Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRHZZ1H5HC72Z99M9058BE

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Duration:
35.2s
Cost:
$0.001136

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest hummed with the low murmur of conversation, the clinking of glasses punctuating the air like a heartbeat. Dim light flickered from the green neon sign outside, casting a soft glow on the worn wooden bar. Silas stood behind the counter, polishing a glass with a practiced hand, his hazel eyes scanning the room. The walls, adorned with old maps and black-and-white photographs, whispered stories of a time long past. Rory pushed through the heavy door, the familiar scent of aged wood and spilled spirits wrapping around her like an old coat. She paused, taking in the scene, her bright blue eyes darting across the faces of strangers. The bar felt like a refuge, a place where she could momentarily forget the weight of her past. She spotted Silas, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the light, and a smile tugged at her lips. “Rory!” Silas called, his voice warm and inviting. He set the glass down and leaned against the bar, a grin breaking across his face. “Look at you! It’s been ages.” “Too long,” she replied, stepping closer. The years melted away as she took in his familiar features, the neatly trimmed beard, the slight limp that had become part of his character. “How’s the bar treating you?” “Same old, same old. You know how it is.” He gestured to the patrons, a mix of locals and tourists. “Keeps me busy. What about you? Still delivering takeout?” “Yeah, it pays the bills.” She shrugged, trying to sound nonchalant, but the weight of her words hung in the air. “I’m still figuring things out.” Silas studied her, his expression shifting from jovial to serious. “You look... different. Stronger, maybe.” Rory chuckled, but the sound felt hollow. “Guess I’ve had to be.” “Life has a way of doing that.” He leaned in, lowering his voice. “You okay? Really?” She hesitated, the memories of Evan flashing through her mind like a bad dream. “I’m fine. Just... moving on.” “Good.” Silas nodded, but his eyes betrayed concern. “If you ever need to talk, you know where to find me.” “Thanks, Si.” She appreciated the offer, but the thought of opening up felt daunting. Instead, she changed the subject. “What’s new with you? Any more secret missions I should know about?” He chuckled, the sound rich and warm. “No more missions. Just keeping the peace in my little corner of the world.” “Peace? In Soho?” She raised an eyebrow, a playful smirk on her lips. “You must be doing something right.” “Or something wrong,” he replied, his tone light but his gaze serious. “You never know who’s watching.” Rory glanced around the bar, the shadows dancing in the corners. “I suppose that’s true. But I’m not looking for trouble.” “Good. Trouble has a way of finding you, though.” He paused, his expression shifting. “You remember that summer we spent in Cardiff? The one with the bonfire on the beach?” “Of course.” A smile broke through her facade. “You almost set your hair on fire trying to roast marshmallows.” “Hey, I was young and reckless.” He laughed, but the sound faded as he continued. “We were all young and reckless back then.” “Yeah.” The weight of nostalgia settled between them, heavy and bittersweet. “Things were simpler.” “Were they?” Silas leaned back, crossing his arms. “Or were we just too naive to see the complications?” Rory’s smile faltered. “Maybe a bit of both.” “Life has a way of complicating things.” He studied her, his eyes searching. “You’ve changed, Rory. I can see it. You’re not the same girl who ran away to London.” “Neither are you.” She shot back, her voice sharper than intended. “You’re not just a bartender anymore, Si. You’re... something else.” “Something else?” He raised an eyebrow, a hint of amusement in his eyes. “What do you mean?” “You know what I mean.” She leaned in, lowering her voice. “You’ve got this whole network of contacts. You’re not just pouring drinks.” Silas shrugged, a nonchalant gesture that didn’t quite mask the tension in his shoulders. “It’s just a bar, Rory. People come and go. I’m just here to serve them.” “Right.” She rolled her eyes, but the smile didn’t return. “And I’m just a delivery girl.” “Is that all you want to be?” His gaze pierced through her defenses. “Just a delivery girl?” “I’m not looking for anything more.” She crossed her arms, a defensive posture. “I’m just trying to survive.” “Surviving isn’t living.” He leaned closer, his voice low. “You have so much potential, Rory. Don’t waste it.” “Easy for you to say.” She pulled back, frustration bubbling beneath the surface. “You’ve got your life figured out. I’m still picking up the pieces.” “Are you?” Silas’s tone softened, but the challenge lingered. “Or are you just afraid to put them back together?” Rory clenched her jaw, the familiar anger rising. “You don’t know what I’ve been through.” “Maybe not.” He held her gaze, unwavering. “But I know you. I know the girl who dreamed big and wanted more than this.” “Dreams don’t pay the rent.” She shot back, her voice rising. “I can’t afford to dream.” “Then what are you doing here?” Silas gestured around the bar, the patrons oblivious to their conversation. “You’re better than this place, Rory.” “Better than this place?” She laughed, but it sounded hollow. “I’m just trying to find my way.” “Then let me help you.” His voice dropped, sincerity etched in every word. “You don’t have to do this alone.” Rory’s heart raced, the weight of his offer pressing down on her. “And what? Become part of your secret world? I don’t know if I can handle that.” “Maybe it’s time to find out.” He leaned back, his expression softening. “You’ve always been stronger than you think.” “Maybe I don’t want to be strong anymore.” She looked away, the vulnerability creeping in. “Maybe I just want to be normal.” “Normal is overrated.” Silas chuckled, but the laughter faded. “You’re not normal, Rory. You never were.” “Thanks for the reminder.” She shot him a glare, but the tension between them shifted, a fragile understanding forming in the air. “Just think about it.” He leaned closer, his voice low. “You have a choice. You can keep running, or you can face what’s ahead.” Rory took a deep breath, the weight of his words settling in her chest. “I’ll think about it.” “Good.” Silas smiled, a glimmer of hope in his eyes. “That’s all I ask.” As the conversation hung in the air, the bar continued to buzz around them, a world of noise and laughter that felt distant. Rory glanced around, the faces blurring into a haze. She felt the pull of the past and the uncertainty of the future, the weight of time pressing down on her shoulders. “Hey, Rory?” Silas’s voice broke through her thoughts. “Yeah?” “Whatever you decide, just know I’m here.” He offered a reassuring smile, the warmth of their friendship wrapping around her like a familiar embrace. “Thanks, Si.” She nodded, the words feeling inadequate. But in that moment, she realized that maybe, just maybe, she didn’t have to face the future alone.
total_cost0.00113625

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
79.52% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags38
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Silas leaned back [back]"
1"She pulled back [back]"
2"Silas gestured around [around]"
3"He leaned back [back]"
4"She looked away [away]"
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.458
leniency0.916
rawRatio0.132
effectiveRatio0.12
95.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1195
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1195
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count4
3
word"weight"
count6
4
word"eyebrow"
count2
5
word"dancing"
count1
6
word"facade"
count1
7
word"tension"
count2
8
word"potential"
count1
9
word"unwavering"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"raced"
count1
12
word"reminder"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"scanning"
2"familiar"
3"weight"
4"eyebrow"
5"dancing"
6"facade"
7"tension"
8"potential"
9"unwavering"
10"etched"
11"raced"
12"reminder"
13"warmth"
0.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches6
maxInWindow4
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count2
2
label"hung in the air"
count2
3
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
1"the weight of her words"
2"the weight of his words"
3"hung in the air"
4"a glimmer of hope"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1192
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
60.71% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount672
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.79
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas12
Evan1
Rory8
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
4"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.607
windowScore0.833
63.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a refuge, a place where she c"
1"quite mask the tension in his shoulders"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1192
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean22.92
std12.6
cv0.55
sampleLengths
072
173
230
336
429
526
615
712
816
919
1020
1131
1221
1319
1417
1521
1630
1719
1823
1914
2018
218
2230
2321
2417
2523
2629
2716
2817
2918
3018
3125
3219
3315
3423
3516
3623
3717
3820
3928
4019
4122
4216
4322
4424
4518
4614
4754
488
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs120
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences108
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount675
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.02666666666666667
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002962962962962963
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean11.04
std5.24
cv0.474
sampleLengths
020
118
218
316
422
516
618
717
88
916
106
116
1225
135
1420
159
1621
175
1810
195
207
215
2213
233
2414
255
268
2712
2814
295
3012
317
3214
3313
346
3512
365
3711
3810
3914
4016
418
4211
4315
448
4511
463
478
4810
493
71.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4444444444444444
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners48
52.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences63
matches
0"Instead, she changed the subject."
ratio0.016
4.13% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences63
matches
0"She paused, taking in the"
1"She spotted Silas, his grey-streaked"
2"He set the glass down"
3"she replied, stepping closer"
4"He gestured to the patrons,"
5"She shrugged, trying to sound"
6"He leaned in, lowering his"
7"She hesitated, the memories of"
8"She appreciated the offer, but"
9"He chuckled, the sound rich"
10"She raised an eyebrow, a"
11"he replied, his tone light"
12"He paused, his expression shifting"
13"He laughed, but the sound"
14"He studied her, his eyes"
15"She shot back, her voice"
16"He raised an eyebrow, a"
17"She leaned in, lowering her"
18"She rolled her eyes, but"
19"His gaze pierced through her"
ratio0.54
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences63
matches
0"The Raven's Nest hummed with"
1"Silas stood behind the counter,"
2"The walls, adorned with old"
3"Rory pushed through the heavy"
4"She paused, taking in the"
5"The bar felt like a"
6"She spotted Silas, his grey-streaked"
7"Silas called, his voice warm"
8"He set the glass down"
9"she replied, stepping closer"
10"The years melted away as"
11"He gestured to the patrons,"
12"She shrugged, trying to sound"
13"Silas studied her, his expression"
14"Rory chuckled, but the sound"
15"He leaned in, lowering his"
16"She hesitated, the memories of"
17"Silas nodded, but his eyes"
18"She appreciated the offer, but"
19"He chuckled, the sound rich"
ratio0.937
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags38
uselessAdditionCount17
matches
0"Silas called, his voice warm and inviting"
1"He gestured, a mix of locals and tourists"
2"Silas nodded, but his eyes betrayed concern"
3"He paused, his expression shifting"
4"He studied, his eyes searching"
5"She shot back, her voice sharper than intended"
6"He raised, a hint of amusement in his eyes"
7"He leaned, his voice low"
8"She pulled back, frustration bubbling beneath the surface"
9"Silas’s tone softened, but the challenge lingered"
10"She shot back, her voice rising"
11"He leaned back, his expression softening"
12"She looked away, the vulnerability creeping in"
13"Silas chuckled, but the laughter faded"
14"He leaned, his voice low"
15"Silas smiled, a glimmer of hope in his eyes"
16"She nodded, the words feeling inadequate"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"He laughed (laugh)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
2"Silas chuckled (chuckle)"
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.072
leniency0.145
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.072
74.2725%