| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.727 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 67.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1249 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "sharply" | | 5 | "deliberately" | | 6 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.96% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1249 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "navigate" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "wavering" | | 8 | "quickened" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "beacon" | | 11 | "loomed" | | 12 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | | |
| 88.44% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 4 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1234 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.15% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1179 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.36 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 7 | | Pendant | 1 | | Park | 2 | | London | 2 | | Bring | 1 | | Rory | 16 | | October | 1 | | Richmond | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "October" | | 3 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 0.821 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 91.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like twenty minutes, then suddenly" | | 1 | "as if crossing a membrane" |
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| 37.93% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.621 | | wordCount | 1234 | | matches | | 0 | "neither her heartbeat nor" | | 1 | "no longer pulsing but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | |
| 96.65% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 42 | | mean | 29.38 | | std | 14.35 | | cv | 0.488 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 56 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 32 | | 28 | 49 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 34 | | 31 | 39 | | 32 | 38 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 46 | | 35 | 48 | | 36 | 33 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 35 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 217 | | matches | | 0 | "were listening" | | 1 | "was approaching" | | 2 | "was reaching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 109 | | ratio | 0.092 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory checked her watch—11:47." | | 1 | "The grove remained silent, but the silence itself had changed—become attentive, as if the darkness were listening." | | 2 | "The clicking resumed, closer this time, accompanied by a new sound—a wet, sliding noise that raised gooseflesh along her arms." | | 3 | "Rory grasped it, intending to remove the chain from around her neck, but the moment her fingers touched the crimson stone, images flashed behind her eyes—twisted pathways, a sky the color of bruises, creatures with too many joints moving in ways that defied physical laws." | | 4 | "But something touched her—a cold, damp pressure against the back of her neck." | | 5 | "The light spun crazily as it fell, briefly illuminating something impossible—a patch of darkness that bent wrong, that had depth and substance but no definable shape." | | 6 | "In that flash, Rory caught a glimpse of what stood before her—a suggestion of limbs that bent backward, of a face with too many eyes, of a mouth that opened sideways." | | 7 | "Something snagged her jacket—a branch, please let it be a branch—and she tore free, leaving fabric behind." | | 8 | "Normal darkness surrounded her—darkness pierced by distant streetlights, by the glow of London's skyline reflected in low clouds." | | 9 | "Whatever connection it had made was broken—or dormant." |
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| 97.92% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 400 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 13 | | adverbRatio | 0.0325 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0225 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 109 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 109 | | mean | 11.32 | | std | 6.72 | | cv | 0.593 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 51.23% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.35185185185185186 | | totalSentences | 108 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 67.34% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the crimson glow of" | | 1 | "Then darkness again, and the" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, her voice falling" | | 1 | "She fingered the crimson stone" | | 2 | "She settled onto a fallen" | | 3 | "Her watch read 11:52 for" | | 4 | "Her voice sounded thin, vulnerable" | | 5 | "She inhaled deeply, struggling to" | | 6 | "she demanded, forcing steel into" | | 7 | "She should leave, return to" | | 8 | "She turned sharply but saw" | | 9 | "She gasped, releasing the pendant," | | 10 | "She switched on the flashlight" | | 11 | "She swept the light in" | | 12 | "she said, her voice steadier" | | 13 | "She stumbled forward, dropping her" | | 14 | "she whispered, backing toward where" | | 15 | "Her shoulder blades touched something" | | 16 | "She crashed through undergrowth, heart" | | 17 | "She stumbled onto the ordinary" | | 18 | "Her watch read 3:17 AM." |
| | ratio | 0.192 | |
| 81.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 75 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory shivered as she stepped" | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant hung warm" | | 2 | "she called, her voice falling" | | 3 | "Richmond Park had emptied hours" | | 4 | "She fingered the crimson stone" | | 5 | "The unknown sender's note had" | | 6 | "The full moon provided enough" | | 7 | "Wildflowers that shouldn't be blooming" | | 8 | "Rory checked her watch—11:47." | | 9 | "She settled onto a fallen" | | 10 | "Time passed strangely in the" | | 11 | "Her watch read 11:52 for" | | 12 | "The pendant's warmth intensified, its" | | 13 | "Rory stood, turning slowly to" | | 14 | "The sound that answered wasn't" | | 15 | "A soft clicking, like pebbles" | | 16 | "Rory's muscles tensed." | | 17 | "The clicking moved, circling the" | | 18 | "Her voice sounded thin, vulnerable" | | 19 | "The clicking stopped." |
| | ratio | 0.758 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 21.56% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant hung warm against her breastbone, pulsing with a gentle rhythm that matched neither her heartbeat nor any natural cadence she recognized." | | 1 | "She inhaled deeply, struggling to maintain the cool-headed rationality that had always been her strength." | | 2 | "The grove remained silent, but the silence itself had changed—become attentive, as if the darkness were listening." | | 3 | "The wildflowers, which had been gently wavering despite the lack of wind, went perfectly still." | | 4 | "The clicking resumed, closer this time, accompanied by a new sound—a wet, sliding noise that raised gooseflesh along her arms." | | 5 | "Rory grasped it, intending to remove the chain from around her neck, but the moment her fingers touched the crimson stone, images flashed behind her eyes—twiste…" | | 6 | "The beam caught nothing but swaying ferns and wildflowers, bending as if something had just passed through them." | | 7 | "The light spun crazily as it fell, briefly illuminating something impossible—a patch of darkness that bent wrong, that had depth and substance but no definable …" | | 8 | "Rory lunged for the gap between the nearest stones, feeling resistance as she passed through, as if crossing a membrane." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Her voice sounded, vulnerable" | | 1 | "she said, her voice steadier than she felt" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she demanded (demand)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 11 | | tagDensity | 0.545 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.333 | |