Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRHKKYWH3TP0EMJ4XSHHE5

Run Details

Duration:
22.8s
Cost:
$0.008700

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station smelled of damp concrete and rust. Quinn stepped over the police tape, her boots clicking against the cracked tiles. The beam of her torch cut through the gloom, illuminating the graffiti-scrawled walls—tags that looked fresh, though the station had been sealed for decades. "Quinn. Over here." Sergeant Patel stood near the old ticket booth, his face half-lit by the flickering glow of his phone screen. He waved her over, the light catching the sweat on his brow. She adjusted the strap of her evidence bag. "What’ve we got?" "Male, mid-thirties. No ID. Found him slumped against the wall like he just sat down for a nap." Patel gestured to the body. The man’s limbs were arranged too neatly, hands folded over his stomach. His skin had a waxy sheen, lips tinged blue. "No visible wounds, no signs of struggle. Tox screen’s clean so far." Quinn crouched, her knees popping. She shone her torch over the corpse. The man’s clothes were expensive—tailored wool coat, polished leather shoes—but his pockets were empty. No wallet, no phone, not even a receipt. "You check the security feeds?" Patel exhaled through his nose. "Station’s been dead for years. No cameras, no power. Just us and the rats." Quinn’s fingers hovered over the man’s wrist. The leather of her watch creaked as she leaned closer. The skin was cold, but not stiff. Rigor hadn’t set in. "Time of death?" "ME’s on her way, but I’d say within the last two hours." She stood, brushing dust from her trousers. "That’s impossible. This place has been sealed since the nineties. No one’s been down here." Patel crossed his arms. "Unless he had a key." Quinn’s torch beam snagged on something half-buried in the grime near the body. She nudged it with the toe of her boot—a small, circular object, brass by the look of it. She crouched again, slipping on a latex glove before picking it up. The metal was warm, almost humming against her palm. Etched into its face were strange symbols, spiraling out from the center like a spider’s web. Patel frowned. "What is that?" "Compass." Quinn turned it over. The needle spun wildly, then stilled, pointing toward the far wall. "But not the kind you’d use to find north." Patel’s radio crackled. "Sarge, we’ve got something. You need to see this." They followed the voice down the platform, past the rusted husks of old vending machines. A constable stood near the edge, torchlight dancing over the tracks. Quinn’s stomach dropped. A door. Not just any door—an arched wooden thing, its surface carved with the same symbols as the compass. It stood in the middle of the tunnel wall, as if someone had simply cut a hole in reality and slotted it in. The edges were seamless, no mortar, no hinges visible from this side. Patel whistled. "What the hell is that?" Quinn stepped closer, her pulse thrumming in her throat. The air near the door shimmered, like heat rising off asphalt. She reached out, then hesitated. "Has anyone touched it?" The constable shook his head. "Looks like it’s been here a while. But the dust’s disturbed. Someone’s been through recently." Quinn’s torch flickered. The beam dimmed, then brightened, casting long shadows across the door. The symbols seemed to shift under the light, twisting like living things. Patel rubbed his temples. "Okay, new theory. This guy was some kind of urban explorer. Found this door, got curious, maybe had a heart attack when he saw what was on the other side." Quinn didn’t answer. She was staring at the compass in her hand. The needle had stopped spinning. Now it pointed directly at the door. She pocketed it. "Get a team down here. I want this door photographed, fingerprinted, the works. And find out who owns this station. There’s no way this is on any city records." Patel hesitated. "Quinn, you’re not suggesting—" "I’m not suggesting anything. I’m saying this doesn’t make sense. A man dies in a sealed station with no ID, no cause of death, and a door that shouldn’t exist in his pocket?" She turned back toward the body. "There’s something we’re missing." Patel sighed. "You always say that." She ignored him, crouching beside the corpse again. The man’s coat had ridden up slightly, exposing his wrist. Quinn froze. A mark. A small, circular brand, just above the pulse point. The same spiraling symbols as the compass. Patel noticed her stillness. "What?" Quinn pulled out her phone, snapping a photo. "This isn’t a heart attack. This isn’t natural. And it sure as hell isn’t urban exploration." The compass in her pocket grew warmer. The needle twitched, then began to spin again.
total_cost0.0087

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.16
leniency0.32
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.08
93.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount791
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount791
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count2
2
word"tinged"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"dancing"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"shimmered"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"stomach"
2"tinged"
3"etched"
4"dancing"
5"pulse"
6"shimmered"
7"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences63
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords782
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
45.24% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount525
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity2.1
worstName"Patel"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Patel11
Quinn11
persons
0"Patel"
1"Quinn"
places(empty)
globalScore0.452
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount782
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean24.44
std16.03
cv0.656
sampleLengths
047
134
211
356
439
519
631
712
822
99
1068
115
1225
1312
1429
152
1652
177
1829
1920
2026
2134
2224
2332
246
2543
266
2720
2818
295
3024
3115
94.12% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences63
matches
0"been sealed"
1"were arranged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs100
matches
0"was staring"
6.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences84
ratio0.048
matches
0"The beam of her torch cut through the gloom, illuminating the graffiti-scrawled walls—tags that looked fresh, though the station had been sealed for decades."
1"The man’s clothes were expensive—tailored wool coat, polished leather shoes—but his pockets were empty."
2"She nudged it with the toe of her boot—a small, circular object, brass by the look of it."
3"Not just any door—an arched wooden thing, its surface carved with the same symbols as the compass."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount533
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.039399624765478425
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.009380863039399626
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean9.31
std6.99
cv0.751
sampleLengths
010
113
224
322
412
58
63
723
812
99
1012
115
127
1314
148
155
165
1714
187
1910
207
214
223
2312
247
2515
264
275
2813
2918
3012
319
3216
332
343
355
3611
379
383
399
4015
4111
423
432
4417
4523
4612
472
485
499
57.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.38095238095238093
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences56
matches
0"He waved her over, the"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"His skin had a waxy"
3"She shone her torch over"
4"She stood, brushing dust from"
5"She nudged it with the"
6"She crouched again, slipping on"
7"They followed the voice down"
8"It stood in the middle"
9"She reached out, then hesitated."
10"She was staring at the"
11"She pocketed it."
12"She turned back toward the"
13"She ignored him, crouching beside"
ratio0.25
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences56
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station smelled"
1"Quinn stepped over the police"
2"The beam of her torch"
3"Sergeant Patel stood near the"
4"He waved her over, the"
5"She adjusted the strap of"
6"Patel gestured to the body"
7"The man’s limbs were arranged"
8"His skin had a waxy"
9"Quinn crouched, her knees popping."
10"She shone her torch over"
11"The man’s clothes were expensive—tailored"
12"Patel exhaled through his nose."
13"Quinn’s fingers hovered over the"
14"The leather of her watch"
15"The skin was cold, but"
16"Rigor hadn’t set in."
17"She stood, brushing dust from"
18"Patel crossed his arms."
19"Quinn’s torch beam snagged on"
ratio0.929
89.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Now it pointed directly at"
ratio0.018
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.6096%