Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRHXX3Z9SVT0NJCR9YC9YC

Run Details

Duration:
10.0s
Cost:
$0.000235

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against the pavement in jagged rhythms, each drop a tiny fist striking the asphalt. Quinn’s breath fogged in the cold air as she ducked into a narrow alley, her leather boots splashing through puddles that glowed sickly yellow under the flickering streetlights. The scent of wet concrete and something older—damp stone, rusted iron—clung to the air, thick as smoke. She’d lost him at the crossroads of Shaftesbury Avenue, but the scent of his cologne, sharp with bergamot and something metallic, still clung to the damp air. Not expensive. Not quite cheap either. The kind of scent a man who knew how to disappear might wear. Quinn’s gloved fingers tightened around the grip of her revolver, the weight familiar, reassuring. She’d left the baton at the last checkpoint. Too heavy for the tight spaces ahead. A shadow moved at the far end of the alley. She tensed, then relaxed when a rat scuttled across the pavement, its fur matted with rain. No. Not him. Just the city breathing. She turned left at the next junction, her sharp jaw set, her salt-and-pepper hair slicked back from the downpour. The streets here were narrower, the buildings leaning in like they were listening. A neon sign flickered—*The Raven’s Nest*—its green glow bleeding through the rain. The kind of place that didn’t belong on a map. Quinn hesitated. The bar was too obvious. Too *open*. But the alley behind it was a dead end, its back wall crumbling, the entrance to something darker. She pushed through the door, the bell above it chiming weakly, drowned out by the rain. The interior was a maze of dim light and shadows, the air thick with the smell of aged whiskey and something older—ink, maybe, or old paper. A man at the far end of the bar glanced up, his eyes widening before he turned back to his drink. Quinn didn’t slow down. The back room was hidden behind a bookshelf that didn’t quite line up. She pried it open with her shoulder, the wood groaning like a warning. Inside, the air was colder, the scent of damp earth and something sour—like old coins left in a pocket. A man stood in the center of the room, his back to her. He was tall, his dark hair slicked back, a silver chain glinting at his throat. Quinn’s pulse quickened. That was him. The one she’d been chasing since the docks. He turned, and she saw the knife in his hand before he did. “You’re not supposed to be here,” he said, his voice low, smooth. “This isn’t a police station.” Quinn didn’t lower her gun. “I know where you’re going.” His laugh was sharp, humorless. “You don’t know shit.” She stepped forward, the muzzle of her revolver steady. “I know you’re heading to the Veil Market. And I know you’re selling something that isn’t yours.” His fingers twitched around the knife. “You’re in over your head, detective.” “Not anymore.” She fired. The shot echoed in the small space, the bullet kicking up dust from the floorboards. The man staggered, but he didn’t fall. He lunged instead, the knife flashing. Quinn sidestepped, her boot catching his wrist. He grunted, the knife clattering to the floor. She grabbed his collar, yanking him against the wall. His breath was hot against her ear. “You don’t know what you’re messing with,” he hissed. She pressed the barrel of her gun to his temple. “I know enough.” A door at the far end of the room creaked open. A figure stood in the doorway, silhouetted against the dim light. Tall. Broad-shouldered. A scar ran down his left forearm, pale against his olive skin. “Tomás,” the man snarled. The figure stepped forward, his Saint Christopher medallion glinting in the low light. “Let him go.” Quinn didn’t move. “Who the hell are you?” The man—Tomás—didn’t answer. Instead, he reached into his coat and pulled out a syringe. “He’s not worth it.” The knife-wielding man laughed, low and bitter. “You always were soft, Tommy.” Tomás didn’t flinch. He stepped closer, the syringe held steady. “You’re bleeding.” The man’s eyes flicked to the wound in his side, then back to Quinn. “Get out of here.” Quinn didn’t listen. She shoved the man away and stepped back, her gun still raised. “I’m not leaving.” Tomás exhaled, his breath steady. “Then you’re going to have to deal with him.” The knife-man lunged again, faster this time. Quinn fired, the shot ringing out. He stumbled, but he didn’t stop. He grabbed her wrist, twisting, and she dropped her gun. Pain flared up her arm as he wrenched it behind her back. “You’re making a mistake,” he growled. Tomás moved like a shadow. One swift motion, and the syringe was pressed against the man’s neck. “You’re not worth the trouble.” The man went still. His eyes rolled back, his body going limp in Quinn’s grip. She let him fall, her breath coming fast. Tomás holstered the syringe, his expression unreadable. “You should go.” Quinn wiped her wrist on her coat, the blood smearing across the fabric. “Where’s the Veil Market?” Tomás didn’t answer. He stepped back, his gaze flicking to the door. “You’re not ready for that.” A low hum filled the air, vibrating through the floorboards. Quinn’s ears picked up the sound first—a distant, rhythmic thrum, like a heartbeat. Then the walls began to shift, the bookshelf groaning as something unseen pushed against it. Tomás grabbed her arm, yanking her toward the door. “Now.” The bookshelf exploded inward, a tunnel of darkness yawning open behind them. The hum grew louder, a chorus of voices rising from the depths. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She followed.
total_cost0.00023540000000000003

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.208
leniency0.417
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount957
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount957
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"quickened"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"familiar"
2"flickered"
3"glinting"
4"pulse"
5"quickened"
6"echoed"
7"flicked"
8"unreadable"
9"rhythmic"
10"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords4
totalWords946
ratio0.004
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"open"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount833
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.8
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Shaftesbury1
Avenue1
Raven1
Quinn15
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Quinn"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Tomás"
places
0"Shaftesbury"
1"Avenue"
globalScore0.6
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite line up"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount946
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean23.07
std15.69
cv0.68
sampleLengths
062
146
229
333
454
527
667
745
842
913
1017
1110
129
1326
1412
154
1628
1731
189
1913
2036
214
2216
238
2418
2512
2612
2718
2818
2914
3041
316
3222
3323
3410
3517
3617
3738
3810
3924
405
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"was hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs145
matches
0"were listening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences110
ratio0.055
matches
0"The scent of wet concrete and something older—damp stone, rusted iron—clung to the air, thick as smoke."
1"A neon sign flickered—*The Raven’s Nest*—its green glow bleeding through the rain."
2"The interior was a maze of dim light and shadows, the air thick with the smell of aged whiskey and something older—ink, maybe, or old paper."
3"Inside, the air was colder, the scent of damp earth and something sour—like old coins left in a pocket."
4"The man—Tomás—didn’t answer."
5"Quinn’s ears picked up the sound first—a distant, rhythmic thrum, like a heartbeat."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount844
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.034360189573459717
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002369668246445498
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean8.6
std5.69
cv0.662
sampleLengths
017
128
217
327
42
54
613
714
88
97
1010
1116
121
132
144
1519
1613
1712
1810
192
205
212
2218
2316
2426
2521
264
2713
2813
2919
3013
3115
323
333
348
3513
3612
375
385
395
405
414
429
4317
446
456
464
4715
487
496
45.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.2545454545454545
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners28
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences80
matches
0"Too heavy for the tight"
1"Just the city breathing."
2"Instead, he reached into his"
3"Then the walls began to"
ratio0.05
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences80
matches
0"She’d lost him at the"
1"She’d left the baton at"
2"She tensed, then relaxed when"
3"She turned left at the"
4"She pushed through the door,"
5"She pried it open with"
6"He was tall, his dark"
7"He turned, and she saw"
8"he said, his voice low,"
9"His laugh was sharp, humorless."
10"She stepped forward, the muzzle"
11"His fingers twitched around the"
12"He lunged instead, the knife"
13"He grunted, the knife clattering"
14"She grabbed his collar, yanking"
15"His breath was hot against"
16"She pressed the barrel of"
17"He stepped closer, the syringe"
18"She shoved the man away"
19"He stumbled, but he didn’t"
ratio0.3
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences80
matches
0"The rain hammered against the"
1"Quinn’s breath fogged in the"
2"The scent of wet concrete"
3"She’d lost him at the"
4"The kind of scent a"
5"Quinn’s gloved fingers tightened around"
6"She’d left the baton at"
7"A shadow moved at the"
8"She tensed, then relaxed when"
9"She turned left at the"
10"The streets here were narrower,"
11"A neon sign flickered—*The Raven’s"
12"The kind of place that"
13"The bar was too obvious."
14"She pushed through the door,"
15"The interior was a maze"
16"A man at the far"
17"Quinn didn’t slow down."
18"The back room was hidden"
19"She pried it open with"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Quinn’s breath fogged in the cold air as she ducked into a narrow alley, her leather boots splashing through puddles that glowed sickly yellow under the flicker…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, his voice low, smooth"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he hissed (hiss)"
1"the man snarled (snarl)"
2"he growled (growl)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.25
79.7586%