Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRHASYZ21KYY69HFN1E93W

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Duration:
34.2s
Cost:
$0.001062

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed against the wet pavement as she dashed down Dean Street, the rain pelting her with a relentless rhythm. The chatter of late-night drunks echoed faintly in the distance, but all she heard was the hammering of her heart and the sound of her breath slicing the damp air. Her gaze fixed on the shadowy figure slipping around a corner ahead. “Stop!” she shouted, but the figure darted into a narrow alley, the flickering neon sign of The Raven's Nest casting eerie green light over the slick brick walls. She swore under her breath and pressed on, heart pounding harder with each step. A bad idea, chasing him. She should have waited for backup, but the urge to catch him—to put a name to the whispering suspicions that had dogged her for months—overpowered caution. Her footfalls splashed through a shallow puddle as she turned into the alley, flicking the collar of her coat against the biting wind. The figure was nearly gone, but she spotted a glimpse of his dark coat—a wraith slipping through shadows. Just as she rounded the corner, he vanished, slipping beneath a set of damp, rusting gates. Quinn’s instincts screamed at her to retreat. This alley led to The Veil Market, a place littered with whispers of the supernatural. The thought sent a chill down her spine. But she couldn’t just let him escape. She edged toward the gates, the worn hinges creaking ominously as she pushed one aside. The moment she stepped through, a heavy silence enveloped her. Dimly lit stalls lined the abandoned Tube station, shadows shrouding figures huddled in their darkness. A scent of something distinctly earthy mixed with a whiff of old books and a hint of danger clung to the air. Encroaching dread tangled with the thrill of pursuit, and she gripped the worn leather strap of her watch. A sudden burst of laughter echoed, and she turned her head, scanning the shadows, looking for any signs of her quarry. The inhabitants of the market watched her with expectant gazes, whispers rippling through the crowd. Quinn pushed onward, heart racing not just from the chase but from the palpable sense of otherworldly energy threading through the darkness. “Not the smartest choice, detective,” a voice teased from behind a nearby stall, laden with mockery. Quinn tensed, recognizing the tone. “Tomás?” she called, her voice steady despite the unease swirling within her. A figure stepped into the dim light, his warm brown eyes sparkling with mischief under the twisted lighting. Tomás Herrera, ex-paramedic turned underground medic, leaned against the stall, arms crossed. “Thought you were above chasing shadows.” He gestured toward the stalls filled with enchanted trinkets. “I’m after a suspect,” she retorted, scanning the area for the fugitive. “Have you seen anyone suspicious?” Tomás pretended to think, tapping a finger against his chin. “Depends on your definition of ‘suspicious.’ In here, could be anyone. But you’re looking for a tall guy in a dark coat, aren’t you?” Quinn nodded, her eyes narrowing. “Where did he go?” Tomás shrugged, feigning indifference, but his gaze grew serious. “You sure about this? The Market isn’t exactly a safe haven. You step in the wrong direction, and you might not step out again.” Fear gnawed at her stomach, though she would never admit it. “I’ll take my chances.” “Suit yourself.” He stepped back, pointing towards a cluster of stalls. “He headed that way, but don’t say I didn’t warn you.” Quinn nodded, ignoring the prickling unease crawling up her spine. She pushed deeper into the market, maneuvering around the eclectic displays. A battered old sign declared the latest wares: “Banned Alchemical Substances—Apply at Your Own Risk.” It felt absurd, illicit, and intoxicating all at once. She focused, narrowing her thoughts to the task at hand. Her footsteps echoed sharply against the pavement, and she kicked a stray bottle aside, watching it shatter into a cascade of sparkling glass. “Hey!” a vendor snarled, glaring at her. “Watch where you step.” “Sorry, not in the mood.” She pressed on, stepping through a narrow passage between stalls, peering through the spaces in search of her target. Then she felt it—a sudden shift in the air, a tingling anticipation that pulled her attention. A small group huddled, their voices low, but uncertainty hung thick. Quinn's gut twisted as she caught snippets of their murmurs—something about a deal gone wrong, something dark lurking beneath the surface. An uneasy feeling crawled along her skin, and a flash of movement caught her eye. As she rounded another corner, the suspect finally emerged, crouched behind a stack of crates. His dark coat glimmered with rainwater, and he glanced back at her, his eyes widening. “Stop!” she shouted again, lunging forward. He bolted, dodging past startled onlookers, sending a scattering of paper and trinkets tumbling. Quinn sprinted after him, her muscles burning, determination fueling her pace. “Hey! You can’t just run through here!” a voice hollered, but the market faded away behind her as she followed the figure into a deeper section lined with archways and shadowed corners. They plunged into the heart of the market, where a raucous gathering of souls twisted through an intoxicating mix of fear and fascination. She pushed past, her focus on the fleeing man, the immediate world around her fading into a blur of sound and color. The man weaved through the crowd, and Quinn pushed herself harder, dodging between clusters of traders and patrons, each step taking her deeper into a chaotic abyss. The rain dripped from her hair, merging with the sweat on her brow as she called again, desperation creeping into her voice. “Get back here!” A flash of movement caught her eye. He disappeared into a shadow-filled alcove, only to re-emerge with an anxious glance back at her. She could almost reach him, her heart thrumming with both urgency and resolve. The crowd shifted, an expanse opening ahead as if the market shifted to hide him. She chased him into one last alcove—a tight space lined with colorful tapestries and an ominous doorway leading to an unseen path. “Quinn!” Tomás' urgent shout cut through the air. She didn’t flinch, eyes locking onto the fugitive. A pulse of adrenaline spiked, and she stepped forward, ready to follow him into the unfamiliar dark. “Wait!” Tomás shot forward, grabbing her arm. “Let me go,” she snapped. “Detective, don’t do this! That’s not a doorway you want to cross.” The shadows beckoned, and she felt that strange calling in her bones. “Now’s not the time for warnings,” Quinn shot back, wrenching free. “Quinn!” Tomás pleaded, urgency lining his voice. “You need to trust me.” But the chase was already consuming her, and as she thrust herself toward the threshold, she leaped into the unknown.
total_cost0.0010615499999999999

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He stepped back [back]"
1"she shouted again [again]"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.577
leniency1
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.133
95.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1138
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.52% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1138
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"echoed"
count3
1
word"pounding"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"down her spine"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count2
6
word"racing"
count1
7
word"palpable"
count1
8
word"sense of"
count1
9
word"otherworldly"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count1
12
word"anticipation"
count1
13
word"chaotic"
count1
14
word"resolve"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"pounding"
2"chill"
3"down her spine"
4"silence"
5"scanning"
6"racing"
7"palpable"
8"sense of"
9"otherworldly"
10"stomach"
11"footsteps"
12"anticipation"
13"chaotic"
14"resolve"
15"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a chill down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1129
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount974
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn10
Dean1
Street1
Raven1
Nest1
Veil1
Market1
Tube1
Herrera1
Tomás5
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Market"
4"Herrera"
5"Tomás"
places
0"Dean"
1"Street"
2"Veil"
globalScore0.987
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.886
wordCount1129
matches
0"not just from the chase but from the palpable sense of otherworldly energy threading thr"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean27.54
std16.9
cv0.614
sampleLengths
065
128
245
357
452
565
658
721
812
930
1015
1117
1234
139
1433
1515
1622
1736
1842
1911
2024
2127
2236
2330
246
2525
2632
2745
2849
293
3036
3137
328
3325
347
355
3612
3712
3811
3912
4020
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs169
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences80
ratio0.063
matches
0"She should have waited for backup, but the urge to catch him—to put a name to the whispering suspicions that had dogged her for months—overpowered caution."
1"The figure was nearly gone, but she spotted a glimpse of his dark coat—a wraith slipping through shadows."
2"Then she felt it—a sudden shift in the air, a tingling anticipation that pulled her attention."
3"Quinn's gut twisted as she caught snippets of their murmurs—something about a deal gone wrong, something dark lurking beneath the surface."
4"She chased him into one last alcove—a tight space lined with colorful tapestries and an ominous doorway leading to an unseen path."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount924
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"ex-paramedic turned underground medic,"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.025974025974025976
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.00974025974025974
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean14.11
std6.91
cv0.49
sampleLengths
023
130
212
328
414
55
626
723
818
916
107
1115
128
137
1415
1510
1615
1722
1818
1921
2015
2122
2216
235
2412
2518
2612
2715
2812
295
3010
3124
325
334
349
3524
3611
374
3811
3911
4010
4111
4215
439
4410
4523
467
474
4824
4916
73.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.45
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners36
98.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"Dimly lit stalls lined the"
1"Then she felt it—a sudden"
ratio0.029
78.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences68
matches
0"Her gaze fixed on the"
1"she shouted, but the figure"
2"She swore under her breath"
3"She should have waited for"
4"Her footfalls splashed through a"
5"She edged toward the gates,"
6"she called, her voice steady"
7"He gestured toward the stalls"
8"she retorted, scanning the area"
9"He stepped back, pointing towards"
10"She pushed deeper into the"
11"It felt absurd, illicit, and"
12"She focused, narrowing her thoughts"
13"Her footsteps echoed sharply against"
14"She pressed on, stepping through"
15"His dark coat glimmered with"
16"she shouted again, lunging forward"
17"He bolted, dodging past startled"
18"They plunged into the heart"
19"She pushed past, her focus"
ratio0.353
11.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences68
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots splashed"
1"The chatter of late-night drunks"
2"Her gaze fixed on the"
3"she shouted, but the figure"
4"She swore under her breath"
5"A bad idea, chasing him."
6"She should have waited for"
7"Her footfalls splashed through a"
8"The figure was nearly gone,"
9"Quinn’s instincts screamed at her"
10"This alley led to The"
11"The thought sent a chill"
12"She edged toward the gates,"
13"The moment she stepped through,"
14"A scent of something distinctly"
15"A sudden burst of laughter"
16"The inhabitants of the market"
17"Quinn pushed onward, heart racing"
18"a voice teased from behind"
19"Quinn tensed, recognizing the tone."
ratio0.897
73.53% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"Just as she rounded the"
ratio0.015
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"A sudden burst of laughter echoed, and she turned her head, scanning the shadows, looking for any signs of her quarry."
1"Then she felt it—a sudden shift in the air, a tingling anticipation that pulled her attention."
2"Quinn sprinted after him, her muscles burning, determination fueling her pace."
3"The rain dripped from her hair, merging with the sweat on her brow as she called again, desperation creeping into her voice."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she shouted, but the figure darted into a narrow alley, the flickering neon sign of The Raven's Nest casting eerie green light over the slick brick walls"
1"she called, her voice steady despite the unease swirling within her"
2"a voice hollered, but the market faded away behind her as she followed the figure into a deeper section lined with archways and shadowed corners"
3"Tomás pleaded, urgency lining his voice"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"she shouted (shout)"
1"a voice teased (tease)"
2"she retorted (retort)"
3"old sign declared (declare)"
4"a vendor snarled (snarl)"
5"She pressed on (press on)"
6"she shouted again (shout)"
7"a voice hollered (holler)"
8"she snapped (snap)"
9"Tomás pleaded (plead)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.423
leniency0.846
rawRatio0.909
effectiveRatio0.769
79.4998%