| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 706 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 706 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "mosaic" | | 11 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 19 | | markdownWords | 26 | | totalWords | 702 | | ratio | 0.037 | | matches | | 0 | "anything" | | 1 | "Focus." | | 2 | "no" | | 3 | "From" | | 4 | "stop" | | 5 | "wrong" | | 6 | "flowed" | | 7 | "mapping" | | 8 | "pressure" | | 9 | "saw" | | 10 | "\"It’s eating the trees. It’s eating them alive.\"" | | 11 | "laughing" | | 12 | "stop" | | 13 | "Normal." | | 14 | "watching" | | 15 | "standing" | | 16 | "run" | | 17 | "wrong" | | 18 | "ached" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.20% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 692 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.16 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 8 | | Grove | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.922 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 91.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "quite match the flickering glow of her phone’s torch" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 702 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 22.65 | | std | 26.07 | | cv | 1.151 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 1 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 89 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 85 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 77 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 62 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 4 |
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| 98.52% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was supposed" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "was breathing" | | 1 | "was holding" | | 2 | "was *laughing" | | 3 | "wasn’t shifting" | | 4 | "was just—*standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something older—something that didn’t belong in Richmond Park, even at midnight." | | 1 | "The time-bending, the way the world bent with it—it was supposed to be a threshold, not a trap." | | 2 | "And the ground beneath her boots—*no*." | | 3 | "The artifact was supposed to react to Hel portals, not—" | | 4 | "Then—movement." | | 5 | "It *flowed*, like smoke given form, and when it turned its head—" | | 6 | "A wave of it hit her, thick and suffocating, and for a second, she *saw*—" | | 7 | "Then—" | | 8 | "It was just—*standing*." | | 9 | "She turned—" | | 10 | "—and saw the first of the oaks splitting open at its base." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 697 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.03012912482065997 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0028694404591104736 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 6.68 | | std | 6.15 | | cv | 0.92 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 34.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.2761904761904762 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the same unnatural stillness," | | 1 | "Then the pendant went cold." | | 2 | "Just sat there, dark and" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d meant to slip it" | | 1 | "She should’ve turned back." | | 2 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 3 | "Their bark split open in" | | 4 | "Her breath hitched." | | 5 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 6 | "It didn’t walk." | | 7 | "It *flowed*, like smoke given" | | 8 | "It was a *mapping* of" | | 9 | "She yanked her hand back," | | 10 | "She didn’t care." | | 11 | "She didn’t *stop*." | | 12 | "She skidded to a halt" | | 13 | "Her hands trembled." | | 14 | "She ripped the chain from" | | 15 | "It didn’t glow." | | 16 | "She didn’t turn." | | 17 | "It wasn’t shifting." | | 18 | "It was just—*standing*." | | 19 | "She ignored it." |
| | ratio | 0.278 | |
| 73.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against Aurora’s" | | 1 | "She’d meant to slip it" | | 2 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 3 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 4 | "She should’ve turned back." | | 5 | "The pendant’s warmth seeped into" | | 6 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 7 | "The time-bending, the way the" | | 8 | "Their bark split open in" | | 9 | "Something that gave just a" | | 10 | "A twig snapped." | | 11 | "The sound had come from" | | 12 | "The pendant’s glow flickered." | | 13 | "Her breath hitched." | | 14 | "That wasn’t normal." | | 15 | "The artifact was supposed to" | | 16 | "A whisper slithered through the" | | 17 | "The sound curled around her," | | 18 | "Aurora’s pulse hammered in her" | | 19 | "She pressed a hand to" |
| | ratio | 0.772 | |
| 63.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something older—something that didn’t belong in Richmond Park, even at midnight." | | 1 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled oaks casting jagged shadows that didn’t quite match the flickering glow of her phone’s torch." | | 2 | "Something that gave just a little under her weight, as if the earth itself was breathing." | | 3 | "She pressed a hand to her chest, fingers pressing into her sternum as if she could *stop* it." | | 4 | "A shape shifting between the trunks, too tall, too lean, its limbs bending in ways that made her stomach clench." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |