| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said firmly [firmly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.692 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 70.28% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1346 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "perfectly" | | 4 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.56% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1346 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "sentinels" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "depths" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "solitary" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "reminder" | | 15 | "firmly" | | 16 | "mechanical" | | 17 | "silence" | | 18 | "familiar" | | 19 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 146 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.93% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 146 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 150 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 16 | | totalWords | 1356 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "Come after the midnight bell. Alone. Find the white foxglove that grows at the Grove's heart." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.45% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 1313 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.37 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Grove" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 6 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 18 | | Grove | 11 | | Fae | 3 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Isolde | 4 | | Simple | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.815 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed longer on the return journey" | | 1 | "felt like twenty minutes" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.737 | | wordCount | 1356 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 68 | | mean | 19.94 | | std | 12.92 | | cv | 0.648 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 48 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 31 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | | 0 | "being claimed" | | 1 | "was ringed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 238 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 150 | | ratio | 0.08 | | matches | | 0 | "Something about the rhythm of the pendant's warmth bothered her – less like the steady throb she'd come to expect and more like the frantic flutter of a trapped bird." | | 1 | "Aurora checked her watch – 12:23 AM." | | 2 | "At its center grew a solitary plant – a foxglove stalk with pure white blooms." | | 3 | "She turned toward the path – and stopped." | | 4 | "Its heat had become unbearable, but she welcomed the pain now – a reminder she was awake." | | 5 | "She'd have to get past whatever – whoever – blocked her way." | | 6 | "The figure didn't move, but as she drew closer, she noticed something odd about its edges – they seemed to waver slightly, like heat rising from pavement." | | 7 | "She could make out no features on the figure – just darkness." | | 8 | "The Grove was different – or she was traveling a different route altogether." | | 9 | "Not mechanical – more like multiple voices singing a single note in discordant harmony." | | 10 | "Her fingers brushed something cold and rough – stone." | | 11 | "When she straightened, she noticed her watch had stopped at 12:23 AM – the time she'd entered the Grove." |
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| 88.66% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1303 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 69 | | adverbRatio | 0.052954719877206444 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017651573292402148 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 150 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 150 | | mean | 9.04 | | std | 5.73 | | cv | 0.634 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 53.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.36 | | totalSentences | 150 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Just ancient oaks and standing" | | 1 | "Just grab the white foxglove" | | 2 | "Exactly what she'd come for." | | 3 | "Just a silhouette, motionless and" | | 4 | "Twice she nearly tripped." | | 5 | "More than three hours lost" | | 6 | "All watching her." |
| | ratio | 0.053 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Her torchlight flickered across moss-slicked" | | 1 | "she whispered to herself, scanning" | | 2 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 3 | "she muttered, tucking it back" | | 4 | "She continued along the path." | | 5 | "Her voice sounded thin, swallowed" | | 6 | "She pressed forward, picking up" | | 7 | "Their branches stretched overhead, weaving" | | 8 | "Its heat no longer pulsed" | | 9 | "She knelt beside the foxglove," | | 10 | "She froze, scissors poised mid-cut." | | 11 | "Her torchlight caught nothing but" | | 12 | "She turned back to her" | | 13 | "She tucked it carefully into" | | 14 | "she murmured to the plant," | | 15 | "She turned toward the path" | | 16 | "It seemed to absorb her" | | 17 | "She took a step backward," | | 18 | "Its heat had become unbearable," | | 19 | "she called to the figure" |
| | ratio | 0.271 | |
| 53.98% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 108 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed warm" | | 1 | "Her torchlight flickered across moss-slicked" | | 2 | "Something about the rhythm of" | | 3 | "she whispered to herself, scanning" | | 4 | "The Fae Grove in Richmond" | | 5 | "Aurora checked her watch –" | | 6 | "The wildflowers that carpeted the" | | 7 | "Bluebells, primroses, and foxgloves bloomed" | | 8 | "Plants that shouldn't flower together," | | 9 | "She moved deeper into the" | | 10 | "Isolde had warned against trampling" | | 11 | "The consequences ranged from mild" | | 12 | "The Heartstone grew hotter, almost" | | 13 | "Aurora pulled the pendant out," | | 14 | "The faint inner glow pulsed" | | 15 | "she muttered, tucking it back" | | 16 | "A twig snapped somewhere behind" | | 17 | "Aurora whirled, torch beam slicing" | | 18 | "The Grove felt different from" | | 19 | "The air hung heavier, thicker" |
| | ratio | 0.812 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 84.55% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Her torchlight flickered across moss-slicked stone monoliths that stood like sentinels at the Grove's boundary." | | 1 | "Plants that shouldn't flower together, shouldn't flower now at all, clustered in unnatural abundance." | | 2 | "The air hung heavier, thicker somehow, as if reluctant to enter her lungs." | | 3 | "Their branches stretched overhead, weaving together to form a natural archway that blocked the moonlight." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 4 | "she panted (pant)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.615 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.625 | | effectiveRatio | 0.625 | |