Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRHXDDN333P0D9SDYH14V6

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18.3s
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$0.018613
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain pounded the streets of London, turning the city into a blur of shimmering lights and shadowy figures. Detective Harlow Quinn moved with purpose, her steps precise and unwavering despite the slick pavement beneath her feet. Her eyes, sharp and unyielding, scanned the crowd for the suspect she had been tailing for the better part of the evening. The man had slipped through her fingers once before, but tonight, she was determined not to let him escape. The suspect, a wiry figure with a hood pulled low over his face, darted through the throng of pedestrians, his movements erratic and desperate. Quinn's heart raced as she kept pace, her breath steady despite the adrenaline coursing through her veins. She had been chasing shadows for too long, and this man might hold the key to unraveling the mystery that had haunted her since the loss of her partner, DS Morris. The suspect veered suddenly, cutting across the street and disappearing down a narrow alley. Quinn followed, her boots splashing through puddles, the rain soaking through her coat. The alley was a labyrinth of brick and grime, the air thick with the scent of damp and decay. She could hear the man's footsteps echoing ahead, a rhythmic beat that urged her onward. As she rounded a corner, the alley opened up into a small courtyard, dimly lit by a single flickering streetlamp. The suspect paused, glancing over his shoulder, his face briefly illuminated. Quinn caught a glimpse of his eyes—wild, fearful—and the glint of something metallic in his hand. Her instincts screamed danger, but she pressed forward, her resolve unshaken. The man bolted again, heading for a set of stairs that descended into darkness. Quinn hesitated for a fraction of a second, her mind racing. She knew the stories of the Veil Market, the underground realm where the supernatural mingled with the mundane, where secrets were traded like currency. It was a place she had never ventured, a world she had only glimpsed through the whispers of those who dared to speak of it. But the suspect was her only lead, and she couldn't afford to lose him now. With a deep breath, she plunged down the stairs, the shadows swallowing her whole. The air grew colder as she descended, the sounds of the city fading into a distant hum. The stairs twisted and turned, leading her deeper into the earth, until she emerged into a cavernous space that stretched beyond her sight. The Veil Market was alive with activity, a hidden world bustling beneath the surface of London. Stalls lined the walls, each one offering wares that defied explanation—glowing vials, ancient tomes, artifacts that seemed to pulse with an inner light. The crowd was a mix of the ordinary and the extraordinary, humans mingling with creatures that Quinn had only seen in nightmares. Her heart pounded in her chest, but she forced herself to focus, scanning the throng for any sign of the suspect. There, near a stall selling enchanted trinkets, she spotted him. He was speaking with a vendor, his movements agitated, his eyes darting nervously. Quinn edged closer, careful to keep to the shadows, her gaze fixed on the man. She needed to know what he was after, what had driven him to this place. As she approached, she caught snippets of their conversation, the words barely audible over the din of the market. "—need it now. No time to wait." The vendor, a tall figure with skin like polished stone, shook his head, his voice a low rumble. "Payment first. No exceptions." The suspect cursed under his breath, his hand slipping into his pocket. Quinn tensed, ready to intervene, but the man withdrew a small object—a bone token, its surface etched with intricate designs. The vendor nodded, accepting the token with a satisfied grunt, and handed over a small package wrapped in cloth. Quinn's mind raced. The token was the key to entering the market, a rare and valuable item. Whatever the suspect had purchased, it was important enough to risk everything for. She had to act, but the market was a dangerous place, and she was out of her depth. Her decision was made for her when the suspect turned, his eyes meeting hers across the crowd. Panic flashed across his face, and he bolted, the package clutched tightly in his hand. Quinn cursed under her breath and gave chase, weaving through the throng, her focus unwavering. The suspect led her deeper into the market, past stalls selling forbidden alchemical substances and enchanted goods. The air was thick with the scent of incense and magic, the atmosphere charged with an energy that made her skin prickle. She could feel the eyes of the market's denizens on her, their curiosity mingled with suspicion. Ahead, the suspect ducked into a narrow passage, the walls lined with flickering candles. Quinn followed, her footsteps silent on the stone floor. The passage twisted and turned, leading her into a small chamber lit by a single lantern. The suspect stood at the far end, his back to her, the package resting on a table. Quinn stepped forward, her voice steady despite the tension in the air. "You're not going anywhere." The man spun around, his eyes wide with fear. "You don't understand. I had no choice." Quinn's gaze hardened, her jaw set. "Then make me understand." The suspect hesitated, his gaze flickering to the package. "It's... it's for protection. From them." Quinn's mind raced, piecing together the fragments of the puzzle. "Who are 'they'?" The man shook his head, his voice a whisper. "The ones who took your partner. They're coming for me next." Quinn's heart skipped a beat, the mention of DS Morris cutting through her resolve like a knife. She stepped closer, her voice low and urgent. "Tell me everything." The suspect swallowed hard, his fear palpable. "I can't. They'll kill me." Quinn's gaze softened, her determination unwavering. "I can help you. But you have to trust me." The man hesitated, his eyes searching hers for any sign of deception. Finally, he nodded, his shoulders sagging with resignation. "Alright. But we have to move. They're already here." Quinn's pulse quickened, the urgency of the situation clear. She turned, leading the way back through the passage, her mind racing with possibilities. The market was a maze, but she knew she had to find a way out, to get the suspect to safety before it was too late. As they emerged into the main thoroughfare, the atmosphere had shifted, the air charged with a tension that made her skin crawl. The market's denizens watched them with wary eyes, their curiosity mingled with a sense of foreboding. Quinn's instincts screamed danger, but she pressed forward, her resolve unshaken. She had come too far to turn back now, and the answers she sought were within reach. All she had to do was keep moving, to trust in her instincts and the man at her side. Together, they navigated the labyrinthine corridors, the shadows closing in around them. The rain-soaked streets of London seemed a world away, but Quinn knew that the city held the key to unraveling the mystery that had haunted her for so long. As they reached the stairs leading back to the surface, Quinn paused, her gaze meeting the suspect's. "This isn't over." The man nodded, his expression grim. "I know." With a final glance at the market, Quinn led the way up the stairs, the rain welcoming them back into the night. The city was alive with possibility, and Quinn knew that the chase was far from over. But for now, she had a lead, and that was enough to keep her moving forward.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.071
leniency0.143
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1289
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"nervously"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"nervously"
2"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1289
totalAiIsms37
found
0
word"unwavering"
count3
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"determined"
count1
3
word"raced"
count3
4
word"unraveling"
count2
5
word"footsteps"
count2
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"glint"
count1
9
word"resolve"
count3
10
word"racing"
count2
11
word"pulse"
count2
12
word"scanning"
count1
13
word"etched"
count1
14
word"intricate"
count1
15
word"charged"
count2
16
word"could feel"
count1
17
word"tension"
count2
18
word"whisper"
count1
19
word"skipped a beat"
count1
20
word"palpable"
count1
21
word"quickened"
count1
22
word"sense of"
count1
23
word"foreboding"
count1
24
word"navigated"
count1
highlights
0"unwavering"
1"scanned"
2"determined"
3"raced"
4"unraveling"
5"footsteps"
6"echoing"
7"rhythmic"
8"glint"
9"resolve"
10"racing"
11"pulse"
12"scanning"
13"etched"
14"intricate"
15"charged"
16"could feel"
17"tension"
18"whisper"
19"skipped a beat"
20"palpable"
21"quickened"
22"sense of"
23"foreboding"
24"navigated"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"sense of foreboding"
count1
2
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"a sense of foreboding"
2"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences78
matches
0"e with fear"
1"a sense of foreboding"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1283
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1211
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.82
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
London3
Harlow1
Quinn22
Morris2
Veil2
Market2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Market"
globalScore0.592
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"artifacts that seemed to pulse with an inner light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1283
matches(empty)
93.41% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"knew that the"
1"knew that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean37.74
std21.09
cv0.559
sampleLengths
077
172
261
358
474
529
656
766
853
919
107
1122
1251
1348
1447
1555
1656
1716
1816
1910
2015
2113
2220
2328
2412
2516
2629
2749
2838
2947
3041
3120
328
3354
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"were traded"
1"was made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs199
matches
0"was speaking"
17.27% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences91
ratio0.044
matches
0"Quinn caught a glimpse of his eyes—wild, fearful—and the glint of something metallic in his hand."
1"Stalls lined the walls, each one offering wares that defied explanation—glowing vials, ancient tomes, artifacts that seemed to pulse with an inner light."
2"\"—need it now. No time to wait.\""
3"Quinn tensed, ready to intervene, but the man withdrew a small object—a bone token, its surface etched with intricate designs."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount620
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.020967741935483872
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.012903225806451613
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean14.1
std6.31
cv0.447
sampleLengths
018
118
222
319
424
517
631
714
813
919
1015
1120
1211
1316
1411
1514
1611
1724
1825
1915
2014
2117
2223
2316
2423
2522
2621
2710
2813
2915
3015
3119
327
3318
344
3512
3620
3719
383
3914
4013
4118
4217
4315
4415
4517
4622
4716
4814
499
44.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3076923076923077
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners28
42.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Finally, he nodded, his shoulders"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences78
matches
0"Her eyes, sharp and unyielding,"
1"She had been chasing shadows"
2"She could hear the man's"
3"Her instincts screamed danger, but"
4"She knew the stories of"
5"It was a place she"
6"Her heart pounded in her"
7"He was speaking with a"
8"She needed to know what"
9"She had to act, but"
10"Her decision was made for"
11"She could feel the eyes"
12"She stepped closer, her voice"
13"She turned, leading the way"
14"She had come too far"
ratio0.192
36.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences78
matches
0"Rain pounded the streets of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn moved with"
2"Her eyes, sharp and unyielding,"
3"The man had slipped through"
4"The suspect, a wiry figure"
5"Quinn's heart raced as she"
6"She had been chasing shadows"
7"The suspect veered suddenly, cutting"
8"Quinn followed, her boots splashing"
9"The alley was a labyrinth"
10"She could hear the man's"
11"The suspect paused, glancing over"
12"Quinn caught a glimpse of"
13"Her instincts screamed danger, but"
14"The man bolted again, heading"
15"Quinn hesitated for a fraction"
16"She knew the stories of"
17"It was a place she"
18"The air grew colder as"
19"The stairs twisted and turned,"
ratio0.846
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"She had been chasing shadows for too long, and this man might hold the key to unraveling the mystery that had haunted her since the loss of her partner, DS Morr…"
1"Quinn followed, her boots splashing through puddles, the rain soaking through her coat."
2"She could hear the man's footsteps echoing ahead, a rhythmic beat that urged her onward."
3"The stairs twisted and turned, leading her deeper into the earth, until she emerged into a cavernous space that stretched beyond her sight."
4"Stalls lined the walls, each one offering wares that defied explanation—glowing vials, ancient tomes, artifacts that seemed to pulse with an inner light."
5"He was speaking with a vendor, his movements agitated, his eyes darting nervously."
6"Quinn cursed under her breath and gave chase, weaving through the throng, her focus unwavering."
7"She turned, leading the way back through the passage, her mind racing with possibilities."
8"The rain-soaked streets of London seemed a world away, but Quinn knew that the city held the key to unraveling the mystery that had haunted her for so long."
9"As they reached the stairs leading back to the surface, Quinn paused, her gaze meeting the suspect's."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.8651%