Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRH7XSSXMGQZAVWPN1HMFM

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26.0s
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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rustle of leaves whispered secrets as Aurora Carter stepped into the Fae Grove, the ancient oak standing stones looming like sentinels around her. She paused, the air thick with an unsettling stillness that prickled her skin. The wildflowers, vibrant and blooming year-round, seemed to pulse with an energy that felt both inviting and foreboding. She clutched the Heartstone Pendant at her neck, its deep crimson glow faintly illuminating the shadows that danced at the edges of her vision. A twig snapped behind her, and she spun around, heart racing. Nothing. Just the trees, their gnarled branches twisting like skeletal fingers against the night sky. She shook her head, dismissing the unease that coiled in her stomach. This was a place of magic, a sanctuary she had sought out for answers. Yet, the deeper she ventured into the grove, the more the atmosphere thickened, as if the very air conspired against her. “Get a grip, Rory,” she muttered to herself, her voice barely breaking the silence. She had come here to find the truth about her past, to uncover the mysteries that had haunted her since she received the pendant from the unknown benefactor. The grove was said to be a nexus between Earth and the Fae realm, a place where time twisted and secrets lingered. But now, it felt like a trap. As she moved deeper, the sounds of the grove shifted. The gentle rustle of leaves morphed into a cacophony of whispers, indistinct yet insistent. They seemed to call her name, a haunting melody that echoed in her mind. She pressed her palms against her ears, trying to block out the sound, but it seeped through, wrapping around her thoughts like a vine. “Rory…” The voice was soft, almost tender, yet it sent a chill down her spine. She turned sharply, scanning the shadows, but found only the flickering light of the pendant casting eerie shapes on the ground. “Who’s there?” she called, her voice steadier than she felt. The grove responded with silence, the whispers fading into an unsettling quiet. She took a deep breath, forcing herself to move forward, each step heavy with the weight of unseen eyes watching her. The path twisted, leading her to a clearing where the moonlight spilled like silver across the ground. In the centre stood a stone altar, ancient and weathered, covered in moss and creeping vines. It felt wrong, as if it had been waiting for her arrival, a dark invitation she couldn’t refuse. She approached cautiously, the pendant pulsing against her chest, its warmth a stark contrast to the chill that enveloped her. The altar bore markings, symbols she couldn’t decipher, yet they resonated with a familiarity that made her skin crawl. “Why am I here?” she whispered, the question hanging in the air like a prayer. A rustle in the underbrush made her jump. She turned, eyes wide, scanning the shadows. Something moved just beyond the edge of her vision, a flicker of movement that vanished as quickly as it appeared. Her heart raced, pounding in her ears. “Show yourself!” she demanded, her voice stronger now, laced with defiance. The grove remained silent, but the tension thickened, wrapping around her like a shroud. The pendant’s glow intensified, casting a crimson hue over the altar. She reached out, fingers trembling as they brushed against the cold stone. A jolt of energy surged through her, and she gasped, pulling her hand back. The symbols on the altar shimmered, shifting and swirling as if alive. “Rory…” The voice returned, clearer now, echoing from the depths of the grove. It was a siren’s call, seductive and dangerous. “Who are you?” she shouted, frustration boiling over. “What do you want from me?” The shadows shifted, coalescing into a figure at the edge of the clearing. Aurora squinted, trying to make out the form, but it remained obscured, a silhouette against the moonlight. “Come closer,” the voice beckoned, smooth and inviting. “You seek the truth, do you not?” “I do,” she replied, her voice wavering. “But I won’t be lured into a trap.” The figure stepped forward, revealing a face that was both familiar and foreign. It was a woman, her features ethereal, almost otherworldly, with hair that flowed like liquid silver. Aurora’s breath caught in her throat. “Isolde?” she whispered, recognition flooding her senses. The stories of the Fae queen had haunted her childhood, tales of beauty and terror intertwined. “Not quite,” the figure replied, a smile playing on her lips. “But I am a part of her legacy. You carry the Heartstone, do you not? It binds you to this realm.” Aurora’s heart raced. “What do you want from me?” “To awaken your true potential,” the figure said, stepping closer, the shadows swirling around her like a cloak. “You are more than you know, Rory. The grove has chosen you.” A sudden gust of wind swept through the clearing, sending a shiver down Aurora’s spine. The whispers returned, louder now, a chorus of voices rising in a crescendo. She staggered back, the pendant’s warmth turning cold against her skin. “No!” she shouted, panic rising. “I didn’t come here for this!” The figure’s smile faded, replaced by a look of disappointment. “You cannot escape your destiny. The grove will not let you.” With a flick of her wrist, the shadows surged forward, coiling around Aurora’s legs, pulling her towards the altar. She fought against the grip, heart pounding as she struggled to break free. “Let me go!” she screamed, desperation clawing at her throat. The whispers grew louder, drowning out her cries, a cacophony of voices that filled her mind with dread. “Embrace it, Rory,” the figure urged, her voice a haunting melody. “You are meant for greatness.” “No!” Aurora’s voice broke, the shadows tightening their hold. She could feel the energy of the grove surging around her, a dark force that threatened to consume her. In a final act of defiance, she grasped the Heartstone Pendant, its warmth flaring to life. “I won’t be your pawn!” The shadows recoiled, hissing as the pendant pulsed with a brilliant light. The figure faltered, eyes wide with surprise. “Foolish girl,” she spat, but the shadows began to dissipate, retreating into the darkness. Aurora seized the moment, breaking free from their grasp. She stumbled back, breathless, the grove trembling around her. The whispers faded, replaced by an eerie silence that hung heavy in the air. “Rory…” The voice was softer now, almost pleading. “You cannot run from your fate.” With a final surge of energy, the pendant glowed brighter, illuminating the clearing in a crimson light. The figure vanished, swallowed by the shadows, leaving Aurora alone in the grove, heart racing, the weight of her destiny pressing down upon her. She stood there, trembling, the echoes of the encounter lingering in the air. The grove felt alive, watching, waiting. And as she turned to leave, the shadows shifted once more, a promise of what was yet to come.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.586
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1164
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"cautiously"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"sharply"
2"cautiously"
3"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1164
totalAiIsms44
found
0
word"looming"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"foreboding"
count1
4
word"racing"
count2
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"sanctuary"
count1
7
word"silence"
count3
8
word"cacophony"
count2
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"chill"
count2
11
word"down her spine"
count1
12
word"scanning"
count2
13
word"weight"
count2
14
word"warmth"
count3
15
word"stark"
count1
16
word"resonated"
count1
17
word"flicker"
count1
18
word"raced"
count2
19
word"pounding"
count2
20
word"tension"
count1
21
word"shimmered"
count1
22
word"echoing"
count1
23
word"depths"
count1
24
word"wavering"
count1
25
word"familiar"
count1
26
word"otherworldly"
count1
27
word"potential"
count1
28
word"could feel"
count1
29
word"pawn"
count1
30
word"pulsed"
count1
31
word"echoes"
count1
32
word"encounter"
count1
highlights
0"looming"
1"sentinels"
2"pulse"
3"foreboding"
4"racing"
5"stomach"
6"sanctuary"
7"silence"
8"cacophony"
9"echoed"
10"chill"
11"down her spine"
12"scanning"
13"weight"
14"warmth"
15"stark"
16"resonated"
17"flicker"
18"raced"
19"pounding"
20"tension"
21"shimmered"
22"echoing"
23"depths"
24"wavering"
25"familiar"
26"otherworldly"
27"potential"
28"could feel"
29"pawn"
30"pulsed"
31"echoes"
32"encounter"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
1"sent a chill down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences79
matches
0"d with dread"
1"e with surprise"
88.61% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1163
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1030
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora9
Carter1
Fae3
Grove1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Earth1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Grove"
3"Pendant"
places
0"Fae"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a trap"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1163
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean32.31
std17.63
cv0.546
sampleLengths
079
173
271
362
436
543
651
739
815
942
1025
1149
1221
1314
1430
1515
1615
1735
1823
1932
209
2130
2239
2311
2421
2532
2628
2716
2828
2921
3019
3114
3232
3314
3441
3538
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"was said"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs197
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences90
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1031
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.028128031037827354
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006789524733268671
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean12.92
std5.52
cv0.427
sampleLengths
024
113
218
324
411
51
614
712
814
921
1014
1128
1222
137
1410
1514
1614
1724
1815
1921
2010
2112
2221
2317
2416
2518
2620
2719
2815
298
307
3120
327
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4417
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4913
58.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.36666666666666664
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners33
42.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Just the trees, their gnarled"
ratio0.013
66.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences78
matches
0"She paused, the air thick"
1"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
2"She shook her head, dismissing"
3"she muttered to herself, her"
4"She had come here to"
5"They seemed to call her"
6"She pressed her palms against"
7"She turned sharply, scanning the"
8"she called, her voice steadier"
9"She took a deep breath,"
10"It felt wrong, as if"
11"She approached cautiously, the pendant"
12"she whispered, the question hanging"
13"She turned, eyes wide, scanning"
14"Her heart raced, pounding in"
15"she demanded, her voice stronger"
16"She reached out, fingers trembling"
17"It was a siren’s call,"
18"she shouted, frustration boiling over"
19"she replied, her voice wavering"
ratio0.385
17.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences78
matches
0"The rustle of leaves whispered"
1"She paused, the air thick"
2"The wildflowers, vibrant and blooming"
3"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
4"A twig snapped behind her,"
5"She shook her head, dismissing"
6"This was a place of"
7"she muttered to herself, her"
8"She had come here to"
9"The grove was said to"
10"The gentle rustle of leaves"
11"They seemed to call her"
12"She pressed her palms against"
13"The voice was soft, almost"
14"She turned sharply, scanning the"
15"she called, her voice steadier"
16"The grove responded with silence,"
17"She took a deep breath,"
18"The path twisted, leading her"
19"It felt wrong, as if"
ratio0.885
64.10% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Yet, the deeper she ventured"
ratio0.013
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount16
matches
0"She paused, the air thick with an unsettling stillness that prickled her skin."
1"The wildflowers, vibrant and blooming year-round, seemed to pulse with an energy that felt both inviting and foreboding."
2"She clutched the Heartstone Pendant at her neck, its deep crimson glow faintly illuminating the shadows that danced at the edges of her vision."
3"She shook her head, dismissing the unease that coiled in her stomach."
4"Yet, the deeper she ventured into the grove, the more the atmosphere thickened, as if the very air conspired against her."
5"They seemed to call her name, a haunting melody that echoed in her mind."
6"She pressed her palms against her ears, trying to block out the sound, but it seeped through, wrapping around her thoughts like a vine."
7"It felt wrong, as if it had been waiting for her arrival, a dark invitation she couldn’t refuse."
8"She approached cautiously, the pendant pulsing against her chest, its warmth a stark contrast to the chill that enveloped her."
9"The altar bore markings, symbols she couldn’t decipher, yet they resonated with a familiarity that made her skin crawl."
10"Something moved just beyond the edge of her vision, a flicker of movement that vanished as quickly as it appeared."
11"The symbols on the altar shimmered, shifting and swirling as if alive."
12"The figure stepped forward, revealing a face that was both familiar and foreign."
13"With a flick of her wrist, the shadows surged forward, coiling around Aurora’s legs, pulling her towards the altar."
14"The whispers grew louder, drowning out her cries, a cacophony of voices that filled her mind with dread."
15"The figure vanished, swallowed by the shadows, leaving Aurora alone in the grove, heart racing, the weight of her destiny pressing down upon her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"she muttered, her voice barely breaking the silence"
1"she called, her voice steadier than she felt"
2"she whispered, the question hanging in the air like a prayer"
3"she demanded, her voice stronger now, laced with defiance"
4"she replied, her voice wavering"
5"she whispered, recognition flooding her senses"
6"the figure replied, a smile playing on her lips"
7"she screamed, desperation clawing at her throat"
8"the figure urged, her voice a haunting melody"
9"Aurora’s voice broke, the shadows tightening their hold"
10"she spat, but the shadows began to dissipate, retreating into the darkness"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she demanded (demand)"
3"she shouted (shout)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"she shouted (shout)"
6"she screamed (scream)"
7"the figure urged (urge)"
8"she spat (spit)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.448
leniency0.897
rawRatio0.692
effectiveRatio0.621
75.6999%