| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1155 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1155 | | totalAiIsms | 39 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "racing" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "comforting" | | 9 | "sense of" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "footfall" | | 12 | "measured" | | 13 | "oppressive" | | 14 | "tangible" | | 15 | "firmly" | | 16 | "wavered" | | 17 | "pounding" | | 18 | "cacophony" | | 19 | "could feel" | | 20 | "echoing" | | 21 | "chilling" |
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| 0.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 4 | | maxInWindow | 4 | | found | | 0 | | label | "heart pounded in chest" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 2 |
| | 2 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "heart hammered in her chest" | | 1 | "clenched her fists" | | 2 | "clenched her jaw" | | 3 | "sent a shiver through" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.47% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 76 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1129 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 1117 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.27 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 2 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed older than it should be, as if time itself had begun to decay here" | | 1 | "appeared twisted as if contorted by some unseen force, their gnarled branches reaching out like skeletal fingers" | | 2 | "as if calling her towards its source" | | 3 | "sounded like a breath, a pleading, or perh" | | 4 | "sounded like a chorus of voices—confused," | | 5 | "as if responding to her fear" | | 6 | "not quite human, or perhaps several overlapping entities, their form shifting and dissolving with every breath of the wind" |
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| 22.85% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.771 | | wordCount | 1129 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just a feeling, but a certainty" | | 1 | "not just into the grove, but into something far darker" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.04% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 45.16 | | std | 18.48 | | cv | 0.409 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 69 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 73 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 60 | | 15 | 43 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 46 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 45 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 181 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 26 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 19 | | totalSentences | 78 | | ratio | 0.244 | | matches | | 0 | "She moved cautiously, her hand gripping the small crimson Heartstone Pendant tucked beneath her jacket, its faint pulse—a whisper of warmth—counterpoint to the cold dread settling in her stomach." | | 1 | "The call inside her—weak, almost inaudible—had urged her to track that strange, pulsing glow, to find the Heartstone’s origin." | | 2 | "Her eyes darted from shadow to shadow, mind racing to identify the subtle movements—the flicker of a shadow, the shimmer of something unplaceable just beyond her perception." | | 3 | "Every noise—crack of a stick, distant rustle—set her nerves jangling." | | 4 | "Suddenly, she saw it—a flicker, a movement at the edge of her vision." | | 5 | "A sound broke the hush—a low, guttural scrape, like wet nails dragging across bark." | | 6 | "For a moment, the edges of her vision blurred as something invisible seemed to hover—an oppressive presence that prickled her skin with static." | | 7 | "The grove offered no reply—only the faint, relentless pounding of her pulse." | | 8 | "From the corner of her eye, she glimpsed movement—an ascent of shadows rising from the ground, swirling, curling like smoke." | | 9 | "Her skin crawled as she remembered the legends—the Fae Grove’s hidden magic, how it played with time, distorted perception, preyed on the unwary." | | 10 | "Something brushed her arm—a cold, oily touch that made her shiver despite herself." | | 11 | "She caught movement again—this time a flickering figure at the corner of her vision, a blur of shadow with no fixed shape." | | 12 | "Then she saw it: the faint shimmer of a face—features impossible to discern—staring from within the darkness behind the hollow of a tree." | | 13 | "Every nerve yelled to escape but something deeper, primal, kept her rooted—perhaps a fragment of the magic that still pulsed within the grove." | | 14 | "It sounded like a chorus of voices—confused, pleading, angry—all blending into a cacophony at the edge of her perception." | | 15 | "Her eyes darted across the trembling grove, searching, hunting for a way out—or perhaps a way in, into whatever dark magic thrived here." | | 16 | "A strange flicker of movement—a swirl of mist—coalesced at her feet." | | 17 | "Her heart hammered in her chest as she realised she’d crossed a threshold—not just into the grove, but into something far darker—something waiting." | | 18 | "A heavy, oppressive silence fell, broken only by a whisper—clear, chilling:" |
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| 94.40% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1143 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.04461942257217848 | | lyAdverbCount | 25 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.021872265966754154 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 78 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 78 | | mean | 14.47 | | std | 7.54 | | cv | 0.521 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 27 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 60.26% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.38461538461538464 | | totalSentences | 78 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the faint whisper of" | | 1 | "Suddenly, she saw it—a flicker," | | 2 | "Then she saw it: the" | | 3 | "Only the faint pulsating glow" |
| | ratio | 0.055 | |
| 61.10% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "She moved cautiously, her hand" | | 1 | "Her eyes darted from shadow" | | 2 | "She paused, breath hitching as" | | 3 | "she whispered, voice barely stirring" | | 4 | "She reached into her pocket," | | 5 | "She froze, stomach tight, eyes" | | 6 | "Her mind had been playing" | | 7 | "She stepped forward, deliberate but" | | 8 | "Her muscles tensed instantly." | | 9 | "Her eyes caught a ghostly" | | 10 | "Her breath hitched." | | 11 | "She clenched her fists." | | 12 | "Her voice wavered, but she" | | 13 | "Her skin crawled as she" | | 14 | "It sounded like a breath," | | 15 | "She took an instinctive step" | | 16 | "She whipped her head around," | | 17 | "Her hand went swiftly to" | | 18 | "She needed to focus." | | 19 | "She caught movement again—this time" |
| | ratio | 0.397 | |
| 55.89% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "The shadows moved just beyond" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter's boots crunched softly" | | 2 | "The air felt too still," | | 3 | "She moved cautiously, her hand" | | 4 | "The call inside her—weak, almost" | | 5 | "The trees appeared twisted, as" | | 6 | "Her eyes darted from shadow" | | 7 | "Every noise—crack of a stick," | | 8 | "She paused, breath hitching as" | | 9 | "The stones themselves seemed to" | | 10 | "Something had shifted." | | 11 | "she whispered, voice barely stirring" | | 12 | "She reached into her pocket," | | 13 | "The familiar pulse sped up," | | 14 | "A shadow darted behind the" | | 15 | "She froze, stomach tight, eyes" | | 16 | "Her mind had been playing" | | 17 | "The faint glow from the" | | 18 | "She stepped forward, deliberate but" | | 19 | "A sound broke the hush—a" |
| | ratio | 0.808 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | | 0 | "Though every instinct screamed for" | | 1 | "Now it felt personal." |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "She moved cautiously, her hand gripping the small crimson Heartstone Pendant tucked beneath her jacket, its faint pulse—a whisper of warmth—counterpoint to the …" | | 1 | "The trees appeared twisted, as if contorted by some unseen force, their gnarled branches reaching out like skeletal fingers." | | 2 | "She paused, breath hitching as she edged closer to the ancient oak standing stones that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove." | | 3 | "The stones themselves seemed to shimmer faintly, veins of iridescent light crawling over their surfaces as if they were alive, bleeding with some dark, ancient …" | | 4 | "The familiar pulse sped up, jolting her with a comforting warmth that didn’t belong in this strange, off-kilter night." | | 5 | "For a moment, the edges of her vision blurred as something invisible seemed to hover—an oppressive presence that prickled her skin with static." | | 6 | "Something brushed her arm—a cold, oily touch that made her shiver despite herself." | | 7 | "A shape formed, not quite human, or perhaps several overlapping entities, their form shifting and dissolving with every breath of the wind." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, voice barely stirring the still air" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.5 | |