Run: 2026-02-19-01KHTRJ0HAQA1BBBRCPTSXBBEY

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Duration:
38.8s
Cost:
$0.043410
Provider:
Anthropic

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant pulsed warm against Aurora's chest as she pushed through a gap in the ancient oaks. Her torchlight flickered across moss-slicked stone monoliths that stood like sentinels at the Grove's boundary. Something about the rhythm of the pendant's warmth bothered her – less like the steady throb she'd come to expect and more like the frantic flutter of a trapped bird. "Just get what you came for, Rory," she whispered to herself, scanning the moonlit clearing ahead. The Fae Grove in Richmond Park had been empty when Isolde gave her directions, but the Fae woman's instructions had been oddly specific about timing. *Come after the midnight bell. Alone. Find the white foxglove that grows at the Grove's heart.* Simple enough. Aurora checked her watch – 12:23 AM. Perfect. The wildflowers that carpeted the clearing swayed in patterns that didn't match the breeze. Bluebells, primroses, and foxgloves bloomed despite the autumn chill, their petals luminous under the moon's glow. Beautiful, but profoundly wrong. Plants that shouldn't flower together, shouldn't flower now at all, clustered in unnatural abundance. She moved deeper into the Grove, careful to keep to the narrow dirt path. Isolde had warned against trampling Fae flora. The consequences ranged from mild (temporal disorientation) to severe (being claimed by the Grove itself). The Heartstone grew hotter, almost uncomfortable against her skin. Aurora pulled the pendant out, studying its crimson depths. The faint inner glow pulsed rapidly now, casting her fingers in bloody light. "That's not good," she muttered, tucking it back beneath her jumper. A twig snapped somewhere behind her. Aurora whirled, torch beam slicing through darkness. Nothing. Just ancient oaks and standing stones, their surfaces etched with symbols she couldn't decipher. The Grove felt different from her previous visits. The air hung heavier, thicker somehow, as if reluctant to enter her lungs. Each breath required more effort than the one before. She continued along the path. The heart of the Grove couldn't be much further. Just grab the white foxglove and get out, that was the plan. Simple. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched suddenly. Aurora absently rubbed it, a habit from childhood. The small mark from falling off her bike at age eight rarely bothered her anymore, but tonight it burned like a fresh wound. Something rustled in the underbrush to her left. Aurora swung her torch toward the sound. The beam caught only swaying flowers and shadows. "Hello?" Her voice sounded thin, swallowed by the unnatural stillness. No response. She pressed forward, picking up her pace. The path narrowed as it wound between two massive oaks. Their branches stretched overhead, weaving together to form a natural archway that blocked the moonlight. Aurora ducked through, emerging into a smaller clearing ringed by standing stones. At its center grew a solitary plant – a foxglove stalk with pure white blooms. Exactly what she'd come for. The Heartstone burned against her chest as she approached the plant. Its heat no longer pulsed but remained constant, searing enough to make her wince. Something was very wrong. She knelt beside the foxglove, remembering Isolde's instructions. Cut only the third bloom from the bottom. Use silver shears. Thank the plant. Aurora removed a small pair of silver scissors from her jacket pocket. The metal glinted in her torchlight as she positioned them around the stem of the third bell-shaped flower. A whisper drifted from behind her. She froze, scissors poised mid-cut. "Hello?" Aurora called, louder this time. Her torchlight caught nothing but empty air and standing stones. The path she'd entered through seemed darker somehow, as if the darkness had thickened. She turned back to her task, hands less steady now. The sooner she finished, the sooner she could leave. The third bloom came away with a clean snip. She tucked it carefully into a small cloth bag, then placed it in her inner pocket. "Thank you for your gift," she murmured to the plant, as instructed. The foxglove trembled, though no wind stirred the clearing. Time to go. Aurora stood, brushing dirt from her knees. She turned toward the path – and stopped. A figure stood at the archway. Not Isolde. Not anyone she recognized. Just a silhouette, motionless and watching. Aurora's heart hammered against her ribs. "Who's there?" The figure didn't respond or move. It seemed to absorb her torchlight rather than reflect it, a perfect cutout of deeper darkness against the night. She took a step backward, her hand instinctively rising to clutch the Heartstone through her jumper. Its heat had become unbearable, but she welcomed the pain now – a reminder she was awake. This was real. "I'm just leaving," she called to the figure. "I have permission to be here." Still no response. The figure remained perfectly still. Aurora glanced around for another exit. The clearing was ringed by standing stones with no obvious second path. She'd have to get past whatever – whoever – blocked her way. She squared her shoulders and started walking toward the archway, torch held high. "Excuse me," she said firmly. "I need to get through." The figure didn't move, but as she drew closer, she noticed something odd about its edges – they seemed to waver slightly, like heat rising from pavement. Ten feet away now. The Heartstone's heat radiated through her clothes. Eight feet. She could make out no features on the figure – just darkness. Five feet. The air grew cold enough to fog her breath. Three feet. The figure still hadn't moved. Aurora prepared to squeeze past, keeping her distance. One foot away. The figure dissolved into mist. Aurora stumbled through the suddenly empty archway, nearly falling. She caught herself against an oak trunk, breathing hard. What the hell was that? Something brushed against the back of her neck. She spun, slashing the air with her torch. Nothing there. "Okay, time to go," she muttered, hurrying now. The path seemed longer on the return journey. Branches reached lower, roots rose higher. Twice she nearly tripped. The Grove was different – or she was traveling a different route altogether. A low humming sound started somewhere behind her. Not mechanical – more like multiple voices singing a single note in discordant harmony. Aurora walked faster, not daring to look back. The pendant burned like a coal against her skin. The humming grew louder. Closer. She broke into a run, torch beam bouncing wildly across the path. The boundary had to be near. The standing stones marking the edge of the Grove couldn't be much further. Something cold touched her shoulder. Aurora gasped, jerking away. Her foot caught on a root and she sprawled forward, torch flying from her hand. It hit the ground and went out, plunging her into darkness broken only by moonlight filtering through branches. The humming surrounded her now. She scrambled to her feet, abandoning the torch. The boundary stones had to be close. She rushed forward, hands outstretched to feel her way. "Almost there," she panted. "Almost there." Her fingers brushed something cold and rough – stone. A boundary marker. Relief washed through her as she felt along its surface, searching for the gap she'd entered through. The humming stopped abruptly. Silence pressed against her ears, more terrifying than the sound had been. Aurora's fingers found the gap between stones. She pushed through, scratching her palms on rough edges, and stumbled into the familiar woods of Richmond Park. She bent double, hands on knees, catching her breath. The Heartstone's heat began to fade almost immediately. When she straightened, she noticed her watch had stopped at 12:23 AM – the time she'd entered the Grove. She checked her phone: 3:47 AM. More than three hours lost in what had felt like twenty minutes. Aurora turned back toward the Grove boundary. Through the gap between stones, she could see moonlight illuminating the wildflowers. And standing among them, perfectly still, were seven dark figures. All watching her. The white foxglove bloom felt suddenly heavy in her pocket as she backed away, then turned and ran toward the park's exit, the weight of multiple gazes burning between her shoulder blades the entire way.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said firmly [firmly]"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.692
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
70.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1346
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count3
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count2
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
2"carefully"
3"perfectly"
4"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
14.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1346
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"sentinels"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"throb"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count2
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"depths"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"solitary"
count1
11
word"searing"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"reminder"
count1
15
word"firmly"
count1
16
word"mechanical"
count1
17
word"silence"
count1
18
word"familiar"
count1
19
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"flickered"
2"sentinels"
3"warmth"
4"throb"
5"scanning"
6"perfect"
7"chill"
8"depths"
9"etched"
10"solitary"
11"searing"
12"whisper"
13"trembled"
14"reminder"
15"firmly"
16"mechanical"
17"silence"
18"familiar"
19"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences146
matches(empty)
93.93% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences146
filterMatches
0"watch –"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords16
totalWords1356
ratio0.012
matches
0"Come after the midnight bell. Alone. Find the white foxglove that grows at the Grove's heart."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.45% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1313
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.37
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Heartstone6
Pendant1
Aurora18
Grove11
Fae3
Richmond2
Park2
Isolde4
Simple2
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
3"Isolde"
places
0"Grove"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore0.815
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences103
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed longer on the return journey"
1"felt like twenty minutes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.737
wordCount1356
matches
0"no longer pulsed but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean19.94
std12.92
cv0.648
sampleLengths
063
141
216
310
448
536
631
711
86
922
1030
1127
1240
138
1415
1510
162
1732
1832
1929
2022
2130
226
2311
2424
2544
2612
279
2818
296
3012
318
3225
3336
3414
358
3630
3723
3827
3911
4014
4111
4215
433
445
4523
468
4710
488
4931
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences146
matches
0"being claimed"
1"was ringed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs238
matches
0"was traveling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences150
ratio0.08
matches
0"Something about the rhythm of the pendant's warmth bothered her – less like the steady throb she'd come to expect and more like the frantic flutter of a trapped bird."
1"Aurora checked her watch – 12:23 AM."
2"At its center grew a solitary plant – a foxglove stalk with pure white blooms."
3"She turned toward the path – and stopped."
4"Its heat had become unbearable, but she welcomed the pain now – a reminder she was awake."
5"She'd have to get past whatever – whoever – blocked her way."
6"The figure didn't move, but as she drew closer, she noticed something odd about its edges – they seemed to waver slightly, like heat rising from pavement."
7"She could make out no features on the figure – just darkness."
8"The Grove was different – or she was traveling a different route altogether."
9"Not mechanical – more like multiple voices singing a single note in discordant harmony."
10"Her fingers brushed something cold and rough – stone."
11"When she straightened, she noticed her watch had stopped at 12:23 AM – the time she'd entered the Grove."
88.66% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1303
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount69
adverbRatio0.052954719877206444
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.017651573292402148
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean9.04
std5.73
cv0.634
sampleLengths
018
115
230
316
425
55
61
710
82
97
101
1114
1216
134
1414
1514
167
1715
189
199
2013
2111
226
237
241
2514
268
2713
289
295
309
3112
321
339
348
3523
368
377
388
3910
402
417
4210
4315
4412
4515
465
4711
4814
494
53.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.36
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners54
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences133
matches
0"Just ancient oaks and standing"
1"Just grab the white foxglove"
2"Exactly what she'd come for."
3"Just a silhouette, motionless and"
4"Twice she nearly tripped."
5"More than three hours lost"
6"All watching her."
ratio0.053
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences133
matches
0"Her torchlight flickered across moss-slicked"
1"she whispered to herself, scanning"
2"She moved deeper into the"
3"she muttered, tucking it back"
4"She continued along the path."
5"Her voice sounded thin, swallowed"
6"She pressed forward, picking up"
7"Their branches stretched overhead, weaving"
8"Its heat no longer pulsed"
9"She knelt beside the foxglove,"
10"She froze, scissors poised mid-cut."
11"Her torchlight caught nothing but"
12"She turned back to her"
13"She tucked it carefully into"
14"she murmured to the plant,"
15"She turned toward the path"
16"It seemed to absorb her"
17"She took a step backward,"
18"Its heat had become unbearable,"
19"she called to the figure"
ratio0.271
53.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount108
totalSentences133
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed warm"
1"Her torchlight flickered across moss-slicked"
2"Something about the rhythm of"
3"she whispered to herself, scanning"
4"The Fae Grove in Richmond"
5"Aurora checked her watch –"
6"The wildflowers that carpeted the"
7"Bluebells, primroses, and foxgloves bloomed"
8"Plants that shouldn't flower together,"
9"She moved deeper into the"
10"Isolde had warned against trampling"
11"The consequences ranged from mild"
12"The Heartstone grew hotter, almost"
13"Aurora pulled the pendant out,"
14"The faint inner glow pulsed"
15"she muttered, tucking it back"
16"A twig snapped somewhere behind"
17"Aurora whirled, torch beam slicing"
18"The Grove felt different from"
19"The air hung heavier, thicker"
ratio0.812
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.55% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Her torchlight flickered across moss-slicked stone monoliths that stood like sentinels at the Grove's boundary."
1"Plants that shouldn't flower together, shouldn't flower now at all, clustered in unnatural abundance."
2"The air hung heavier, thicker somehow, as if reluctant to enter her lungs."
3"Their branches stretched overhead, weaving together to form a natural archway that blocked the moonlight."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
3"she muttered (mutter)"
4"she panted (pant)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.615
leniency1
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.625
80.9884%