| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 79.36% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1211 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1211 | | totalAiIsms | 35 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "oppressive" | | 6 | "dance" | | 7 | "reminder" | | 8 | "flicked" | | 9 | "traced" | | 10 | "unravel" | | 11 | "echoing" | | 12 | "scanned" | | 13 | "pounding" | | 14 | "flickered" | | 15 | "sense of" | | 16 | "palpable" | | 17 | "echoed" | | 18 | "chill" | | 19 | "down her spine" | | 20 | "weight" | | 21 | "encounter" | | 22 | "racing" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "blood ran cold" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "couldn't help but" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "blood ran cold" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" | | 2 | "couldn't help but feel" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 10 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" | | 3 | "begin to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1209 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.75% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1196 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.51 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 9 | | Rory | 18 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 2 | | Silence | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.747 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 89.02% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if trying to break free from its chain" | | 1 | "It was as if the very earth was alive, responding to the presence of the entity before her" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1209 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.03% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that sound" | | 1 | "knew that the" | | 2 | "knew that the" |
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| 33.93% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 19 | | mean | 63.63 | | std | 17.1 | | cv | 0.269 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 72 | | 4 | 88 | | 5 | 84 | | 6 | 64 | | 7 | 75 | | 8 | 71 | | 9 | 66 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 55 | | 13 | 66 | | 14 | 61 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 77 | | 17 | 78 | | 18 | 51 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | |
| 25.48% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | | 0 | "was beginning" | | 1 | "was watching" | | 2 | "were closing" | | 3 | "were breathing" | | 4 | "was beginning" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "It was not just a guardian of the grove; it was something far more ancient and dangerous." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1198 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "twisted, fae-touched world." |
| | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.034223706176961605 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014190317195325543 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 88 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 94.72% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 88 | | mean | 13.74 | | std | 5.31 | | cv | 0.387 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 27 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 43.18% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.2840909090909091 | | totalSentences | 88 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the rustling of leaves" | | 1 | "Instead, it raised a hand," | | 2 | "Then, with a sudden, fluid" |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 80.47% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept her movements deliberate," | | 1 | "She took a deep breath," | | 2 | "She had come here for" | | 3 | "she called out, her voice" | | 4 | "She couldn't help but feel" | | 5 | "It glowed faintly, almost as" | | 6 | "She traced the silver chain" | | 7 | "It was beautiful, haunting, and" | | 8 | "She knew that sound." | | 9 | "It was the song of" | | 10 | "She shivered, her muscles tensing" | | 11 | "she demanded, her voice firm" | | 12 | "It was gone as quickly" | | 13 | "She felt it in the" | | 14 | "Her breath came in short," | | 15 | "she commanded, her voice steady" | | 16 | "They moved in ways that" | | 17 | "It was a sound she" | | 18 | "She reached for the pendant," | | 19 | "It was a lifeline, her" |
| | ratio | 0.349 | |
| 35.58% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed faintly" | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 2 | "She kept her movements deliberate," | | 3 | "The air was thick with" | | 4 | "A twig snapped behind her," | | 5 | "She took a deep breath," | | 6 | "She had come here for" | | 7 | "That much was clear." | | 8 | "The pendant had led her" | | 9 | "she called out, her voice" | | 10 | "The answer was a thick" | | 11 | "Rory swallowed hard, her eyes" | | 12 | "The standing stones cast long," | | 13 | "She couldn't help but feel" | | 14 | "The Heartstone pulsed again, a" | | 15 | "Rory flicked her wrist, trying" | | 16 | "It glowed faintly, almost as" | | 17 | "She traced the silver chain" | | 18 | "The pendant had been a" | | 19 | "A sudden breeze swept through" |
| | ratio | 0.849 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 75.89% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones towered above her, their bark rough and gnarled, as if they had been guarding this place since time began." | | 1 | "She took a deep breath, trying to calm the unease that was beginning to coil in her stomach." | | 2 | "But it had always been a source of comfort, a talisman that had guided her through the shadows of her past." | | 3 | "She felt it in the air, a palpable presence that made the hair on the back of her neck stand on end." | | 4 | "It was a sound she recognized from the darkest corners of her nightmares, a sound that spoke of ancient, malevolent entities." | | 5 | "Rory stood there, her heart pounding in her chest, her breath coming in shallow gasps." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she called out, her voice barely a whisper" | | 1 | "she commanded, her voice steady but laced with a hidden tremor" | | 2 | "she demanded, her voice shaking with a mixture of fear and determination" | | 3 | "she whispered, her voice barely a breath" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 2 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 3 | "she warned (warn)" | | 4 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |