Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRHGXE6WR8VQ5CT03WPQRA

Run Details

Duration:
2m 32s
Cost:
$0.017093
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The thick silence was suddenly broken by Ptolemy's frantic meows. The tabby cat weaved between legs and brushed against her shins, nearly tripping Rory as she hurried towards the front door. "Coming, girl," she said, dodging the stacks of books and scrolls littering the hallway. Three locks clicked open at her touch. Rory pushed the door, peeking through a small gap. The streetlights bathed the man standing on the stoop in an orange glow, his sharp jawline and proud nose creating dramatic shadows. His hair, slicked back, shone platinum in the light. "Long time, Rory." His deep voice, laced with a French accent, sent a shiver down her spine. "Luc." The word slipped out, surprising her. "What... What're you doing here?" She took a step back as if to hide behind the door, to lock herself in her sanctuary away from him. His thin brows rose imperceptibly. He seemed to be considering something, perhaps whether he should have come at all. With his usual self-assurance, he stepped across the threshold. The smell of incense and spices from the curry house below wafted in with him, filling the air. "I need your help." Her eyes narrowed. There was something about Lucien that she couldn't quite put a finger on, a sense of danger intertwined with the charm. Part of her wanted to slam the door shut, but her curiosity and the man's persuasive nature always got the better of her. Maybe it was the worry lines now wrinkling his forehead, or the hint of uncertainty she saw in his amber eye, but she kept the door ajar and asked, "What's the matter?" "I can't say here. It must be done in private," he said, glancing around the narrow hallway, congested with Eva's clutter. "And you thought coming to Brick Lane, of all places, was the best idea? Couldn't have called or something?" But she knew the answer. Lucien wasn't the type to use a phone. Too traceable, he'd say. "Parlez-vous avec moi, s'il vous plaît." The French came naturally to her, and she would have liked to pretend that it was the language that drew her in. But it wasn't. Rory hooked the chain and opened the door, letting Lucien inside. She had learned her lesson before; he would find a way in even if she refused. "Is there tea? Or... I have some beer, I think?" She stepped into the kitchen area, packed with pyramids of old textbooks and papers, leaving him to navigate the maze alone. A faint metallic click echoed behind her as he secured the door with the top deadbolt. Ptolemy wove around his legs, rubbing against him with a loud purr. He reached down with his ivory cane, stroking the fluffy fur with a gloved hand. Rory pulled two beers from the fridge and twisted off the caps, giving one to Lucien as he joined her in the kitchen. He gracefully swept papers aside with his cane and perched on the stool. She flashed him a grin over her bottle, meeting his gaze as she took a sip. He narrowed his eyes, taking a moment to respond in kind, as if they were partaking in some silent communication. She broke the eye contact and sighed, dragging her fingers through her straight black hair. "You brought me this far... so talk. What's so important you couldn't have texted?" His face tightened. "It's complicated." "I'm not in the business of simplicity. Try me." "I need access to someone in your police department." She snorted. "Who, Detective Cheung? I thought you'd want something more... high-level." "Non, the constable. Wyatt." Rory's brows rose. "She's not a police officer." "She will be. Her promotion to the force is a near certainty, and I wish her on my payroll." Rory shook her head. "I'm an Uber driver, mate. I can't help you with this." "You know her; she's been in Eva's study group." "Yeah, but I don't know her well. Like, at all. Not on a personal level. We never hit it off." His heterochromatic eyes bore into hers, the black one turning her insides to jelly. "You will make it work. It's imperative this deal goes through smoothly." "Don't care much for you and your shady dealings, Luc. The last time I listened to you, I ended up battered and bloody." Old hurts surfaced with those words, igniting a spark in her bright blue eyes. "I was there for you when no one else was," he replied softly. "I know I haven't been... entirely honest with you, but I ensured you a way out. I can give you that again." "Is this about Silas? Or the Brits?" "Oui." His eyes flicked towards the cluttered kitchen table, where a stack of papers obscured an old laptop. "I thought you two were mates?" she exclaimed. "That is not always possible in my line of work." His gaze intensified, commanding her attention. "I need you to set up a connection, Rory. It will expedite future dealings." She studied him for a long moment, her heart thumping in her chest. She had refused many of his previous requests, rarely wanting to get involved in his schemes again. But something about this time felt different. She swallowed hard, knowing she would eventually agree despite her reservations. A knock on the front door shocked them both. Lucien stood, stashing his beer on the counter next to Rory's unfinished bottle. "It's Wyatt," he whispered, pressing his lips close to her ear. The smell of his cologne tickled her nose, sending a warm tingle down her spine. "What are you going to do?" she asked, her voice low and breathy. He straightened his suit jacket and gestured to the hallway. "You remember my theory on fate?" he said, his voice calm and controlled. The knocks grew louder and more insistent. Rory's head spun. He was going to answer the door. "Go... Go on, then," she said, more to herself than to him. She gripped the edge of the counter, her mind reeling as she watched him walk towards the front door. Lucien leaned close to the peephole, scrutinising the other side of the door, before swinging it wide open. "Salutations, Wyatt. Quelle surprise. I had no idea you knew this charming demoiselle." Rory took a deep breath, scolding her stupid heart as she followed, prepared to explain away this nightmarish turn of events.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he replied softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.486
leniency0.971
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.057
90.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1067
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1067
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"down her spine"
count2
2
word"sanctuary"
count1
3
word"sense of"
count1
4
word"charm"
count1
5
word"navigate"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"down her spine"
2"sanctuary"
3"sense of"
4"charm"
5"navigate"
6"echoed"
7"flicked"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1064
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.24% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount753
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy2
Rory9
Three1
French2
Lucien6
Eva1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Rory"
2"Three"
3"French"
4"Lucien"
5"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.902
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite put a finger on, a sense of danger intertwined with the charm"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1064
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"pretend that it"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean28
std20.34
cv0.726
sampleLengths
031
161
217
333
446
54
679
721
836
96
1052
1174
1272
1329
145
159
169
1712
184
198
2019
2115
229
2320
2426
2537
2635
277
2818
298
3030
3148
3248
3313
3423
3548
3631
3721
99.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"get involved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs137
matches
0"were partaking"
72.31% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences81
ratio0.025
matches
0"She had learned her lesson before; he would find a way in even if she refused."
1"\"You know her; she's been in Eva's study group.\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount754
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.034482758620689655
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.011936339522546418
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean13.14
std7.24
cv0.551
sampleLengths
010
121
214
37
49
522
69
717
87
926
105
1114
129
1318
144
153
1621
1723
1832
1921
2024
218
224
236
2422
253
2611
2716
2831
2916
3012
3115
3223
3313
3416
3520
3615
3714
383
392
409
419
422
4310
444
453
465
4719
484
4911
63.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.41975308641975306
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences61
matches
0"Maybe it was the worry"
1"Too traceable, he'd say."
ratio0.033
23.28% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences61
matches
0"she said, dodging the stacks"
1"His hair, slicked back, shone"
2"His deep voice, laced with"
3"She took a step back"
4"His thin brows rose imperceptibly."
5"He seemed to be considering"
6"Her eyes narrowed."
7"he said, glancing around the"
8"She had learned her lesson"
9"She stepped into the kitchen"
10"He reached down with his"
11"He gracefully swept papers aside"
12"She flashed him a grin"
13"He narrowed his eyes, taking"
14"She broke the eye contact"
15"His face tightened."
16"His heterochromatic eyes bore into"
17"he replied softly"
18"His eyes flicked towards the"
19"His gaze intensified, commanding her"
ratio0.492
33.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences61
matches
0"The thick silence was suddenly"
1"The tabby cat weaved between"
2"she said, dodging the stacks"
3"Rory pushed the door, peeking"
4"The streetlights bathed the man"
5"His hair, slicked back, shone"
6"His deep voice, laced with"
7"The word slipped out, surprising"
8"She took a step back"
9"His thin brows rose imperceptibly."
10"He seemed to be considering"
11"The smell of incense and"
12"Her eyes narrowed."
13"Part of her wanted to"
14"he said, glancing around the"
15"Lucien wasn't the type to"
16"The French came naturally to"
17"Rory hooked the chain and"
18"She had learned her lesson"
19"She stepped into the kitchen"
ratio0.852
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He narrowed his eyes, taking a moment to respond in kind, as if they were partaking in some silent communication."
36.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she asked, her voice low and breathy"
1"he said, his voice calm and controlled"
2"she said, more to herself than to him"
92.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she exclaimed (exclaim)"
1"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.229
leniency0.457
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.114
84.2607%