightly when" | | 10 | "A beat passed, thick as" | | 11 | "Rory’s fingers curled around the" | | 12 | "She rose, shifting to face" | | 13 | "The bar lights flickered against" | | 14 | "Lydia’s breath hitched." | | 15 | "She’d kept the old nickname." | | 16 | "Lydia slid onto the stool" | | 17 | "Rory tapped the counter." | | 18 | "Lydia paused, brows lifting" | | 19 | "Rory offered a small smile." |
| | ratio | 0.859 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Now Lydia’s hair sat in" | | 1 | "Now it felt dim." |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Lydia’s shoulders stiffened as if she half-expected him to break them up." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 46 | | tagDensity | 0.065 | | leniency | 0.13 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |