Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRHGR49PM8W7E2MAK972TX

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Duration:
50.4s
Cost:
$0.001106
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora, or Rory as her friends called her, stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, her heart pounding with a mix of excitement and apprehension. The boundary hummed with a faint, shimmering energy that only those with supernatural sight could perceive. She glanced back at Nyx, the Shade, who stood at the threshold, their form shifting between solid and incorporeal, like a whisper in the wind. The air inside the grove was different—thicker, as if the very atmosphere was woven with magic. Wildflowers bloomed everywhere, their colors more vivid than any she had seen in the world outside. The scent of jasmine and lavender filled the air, mingling with the sweet, earthy fragrance of the forest floor. Isolde, the ethereal Half-Fae, waited in the center of the grove. Her silver hair cascaded down her back, reaching her waist, and her pale lavender eyes shone with a wisdom that spanned centuries. She stood beside a small, crystal-clear pond, its surface reflecting the dappled sunlight filtering through the canopy. Rory took a deep breath, feeling the tension in her shoulders ease. "This place is incredible," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "It's like stepping into another world." Nyx's form solidified into a tall, human-like silhouette of living shadow. "It is indeed," they murmured, their voice carrying the whisper of the wind. "The Fae Grove exists between realms, a pocket of magic where time flows differently." Isolde smiled, her lips curving into a knowing smile. "Welcome to my sanctuary," she said. "Here, the boundaries between Earth and the Fae realm are thin. Be cautious, for this place holds many secrets." Rory nodded, her curiosity piqued. She walked a few steps deeper into the grove, her gaze drawn to the ancient trees that seemed to watch her with a silent, ancient wisdom. The Heartstone pendant around her neck pulsed faintly, its deep crimson gemstone glowing with a warm light. She touched it, feeling a surge of warmth through her fingers. "Isolde, what exactly is the Heartstone?" Rory asked, turning to the seer. "It's been a mystery to me ever since you gave it to me." Isolde's eyes took on a distant, dreamy quality. "The Heartstone is a piece of Dymas, the realm of Gluttony," she explained. "It was given to you by a benefactor who wished to guide you. When near a portal to Hel, it will warn you of its presence. But it also holds a deeper power, one that you must discover for yourself." Rory nodded, tucking the pendant back under her shirt. "I'll keep that in mind," she said. "Can you tell us more about this grove? What should we be looking for?" Nyx moved closer, their eyes glowing faintly violet. "This grove is a place of balance and harmony," they said. "But it is also a place of trials. The Fae are known for their games and riddles. Be prepared for anything." Isolde's smile widened. "The Fae love a good challenge," she agreed. "But they also value those who show respect and humility. Approach each encounter with an open heart and a clear mind." Rory and Nyx followed Isolde deeper into the grove, their steps silent on the soft, mossy ground. The air grew cooler, and the light dimmed as they moved away from the pond. Ancient, gnarled trees loomed overhead, their branches reaching out like the arms of forgotten deities. The path twisted and turned, leading them through a labyrinth of earth and shadow. "Is it always this quiet?" Rory asked, her voice breaking the stillness. Isolde shook her head. "Not always," she replied. "The Fae are creatures of the night and the unseen. They may be watching us even now, unseen by mortal eyes." Rory's skin prickled with a mix of unease and excitement. She had faced many challenges in her short life, but this felt different—more primal, more rooted in the ancient magic that flowed through the grove. As they continued deeper, the forest grew denser, the trees entwining their branches to form a natural canopy. A faint hum filled the air, a low, rhythmic pulse that seemed to resonate with the earth itself. Rory's heartbeat synchronized with the rhythm, a primal connection forming between her and the land. Suddenly, the path opened into a small clearing. At the center stood a stone altar, its surface covered in intricate carvings that glowed with a soft, ethereal light. A single, delicate flower bloomed in the center, its petals a deep shade of violet. "Is this what we're looking for?" Rory asked, her gaze fixed on the altar. Isolde approached the altar, her hand hovering over the flower. "This is a symbol of the Fae's power," she said. "The flower is a rare blossom that only blooms in the heart of the grove. It is a sign that we have been granted passage through their realm." Nyx stepped forward, their form shifting to a more solid form. "But it also means that we must offer something in return," they said. "The Fae value reciprocity. What will you give to earn their favor?" Rory thought for a moment, her mind racing. She remembered the stories Isolde had told her of the Fae's love for riddles and games. She took a deep breath and stepped up to the altar. "I offer my respect and my promise to walk this path with honor," she said, her voice steady and clear. Isolde nodded, a smile playing on her lips. "A noble offering," she said. "But the Fae may ask for more." The flower on the altar began to glow brighter, its light pulsing in time with the hum of the grove. Suddenly, the air shimmered, and a figure materialized before them. It was a Fae, its form ethereal and translucent, with wings that seemed to be made of gossamer. "Greetings, mortal and Shade," the Fae said, its voice musical and flowing like a stream. "I am Lylira, guardian of this grove. You have come seeking knowledge and power. What do you seek?" Rory swallowed, feeling the weight of the moment. She met Lylira's gaze, her eyes bright blue and resolute. "I seek the truth," she said. "The truth about my past, and the path that lies ahead." Lylira regarded her for a moment, her eyes searching Rory's soul. "Truth is a double-edged sword," she said. "It can free you, or it can bind you. Are you prepared for what you might learn?" Rory nodded. "I am," she said, her voice strong and unwavering. Lylira's smile held a hint of mischief. "Very well," she said. "I will grant you a glimpse of the truth, but know this: the path you choose will be your own. No one can walk it for you." The Fae's wings fluttered, and the air around them shimmered with a thousand colors. Rory felt a wave of dizziness, her senses overwhelmed by the sudden shift in reality. When her vision cleared, she found herself standing at the edge of a different clearing. The sky was a warm amber, and the trees were draped in vines that bore exotic fruits. The air was thick with the scent of spices and sweet nectar. "Where are we?" she asked, her voice barely a whisper. Nyx's form solidified beside her. "We are in Dymas," they said. "The realm of Gluttony. Prince Belphegor's domain." Rory's heart raced. She had heard stories of Dymas, a place of excess and indulgence, where the most skilled chefs and mixologists created feasts that tempted even the most disciplined souls. But the reality was more surreal than she had imagined. The landscape was a tapestry of colors and textures, each sense overwhelmed by the sheer richness of the environment. "Be cautious," Isolde whispered, her voice tinged with a hint of warning. "Dymas is a place of temptation. The Prince delights in luring mortals into his world, only to bind them to contracts they cannot escape." Rory's hand drifted to the Heartstone pendant, its warmth a steady, grounding presence. "I'll be careful," she said. "But we can't turn back now. We have to find the truth." Lylira appeared before them once more, her form shimmering with light. "The truth you seek lies at the heart of Dymas," she said. "Follow the path of the vine, and you will find what you seek. But beware—the path is not without its dangers." With that, the Fae vanished, leaving them to navigate the realm on their own. Rory took a deep breath, her eyes fixed on the path ahead. The vine Lylira had spoken of wound its way through the landscape, leading deeper into the heart of Dymas. "Let's go," she said, her voice resolute. "We've come this far. We can't stop now." Nyx and Isolde followed her, their steps silent and purposeful. As they walked, the vine led them through a series of grand feasts and culinary competitions, each more extravagant than the last. The air was filled with the sizzle of hot pans, the aroma of spices, and the clink of fine glassware. Rory's senses were assaulted by the sights and sounds, but she kept her focus. The vine eventually led them to a grand palace, its walls draped in velvet and gold. At the entrance, a figure stood, cloaked in shadows and wearing a crown of twisted metal. Prince Belphegor. "Welcome to my domain," he said, his voice smooth and seductive. "What brings you to Dymas, mortal and Shade?" Rory met his gaze, her heart pounding. "We seek the truth," she said. "The truth about my past and the path that lies ahead." Belphegor's eyes glinted with amusement. "The truth," he repeated. "Such a precious commodity in a realm of excess. But it comes at a price. Are you willing to pay it?" Rory's hand tightened around the Heartstone pendant. "I will pay any price," she said, her voice unwavering. Belphegor smiled, a smile that held no warmth. "Very well," he said. "Follow me, and I will show you the truth you seek." With that, he led them deeper into the palace, the vine winding its way through the grand halls and chambers. Each step brought them closer to the heart of Dymas, and closer to the truth Rory so desperately sought.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags31
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.554
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1709
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
1
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"very"
1"barely above a whisper"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1709
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"pounding"
count2
1
word"apprehension"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count4
3
word"crystal"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"sanctuary"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count3
8
word"encounter"
count1
9
word"loomed"
count1
10
word"rhythmic"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"synchronized"
count1
13
word"intricate"
count1
14
word"racing"
count1
15
word"shimmered"
count2
16
word"weight"
count1
17
word"unwavering"
count2
18
word"fluttered"
count1
19
word"raced"
count1
20
word"surreal"
count1
21
word"tapestry"
count1
22
word"tinged"
count1
23
word"navigate"
count1
24
word"velvet"
count1
highlights
0"pounding"
1"apprehension"
2"whisper"
3"crystal"
4"tension"
5"sanctuary"
6"pulsed"
7"warmth"
8"encounter"
9"loomed"
10"rhythmic"
11"pulse"
12"synchronized"
13"intricate"
14"racing"
15"shimmered"
16"weight"
17"unwavering"
18"fluttered"
19"raced"
20"surreal"
21"tapestry"
22"tinged"
23"navigate"
24"velvet"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
1"the weight of the moment"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences106
matches
0"a surge of warmth"
88.95% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1703
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions33
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
53.25% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount1137
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.93
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory22
Nyx7
Shade1
Half-Fae1
Isolde11
Heartstone3
Fae6
Lylira5
Dymas3
Belphegor3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Half-Fae"
3"Isolde"
4"Fae"
5"Lylira"
6"Belphegor"
places
0"Heartstone"
globalScore0.533
windowScore0.667
53.85% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"trees that seemed to watch her with a silent, ancient wisdom"
1"pulse that seemed to resonate with the earth itself"
2"wings that seemed to be made of gossamer"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1703
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
80.19% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean37.02
std15.94
cv0.431
sampleLengths
066
151
250
330
438
534
659
725
861
930
1040
1132
1261
1312
1429
1535
1651
1743
1814
1948
2036
2155
2220
2348
2433
2535
2635
2711
2838
2973
3010
3118
3260
3336
3430
3544
3645
3715
3866
3934
4019
4124
4230
4317
4423
4539
92.02% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences106
matches
0"was woven"
1"were draped"
2"was filled"
3"were assaulted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs190
matches(empty)
99.24% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences131
ratio0.015
matches
0"The air inside the grove was different—thicker, as if the very atmosphere was woven with magic."
1"She had faced many challenges in her short life, but this felt different—more primal, more rooted in the ancient magic that flowed through the grove."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1141
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crystal-clear pond,"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.025416301489921123
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007887817703768623
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean13
std6.43
cv0.494
sampleLengths
025
116
225
316
416
519
611
722
817
912
1012
116
1211
1313
1414
159
166
1719
185
1926
2017
2111
2212
2313
248
2513
2640
279
287
2914
308
3111
3221
333
348
3521
3617
3715
3815
3914
4012
414
424
4321
4410
4525
4618
4718
4815
498
48.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.29770992366412213
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners39
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"Suddenly, the path opened into"
1"Suddenly, the air shimmered, and"
ratio0.023
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences86
matches
0"She glanced back at Nyx,"
1"Her silver hair cascaded down"
2"She stood beside a small,"
3"she said, her voice barely"
4"they murmured, their voice carrying"
5"She walked a few steps"
6"She touched it, feeling a"
7"She had faced many challenges"
8"She remembered the stories Isolde"
9"She took a deep breath"
10"she said, her voice steady"
11"It was a Fae, its"
12"She met Lylira's gaze, her"
13"she said, her voice strong"
14"she asked, her voice barely"
15"She had heard stories of"
16"she said, her voice resolute"
17"he said, his voice smooth"
18"she said, her voice unwavering"
ratio0.221
23.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences86
matches
0"Aurora, or Rory as her"
1"The boundary hummed with a"
2"She glanced back at Nyx,"
3"The air inside the grove"
4"Wildflowers bloomed everywhere, their colors"
5"The scent of jasmine and"
6"Isolde, the ethereal Half-Fae, waited"
7"Her silver hair cascaded down"
8"She stood beside a small,"
9"Rory took a deep breath,"
10"she said, her voice barely"
11"Nyx's form solidified into a"
12"they murmured, their voice carrying"
13"Isolde smiled, her lips curving"
14"Rory nodded, her curiosity piqued."
15"She walked a few steps"
16"The Heartstone pendant around her"
17"She touched it, feeling a"
18"Rory asked, turning to the"
19"Isolde's eyes took on a"
ratio0.872
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
38.96% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Aurora, or Rory as her friends called her, stepped through the ancient oak standing stones, her heart pounding with a mix of excitement and apprehension."
1"She glanced back at Nyx, the Shade, who stood at the threshold, their form shifting between solid and incorporeal, like a whisper in the wind."
2"The air inside the grove was different—thicker, as if the very atmosphere was woven with magic."
3"Her silver hair cascaded down her back, reaching her waist, and her pale lavender eyes shone with a wisdom that spanned centuries."
4"She stood beside a small, crystal-clear pond, its surface reflecting the dappled sunlight filtering through the canopy."
5"She walked a few steps deeper into the grove, her gaze drawn to the ancient trees that seemed to watch her with a silent, ancient wisdom."
6"She had faced many challenges in her short life, but this felt different—more primal, more rooted in the ancient magic that flowed through the grove."
7"She had heard stories of Dymas, a place of excess and indulgence, where the most skilled chefs and mixologists created feasts that tempted even the most discipl…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags31
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
1"they murmured, their voice carrying the whisper of the wind"
2"Rory asked, her voice breaking the stillness"
3"she said, her voice steady and clear"
4"the Fae said, its voice musical and flowing like a stream"
5"she said, her voice strong and unwavering"
6"she asked, her voice barely a whisper"
7"she said, her voice resolute"
8"he said, his voice smooth and seductive"
9"she said, her voice unwavering"
69.35% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags31
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
1"she explained (explain)"
2"she agreed (agree)"
3"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
4"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.554
leniency1
rawRatio0.161
effectiveRatio0.161
75.7441%