Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRHKZAG612TNFT5SQWZJXE

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Duration:
19.1s
Cost:
$0.000139
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DeepInfra

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Literary Fiction genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stumbled through the door of Silas' bar, already regretting the decision to venture out on a Tuesday evening. She'd promised herself a quiet night in, rewatching old movies and sipping a bottle of wine. But the scent of whiskey and cigarette smoke had wafted up to her flat, enticing her to escape her worries, if only for a little while. As she made her way through the dimly lit room, her eyes scanned the crowd, searching for a friendly face. That's when she saw him – a man she hadn't laid eyes on in years, yet a face she'd never forget. Jack Connolly, her old friend from university days, stood with his back against the bar, nursing a drink. He looked different, though. The lean, athletic build she remembered had given way to a soft, almost gaunt appearance. His dark hair, once perfectly messy, now fell to his shoulders in limp strands. Aurora's feet seemed to move of their own accord, carrying her toward Jack with a mixture of excitement and trepidation. As she approached, he turned, his eyes locking onto hers with a faint glimmer of recognition. A small smile played on his lips, and he pushed off from the bar, opening his arms for a hug. For a moment, they simply stood there, holding each other in a tight, awkward grasp. The air was thick with unspoken words, unrequited emotions, and years of separation. It was as if they'd both stepped into a time machine, transporting themselves back to a period when their lives were simpler, their relationships uncomplicated. "Aurora," Jack said, his voice low and gravelly, as he pulled back to examine her. "It's been...a long time." Aurora smiled, her heart skipping a beat as she took in the changed contours of his face. "Jack. I...I had no idea you were back in London." "I moved back a few months ago," he said, his eyes roving over her face as if searching for something he'd lost. "I'm trying to get my life together, I suppose." As they parted, Aurora's gaze fell to his hands, and for a moment, she was taken aback by the sight of them – thin, almost translucent, with a faint tremble in the fingers. It was as if she was staring at a stranger, a person she'd once known but had forgotten existed. "What have you been up to?" Aurora asked, her voice a little too bright, a little too eager. Jack laughed, a sad, weary sound. "The usual, Rory. Trying to make a living, trying to stay sober. You know how it is." Aurora nodded, feeling a pang of guilt for not knowing. They'd lost touch after university, and she'd often wondered what had become of her friend. Now, as she gazed into his eyes, she saw the ghosts of his past lurking in the shadows. They ordered another round, their conversation flowing like a lazy river, as they caught up on lost years. But beneath the surface, a chasm yawned, a reminder of all the things they'd left unsaid, all the chances they'd let slip away. Aurora felt the weight of their friendship, once so strong and vibrant, now tempered by time and circumstance. As they talked, the bar began to empty, the patrons filtering out into the night air. The bartender, a gruff but kind man named Tony, called out last orders, and Jack reached for his coat. "I should get going," he said, his eyes flicking to the clock on the wall. "Early start tomorrow." Aurora nodded, feeling a sudden pang of loss. She'd expected this moment, had been preparing for it, but nothing had prepared her for the ache in her chest. "Let's do it again soon?" she said, her voice a little too loud, a little too insistent. Jack's smile was a faint, tentative thing, but it was enough to give her hope. "I'd like that, Rory. I really would." As they parted ways, Aurora watched Jack disappear into the night, feeling the weight of their encounter settle upon her shoulders. They'd started with a tentative, awkward reunion, but somewhere in the conversation, a connection had been rekindled, a flame that had flickered out years ago now reignited. For a moment, as she stood there, lost in thought, the noise of the bar receded, and she was back in the past, reliving the moments they'd shared, the laughter they'd exchanged, the promises they'd made. But it was a bittersweet memory, one that hinted at all the what-ifs, all the could-haves, and all the should-haves that had gone unnoticed, left unspoken. As the door swung shut behind Jack, Aurora took a deep breath, feeling the cool night air fill her lungs. It was a start, she told herself, a tentative step back into the life they'd once shared. But as she turned to make her way home, a sense of unease settled in the pit of her stomach, a nagging feeling that they'd only scratched the surface of what lay between them, what they'd left unsaid, and what they'd yet to discover.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount847
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount847
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"trepidation"
count1
2
word"unspoken"
count2
3
word"pang"
count2
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"encounter"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"sense of"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"trepidation"
2"unspoken"
3"pang"
4"reminder"
5"weight"
6"encounter"
7"flickered"
8"sense of"
9"stomach"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"a sense of unease"
1"The air was thick with"
85.32% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences42
matches
0"a pang of guilt"
1"a sense of unease"
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences42
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences48
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords846
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount760
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Connolly1
Jack8
Aurora10
Tony1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Connolly"
2"Jack"
3"Aurora"
4"Tony"
places(empty)
globalScore0.842
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"It was as if they'd both stepped into a time machine, transporting themselves back to a period when their lives were simpler, their relationships uncomplicated"
1"as if searching for something he'd lost"
2"It was as if she was staring at a stranger, a person she'd once known but had forgotten existed"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount846
matches(empty)
97.22% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences48
matches
0"feeling that they'd"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean42.3
std21.47
cv0.508
sampleLengths
062
192
256
353
419
527
631
752
818
923
1043
1159
1235
1318
1428
1517
1622
1748
1862
1981
88.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences42
matches
0"was taken"
1"been rekindled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs139
matches
0"was staring"
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences48
ratio0.042
matches
0"That's when she saw him – a man she hadn't laid eyes on in years, yet a face she'd never forget."
1"As they parted, Aurora's gaze fell to his hands, and for a moment, she was taken aback by the sight of them – thin, almost translucent, with a faint tremble in the fingers."
90.51% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount59
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.05084745762711865
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.01694915254237288
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences48
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences48
mean17.63
std7.72
cv0.438
sampleLengths
020
116
226
320
421
518
64
715
814
920
1016
1120
1215
1313
1425
1515
164
1717
1810
1922
209
2133
2219
2318
246
2517
2610
2715
2818
2918
3023
3118
3216
3319
3415
353
368
3720
3817
3915
407
4121
4227
4336
4426
4520
4617
4744
60.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.375
totalSentences48
uniqueOpeners18
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.19% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences42
matches
0"She'd promised herself a quiet"
1"He looked different, though."
2"His dark hair, once perfectly"
3"It was as if they'd"
4"he said, his eyes roving"
5"It was as if she"
6"They'd lost touch after university,"
7"They ordered another round, their"
8"he said, his eyes flicking"
9"She'd expected this moment, had"
10"she said, her voice a"
11"They'd started with a tentative,"
12"It was a start, she"
ratio0.31
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount29
totalSentences42
matches
0"Aurora Carter stumbled through the"
1"She'd promised herself a quiet"
2"That's when she saw him"
3"Jack Connolly, her old friend"
4"He looked different, though."
5"The lean, athletic build she"
6"His dark hair, once perfectly"
7"Aurora's feet seemed to move"
8"A small smile played on"
9"The air was thick with"
10"It was as if they'd"
11"Jack said, his voice low"
12"Aurora smiled, her heart skipping"
13"he said, his eyes roving"
14"It was as if she"
15"Aurora asked, her voice a"
16"Jack laughed, a sad, weary"
17"Aurora nodded, feeling a pang"
18"They'd lost touch after university,"
19"They ordered another round, their"
ratio0.69
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences42
matches
0"Now, as she gazed into"
ratio0.024
99.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"It was as if they'd both stepped into a time machine, transporting themselves back to a period when their lives were simpler, their relationships uncomplicated."
1"They'd started with a tentative, awkward reunion, but somewhere in the conversation, a connection had been rekindled, a flame that had flickered out years ago n…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Aurora asked, her voice a little too bright, a little too eager"
1"he said, his eyes flicking to the clock on the wall"
2"she said, her voice a little too loud, a little too insistent"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.2623%